THE STORY:
(Having a Title Might be Nice) The SSX veterans gathered in the small seminar room, as old friends chatted and enemies exchanged shifty glances. "Excuse me! Can I have your attention up here please?" shouted a small man from a podium in the center of the room. "What is it Rick?! I'm busy!" Marisol said as she looked at herself in the mirror. "Marisol, there will be plenty of time for you to do that later. You veterans, you know the drill," Rick said as he handed out clipboards to the racers. "As opposed to not being veterans? You mean we're getting some new blood?" Psymon cackled merrily. Kaori and Mac started to edge their chairs away very slowly Psymon laughed and started a very involved conversation with this tattoo. "Oh, you haven't had a chance to meet the new racers? They're right there," Rick said, motioning to a group in the corner. A giant of a man stood in the back, decked in snow cammo pants, combat boots, a black t-shirt and a red flack coat with rolled up sleeves. "That's Boris Axeofk." Boris grunted and nodded. A tiny girl next to him waved at the racers, wearing a simple red sleeveless sweater and white pants. "I just want to say that it's a pleasure to meet you all and that I look forward to racing you and that I look forward to having fun with you and-" "Please, Lilo. We don't have a whole lot of time. Where was I? Ah yes. That's Oni Sanaosuke," he said, gesturing to an averaged sized Asian woman sitting on a bench by the wall. "Oni Sanaosuke? I thought you'd be in a prison war by now!" Psymon yelled. "Yeah, well I thought they'd shove you into a padded room, but I guess you shouldn't count your chickens before they hatch!" she retorted. "Old friend?" Zoe asked Psymon. "More like and old memory," Psymon replied. "If you people are finished?" Rick said. The crowd quieted down as Rick continued. "That's Gabe Granger," Rick said as a rather short man stepped forward. His ponytail whipped around his ear as Luther said, "Look at the girly-man and his pretty ponytail! Stupid wimp!" he said as he laughed to himself. Gabe simply walked over and placed his hand on Luther's shoulder. "We'll see at the races, ok?" he said as he squeezed down on Luther's shoulder. Hard. Luther winced and rubbed his shoulder. "Whoa," Zoe said. "That's Ralph Wilkinson," said Rick , pointing at a blue haired man humming the tune to 'Love Machine'. "They call me Inferno," he said. "Oh really?" Elise asked as she cocked an eyebrow. "And why is that?" she questioned. He walked up and planted a big kiss on her cheek. "'Cause I'm HOT baby!" he said as he moon-walked back to his seat. Elise rubbed her face with a look of disgust/happiness. "Back to business, that's Lorelei Syaoron," said Rick as a girl clad in a blue tank-top and black cargo pants smiled and waved. "And lastly, there's Pete Sturges-" Rick said, gesturing to an empty chair. "You realize that there's no one there," Brodi said. "Rick's seeing things TOO? RIGHT ON!" Psymon said as he high-fived Rick. "But I saw him come in," Rick said. "Where could he be?" he asked. As if on cue, a guy in a red t-shirt and cargo khakis came in holding several fast food bags. "Fisher! The meeting started 20 minutes ago!" Rick fumed. "I know, I know Rick but we were hungry, and I volunteered to go on a supply mission," Fisher said. He began to dole out the food among the new riders. "All right. the triple order number three goes to Boris." Boris accepted the food with gratitude and started eating. "The chicken fried rice goes to Oni." Oni smiled as she grabbed the small container. "The Big Mac goes to Gabe." He handed Gabe the hamburger. Gabe took a bite and said, "You call this a hamburger?" he asked. "I'll call it a Big Mac," Fisher said cheerily. "Lilo gets the yogurt parfait," Fisher handed it to her. "Thanks Fisher. I really like the yogurt parfait because it's really good and they get the berry sauce just right and because-" "You're welcome, Lilo. That leaves the Ramen noodles for Lorelei and the chicken tenders for the El Pyro." "I resent that!" Inferno said. He took his tenders as Lorelei took her ramen. They eyed each other's food, and promptly switched. "Last but not least, the greasy fishy goodness that is my sandwich," he said as he took a bite. "You know, that's loaded with calories," "and that means." Boris asked, speaking for the first time. "So he could die if he eats enough of those!" Marisol said. "Then I'll die a happy man!" Fisher replied. "Ok, Ok everyone. The paper work's done, and your tour busses are waiting outside. Here are your living accommodations," he said, handing the new racers sheets. "All right! We're gonna be roomies!" Inferno said, hanging his arm around Gage. "I guess that leaves us," Fisher said to Boris. Boris smiled and high-fived him, something enough to send him reeling into the wall. The three girls found out they were sharing a bus. "Well, let's make the best of it!" Lorelei said. "Yeah!" Lilo replied. "Okay. I'll grace your bus with my presence," Oni said with a smirk. "HEY ONI!" Psymon yelled. "You forgot to say hi to my friend!" Psymon said as he turned around to face his tattoo. "Later." Oni said as she walked off with a satisfied smile on her face. The racers boarded the busses, with hopes of fame and glory that hung in the future ahead. END OF PART 1 So how did ya like it? Review if I portrayed your character wrong!
(Having a Title Might be Nice) The SSX veterans gathered in the small seminar room, as old friends chatted and enemies exchanged shifty glances. "Excuse me! Can I have your attention up here please?" shouted a small man from a podium in the center of the room. "What is it Rick?! I'm busy!" Marisol said as she looked at herself in the mirror. "Marisol, there will be plenty of time for you to do that later. You veterans, you know the drill," Rick said as he handed out clipboards to the racers. "As opposed to not being veterans? You mean we're getting some new blood?" Psymon cackled merrily. Kaori and Mac started to edge their chairs away very slowly Psymon laughed and started a very involved conversation with this tattoo. "Oh, you haven't had a chance to meet the new racers? They're right there," Rick said, motioning to a group in the corner. A giant of a man stood in the back, decked in snow cammo pants, combat boots, a black t-shirt and a red flack coat with rolled up sleeves. "That's Boris Axeofk." Boris grunted and nodded. A tiny girl next to him waved at the racers, wearing a simple red sleeveless sweater and white pants. "I just want to say that it's a pleasure to meet you all and that I look forward to racing you and that I look forward to having fun with you and-" "Please, Lilo. We don't have a whole lot of time. Where was I? Ah yes. That's Oni Sanaosuke," he said, gesturing to an averaged sized Asian woman sitting on a bench by the wall. "Oni Sanaosuke? I thought you'd be in a prison war by now!" Psymon yelled. "Yeah, well I thought they'd shove you into a padded room, but I guess you shouldn't count your chickens before they hatch!" she retorted. "Old friend?" Zoe asked Psymon. "More like and old memory," Psymon replied. "If you people are finished?" Rick said. The crowd quieted down as Rick continued. "That's Gabe Granger," Rick said as a rather short man stepped forward. His ponytail whipped around his ear as Luther said, "Look at the girly-man and his pretty ponytail! Stupid wimp!" he said as he laughed to himself. Gabe simply walked over and placed his hand on Luther's shoulder. "We'll see at the races, ok?" he said as he squeezed down on Luther's shoulder. Hard. Luther winced and rubbed his shoulder. "Whoa," Zoe said. "That's Ralph Wilkinson," said Rick , pointing at a blue haired man humming the tune to 'Love Machine'. "They call me Inferno," he said. "Oh really?" Elise asked as she cocked an eyebrow. "And why is that?" she questioned. He walked up and planted a big kiss on her cheek. "'Cause I'm HOT baby!" he said as he moon-walked back to his seat. Elise rubbed her face with a look of disgust/happiness. "Back to business, that's Lorelei Syaoron," said Rick as a girl clad in a blue tank-top and black cargo pants smiled and waved. "And lastly, there's Pete Sturges-" Rick said, gesturing to an empty chair. "You realize that there's no one there," Brodi said. "Rick's seeing things TOO? RIGHT ON!" Psymon said as he high-fived Rick. "But I saw him come in," Rick said. "Where could he be?" he asked. As if on cue, a guy in a red t-shirt and cargo khakis came in holding several fast food bags. "Fisher! The meeting started 20 minutes ago!" Rick fumed. "I know, I know Rick but we were hungry, and I volunteered to go on a supply mission," Fisher said. He began to dole out the food among the new riders. "All right. the triple order number three goes to Boris." Boris accepted the food with gratitude and started eating. "The chicken fried rice goes to Oni." Oni smiled as she grabbed the small container. "The Big Mac goes to Gabe." He handed Gabe the hamburger. Gabe took a bite and said, "You call this a hamburger?" he asked. "I'll call it a Big Mac," Fisher said cheerily. "Lilo gets the yogurt parfait," Fisher handed it to her. "Thanks Fisher. I really like the yogurt parfait because it's really good and they get the berry sauce just right and because-" "You're welcome, Lilo. That leaves the Ramen noodles for Lorelei and the chicken tenders for the El Pyro." "I resent that!" Inferno said. He took his tenders as Lorelei took her ramen. They eyed each other's food, and promptly switched. "Last but not least, the greasy fishy goodness that is my sandwich," he said as he took a bite. "You know, that's loaded with calories," "and that means." Boris asked, speaking for the first time. "So he could die if he eats enough of those!" Marisol said. "Then I'll die a happy man!" Fisher replied. "Ok, Ok everyone. The paper work's done, and your tour busses are waiting outside. Here are your living accommodations," he said, handing the new racers sheets. "All right! We're gonna be roomies!" Inferno said, hanging his arm around Gage. "I guess that leaves us," Fisher said to Boris. Boris smiled and high-fived him, something enough to send him reeling into the wall. The three girls found out they were sharing a bus. "Well, let's make the best of it!" Lorelei said. "Yeah!" Lilo replied. "Okay. I'll grace your bus with my presence," Oni said with a smirk. "HEY ONI!" Psymon yelled. "You forgot to say hi to my friend!" Psymon said as he turned around to face his tattoo. "Later." Oni said as she walked off with a satisfied smile on her face. The racers boarded the busses, with hopes of fame and glory that hung in the future ahead. END OF PART 1 So how did ya like it? Review if I portrayed your character wrong!