1 Bad karma
By Jedi and, the angel of death.
Disclaimer: I own nothing of SSX Tricky (I wish I did though)
Please note: thank you to the people, who reviewed my last chapter, and yes I am playing the pal version of SSX. I didn't know who Mac was, sorry. Anyway here is the next chapter, enjoy:
Chapter two: how?
Brodi and Marty where walking down the corridor of the hospital,
"So what exactly happened?" Brodi asked,
"Well it all started when we were at garibaldi…"
"Konichiwa Marty" Kaori was bouncing around in her 'Santa's helper' suit
"Hay, do you never get cold?" he pointed at her legs.
"Only in my arm where the metal plate is." She pointed to her forearm.
"Good luck in today's race."
"You too, see ya." She waved as she ran off to fetch her board. She searched around the pile of boards she had bought. Even with that many she still could not get the uber board. The shopkeeper would not sell it to her. He said he would give it to some one if they had completed a trick book he supplied, she had one trick to do, the pirouette grind. Nether of them could get it. She finally picked the kaori-animie board as the snow lover board (or what ever it was called) was in the shop.
"All contestants please line up for the start of quarter finals." it went well for the two of them. In the quarterfinals and the semis Kaori came first and Marty came second but Phymon came third. "Please line up for the start of the finals." The race was neck and neck between Phymon, Kaori and Marty. Kaori set up to do her supper uber trick, the 'Pirouette Grind'. She spun and spun; Marty fell back as he attempted the 'walk the dog' trick. He fell short, as the jump was not big enough. Phymon moved in closer as the she slowed down, she was in midair, waiting to land on the board. Phymon saw his chance as he pushed her. She flew, the force of the grind added as she spun and hit a post. An almighty clang could be heard though out the stadium. The board slid down the hill as some of the racers went on, though most stopped. Marty stood up from his earlier wipe out and ran towards the build up of snow boarders, noticing that Kaori was not one of the people of the crowd.
"What happened?" he taped Luther on the back.
"It's Kaori, she's had a total wipe out, and she's out cold man."
"That was two days ago. I haven't eaten or slept in days."
"Well let's go get something to eat and we can talk a little more if you want." He agreed as they made speedy pace to the café.
If you want to read more please let me know. I threw this chapter together in a ½ hour slot between coursework.
By Jedi and, the angel of death.
Disclaimer: I own nothing of SSX Tricky (I wish I did though)
Please note: thank you to the people, who reviewed my last chapter, and yes I am playing the pal version of SSX. I didn't know who Mac was, sorry. Anyway here is the next chapter, enjoy:
Chapter two: how?
Brodi and Marty where walking down the corridor of the hospital,
"So what exactly happened?" Brodi asked,
"Well it all started when we were at garibaldi…"
"Konichiwa Marty" Kaori was bouncing around in her 'Santa's helper' suit
"Hay, do you never get cold?" he pointed at her legs.
"Only in my arm where the metal plate is." She pointed to her forearm.
"Good luck in today's race."
"You too, see ya." She waved as she ran off to fetch her board. She searched around the pile of boards she had bought. Even with that many she still could not get the uber board. The shopkeeper would not sell it to her. He said he would give it to some one if they had completed a trick book he supplied, she had one trick to do, the pirouette grind. Nether of them could get it. She finally picked the kaori-animie board as the snow lover board (or what ever it was called) was in the shop.
"All contestants please line up for the start of quarter finals." it went well for the two of them. In the quarterfinals and the semis Kaori came first and Marty came second but Phymon came third. "Please line up for the start of the finals." The race was neck and neck between Phymon, Kaori and Marty. Kaori set up to do her supper uber trick, the 'Pirouette Grind'. She spun and spun; Marty fell back as he attempted the 'walk the dog' trick. He fell short, as the jump was not big enough. Phymon moved in closer as the she slowed down, she was in midair, waiting to land on the board. Phymon saw his chance as he pushed her. She flew, the force of the grind added as she spun and hit a post. An almighty clang could be heard though out the stadium. The board slid down the hill as some of the racers went on, though most stopped. Marty stood up from his earlier wipe out and ran towards the build up of snow boarders, noticing that Kaori was not one of the people of the crowd.
"What happened?" he taped Luther on the back.
"It's Kaori, she's had a total wipe out, and she's out cold man."
"That was two days ago. I haven't eaten or slept in days."
"Well let's go get something to eat and we can talk a little more if you want." He agreed as they made speedy pace to the café.
If you want to read more please let me know. I threw this chapter together in a ½ hour slot between coursework.