Eriol: Good or Bad? (con't)
By: Keetra
Keetra:: ohayo, konnichiwa, kobanwa (depending when ya read it) minna! Gomen for taking so long to post but had a weekend trip and hadda quit my job so I not have alotta time to work on the fic. But now I will have more time so, hopefully, I can get these out faster. *hope hope hope*
Keelah:: ::still rubbing her bottom:: I'm gonna get that Angel. She had no right aiming a stone at someone who was just giving her some honest criticism.
Keetra:: are you saying my reviews are not honest?
Keelah:: maybe I am. You are not hard enough on them Keetra!
Keetra: ::pulls out a slingshot of her own and aims it at the same spot that Angel hit her:: what was that? I didn't hear you.
Keelah:: *walks away muttering*
Keetra:: that's what I thought. Oh! And here the arigatous for reviewers!:
Azure-chan:: hehehehe. Looks like someone is taking Keetra's reading to be all true. But what is true and what is not? Not all is true about what she said I shall tell you that. Oh, and by the way; ::points the slingshot at Eriol:: call this a slight incentive to have Eriol wipe the innocent look on his face. Cuz I am not afraid to put a pebble through it. ^_~ *cannot stand cute, innocent looking faces*
K A Temura:: ::steps back with popcorn and a soda to watch the action:: not sure who I want to win this one. Go. whoever!
TimeLord:: ::shakes head sadly:: great, now I got a L-E-M-O-N interpretation of my fic. Will not be able to write it the same again. Oh god. Cannot get mental image out of mind. And how did Vinzero get mixed up with this? Ugh! Poor Vinzero! To be left in a room with Desere and Kem.. Brrrrrr.
Alexandra-chan:: ^_^ no, really, I gonna quit the story right here.......... Or not! ^_~ tad bit hyper today! Too hyper to quit this perfect opportunity to confuse some readers. This chapter will cause some doubt into those who think that just because Keetra interpreted the cards to mean that Eriol is innocent, t don't mean that it true. ::evil cackling::
Mitski:: 'kay 'kay. I understand. Just glad you read chapter three. Arigatou! Oh, and don't count on Keelah not saying any more stuff about your fic. She always loves to put in her two cents.
Keetra:: and the disclaimer. -sigh- what does anyone really own in this universe? If you answer me that, I shall cease control of ccs and we shall no longer have to write these.
~*~*~*~
Chapter 5: Confessions of Guilt?
Tomoyo walks down the long main hallway connecting the different sections of Klasanban. Her clearance is limited to only Eriol's section unless someone, like Keetra, who has higher clearance is with her.
As she nears the entry, the doors part before her, revealing the holding cells. At first glance it appears that Eriol is simply sitting in one of the three open rooms wit nothing keeping him from walking out. In actuality, there is an invisible forcefield, which Tomoyo had run into the first time she had visited him. Even now, she struggles to restrain her urge to run over, hug him tight and sob on his shoulder.
Eriol looks up as she enters. Almost immediately he notices the sad look upon her face.
"Tomoyo-chan. Daijobou-ka?"
"Iie. I can't take it anymore. You're in prison for something you would never do, Sakura-chan and Li-kun are arguing, and . and neither of them will wear my costumes and even if they did I couldn't videotape them because Kero broke my best camera."
"Sakura-chan and my kawaii little descendant are arguing? About what?"
"You!"
"Nani?!"
"Sakura-chan and I know that you would never do such a terrible thing demo Li-kun is not so certain."
Eriol sighs. "I'm not very sure I am either."
"What are you talking about? Of course you are!"
"Listen. Remember when I was not in school last week and Nakura told you I was sick?"
Tomoyo nods.
"I wasn't. the only ones I told the real reason are Spinnel Sun and Ruby Moon. In fact, it was Spinnel who insisted that I stay home to rest."
"Why? What happened?"
Eriol sighs and stares at completely nothing, remembering.
"The night before, I had this nagging feeling in my mind that I could nit explain. It had been with me for most of the day and it would not disappear. So, that night, I decided to take a walk. I do not know exactly where I went but eventually, I ended up somewhere near the library. All I remember after that is hearing a voice saying some very strange words that I could not understand. After that, I must have passed out. When I woke up, I was back at home with Nakura asleep in a chair beside my bred and Spinnel nearby."
Eriol stands and walks over to her, barely not touching the forcefield.
"I had just dismissed it then, but now. . ."
*Silence*
(::Chirp chirp *squashes cricket* ok, enough depressing stuff. Sheesh. You'd think he was on Prozac or something!::)
"Cakie Cakie!"
Tomoyo and Eriol both jump at the faint voice.
"What was that?" Tomoyo asks.
"Cakie and Puuuding!"
"Tomoyo-san, is that your cell phone?"
"Iie, but maybe something else in my bag. . ." she digs through the bag that seems to carry practically anything. Even Eriol must admit, he did not realize at first that she was carrying it. (::interpret that any way ya like E+T fans!::) Hidden between the extra camera batteries and the hairbrush for Sakura's hair is a pile of wrappers. Lying on the pile, fast asleep, is none other than . . .
"Kero-chan." Tomoyo says, surprised.
Hearing his name, Kero wakes up and starts complaining.
"Nani? I was in the middle of a dream filled with cookies and cake and pudding." He flies out of the bag. "And I had hoped it was not a dream." He looks around. "Uh, Tomoyo."
"Nani?"
Kero spreads his paws.
"Where are we?"
Eriol and Tomoyo sweatdrop.
"Keroberos, you may want to sit down. a lot has happened since you broke Tomoyo's favorite video camera last night."
Kero listens as Eriol and Tomoyo tell him what has happened.
~*~*~*~ Outside Eriol's room of Klasanban ~*~*~*~
Keetra and Keelah both flash their clearance badges to the guard outside. Walking down the hall, and flashing their badges to a few more guards, they come to the highest security section, which is accessible only to a few K members. Walking up to the security panel beside the doorway, Keetra types in her personal access code. The screen changes to a fingerprint scan during which is a DNA scan, followed by a voice identification, and lastly a retinal scan. And that is only to open the doors. Inside the room is a special field that dampens all magical and psychic abilities. The scientists in the sky-blue lab coats (::cannot stand white coats, though science field is where I wanna work::) look up, obviously not expecting a visitor today. One in particular is very surprised.
"Hello Keetra, Keelah. To what do I owe the pleasure of seeing my old student and her Kinta?"
Keetra mentally slaps herself. With her thoughts so wrapped up in the card reading, she forgot that Kklun had been transferred to Klasanban. Smiling, she answers him.
"Call me old again Kklun-sensei, and I'll walk right back out and not thank you for supporting me at the trial," she jokes. (::she has called him sensei aver since she programmed that word into her translator. It one of the few endings she actually uses::)
Kklun smiles back. "You're welcome, but something tells me you did not use a high-security Klasanban visit just to thank me."
"Right as usual. I need to have a chat with my old friend sloota. I believe he knows something I need. Or more."
Glances pass between the five scientists in the room. Very nervous glances, Keelah notices.
"Funny that you should mention Sloota. . ."
"He hasn't escaped has he?!" Keelah cuts in before Kklun can finish.
Kklun shakes his head quickly.
"No, no, no. nothing like THAT. He's just been acting a little different lately."
"What do you mean 'different'?" Keetra asks, her curiosity reaching the breaking point.
One of the other scientists speaks up now.
"We believe that the being designated 'Sloota' is currently suffering from Dibiolic Klasfonis Karfat Syndrome."
"From what?" Keetra and Keelah ask as one.
The scientist gives an exasperated look.
"He is delirious." At the still confused looks, he continues, even more annoyed. "He is saying random phrases that seem to originate from fantasies within his mind which he believes to be reality."
This particular scientist remains silent for the rest of the visit, wondering how such a brilliant man like Kklun could interact with, never mind be friends with, such idiots as these two. The two "idiots" follow Kklun into a small laboratory, where they find the jar that Keetra created inside. There is a field around sloota, however that flashes different shades of black with an occasional red. Keetra turns to her old teacher (::tee hee hee::), confusion written upon her face.
"A magic field? But I thought there were dampeners in this section."
"There are." Kklun answers. "Which would mean that the field is not magical."
"Then what. . . ?"Keetra starts.
"Put your hands in it." Kklun demands.
"What. . ." Keetra tries again but the question is turned aside by his pointed glare. Reaching forward, her hands touch the field. Immediately, all thoughts, feelings and sight ceases within her mind to be replaced with a now familiar voice.
". . . will come for me. my ssservant, my mossst loyal friend and companion. Too loyal I thought then, but now, oh yesss, now I am grateful. Now he ssshall come. Beware of my creation. Beware of him my one, my only, my nemesssisss. He will come. Sssoon, very sssoon, he will come and vengeanccce ssshall rule the land! Come my ssservant. He will. . ."
Keetra pulls her hands away forcefully and pushes herself against the back wall, eyes wide in fear.
"He's crazy! How can he say such things?! He's crazy, he's nuts, he's. . . he's. . ." she babbles unstoppably.
"Dibiolic Klasfonis Karfat Syndrome." He gently reminds her, startling her out of her shock.
Keetra looks back at the jar, watching the pulsing aura and slowly shakes her head.
"I don't agree with that."
Kklun looks up at her, surprised as she walks closer to the jar, her gaze still intent upon the aura.
"I think he knows exactly what he's talking about. The feeling accompanying those words are too strong to be a fantasy."
~*~*~*~ End Chapter 5 ~*~*~*~
Keetra:: dun dun dun! Gomen, couldn't resist! ^_~ well, that took me a lot longer than I thought it would to type. And twice as long to write. Gomen that it took so long. -bows to readers for forgiveness- it just that I saw that the fic was taking a depressive turn (how long has that been going on and why didn't anyone TELL ME?!) and so waited till I could come up with something less depressing. Had one person say that Tomoyo was on the verge of suicide. So, slight revision of that. Tomoyo does have her good qualities.
Keelah:: such as pairing S+S up so that we in the real world would not go to war over who will be the first to kiss him. Or more drastic but there are non-lemon kind of people out there.
Keetra:: -_- thank you TimeLord for putting lemon ideas in her head. Though, Hehehe, I kinda had those thought writing that part. Who knows what could happen when Sakura walks in. ^-,^ (drool face) ho ho ho ho!
Kero:: -_-;;review onegai, they need something else to scheme about that seeing that gaki in embarrassing situations.
Keetra and Keelah:: we do?
Kero:: see what I mean?
Keetra:: ohayo, konnichiwa, kobanwa (depending when ya read it) minna! Gomen for taking so long to post but had a weekend trip and hadda quit my job so I not have alotta time to work on the fic. But now I will have more time so, hopefully, I can get these out faster. *hope hope hope*
Keelah:: ::still rubbing her bottom:: I'm gonna get that Angel. She had no right aiming a stone at someone who was just giving her some honest criticism.
Keetra:: are you saying my reviews are not honest?
Keelah:: maybe I am. You are not hard enough on them Keetra!
Keetra: ::pulls out a slingshot of her own and aims it at the same spot that Angel hit her:: what was that? I didn't hear you.
Keelah:: *walks away muttering*
Keetra:: that's what I thought. Oh! And here the arigatous for reviewers!:
Azure-chan:: hehehehe. Looks like someone is taking Keetra's reading to be all true. But what is true and what is not? Not all is true about what she said I shall tell you that. Oh, and by the way; ::points the slingshot at Eriol:: call this a slight incentive to have Eriol wipe the innocent look on his face. Cuz I am not afraid to put a pebble through it. ^_~ *cannot stand cute, innocent looking faces*
K A Temura:: ::steps back with popcorn and a soda to watch the action:: not sure who I want to win this one. Go. whoever!
TimeLord:: ::shakes head sadly:: great, now I got a L-E-M-O-N interpretation of my fic. Will not be able to write it the same again. Oh god. Cannot get mental image out of mind. And how did Vinzero get mixed up with this? Ugh! Poor Vinzero! To be left in a room with Desere and Kem.. Brrrrrr.
Alexandra-chan:: ^_^ no, really, I gonna quit the story right here.......... Or not! ^_~ tad bit hyper today! Too hyper to quit this perfect opportunity to confuse some readers. This chapter will cause some doubt into those who think that just because Keetra interpreted the cards to mean that Eriol is innocent, t don't mean that it true. ::evil cackling::
Mitski:: 'kay 'kay. I understand. Just glad you read chapter three. Arigatou! Oh, and don't count on Keelah not saying any more stuff about your fic. She always loves to put in her two cents.
Keetra:: and the disclaimer. -sigh- what does anyone really own in this universe? If you answer me that, I shall cease control of ccs and we shall no longer have to write these.
~*~*~*~
Chapter 5: Confessions of Guilt?
Tomoyo walks down the long main hallway connecting the different sections of Klasanban. Her clearance is limited to only Eriol's section unless someone, like Keetra, who has higher clearance is with her.
As she nears the entry, the doors part before her, revealing the holding cells. At first glance it appears that Eriol is simply sitting in one of the three open rooms wit nothing keeping him from walking out. In actuality, there is an invisible forcefield, which Tomoyo had run into the first time she had visited him. Even now, she struggles to restrain her urge to run over, hug him tight and sob on his shoulder.
Eriol looks up as she enters. Almost immediately he notices the sad look upon her face.
"Tomoyo-chan. Daijobou-ka?"
"Iie. I can't take it anymore. You're in prison for something you would never do, Sakura-chan and Li-kun are arguing, and . and neither of them will wear my costumes and even if they did I couldn't videotape them because Kero broke my best camera."
"Sakura-chan and my kawaii little descendant are arguing? About what?"
"You!"
"Nani?!"
"Sakura-chan and I know that you would never do such a terrible thing demo Li-kun is not so certain."
Eriol sighs. "I'm not very sure I am either."
"What are you talking about? Of course you are!"
"Listen. Remember when I was not in school last week and Nakura told you I was sick?"
Tomoyo nods.
"I wasn't. the only ones I told the real reason are Spinnel Sun and Ruby Moon. In fact, it was Spinnel who insisted that I stay home to rest."
"Why? What happened?"
Eriol sighs and stares at completely nothing, remembering.
"The night before, I had this nagging feeling in my mind that I could nit explain. It had been with me for most of the day and it would not disappear. So, that night, I decided to take a walk. I do not know exactly where I went but eventually, I ended up somewhere near the library. All I remember after that is hearing a voice saying some very strange words that I could not understand. After that, I must have passed out. When I woke up, I was back at home with Nakura asleep in a chair beside my bred and Spinnel nearby."
Eriol stands and walks over to her, barely not touching the forcefield.
"I had just dismissed it then, but now. . ."
*Silence*
(::Chirp chirp *squashes cricket* ok, enough depressing stuff. Sheesh. You'd think he was on Prozac or something!::)
"Cakie Cakie!"
Tomoyo and Eriol both jump at the faint voice.
"What was that?" Tomoyo asks.
"Cakie and Puuuding!"
"Tomoyo-san, is that your cell phone?"
"Iie, but maybe something else in my bag. . ." she digs through the bag that seems to carry practically anything. Even Eriol must admit, he did not realize at first that she was carrying it. (::interpret that any way ya like E+T fans!::) Hidden between the extra camera batteries and the hairbrush for Sakura's hair is a pile of wrappers. Lying on the pile, fast asleep, is none other than . . .
"Kero-chan." Tomoyo says, surprised.
Hearing his name, Kero wakes up and starts complaining.
"Nani? I was in the middle of a dream filled with cookies and cake and pudding." He flies out of the bag. "And I had hoped it was not a dream." He looks around. "Uh, Tomoyo."
"Nani?"
Kero spreads his paws.
"Where are we?"
Eriol and Tomoyo sweatdrop.
"Keroberos, you may want to sit down. a lot has happened since you broke Tomoyo's favorite video camera last night."
Kero listens as Eriol and Tomoyo tell him what has happened.
~*~*~*~ Outside Eriol's room of Klasanban ~*~*~*~
Keetra and Keelah both flash their clearance badges to the guard outside. Walking down the hall, and flashing their badges to a few more guards, they come to the highest security section, which is accessible only to a few K members. Walking up to the security panel beside the doorway, Keetra types in her personal access code. The screen changes to a fingerprint scan during which is a DNA scan, followed by a voice identification, and lastly a retinal scan. And that is only to open the doors. Inside the room is a special field that dampens all magical and psychic abilities. The scientists in the sky-blue lab coats (::cannot stand white coats, though science field is where I wanna work::) look up, obviously not expecting a visitor today. One in particular is very surprised.
"Hello Keetra, Keelah. To what do I owe the pleasure of seeing my old student and her Kinta?"
Keetra mentally slaps herself. With her thoughts so wrapped up in the card reading, she forgot that Kklun had been transferred to Klasanban. Smiling, she answers him.
"Call me old again Kklun-sensei, and I'll walk right back out and not thank you for supporting me at the trial," she jokes. (::she has called him sensei aver since she programmed that word into her translator. It one of the few endings she actually uses::)
Kklun smiles back. "You're welcome, but something tells me you did not use a high-security Klasanban visit just to thank me."
"Right as usual. I need to have a chat with my old friend sloota. I believe he knows something I need. Or more."
Glances pass between the five scientists in the room. Very nervous glances, Keelah notices.
"Funny that you should mention Sloota. . ."
"He hasn't escaped has he?!" Keelah cuts in before Kklun can finish.
Kklun shakes his head quickly.
"No, no, no. nothing like THAT. He's just been acting a little different lately."
"What do you mean 'different'?" Keetra asks, her curiosity reaching the breaking point.
One of the other scientists speaks up now.
"We believe that the being designated 'Sloota' is currently suffering from Dibiolic Klasfonis Karfat Syndrome."
"From what?" Keetra and Keelah ask as one.
The scientist gives an exasperated look.
"He is delirious." At the still confused looks, he continues, even more annoyed. "He is saying random phrases that seem to originate from fantasies within his mind which he believes to be reality."
This particular scientist remains silent for the rest of the visit, wondering how such a brilliant man like Kklun could interact with, never mind be friends with, such idiots as these two. The two "idiots" follow Kklun into a small laboratory, where they find the jar that Keetra created inside. There is a field around sloota, however that flashes different shades of black with an occasional red. Keetra turns to her old teacher (::tee hee hee::), confusion written upon her face.
"A magic field? But I thought there were dampeners in this section."
"There are." Kklun answers. "Which would mean that the field is not magical."
"Then what. . . ?"Keetra starts.
"Put your hands in it." Kklun demands.
"What. . ." Keetra tries again but the question is turned aside by his pointed glare. Reaching forward, her hands touch the field. Immediately, all thoughts, feelings and sight ceases within her mind to be replaced with a now familiar voice.
". . . will come for me. my ssservant, my mossst loyal friend and companion. Too loyal I thought then, but now, oh yesss, now I am grateful. Now he ssshall come. Beware of my creation. Beware of him my one, my only, my nemesssisss. He will come. Sssoon, very sssoon, he will come and vengeanccce ssshall rule the land! Come my ssservant. He will. . ."
Keetra pulls her hands away forcefully and pushes herself against the back wall, eyes wide in fear.
"He's crazy! How can he say such things?! He's crazy, he's nuts, he's. . . he's. . ." she babbles unstoppably.
"Dibiolic Klasfonis Karfat Syndrome." He gently reminds her, startling her out of her shock.
Keetra looks back at the jar, watching the pulsing aura and slowly shakes her head.
"I don't agree with that."
Kklun looks up at her, surprised as she walks closer to the jar, her gaze still intent upon the aura.
"I think he knows exactly what he's talking about. The feeling accompanying those words are too strong to be a fantasy."
~*~*~*~ End Chapter 5 ~*~*~*~
Keetra:: dun dun dun! Gomen, couldn't resist! ^_~ well, that took me a lot longer than I thought it would to type. And twice as long to write. Gomen that it took so long. -bows to readers for forgiveness- it just that I saw that the fic was taking a depressive turn (how long has that been going on and why didn't anyone TELL ME?!) and so waited till I could come up with something less depressing. Had one person say that Tomoyo was on the verge of suicide. So, slight revision of that. Tomoyo does have her good qualities.
Keelah:: such as pairing S+S up so that we in the real world would not go to war over who will be the first to kiss him. Or more drastic but there are non-lemon kind of people out there.
Keetra:: -_- thank you TimeLord for putting lemon ideas in her head. Though, Hehehe, I kinda had those thought writing that part. Who knows what could happen when Sakura walks in. ^-,^ (drool face) ho ho ho ho!
Kero:: -_-;;review onegai, they need something else to scheme about that seeing that gaki in embarrassing situations.
Keetra and Keelah:: we do?
Kero:: see what I mean?