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CHAPTER 5: Survival Of The Fittest.
Jin dove with a leaping side kick at the creature. Ogre's eyes narrowed. The little fool thought he could defeat him? He grabbed Jin by the foot and used the boy's own momentum to throw him across the room like he was nothing. Jin slapped against the wall, the concrete tore at the flesh on his back and he hit the floor face down with a hard thud. He coughed and rose to one knee.
JIN: "Toshin!!!!!"
Jin got up to his feet and ran at Ogre, filled with a fire inside him. He drove his fist into the creature's chest, barely making a dent. He cursed under his breath and threw a fury of punches at him. His punches made a dull thud against Toshin's chest and the beast growled, snatching him by the throat, lifting him off the ground. Jin looked at Toshin, his eyes glazed over in a daze from hitting the wall. Toshin sneered and glared into Jin's eyes.
JIN: "You....recognize me...don't you..."
TOSHIN: ".....Hajime..."(Hajime is Japanese for "Fight")
Jin spat in his face. Toshin snorted and tossed Jin up in the air. 'Dear lord his strength is absolute!' Toshin twisted on his heel and slammed his foot into Jin's back, not really kicking him away, though the impact was immense, but more like catching him on the sole of his foot, and swung his leg down, slamming Jin down on the ground face down. Jin hit the ground with a hard snap. The beast raised it's foot ready to crush Jin's spine. Jin looked over his shoulder on the ground and saw this. He rolled out from under the foot just as it came down. The foot slammed against the ground and thundered like an earthquake. Jin grunted and drove his foot up into the groin of the creature. Ha! Yes! The creature roared and staggered back. Jin rose to his feet, chuckling madly and stepped forward, dropping to his knees, driving his fist into the creature's groin again. Jin rose quickly, driving his other fist into Toshin's face, his other hand extended and snapped into his throat. The creature coughed blood and grabbed it's throat. Jin hopped up and grabbed the front of it's head dress and pulled himself up fast, driving his knee into it's face, then shoved off with his foot, backflipping away as the creature tumbled to the floor. Jin landed in a crouch on one knee, panting. Sweat ran down his chest and back, dribbled down his face, matted his bangs to his forehead. A trail of blood ran down his mouth and he got up, waiting. Toshin sat up, keeping himself up with his hands. His head dress awkward on his head. He growled and ripped it off, throwing it aside. His long, thin, straight brown hair fell around his shoulder and behind his head, some strands in his face and he staggered to his feet. Blood ran from his nose and mouth, down is neck and chest.
JIN: "You gonna do somethin' or just stand there and bleed?"
The creature roared and charged at him. Jin growled and charged in return. He threw his fist at the beast but to his surprise the creature bent down under it and brought it's fist together, bringing them up and knocked Jin into the air. But Toshin caught him before he got too high and powerbombed him to the floor, flat on his back. Jin threw another kick for Toshin's 'weak-spot' as he proclaimed. But Ogre caught the foot and shoved it away, sending Jin into a backwards roll. As Jin came up he saw the monster running at him and twisting. He barely had time to dodge as Toshin landed a triple-roundhouse on him, knocking him to the floor again. "Jin!" He heard a voice call and glanced up to see Toshin look behind him.
JIN: "Ling....n-No!"
Xiaoyu had followed him to the temple dojo and was making her way for Toshin. And just as he feared, Toshin attacked, driving his heel into Xiaoyu's face, throwing her back into a wall. Jin started to scream in anguish but only choked out a groan of pain. His arm burned and he looked at the black scar on his arm. It was now a glowing red, like a fire inside him. He panted hard as a monsterous roar escaped him and he rose up fast. Toshin's head snapped back to him just in time as Jin uppercutted the beast with power of the Gods(an expression I use), and Toshin flew into the air and back, flames erupting from it's body as it came crashing down next to Heihachi's body. The flames distinguished as it weakly started to rise. Jin screamed in rage and ran forward. He blocked an oncoming punch by the beast with no trouble and decked the monster in the chest, flames surrounding his fist. His vison went red as he continued his massacre, throwing a fury of hook punches across the Ogre's face, spraying blood to all sides, even on him. To finish it off he yelled out, leaping off the ground and twisted, snapping his foot out across Toshin's face. The beast made a complete turn as it lost it's footing and tumbled to the floor, blood covering it's battered face and chest. Jin landed in a crouch, panting as his vision returned to normal, the burning on his arm ceased and his attention snapped to Xiaoyu.
JIN: "Ling!"
He ran over to her and slid to his knees, pulling her into his arms.
JIN: "......Oh god....Ling.."
Xiaoyu groaned softly, opening her eyes.
XIAOYU: "Jin..." (smiles)
JIN: "Ling!" (smiles in disbelief)
XIAOYU: "You won?"
JIN: "I avenged my mother...yeah..."
Xiaoyu's eyes suddenly went wide and she pointed past Jin.
XIAOYU: "Jin! Look!"
JIN: "What?"
Jin looked back, following the aim of her finger. His eyes widened in surprise and he gasped. He couldn't believe his eyes!
And we'll continue later with Chapter 6. That is if I get some reviews finally. As far as I've checked I've only gotten reviews on "A Very Odd Birthday." I'd really like some reviews on this one. Unless I do, I won't put Chapter 6 up.
CHAPTER 5: Survival Of The Fittest.
Jin dove with a leaping side kick at the creature. Ogre's eyes narrowed. The little fool thought he could defeat him? He grabbed Jin by the foot and used the boy's own momentum to throw him across the room like he was nothing. Jin slapped against the wall, the concrete tore at the flesh on his back and he hit the floor face down with a hard thud. He coughed and rose to one knee.
JIN: "Toshin!!!!!"
Jin got up to his feet and ran at Ogre, filled with a fire inside him. He drove his fist into the creature's chest, barely making a dent. He cursed under his breath and threw a fury of punches at him. His punches made a dull thud against Toshin's chest and the beast growled, snatching him by the throat, lifting him off the ground. Jin looked at Toshin, his eyes glazed over in a daze from hitting the wall. Toshin sneered and glared into Jin's eyes.
JIN: "You....recognize me...don't you..."
TOSHIN: ".....Hajime..."(Hajime is Japanese for "Fight")
Jin spat in his face. Toshin snorted and tossed Jin up in the air. 'Dear lord his strength is absolute!' Toshin twisted on his heel and slammed his foot into Jin's back, not really kicking him away, though the impact was immense, but more like catching him on the sole of his foot, and swung his leg down, slamming Jin down on the ground face down. Jin hit the ground with a hard snap. The beast raised it's foot ready to crush Jin's spine. Jin looked over his shoulder on the ground and saw this. He rolled out from under the foot just as it came down. The foot slammed against the ground and thundered like an earthquake. Jin grunted and drove his foot up into the groin of the creature. Ha! Yes! The creature roared and staggered back. Jin rose to his feet, chuckling madly and stepped forward, dropping to his knees, driving his fist into the creature's groin again. Jin rose quickly, driving his other fist into Toshin's face, his other hand extended and snapped into his throat. The creature coughed blood and grabbed it's throat. Jin hopped up and grabbed the front of it's head dress and pulled himself up fast, driving his knee into it's face, then shoved off with his foot, backflipping away as the creature tumbled to the floor. Jin landed in a crouch on one knee, panting. Sweat ran down his chest and back, dribbled down his face, matted his bangs to his forehead. A trail of blood ran down his mouth and he got up, waiting. Toshin sat up, keeping himself up with his hands. His head dress awkward on his head. He growled and ripped it off, throwing it aside. His long, thin, straight brown hair fell around his shoulder and behind his head, some strands in his face and he staggered to his feet. Blood ran from his nose and mouth, down is neck and chest.
JIN: "You gonna do somethin' or just stand there and bleed?"
The creature roared and charged at him. Jin growled and charged in return. He threw his fist at the beast but to his surprise the creature bent down under it and brought it's fist together, bringing them up and knocked Jin into the air. But Toshin caught him before he got too high and powerbombed him to the floor, flat on his back. Jin threw another kick for Toshin's 'weak-spot' as he proclaimed. But Ogre caught the foot and shoved it away, sending Jin into a backwards roll. As Jin came up he saw the monster running at him and twisting. He barely had time to dodge as Toshin landed a triple-roundhouse on him, knocking him to the floor again. "Jin!" He heard a voice call and glanced up to see Toshin look behind him.
JIN: "Ling....n-No!"
Xiaoyu had followed him to the temple dojo and was making her way for Toshin. And just as he feared, Toshin attacked, driving his heel into Xiaoyu's face, throwing her back into a wall. Jin started to scream in anguish but only choked out a groan of pain. His arm burned and he looked at the black scar on his arm. It was now a glowing red, like a fire inside him. He panted hard as a monsterous roar escaped him and he rose up fast. Toshin's head snapped back to him just in time as Jin uppercutted the beast with power of the Gods(an expression I use), and Toshin flew into the air and back, flames erupting from it's body as it came crashing down next to Heihachi's body. The flames distinguished as it weakly started to rise. Jin screamed in rage and ran forward. He blocked an oncoming punch by the beast with no trouble and decked the monster in the chest, flames surrounding his fist. His vison went red as he continued his massacre, throwing a fury of hook punches across the Ogre's face, spraying blood to all sides, even on him. To finish it off he yelled out, leaping off the ground and twisted, snapping his foot out across Toshin's face. The beast made a complete turn as it lost it's footing and tumbled to the floor, blood covering it's battered face and chest. Jin landed in a crouch, panting as his vision returned to normal, the burning on his arm ceased and his attention snapped to Xiaoyu.
JIN: "Ling!"
He ran over to her and slid to his knees, pulling her into his arms.
JIN: "......Oh god....Ling.."
Xiaoyu groaned softly, opening her eyes.
XIAOYU: "Jin..." (smiles)
JIN: "Ling!" (smiles in disbelief)
XIAOYU: "You won?"
JIN: "I avenged my mother...yeah..."
Xiaoyu's eyes suddenly went wide and she pointed past Jin.
XIAOYU: "Jin! Look!"
JIN: "What?"
Jin looked back, following the aim of her finger. His eyes widened in surprise and he gasped. He couldn't believe his eyes!
And we'll continue later with Chapter 6. That is if I get some reviews finally. As far as I've checked I've only gotten reviews on "A Very Odd Birthday." I'd really like some reviews on this one. Unless I do, I won't put Chapter 6 up.