Syaoran is 15 and has spent his whole life training in the Li clan until he was accidently pulled into another dimension....................( That's all I can write for the summary, didn't want to spoil the story)
This is my 2nd fanfiction and I'm still not getting the hang of writing so sorry if it's a sloppy.
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Chapter 1 "Escaping"
The sun shone through the transparent glass window reflecting the bright rays of orange, red and yellow onto a room which looked like a guys bedroom. Everything was in place reaching all the way to the end of the room stood a sword with a black orb and two red tassels and a green robe which looked like an ancient Chinese robe used for combat. On the bed there was a boy which looked to be 15 years old had messy chestnut brown hair and amber eyes lying exhausted trying to catch his breath. Just as the boy has finally been able to get comfortable the door struck open with a loud slam echoing throughout the whole manor.
"Master Syaoran!!! What are you doing?!!" said Wei
"What does it look like I'm doing?!! said Syaoran filling every word with resentment and full of anger. He began to pick himself up from the bed facing Wei like he was ready blow his head off. " I'm trying to have a few minutes to myself and rest. They're all pushing me too hard!! Everyday!! Day in day out!!! It's get up and go train!!! I can't even have a few minutes to either go to the bathroom or go get a drink!!!!!!"
" Master Syaoran!!" said Wei, stammering and surprised after hearing Syaoran burst.
"Don't you have pride?!...... "You are part of the Li clan and it is your duty to complete your training. I am simply just following your mothers orders."
Humph!! said Syaoran. He grunted with anger and clenched his fist like he was about to burst all over again. " All right. I'll be down in a couple of minutes" now filling his words back with his normal voice.
His butler closed the door as Syaoran heard his footsteps beginning to fade after seconds passed. " How dare they do this?!". Syaoran stood starring at his sword dead straight with his eyes grinning now looking like his amber eyes turned to fire. "For once I would like to leave this horrible place and set off on my own adventure" as he thought of it in his head.
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The sky turned into complete darkness and Syaoran was still wandering in the streets of Hong Kong.
" Man am I hungry...." said Syaoran. "Who knew training this long could work up an appetite?".
He walked around Hong Kong to try and find a food stand that was still open noticing such a delicious scent leading him to a fried food stand. " Sir hurry and give me two orders of noodles". Syaoran couldn't take waiting for his food with his stomach growling endlessly.
"Here you go my boy".. said the chef.
Syaoran immediately grabbed for the food and stayed where he stood chowing down on the two orders so fast he didn't even bother chewing.
"Take it easy my boy" said the chef. "Boy, you sure must be real hungry eating like that". He didn't feel like disturbing Syaoran from his meal seeing that how much he was having good time sinking his mouth into the food but just went on anyway.
"So my boy looks like you just came from a dojo.. Am I right my boy?" said the chef, curious and eager to know.
"How do you know?" said Syaoran allowing himself some time to look up to the chef while talking to him.
"Well. for one thing, you do look like you just came from the dojo" said the chef, pointing out the outfit Syaoran was wearing which was his green ancient Chinese robes with his sword hanging on his back.
"Thanks for the noodles sir" said Syaoran displeased with the chef being curious about his training had just left running off. "How dare he asked about my training?!" he thought to himself while walking back to the manor. "It wasn't any of his business!! Nosy old grump!! He kept on walking with his regular grinning routine as soon he sensed something strange.
"Can it be.............? No....it's something else". Syaoran felt the aura causing him to have a weird feeling churn in his stomach. It was like his stomach has been stabbed by a thousand knives without any blood dripping. He began to walk more closer and the aura had gotten more stronger than before until he saw a bright white light which looked like a dimensional portal.
"How can this be?" his eyes widened. "This can't be possible.......? We don't have any portals here in Hong Kong". Letting his guard down with his back facing the portal, he was drawn in by the raging power leaving him no chance of fighting against it.
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Ok so tell me the truth....Was it good or was it bad? The first chapter is not that exciting but it will get better and Sakura will come in later. So PLEASE send me more REVIEWS to know if I need to work on my stories more better. Sorry if they don't have a romantic atmosphere but I'm trying my best and I'm only good with ideas. But remember.... send me REVIEWS and check out my other stories. I only got a few than I expected.
