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"Midnight stroll and a broken nose."-chapter-3
After the feast everyone headed up towards their common room. "This way first years."said a perfect. They came upon a portrait of a fat lady."The password will be honeydew."The portrait open to reveal a room."Well good night everyone"said the house perfect and he left for his room."Everyone else headed up.
"Hi I'm chrystal" said a girl with blond hair and hazel eyes.She was a little taller than angel.Then again angel was a very small and frail little girl who had shocking bright blue eyes and curly brown hair."I'm angel."she replied to the girl and smiled."Hi I'm anya."said another girl with light brown hair and deep brown eyes."I'm celestrial."said another girl with short black hair and big chocolate eyes."Well I guess where gonna be roomies for the rest of our hogwarts years!"chrystal exclaimed."Well nice meeting everyone see ya!"angel cried out happily."And where are you going?"Asked anya."I've got a little exploring to do."said angel rubbing her hands together mischieviously."anyone wanna come?" "and risk detention on the first day no"chrystal said."Ditto"said anya "I would but I'm too tired right now."celestrial added."oh whatever you big wussies.Well bye bye.See you all at breakfast."angel said then headed out after grabbing her wand.If she did get into trouble maybe she could use it to poke her enemy.
"where do you think your going?"asked the fat lady "oh um..just a walk."then she ran off.
She walked around the corner and and started to hum silently.She walked all the way to where the witch with a hump. "Hm....what a funny nose."she said touching the statue's nose.Suddenly it broked."Uh oh...."She said trying to stick it back on.She accidentally dropped it and it broked into tiny pieces."Who's there?" 'uh oh....'she thought again.She backed up and her wand touched the witch's hump.It opened."OK wierd....the witch with the wierd nose is my savior...."She crawled in quickly.It was dark all around and cold too.She shivered.Sounds of running was heard from a distance and was gone.She climbed back out a little shaken."I'll call it a night more exploring tomorrow...." She walked back and bumped into something. She looked up but there was noone.'whaa..?'she thought. "angel"a voice whispered."Ah! a ghost!" "No shhhhhh...It me harry." "harry?where are you?"suddenly he appeared with a strange cloak in his hand."what are you doing up?" He asked. "Uh.....walking?"she tried."Right....." "what are you! doing up and can I play with the cloak?"asked angel "I'm walking like you....and NO"he said after angel reached towards the cloak."Now lets go back to bed." "fine." they went back and harry said goodnite to angel and she said goodnite to him."Hm....what was harry doin?"was her last thought before she fell asleep. _____________________________________________________
"Angel......angel..........." "mommy?mommy where are you?"cried angel. "angel.......come to me Angel....." "Mommy where are you?" "Over hear........angel....." "Mommy?MOMMY?!" Somewhere in the darkness there was a lady's screaming. "MOMMY!"angel jerked up. She breathed heavily.Sweat on her face."mommy...." she whispered.She felt tears on her face.She grabbed hold of her necklace.The necklace mommy left her.It was a thin silver necklace with a beautiful little Lily. she layed back down and cried.It was still night.She cried herself to sleep once again and in her dream mommy was singing to her. ____________________________________________________
The next day was a beautiful day.It was the day Angel first learned how to ride her broom.She was a natural.Gliding here and there ignoring the words of her teacher.
"Angel I come down here!" "(giggles) No!" "Go get dumbledore"yelled the teacher lady to a girl. "(Giggles.....)"Angel did a loop and the teacher held her breathe. "WEEEEE!!!!!!(giggles)"can be heard from angel while she was gliding around here and there. "Angel!"it was grandpa "Uh-oh...."She stopped and got down. Her head held down as she walked towards her grandpa. "Yes grand papa..." "Don't you ever disobey your teacher.I was very worried when I heard what you had done."Said dumbldore softly not angrily. "Sorry...I won't do it again"angel said with her fingers crossed behind her back. Dumbledore shook his head."Just like your mother..."He said.Angel looked up into his eyes.She saw a hint of sorrow in his eyes.Their usual sparkle was gone. "Sorry grand pa...."she whispered. The rest of the day went fairly well...except for the fact that angel socked Sean's nose cuz he called her shorty and she accidentally floated the teacher in charms when she said wing gaurdium leviosa. Later on in the week she found out Harry and Parvati was a couple.Thats why he's been sneaking out.Ron and Hermione fought more than often.
One after noon Angel heard Harry,Ron, and hermione having the strangest conversation.It was about someone name fluffly.....
"So what was in the letter fluffy sent you"Asked Hermione. "He said he wanted to meet us at the Hogsmeade trip tomorrow."answered Harry. "Did he say what it was about?" "No,just that he needed to talk to us."
Angel's mind:Hogsmeade....If I can get Harry's invisibility coat the I'll be able to spy on them unnoticed all I gotta do is sneak into the witches hump and find them there...they won't be able to see me.....MWaahahahahaha!
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So what does everyone think?I know it sucks so far but It'll get better.Promise!ME NEED MORE REVIEWS!
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"Midnight stroll and a broken nose."-chapter-3
After the feast everyone headed up towards their common room. "This way first years."said a perfect. They came upon a portrait of a fat lady."The password will be honeydew."The portrait open to reveal a room."Well good night everyone"said the house perfect and he left for his room."Everyone else headed up.
"Hi I'm chrystal" said a girl with blond hair and hazel eyes.She was a little taller than angel.Then again angel was a very small and frail little girl who had shocking bright blue eyes and curly brown hair."I'm angel."she replied to the girl and smiled."Hi I'm anya."said another girl with light brown hair and deep brown eyes."I'm celestrial."said another girl with short black hair and big chocolate eyes."Well I guess where gonna be roomies for the rest of our hogwarts years!"chrystal exclaimed."Well nice meeting everyone see ya!"angel cried out happily."And where are you going?"Asked anya."I've got a little exploring to do."said angel rubbing her hands together mischieviously."anyone wanna come?" "and risk detention on the first day no"chrystal said."Ditto"said anya "I would but I'm too tired right now."celestrial added."oh whatever you big wussies.Well bye bye.See you all at breakfast."angel said then headed out after grabbing her wand.If she did get into trouble maybe she could use it to poke her enemy.
"where do you think your going?"asked the fat lady "oh um..just a walk."then she ran off.
She walked around the corner and and started to hum silently.She walked all the way to where the witch with a hump. "Hm....what a funny nose."she said touching the statue's nose.Suddenly it broked."Uh oh...."She said trying to stick it back on.She accidentally dropped it and it broked into tiny pieces."Who's there?" 'uh oh....'she thought again.She backed up and her wand touched the witch's hump.It opened."OK wierd....the witch with the wierd nose is my savior...."She crawled in quickly.It was dark all around and cold too.She shivered.Sounds of running was heard from a distance and was gone.She climbed back out a little shaken."I'll call it a night more exploring tomorrow...." She walked back and bumped into something. She looked up but there was noone.'whaa..?'she thought. "angel"a voice whispered."Ah! a ghost!" "No shhhhhh...It me harry." "harry?where are you?"suddenly he appeared with a strange cloak in his hand."what are you doing up?" He asked. "Uh.....walking?"she tried."Right....." "what are you! doing up and can I play with the cloak?"asked angel "I'm walking like you....and NO"he said after angel reached towards the cloak."Now lets go back to bed." "fine." they went back and harry said goodnite to angel and she said goodnite to him."Hm....what was harry doin?"was her last thought before she fell asleep. _____________________________________________________
"Angel......angel..........." "mommy?mommy where are you?"cried angel. "angel.......come to me Angel....." "Mommy where are you?" "Over hear........angel....." "Mommy?MOMMY?!" Somewhere in the darkness there was a lady's screaming. "MOMMY!"angel jerked up. She breathed heavily.Sweat on her face."mommy...." she whispered.She felt tears on her face.She grabbed hold of her necklace.The necklace mommy left her.It was a thin silver necklace with a beautiful little Lily. she layed back down and cried.It was still night.She cried herself to sleep once again and in her dream mommy was singing to her. ____________________________________________________
The next day was a beautiful day.It was the day Angel first learned how to ride her broom.She was a natural.Gliding here and there ignoring the words of her teacher.
"Angel I come down here!" "(giggles) No!" "Go get dumbledore"yelled the teacher lady to a girl. "(Giggles.....)"Angel did a loop and the teacher held her breathe. "WEEEEE!!!!!!(giggles)"can be heard from angel while she was gliding around here and there. "Angel!"it was grandpa "Uh-oh...."She stopped and got down. Her head held down as she walked towards her grandpa. "Yes grand papa..." "Don't you ever disobey your teacher.I was very worried when I heard what you had done."Said dumbldore softly not angrily. "Sorry...I won't do it again"angel said with her fingers crossed behind her back. Dumbledore shook his head."Just like your mother..."He said.Angel looked up into his eyes.She saw a hint of sorrow in his eyes.Their usual sparkle was gone. "Sorry grand pa...."she whispered. The rest of the day went fairly well...except for the fact that angel socked Sean's nose cuz he called her shorty and she accidentally floated the teacher in charms when she said wing gaurdium leviosa. Later on in the week she found out Harry and Parvati was a couple.Thats why he's been sneaking out.Ron and Hermione fought more than often.
One after noon Angel heard Harry,Ron, and hermione having the strangest conversation.It was about someone name fluffly.....
"So what was in the letter fluffy sent you"Asked Hermione. "He said he wanted to meet us at the Hogsmeade trip tomorrow."answered Harry. "Did he say what it was about?" "No,just that he needed to talk to us."
Angel's mind:Hogsmeade....If I can get Harry's invisibility coat the I'll be able to spy on them unnoticed all I gotta do is sneak into the witches hump and find them there...they won't be able to see me.....MWaahahahahaha!
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So what does everyone think?I know it sucks so far but It'll get better.Promise!ME NEED MORE REVIEWS!