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~~~:::*** Chapter 4:The beginning of the end...***:::~~~
"So you never saw her again ?" "No." "Why was she punised?" "Only The King can marry someone who was from the same country as he his. Since she's from Nigeria It wasn't anyway they were going to let that happen." "Oh...I'm sorry." "Don't be. Because Teana's soul lies deep within Tea and may soon be released with her millineum item. The millineum rose." "The Millineum rose?" "Yes. The millineum rose has the power of granting two loved ones an eternity together. If one dies she is reincarnated with the dead soul." (sound like a show called inuyasha doesn't it?) "Man...so you telling me Tea is Teana's reincarnate?" "Yes." "What about me." "The same with you." "hmmm...astounding."
"Soon I will be able to communicate with your inner soul and tell it to come out of you." "What are you talking about." "Ih so you don't know? Tea, Tea,....what have you been doing lately?" "Thinking of ways to piss you off." "Oh that hurt." "I'm sure it did." Bakura noticed a stronger tone in Tea's voice. 'Her voice is stronger...yet I remeber whose voice it is. ..it couldn't be.' He looked up to see Teana instead of Tea hanging in front o him. "Why Teana, Your more beautiful than I remeber-" "Spare me nono of your nonsense. What are you trying to plan against Yami?" "Why, Teana I'm surpried. Why do you think I was planning something?" Teana stepped to the side letting Bakura see the helpless and lifeless body of Tea. "What are you doing with her?" Teana asked. "Alright! I'm simply using her to get Yami's millineum puzzle. " "Foolish man, you know as well as I do he'll never give it to you." "Yes but when I set this place on fire he'll start to rethink a little bit about whether he wants the girl, formly you, or the puzzle; which he will choose because he has to have it to stay alive. And if it's under my control he wont be able to." "What do you plan on doing if chooses the puzzle?" Teana said.
"I'm planning on Taking Tea hostage and take controlover her mind. I will then force her to marry me." "You dirty son of a b-" "Nah ah ah! You wouldn't like it if took control of her mind now would you?" Teana hesitated and said, "All I ask is that you leave Tea be and let Yami decide for himself if he wants Tea or his puzzle." "Fine....fine. You Have it your way princ-" "Ahem." "Your majesty...but don't expect him to choose you. Remember, he has to have to puzzle to stay alive." "Grrr..." Teana's soul went back into the necklace Tea wore and Tea regained consiousness. "Huh? Wha-" "Before you say anything else...you shall know your spirit of the millineum rose spoke to me." "The millineum rose?" "You have a millineum Item. And Like Yami's it hangs from your neck." Tea looked down. 'Millineum rose? Is he crazy? I just thought this was a regular golden necklace.
"Yami we have to sa-" "I can't bare to see another woman killed..." Tears welled up in his eyes. "Tea...where Bakura has taken you, I will find him. That is my promise to you."
This is where I'll stop writing and will alow comments, idea, and other ways the story could go on. Review! Oh! An if you think the story is cool the way it's going...I have to get at least 3 reivews saying it!
~~~:::*** Chapter 4:The beginning of the end...***:::~~~
"So you never saw her again ?" "No." "Why was she punised?" "Only The King can marry someone who was from the same country as he his. Since she's from Nigeria It wasn't anyway they were going to let that happen." "Oh...I'm sorry." "Don't be. Because Teana's soul lies deep within Tea and may soon be released with her millineum item. The millineum rose." "The Millineum rose?" "Yes. The millineum rose has the power of granting two loved ones an eternity together. If one dies she is reincarnated with the dead soul." (sound like a show called inuyasha doesn't it?) "Man...so you telling me Tea is Teana's reincarnate?" "Yes." "What about me." "The same with you." "hmmm...astounding."
"Soon I will be able to communicate with your inner soul and tell it to come out of you." "What are you talking about." "Ih so you don't know? Tea, Tea,....what have you been doing lately?" "Thinking of ways to piss you off." "Oh that hurt." "I'm sure it did." Bakura noticed a stronger tone in Tea's voice. 'Her voice is stronger...yet I remeber whose voice it is. ..it couldn't be.' He looked up to see Teana instead of Tea hanging in front o him. "Why Teana, Your more beautiful than I remeber-" "Spare me nono of your nonsense. What are you trying to plan against Yami?" "Why, Teana I'm surpried. Why do you think I was planning something?" Teana stepped to the side letting Bakura see the helpless and lifeless body of Tea. "What are you doing with her?" Teana asked. "Alright! I'm simply using her to get Yami's millineum puzzle. " "Foolish man, you know as well as I do he'll never give it to you." "Yes but when I set this place on fire he'll start to rethink a little bit about whether he wants the girl, formly you, or the puzzle; which he will choose because he has to have it to stay alive. And if it's under my control he wont be able to." "What do you plan on doing if chooses the puzzle?" Teana said.
"I'm planning on Taking Tea hostage and take controlover her mind. I will then force her to marry me." "You dirty son of a b-" "Nah ah ah! You wouldn't like it if took control of her mind now would you?" Teana hesitated and said, "All I ask is that you leave Tea be and let Yami decide for himself if he wants Tea or his puzzle." "Fine....fine. You Have it your way princ-" "Ahem." "Your majesty...but don't expect him to choose you. Remember, he has to have to puzzle to stay alive." "Grrr..." Teana's soul went back into the necklace Tea wore and Tea regained consiousness. "Huh? Wha-" "Before you say anything else...you shall know your spirit of the millineum rose spoke to me." "The millineum rose?" "You have a millineum Item. And Like Yami's it hangs from your neck." Tea looked down. 'Millineum rose? Is he crazy? I just thought this was a regular golden necklace.
"Yami we have to sa-" "I can't bare to see another woman killed..." Tears welled up in his eyes. "Tea...where Bakura has taken you, I will find him. That is my promise to you."
This is where I'll stop writing and will alow comments, idea, and other ways the story could go on. Review! Oh! An if you think the story is cool the way it's going...I have to get at least 3 reivews saying it!