Ok i got some more reviews and i'm happy your sending them to me i'm trying
as hard as i can to correct things but its really hard with out ms word but
i'm working as hard as i can,
ok someone was wondering why i chose Gohan to be like a feeble kid well during the cell games he didnt trust his power and fighting cell he didnt mostley hes just afrade of failing others as i have explained (if you read his thoughs) but trust me it gets better as he goes on you might see a difference here...
"Speeking out loud"
'thinking to them selfs'
*Telepathic talking*
Metor called Omega
The large wave of energy went flying at the metor, for some reason it didn't explode it seemed like the Metor was fighting it. "AHhhhhhhhh!" Gohan yelled puting more energy into the attack.
Serena, Lita, Mina, and Amy, where watching Gohan fighting the metor on T.V. Then they saw Sailor Mars on the T.V. She looked at the camara and nodded. The other four knowing good and well that she was looking to them.
The reporter starts to speek. "The young boy is still trying to fight off the metor, as Sailor Mars one of the five sailor senshi, as the four other girls snuck out of the room.
Some of the students praying, some huging each other, some just watching.
"During this time most people have gone to there homes, we advise all those who are out, or in bulidings, to excape to the under ground shelter." Everyone was to scared to go out.
The other four senshi where on the roof as they spoke. "Moon crisis make up!" Serena was first to say as she transformed into Super Sailor Moon."Jupiter crystal power Make up!" Lita was next transforming into the strong Super Sailor Jupiter. "Mercury crystal power Make up!" Next was the quiet Amy turning her self into the elegent Super Sailor Mercury. "Venus crystal power make up!" last was Mina the Senshi of Love transforming her self into Super Sailor Venus
"Girls we have a planet to save" Lita said "right" the other girls said as they got outside.
Gohan still fighting the metorite 'I can do this! for my father! for everyone!' A saying stuck out in Gohan's mind thinking back to it during the Cell Games his dad said this. 'Gohan, use the pain of loss, you have all the power you need just bring it out' remembering his father said that he pushed to find more energy. "AHHHHHHHHH!!" Gohan releasing more energy the wave giant as he hurd in the back ground. "Moon Gorgeous Meditataion!" "Mars flame Snyper" "Mercury Aqua Rhapsody!" "Venus Love and Beauity Shock! "Jupiter oak Evolution!" as all the senshi fired there attacks at the metor the attacks hitting the metor pushing it back some more but nothing seeming to help....Gohans eyes closed he was puting almost everything he could find into his attack "Planet attack" Serena said they all nodded.
"The Sailor Senshi have seemed to show up, but there attacks not seeming to work" "Sailor!" they said holding hands standing in a circle. "Ahhhhhhh!" Gohan said charigng up his energy even more throwing as much as he can into his attack. "You wont take this planet, At least wile i'm around!" Gohan yelling useing all the energy he can almost used up everything he had "Planet!" the senshi glowing as he looked to them. Then looking down at all the children and frightened people. Gohan seeming to find more Power within when he saw them
"I Failed them." Gohan stoped fireing the wave compleley exaused, Gohan fell to one knee. "I Got nothing left" "Attack!" was hurd as a the senshi flew at the metor creating a large crack in it. as Gohan saw this "There," he said gitting up compleley whiped out. "kaaaaa!....meeeeee....haaaaa.....meeeee...haaa!" he screamed again throwing the last of his energy into the attack. Aiming right at the crack as the wave was small but started to go though the metor. "Yeah!" Gohan had a weak smile on his face. 'I did it Gohan with the help of those girls you did it.' as the wave went though the beam Gohan pulled out a little brown bag takeing out a senzu bean. Gohan hurd a loud explosion in the sky. Eating the senzu bean he felt him self get his energy back, and a little more then what he had started with.
Gohan jumped off the roof wearing Piccolo's gi he put the turben part back on. "Thank you..." Sailor Mercury said "Hey any time as there was another explosion the senshi looked up along with Gohan. "What the!" "The metor broke up into smaller peices!" Mars Exclaimed
"Girls get as many people out of here as you can. Find ever reporter with a camara and explain are situation i'll by us some time now Go!" Gohan yelled at them as the senshi ran off
Gohan flared up his aura again, haveing more energy he started fireing energy waves at the rocks, some of the metor chunks hitting bulidings compleley annilating them.
"Darien, Lets go and help other peo...." "Serena look out!" he yelled as he pushed serena out of the way. Darien was hit by a large metor. crushed instanley under its exteream. weight, Serena falling to her knees. "D-Dar-Darien...." she said softley. "DARIEN!!!" she screamed as loud as she could Gohan saw Sailor moon over there. "Get underground." he said to her knowing she wasn't going to be much help trying to protect people Serena just nodded she was to hurt with the loss of her loved one, she knowing she couldn't help any more and she just wanted to die now.
"Mars flame sniper!" Mars yelling shooting a flame arrow at a chuck of the metor, destorying it into smaller peaces. They hit, and they broke windows, dented cars, mostley caused property damage.
Off on the other side of town, Gohan was fireing more and more ki Blasts, he hurd constant screaming people dieing, and saw people jumping out of bulidings. Gohan saw one huge chunk of metor about the size of a 2 story house, hit a buliding compleley whipeing it and everything whitin about a mile of that spot, hereing screaming then it going quiet for a moment. Seeing people runing for there lives. This kept up for about two or three hours. Gohan had never saw such chaos, and death. Inside he would never be the same.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ *~*~*
Three hours later
Gohan stood outside no longer in his super saiyan 2 form. Looking at all the damage, it looked like Tokyo was just bombed and then nuked at the same time. It was a war zone. Gohan droped to his knees. "I Failed..." he said the place was bare as another metor smacked into a buliding a large explosion comeing from the buliding catching it on fire, there where fires all about the city. Streets destoryed, no place anyone could live. The entire city was annilatied.
All the senshi But Sailor Moon stood there "Sailor Moon doesnt want to fight any more. shes done." Venus said to the others "I just talked to her Darien was crushed by a metor." This news hurting Rei the most she bursted into tears all the girls tearing up a little as well but not as bad as Rei. "No more Crystal Tokyo then..." Jupiter said as Mercury nodded. after a little bit of crying they finaly saw Gohan standing there looking at everything. "Kid you need to get under ground." as Gohan turned around. "You to.." is all he said as they walked to the under ground shelter.
Gohan walked to a T.V and saw the reporter talking. "Today Febuary 14, 2038..." The reporter stoped for a moment, "Is A Day that the human race will never forget. Around the world countless metors have struck killing millions maybe billions. Officals sould have a report within the End of the month of the total kill count."
Gohan walked away from the T.V." he walked up to one of the officals in the shelter. "Whats are total Death toll?" Gohan said to the man. "Kid..." "Tell me!" Gohan Yelled "2 million Nine hundred thousand." (2,900,000) "How meny people lived in this City. "Three million people...Only 100,000 people lived" The man said "We will share this infromation later."
"Everyone lost someone today..." Gohan just looked around at countless people crying then seeing the Serena, Lita, Amy, Rei, and Lita.
He walked up to them the only people he actuley knew "Did you lose anyone today Gohan?" Serena said still crying.
He just nodded in fact he didnt his family was save in The Z-Relalm. Serena just huged Gohan Crying she couldn't do anything else...."Things Can't Get any worse ok..." Gohan was Wrong...
Wow how did you like that chapter hopefully it wasnt to short oh well well i'll seeya later
Questions comments put them in reviews
Son Gohan...
ok someone was wondering why i chose Gohan to be like a feeble kid well during the cell games he didnt trust his power and fighting cell he didnt mostley hes just afrade of failing others as i have explained (if you read his thoughs) but trust me it gets better as he goes on you might see a difference here...
"Speeking out loud"
'thinking to them selfs'
*Telepathic talking*
Metor called Omega
The large wave of energy went flying at the metor, for some reason it didn't explode it seemed like the Metor was fighting it. "AHhhhhhhhh!" Gohan yelled puting more energy into the attack.
Serena, Lita, Mina, and Amy, where watching Gohan fighting the metor on T.V. Then they saw Sailor Mars on the T.V. She looked at the camara and nodded. The other four knowing good and well that she was looking to them.
The reporter starts to speek. "The young boy is still trying to fight off the metor, as Sailor Mars one of the five sailor senshi, as the four other girls snuck out of the room.
Some of the students praying, some huging each other, some just watching.
"During this time most people have gone to there homes, we advise all those who are out, or in bulidings, to excape to the under ground shelter." Everyone was to scared to go out.
The other four senshi where on the roof as they spoke. "Moon crisis make up!" Serena was first to say as she transformed into Super Sailor Moon."Jupiter crystal power Make up!" Lita was next transforming into the strong Super Sailor Jupiter. "Mercury crystal power Make up!" Next was the quiet Amy turning her self into the elegent Super Sailor Mercury. "Venus crystal power make up!" last was Mina the Senshi of Love transforming her self into Super Sailor Venus
"Girls we have a planet to save" Lita said "right" the other girls said as they got outside.
Gohan still fighting the metorite 'I can do this! for my father! for everyone!' A saying stuck out in Gohan's mind thinking back to it during the Cell Games his dad said this. 'Gohan, use the pain of loss, you have all the power you need just bring it out' remembering his father said that he pushed to find more energy. "AHHHHHHHHH!!" Gohan releasing more energy the wave giant as he hurd in the back ground. "Moon Gorgeous Meditataion!" "Mars flame Snyper" "Mercury Aqua Rhapsody!" "Venus Love and Beauity Shock! "Jupiter oak Evolution!" as all the senshi fired there attacks at the metor the attacks hitting the metor pushing it back some more but nothing seeming to help....Gohans eyes closed he was puting almost everything he could find into his attack "Planet attack" Serena said they all nodded.
"The Sailor Senshi have seemed to show up, but there attacks not seeming to work" "Sailor!" they said holding hands standing in a circle. "Ahhhhhhh!" Gohan said charigng up his energy even more throwing as much as he can into his attack. "You wont take this planet, At least wile i'm around!" Gohan yelling useing all the energy he can almost used up everything he had "Planet!" the senshi glowing as he looked to them. Then looking down at all the children and frightened people. Gohan seeming to find more Power within when he saw them
"I Failed them." Gohan stoped fireing the wave compleley exaused, Gohan fell to one knee. "I Got nothing left" "Attack!" was hurd as a the senshi flew at the metor creating a large crack in it. as Gohan saw this "There," he said gitting up compleley whiped out. "kaaaaa!....meeeeee....haaaaa.....meeeee...haaa!" he screamed again throwing the last of his energy into the attack. Aiming right at the crack as the wave was small but started to go though the metor. "Yeah!" Gohan had a weak smile on his face. 'I did it Gohan with the help of those girls you did it.' as the wave went though the beam Gohan pulled out a little brown bag takeing out a senzu bean. Gohan hurd a loud explosion in the sky. Eating the senzu bean he felt him self get his energy back, and a little more then what he had started with.
Gohan jumped off the roof wearing Piccolo's gi he put the turben part back on. "Thank you..." Sailor Mercury said "Hey any time as there was another explosion the senshi looked up along with Gohan. "What the!" "The metor broke up into smaller peices!" Mars Exclaimed
"Girls get as many people out of here as you can. Find ever reporter with a camara and explain are situation i'll by us some time now Go!" Gohan yelled at them as the senshi ran off
Gohan flared up his aura again, haveing more energy he started fireing energy waves at the rocks, some of the metor chunks hitting bulidings compleley annilating them.
"Darien, Lets go and help other peo...." "Serena look out!" he yelled as he pushed serena out of the way. Darien was hit by a large metor. crushed instanley under its exteream. weight, Serena falling to her knees. "D-Dar-Darien...." she said softley. "DARIEN!!!" she screamed as loud as she could Gohan saw Sailor moon over there. "Get underground." he said to her knowing she wasn't going to be much help trying to protect people Serena just nodded she was to hurt with the loss of her loved one, she knowing she couldn't help any more and she just wanted to die now.
"Mars flame sniper!" Mars yelling shooting a flame arrow at a chuck of the metor, destorying it into smaller peaces. They hit, and they broke windows, dented cars, mostley caused property damage.
Off on the other side of town, Gohan was fireing more and more ki Blasts, he hurd constant screaming people dieing, and saw people jumping out of bulidings. Gohan saw one huge chunk of metor about the size of a 2 story house, hit a buliding compleley whipeing it and everything whitin about a mile of that spot, hereing screaming then it going quiet for a moment. Seeing people runing for there lives. This kept up for about two or three hours. Gohan had never saw such chaos, and death. Inside he would never be the same.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ *~*~*
Three hours later
Gohan stood outside no longer in his super saiyan 2 form. Looking at all the damage, it looked like Tokyo was just bombed and then nuked at the same time. It was a war zone. Gohan droped to his knees. "I Failed..." he said the place was bare as another metor smacked into a buliding a large explosion comeing from the buliding catching it on fire, there where fires all about the city. Streets destoryed, no place anyone could live. The entire city was annilatied.
All the senshi But Sailor Moon stood there "Sailor Moon doesnt want to fight any more. shes done." Venus said to the others "I just talked to her Darien was crushed by a metor." This news hurting Rei the most she bursted into tears all the girls tearing up a little as well but not as bad as Rei. "No more Crystal Tokyo then..." Jupiter said as Mercury nodded. after a little bit of crying they finaly saw Gohan standing there looking at everything. "Kid you need to get under ground." as Gohan turned around. "You to.." is all he said as they walked to the under ground shelter.
Gohan walked to a T.V and saw the reporter talking. "Today Febuary 14, 2038..." The reporter stoped for a moment, "Is A Day that the human race will never forget. Around the world countless metors have struck killing millions maybe billions. Officals sould have a report within the End of the month of the total kill count."
Gohan walked away from the T.V." he walked up to one of the officals in the shelter. "Whats are total Death toll?" Gohan said to the man. "Kid..." "Tell me!" Gohan Yelled "2 million Nine hundred thousand." (2,900,000) "How meny people lived in this City. "Three million people...Only 100,000 people lived" The man said "We will share this infromation later."
"Everyone lost someone today..." Gohan just looked around at countless people crying then seeing the Serena, Lita, Amy, Rei, and Lita.
He walked up to them the only people he actuley knew "Did you lose anyone today Gohan?" Serena said still crying.
He just nodded in fact he didnt his family was save in The Z-Relalm. Serena just huged Gohan Crying she couldn't do anything else...."Things Can't Get any worse ok..." Gohan was Wrong...
Wow how did you like that chapter hopefully it wasnt to short oh well well i'll seeya later
Questions comments put them in reviews
Son Gohan...