Left in the Generation
Reviewers Responses-
R.W.G.S- It's just a story. All first chapters that I write are short, I'm just getting
started.
Meghan- Don't worry, no slash, no incest, no sex what so ever. The plot is basically
explained in this chapter, if not, soon enough.
Chapter Two- Mission
Maybe my idea of an introduction was horrible. I mentioned things you've
already heard from people, or should I say angels, you're probably not fans of. You know the
story, you've heard the facts, otherwise you wouldn't give a shit of what we're doing. Or
should I say, going to do. You'll probably hear bits and pieces about it, maybe even a couple
of rumors. But no one knows. To be nice, I'll spill some beans. As for the rest, you'll just
have to wait.
For starters, my name is Chloe, before there's any confusion. Like a certain
Bartelby and a certain Loki, we are angels. With the exception of the present day situations,
the four of us were stationed in Heaven, which is not an overrated place. Three years ago,
almost to the date, they did some things they really shouldn't have done. But, like I said, I'm
not going there, it's been told.
Here's the deal with myself and Natalie. If we were mortals, we'd be
living good lives, innocent, not a sin to speak of. You humans, and I don't mean that in a bad
way, would consider us fifteen year old girls. In Heaven, we're considered inmature angels. Not
that we act inmature, it just means we don't have the prime factor of an angel. Wings. Angels
do not recieve their wings until what is called their sixteenth existence, which is like a
birthday.
You see, for a very long time, we've never been appreciated. I'm related to
the former Prince of Darkness, and Natalie is just Bartelby's sister, not good. Anyways, we
have to be on our best behavior twenty-four seven to prove that we're not like them. To be
honest, in some ways, we are, in some ways we're not. The fact that God only sees the good,
rahter than the downfalls of the gene pool, is about to come as a major advantage.
The only way an angel can actually leave Heaven to Earth is by an approved
missionary by God or Metetron. That, or getting kicked out, but we want to get back in less
violent and more successful ways. Why do we want to go to Earth? Well, that's where the
disapproval would come (if the truth was planning to be told).
Believe it or not, another New Testament is being written as I am writing
this. Why is it being written centuries later? We don't know. Why it's being written at the
Saint Michael's Chruch in New Jersey? We don't know. But what we do know is that Loki and
Bartelby will be mentioned, big time (and with real names, no more of the Prince of Darkness
thing). Of course, if they're in there, it's not going to be for anything good. From being
kicked out of Heaven, to being destined in Hell for eternity. WIth the attempt to end human
existence in between.
Now, as humans, you proabably think they deserve that, burning
forever while the rest of mankind knows their extremem wrong doing. But, you have to look at
the siuation from a sister's point of view, two of us. It's our duty to fix the shit they started.
Since we can't go back in time to undo certain things (only God can do so, we already asked
her about that and we obviously didn't get far. Not like we were expecting too) we're going
to do the next best thing. Natalie and I are going to Red bank, New Jersey to make sure no
testament is ever written.
- So, is it really worth continuing?-
Reviewers Responses-
R.W.G.S- It's just a story. All first chapters that I write are short, I'm just getting
started.
Meghan- Don't worry, no slash, no incest, no sex what so ever. The plot is basically
explained in this chapter, if not, soon enough.
Chapter Two- Mission
Maybe my idea of an introduction was horrible. I mentioned things you've
already heard from people, or should I say angels, you're probably not fans of. You know the
story, you've heard the facts, otherwise you wouldn't give a shit of what we're doing. Or
should I say, going to do. You'll probably hear bits and pieces about it, maybe even a couple
of rumors. But no one knows. To be nice, I'll spill some beans. As for the rest, you'll just
have to wait.
For starters, my name is Chloe, before there's any confusion. Like a certain
Bartelby and a certain Loki, we are angels. With the exception of the present day situations,
the four of us were stationed in Heaven, which is not an overrated place. Three years ago,
almost to the date, they did some things they really shouldn't have done. But, like I said, I'm
not going there, it's been told.
Here's the deal with myself and Natalie. If we were mortals, we'd be
living good lives, innocent, not a sin to speak of. You humans, and I don't mean that in a bad
way, would consider us fifteen year old girls. In Heaven, we're considered inmature angels. Not
that we act inmature, it just means we don't have the prime factor of an angel. Wings. Angels
do not recieve their wings until what is called their sixteenth existence, which is like a
birthday.
You see, for a very long time, we've never been appreciated. I'm related to
the former Prince of Darkness, and Natalie is just Bartelby's sister, not good. Anyways, we
have to be on our best behavior twenty-four seven to prove that we're not like them. To be
honest, in some ways, we are, in some ways we're not. The fact that God only sees the good,
rahter than the downfalls of the gene pool, is about to come as a major advantage.
The only way an angel can actually leave Heaven to Earth is by an approved
missionary by God or Metetron. That, or getting kicked out, but we want to get back in less
violent and more successful ways. Why do we want to go to Earth? Well, that's where the
disapproval would come (if the truth was planning to be told).
Believe it or not, another New Testament is being written as I am writing
this. Why is it being written centuries later? We don't know. Why it's being written at the
Saint Michael's Chruch in New Jersey? We don't know. But what we do know is that Loki and
Bartelby will be mentioned, big time (and with real names, no more of the Prince of Darkness
thing). Of course, if they're in there, it's not going to be for anything good. From being
kicked out of Heaven, to being destined in Hell for eternity. WIth the attempt to end human
existence in between.
Now, as humans, you proabably think they deserve that, burning
forever while the rest of mankind knows their extremem wrong doing. But, you have to look at
the siuation from a sister's point of view, two of us. It's our duty to fix the shit they started.
Since we can't go back in time to undo certain things (only God can do so, we already asked
her about that and we obviously didn't get far. Not like we were expecting too) we're going
to do the next best thing. Natalie and I are going to Red bank, New Jersey to make sure no
testament is ever written.
- So, is it really worth continuing?-