The characters in this story are not mine and neither is Final Fantasy X.
I wish they were but that's life.
On the beach of Besaid a young girl sits with tears running down her face. The girl, Rikku often leaves her friends to be by herself and to cry. The tears come from her memories. Every night she dreams of the day she lost one of her best friends. That day 6 months ago when the dream left Spira, when the dream of the Fayth and the dream of Spira left, leaving eternal peace in Spira. As Rikku sat with her eyes closed and a smile on her face she heard a loud yell from the coast. 'Hey you, help!!!! I found some poor guy out in the middle of the ocean!!!!!' Rikku, with tears still pouring down her face, swiftly ran towards the fisherman. As she reached him, she looked at the lifeless body and jumped back in shock. 'It's him, its Tidus!!!!!' yelled Rikku. 'What, it can't be', yelled the fisherman. Rikku ordered the fisherman to go to Besaid and get help. As the fisherman left, the strange person slowly opened his eyes. 'Tidus you're alive!' yelled Rikku. 'Tidus? Who is Tidus?' questioned the man. 'You stupid, don't worry, you'll remember,' Rikku replied in a now cheery voice. Tidus was a tanned man with blonde hair, he wore strange clothes that no one else in Spira had seen before, but this man had darker hair and wore clothes that looked like he was a Besaid local. The injured man, took a deep breathe and said in an apologetic tone, 'I'm sorry but I'm no this Tidus person', and with another deep breath revealed his name, 'My name is Chappu'
I know it's a bit short but its my first story so please review it so I know if this story is worth continuing.
Thanks
On the beach of Besaid a young girl sits with tears running down her face. The girl, Rikku often leaves her friends to be by herself and to cry. The tears come from her memories. Every night she dreams of the day she lost one of her best friends. That day 6 months ago when the dream left Spira, when the dream of the Fayth and the dream of Spira left, leaving eternal peace in Spira. As Rikku sat with her eyes closed and a smile on her face she heard a loud yell from the coast. 'Hey you, help!!!! I found some poor guy out in the middle of the ocean!!!!!' Rikku, with tears still pouring down her face, swiftly ran towards the fisherman. As she reached him, she looked at the lifeless body and jumped back in shock. 'It's him, its Tidus!!!!!' yelled Rikku. 'What, it can't be', yelled the fisherman. Rikku ordered the fisherman to go to Besaid and get help. As the fisherman left, the strange person slowly opened his eyes. 'Tidus you're alive!' yelled Rikku. 'Tidus? Who is Tidus?' questioned the man. 'You stupid, don't worry, you'll remember,' Rikku replied in a now cheery voice. Tidus was a tanned man with blonde hair, he wore strange clothes that no one else in Spira had seen before, but this man had darker hair and wore clothes that looked like he was a Besaid local. The injured man, took a deep breathe and said in an apologetic tone, 'I'm sorry but I'm no this Tidus person', and with another deep breath revealed his name, 'My name is Chappu'
I know it's a bit short but its my first story so please review it so I know if this story is worth continuing.
Thanks