Note to Readers-------- 3.12.02
O'kay, heres the plot for chapters 27-33 is:
The evil person (mysterious man) offered true love to Legolas if he agreed to leave his journey and go to a new version of Middle Earth. He didn't know what to say so the man gave Legolas a sample. Legolas went into a world where Elves were mostly in the Undying Lands, and the majority who were still in middle earth were slaves.
He became a slave in a mining cave under Gondor Castle. When he wasn't working since he had just arrived, he was going to be beaten to death. The Prince and Princess saw this. Since the Princess (Philla) fell in love with him, she orderd him to stop. After Ramza (the prince) decapitated the un-obeying guard (the one that was beating Legolas) they nursed him back to health. The only way they could keep Legolas safe for a while was to make him the Prince's servant.
Ramza was incestualy (is that how you spell it?) in love with his sister,so after he saw Legolas kiss her, he began to drink and eventualy started beating Legolas out of envy. But before Legolas could kiss her he had ot fully agree to the deal the mysterious man offered. He accepted and finally kissed his love.
*(I haven't decided if she was his true love or not ^_^. Most likely not, I think he was just searching for completion and lustfully fell in love with her)*
He then envied Legolas so much he also loved him. (yeah I know... not appealing to most of us :op) After a long time, Philla had a dream telling her about how Legolas got there and how he could be sent back. He could only be sent back if she died. She was basicly the center of the deal the mysterious man had offered, so if she would die, she would break the deal? Get it? Good!
Ramza was beating Legolas again, this time intending to kill him, but he drank poisned water and died. It got there by Legolas trying to poison himself, but Ramza suprised him and he dropped it into the water basin. Ramza eventualy drank some of it while taking a break from beating Legolas and died. Then Philla came in and gave a long and touching speach. Only thinking of Legolas' wellfair, she killed herself by drinking the remainder of the poisened water so that Legolas would go back to where he belonged.
*side note* The mysterious man can't change time, he could only encourage it. He was hoping that the Princess would live forever, so the deal would last forever, keeping Legolas from where he belonged so he could most likely take over the world. You know, the typical evil thing ^_^
3 - 10 - 02
I rewrote chapter 30 for it to be more understandable. I was in a hurry to get to the part where they kissed that I made it TWO lines. I feel bad now :op
After chapter 32 there WILL be more action. Notice the last couple of paragraphs of chapter 32 and you will see what I mean. I promise Legolas will not kill himself... yet... ^_^
3 - 8 - 02
The last couple of days I have been sick, so when the asprin kicked in, I wrote another chapter. I might not be able to write another three today, but I will at least do two. Today I faked sick so I could do that and because I forgot to finish one of my projects for school. ^_^ I took one of the vitamans I have been prescribed at night and I was bouncing off walls. I don't think I'll ever do that again! ^_^
I con also confirm that there WILL be a sequal, Im just not sure on how the storlyine is going to be yet.
Any comments on anything could either go to my review board or my e-mail:
Vileplume3000@hotmail.com
I also have PIM Instant Messenger if you want to send me a message. My user name is Vileplume3000.
If I forgot something, please give me word!
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O'kay, heres the plot for chapters 27-33 is:
The evil person (mysterious man) offered true love to Legolas if he agreed to leave his journey and go to a new version of Middle Earth. He didn't know what to say so the man gave Legolas a sample. Legolas went into a world where Elves were mostly in the Undying Lands, and the majority who were still in middle earth were slaves.
He became a slave in a mining cave under Gondor Castle. When he wasn't working since he had just arrived, he was going to be beaten to death. The Prince and Princess saw this. Since the Princess (Philla) fell in love with him, she orderd him to stop. After Ramza (the prince) decapitated the un-obeying guard (the one that was beating Legolas) they nursed him back to health. The only way they could keep Legolas safe for a while was to make him the Prince's servant.
Ramza was incestualy (is that how you spell it?) in love with his sister,so after he saw Legolas kiss her, he began to drink and eventualy started beating Legolas out of envy. But before Legolas could kiss her he had ot fully agree to the deal the mysterious man offered. He accepted and finally kissed his love.
*(I haven't decided if she was his true love or not ^_^. Most likely not, I think he was just searching for completion and lustfully fell in love with her)*
He then envied Legolas so much he also loved him. (yeah I know... not appealing to most of us :op) After a long time, Philla had a dream telling her about how Legolas got there and how he could be sent back. He could only be sent back if she died. She was basicly the center of the deal the mysterious man had offered, so if she would die, she would break the deal? Get it? Good!
Ramza was beating Legolas again, this time intending to kill him, but he drank poisned water and died. It got there by Legolas trying to poison himself, but Ramza suprised him and he dropped it into the water basin. Ramza eventualy drank some of it while taking a break from beating Legolas and died. Then Philla came in and gave a long and touching speach. Only thinking of Legolas' wellfair, she killed herself by drinking the remainder of the poisened water so that Legolas would go back to where he belonged.
*side note* The mysterious man can't change time, he could only encourage it. He was hoping that the Princess would live forever, so the deal would last forever, keeping Legolas from where he belonged so he could most likely take over the world. You know, the typical evil thing ^_^
3 - 10 - 02
I rewrote chapter 30 for it to be more understandable. I was in a hurry to get to the part where they kissed that I made it TWO lines. I feel bad now :op
After chapter 32 there WILL be more action. Notice the last couple of paragraphs of chapter 32 and you will see what I mean. I promise Legolas will not kill himself... yet... ^_^
3 - 8 - 02
The last couple of days I have been sick, so when the asprin kicked in, I wrote another chapter. I might not be able to write another three today, but I will at least do two. Today I faked sick so I could do that and because I forgot to finish one of my projects for school. ^_^ I took one of the vitamans I have been prescribed at night and I was bouncing off walls. I don't think I'll ever do that again! ^_^
I con also confirm that there WILL be a sequal, Im just not sure on how the storlyine is going to be yet.
Any comments on anything could either go to my review board or my e-mail:
Vileplume3000@hotmail.com
I also have PIM Instant Messenger if you want to send me a message. My user name is Vileplume3000.
If I forgot something, please give me word!
Flame