Title: That's Not What I Wanted ((Pending)).
Rating: PG-13/R Overall
Summary: Harry is in a very serious relationship, with the man he loves more than anything. But a problem arises while at the Dursleys. A mad godfather, pissed werewolf, and scared witless relatives on the way.
Warnings: Slash, MPREG, Teacher/Student relationship (over age of consent).
Disclaimer:
Nagini: On my bio page damn you! *shakes fist*
Chibi Psycho-Pyro: You overreact far too much.
Nagini: You've been spending too much time around Black.
JewlzBlack: *grins*
Nagini: THAT WASN'T A COMPLIMENT!
Midori-sama: *scoffs* Idiots.
Chibi Psycho-Pyro: Meep
JewlzBlack: Jeepers!
Midori-sama: What?
Chibi + Jewlz: You sound like... MANGE! *shudder simultaneously*
Mange-Nagini: Does not. She's not nearly creepy enough, nor does her voice hold the proper lack of respect and high enough amount of evilness.
Nagini: ^.^
Midori-sama: *blinks* Okaaaaay.
Chapter's Rating:
**Begining Notes**: Hiya. Um.... HIYA! ^.^ I just want to let people know that I'll only being doing replies to reviews if there is a specific question needing to be answered, a flame to be fought, or if I just happen to have the time. ^.^ So PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't be disspointed if I don't answer your reviews. Oooh! If you leave a really long one I promise to reply to it though. ^.^ Heh. So ask away and ummm stuff! ^.^
I'm REALLY not feeling well, ((I got shingles that are slowly going away)) so I might not be able to get things out quickly, plus I've been out of school for two weeks and I'm going back on Monday, so I'll end up out of whack. I'm going to be trying for one-two chapters per week.
Erm, forgive if I make Petunia Dursley to be at least a somewhat decent person. *twiddles thumbs*
Most of my chapters will be 1,000 to 2,000 words long, depending on how creative I'm feeling. I think I have a 3,000 word long chapter for a fic, but I'm sad to say I'm a writer who writes short chapters and sucky ones at that, taking a moneth to get it out. This, I hope, will be my breakthrough fic to get me to write more.
******This will be editted for spelling, typos, and grammar once I get some decent sleep. For now, you get the 'I haven't even looked this over yet' version. I apologize for it being short but it seemed a good place to end as any.******
CHAPTER TWO: Back to Four Privet Drive
Harry had changed into his muggle garb, consisting of over-sized and ratty clothes which once belonged to Dudley... well, except the jumper he was wearing. That was a Weasley one. He had gotten for Christmas from Mrs. Weasley, a handsome bottle green colour with a small golden snitch over the left breast. He just hoped the Dursleys wouldn't think it to be something magical.
Harry pulled his trunk, with his snowy and loyal owl on top of it, off of Platform 9 3/4, and back to the muggle world. A small rumbly, odd sensation occurred in his stomach, and he bit back the urge to vomit, making a face as he wheeled his trunk up to where his Uncle Vernon was, waiting with Dudley.
"Harry!" Hermione shouted, running over to him, and giving him a small hug and a peck on the cheek, to Dudley's amazement. "Try not to let the Dursleys get you down," she whispered softly into his ear as she patted his back. Harry made an odd face and took a hold of her hand, looking at her questioningly.
"Your ring..." Harry said, breaking off. He could see Malfoy from the corner of his eye, he and his father were talking animatedly, and he looked back into Hermione's brown eyes.
"My ring probably left a dent mark on Ron's forehead," she said briskly, then gave Harry a sad smile. "He'll get over it, I'm sure. We're best friends." Harry nodded, not really believing her, but he didn't want Hermione to make a big deal out of it.
Vernon grunted groughly and once Harry took Hedwig's cage in hand, his uncle took the trunk and went to the care. Harry waved at Hermione and followed his uncle and cousin. Once Harry was in the car, he ran a hand through his tousled hair with a sigh, and then noticing that Dudley was staring at him coldly, he rolled his eyes.
"What?" Harry nearly snapped at him, this had already been a bad enough day as it was. He didn't need Dudley messing it up some more.
"Was that your freak girlfriend?" Dudley said with an eyebrow raised. Harry snorted. Girlfriend. Yeah right. Harry smirked and shook his head.
"No, just a friend." Harry said monotonously, tapping his foot up and down. Hermione had a small crush on him in Fifth year... that was when he told her he was gay. The bushy-haired bookworm had been startled, but after a day of silence she welcomed him with open arms. Although she had been a bit put-out that she would never have a chance with Harry. Dudley interrupted his thought with a loud snigger.
"I knew it. You couldn't ever get a girlfriend if you tried. You're too dorky," the fat blob sneered. Harry wanted to laugh at just how wrong that was; if he really wanted to date someone, just to say he had a girlfriend, he could probably have any with girl of his liking in a heartbeat.
Of course that wasn't going to happen; ever. Not only did the thought of kissing a girl give him the hives, but he was perfectly content with his Potions Master.
"If you insist, Dudley," Harry said with a shrug. /Don't let him get to you, Harry, don't let him, don't let him get to you, don't *let* him..../ "Do *you* have a girlfriend?" Harry asked casually with a smirk in his mind, tapping on the inside door handle.
"No," Dudley sputtered indignantly, trying to think up a good excuse why not. Harry smiled at him.
"Then you shouldn't be so rude about me not having one either," Harry said lightly, glad Vernon was too busy yelling at the radio station's talk show to hear Harry.
Dudley mumbled something incoherantly, and glared at Harry, who was more than content to look out the window again.
*****
The car parked outside of 4 Privet Drive, and Dudley jumped out of the car faster than Harry thought the obese boy could move, and Vernon unlocked the trunk of the car. Harry sighed, unbuckling his belt and stared at the house. He was back, back with the Dursleys, back with muggles. He got out of the car and took Hedwig's cage out, setting it down in the front hallway of the house, as he went back for his trunk.
Hauling it out of the car, he opened it, looking around shiftily and quickly snuck his invisibilty cloak out, and shoved it under his baggy, sagging clothes to hide it.
"Hurry up boy!" Vernon yelled from inside, "We don't want this bird around, smelling up the house!" he said cruelly.
"Coming!" Harry shouted, dragging the trunk best he could, and wishing he had put a lightweight charm on it back on the train. As soon as it was inside, Vernon grabbed it and shoved the trunk into the little cupboard under the stairs, and locked it up tightly. No less than Harry had expected. Harry quickly grabbed Hedwig's cage and went up the stairs quickly into his room.
He could hear Dudley whining downstairs as his Aunt started making dinner, the smell of ham wafting up through the air vents. As Harry smelled it, he turned green from the smell, and he raced to the bathroom and began retching. Ever since three weeks ago he smelled breakfast ham in the Great Hall, he'd been getting sick from the smell ever since.
*****
"Duddydums, why don't you go upstairs and wash up for dinner," Petunia said lovingly, as she checked the asparagus that was busy steaming away on the stove.
Dudley nodded, thudding up the stairs and as he reached the top step, he heard an awful gagging sound. Tentatively, he walked around the corner of the hallway to see the bathroom door half-open and Harry bent over the toilet, clutching his stomach. Wide-eyed, the larger boy thudded right back down the stairs into the kitchen.
"Did you wash up? That was rather quick," Petunia said with a raised eyebrow. Dudley shook his head and made a face.
"Harry's in the bathroom throwing up," Dudley said in a whiny voice. Petunia frowned. /He'll be cleaning that toilet bowl until it's completely spotless before *he* gets any dinner,/ she thought to herself.
"Alright, well then use the kitchen sink," she said, wiping her hands on a dishtowel and looking up the stairs. "That boy better not have brought home some freak disease," she said in an undertone.
*****
Splashing his face with cool water, Harry looked in the mirror of the sink as he wiped his face off with a towel. /What's wrong with me?/ he moaned in thought. Harry glanced at his wristwatch and groaned. He checked quicvkly to make sure he didn't drip any vomit onto the toilet, then went back into his room, lying down on the bed, feeling better nearly immediately to his shock.
"I should probably owl Severus, see if he can figure out what's wrong with me," he whispered to himself.
NEXT CHAPTER: Harry owls Severus and there is a nifty flashback of slashy Sevvie/Harry goodness.
End notes:
I've never been pregnant and hope I never will be, so I was just wondering if you could either direct me to an informative site on pregnancies, or tell me a little about it, just so I don't screw up the whole fic. ^.^ It would be doubly appreciated!
ARGH! I once claimed I would NEVER become the type of person who's Author Notes would be longer than my chapter. SO if I end up continuing writing the responses to the reviews, I might just put it on my website and link you. &.& *dizzy*
(((Reviews as of: 5:20 p.m. Eastern Time 11/20/02 [except Alex's] -- I'll get to the rest next chapter, sorry y'all)))
WOW!!!! Within an HOUR of posting I had NINE reviews and an E-Mail! I love you guys! *huggles all* Thanks!
And then... *stutters noislessly* Wow. I got so many reviews. *drools at the sight of them and dances around happily*
((Thank you, Whimp, I had compeltely forgotten about that. I changed a line or two. Yes, it's a bit overly dramatic, but once this is finished I plan on going over it and fixing things. for now I'd rather just put up more. ^.^ I also have a bad tendency to over-react. *blushes* Whoever said he would be back at Hogwarts? ^.^ Even if I divulged into a Remus/Hermione ((^.^)) romance, it doesn't mean he would have to be at Hogwarts. Good point on the Draco/Hermione bit though. I'd have to develop the friendship first, and his with Harry is already slightly rocky as it is. It would take ages for him to be attracted to a mudblood. Thank-you!)))
((Thanks for the e-mail, Michelle! Really? Punk rockers..... *drools* Well then! ^.^ *hops on a plain to the UK* Thanks for the insight! ^.^)))
((Artemis Luna Diana, heya! ^.^ I would seperate the prologue and 1st chapter, but I'd really hate for it to look like a two chaptered fic being less than 2000 words. Perhaps later on in the story I'll work something like that out. ^.^ Thanks! I luv MPREG stories, and there needs to be more Harry MPREGed fics, period. When I finish this one I'm considering doing a Harry/Voldemort MPREG (tricky pairing there) fic, but I don't want to seem boring with being the weirdo who keeps making out hero pregnant. lol. Hermione knew he was gay, but she doesn't know about Severus. Darn. I'll fix that in the re-write, so I'll be keeping your review (I have review- alert) in my FANFIC Email folder so I'll remember it down the road. Thank you. I think I know a way to get Remus and Hermione together without it being TOO weird. If it doesn't work out, I'll try for HG/DM if the readers don't dissaprove. ^.^))
((Hi WM! Thanks for the review! Actually, yesh, Harry shall be pregnant. *devious grin* If I don't pair up Remus with Hermione, I really don't see him with anyone else, except maybe Lucius Malfoy ((too hard to do in this fic, so I won't)) because I'm really a Remus/Sev shipper at heart. While Sirius/Remus is cute, I got tired of reading how they're together in nearly every fic that people like having slash. (But if a lot of people want it I might put a little bit in on the side.) lol. ^.^ Yeah, if I let Ron off the hook there will be a LOT of groveling, I assure you. Currently I hate the weasel, but hey. ^.^)))
((Thanks SilverMoon! W00t! Another Remus/Hermione yay voter. *drools* Yeah, well Dray, while I hate to admit it, is an asshole. ^.^ I'm updating, aren't I? ^.^)))
((Rachel! Sorry, Hermione/Weasley makes me ill. They will NOT be getting back together. *shudders* Sorry hun. *cries* Unfortunately Sevvie, for while, will only be showing up in flashbacks and little cut overs to his P.O.V. at Hogwarts. *sighs* Hopefully I'll be able to wrangle him in soon ^.^ Lol! I know a few differences and such, but my friend from Ireland keeps griping how American I make my Harry Potter peoples. Lol.)))
((*hugs Nymphean* Awww! ^.^ Thank you!!!! It's scary, usually after I've written the first chapter to a fic, I have no interest in continuing. I hope this will be my big fic, because currently the only "long fic" I have is full of EVIL Mary-Sues. *grins* Thank god I learned to stop writing them in a while back. Yeah, I'm leaning sort of towards Ron being forgiven, but I'm not 100% positive yet. And if he is, it'll be later on in the story, but major guilt trips for Ronniekins squished in. ^.^ Yeah, I usually jump straight into their friendship *blushes awkwardly* but this time I wanted to make it more realistic. *huggles the Remus/Hermione fan* Yay. ^.^ Yeah, I SO do not see Severus being NOT his sarcastic self, even if he IS in love. He wouldn't be Snape then! ^.^ Thank you!))
((Thank you bramblerose! Argh. *smacks forehead* I hate it when I go and do things like that. This is what I get for watching Anime too often. Somewhere along the line I'll edit that bit. *smacks Ron* Thanks for bringing it to my attention though! ^.^))
((Shinigami! ^.^ Actually Harry has no clue he's pregnant yet. He thinks it's just stomach problems. Oh You'll see........ Actually I'm too into Remus/Sev or Remus/Harry or Remus/Hermione to do a Sirius/Remus, UNLESS a lot of people mention they're like to see it. lol! That is a rather amusing idea! Thankiez!^.^))
((Redone ^.^- ASHMANED! ^.^ lol. Say it out loud, it sounds funny. SS/HG is rather sweet, but I like slashyness slightly more. Maybe one of these days I'll get to finishing my one shot HG/SS fic. (If I ever find it.) Okay, one more for HG/DM ^.^)))
((Thanks for the helpful criticism rebecca!Yeah, I know I should get one, *sigh*, I'm just so anxious to get this fic out. ^.^ I'm pretty sure it's 'pouf', but a few people pointed that out and I already changed it. ^.^ Yeah, I know, the typo deal. I'm sort of one of those people. *hits her evil compy* T'has no spell check. *grumbles* Thank you!)))
((Lei Dumbledore.... *stutters* *dies* My gawd. Y-y-you reviewed my ficcy? *faints* ^.^ *hugs* THANK YOU! Yeah, Ron based on a 98% chance will be feeling very guilty and ashamed and shall be begging for forgiveness. *points and laughs at Ron* Er.. *coughs* Sw33t. Tankiez!)))
((Deity- *meeps* Hihi! ^.^ Thank you! lol. Ron Muse, *chuckles*. No, certainly NOT two months. ^.^))
(((AtieJen ^.^ NEVER enough! ^.^ .... OMG!!! *squeals* I love your Harry Potter works!!!! *dies* YOU RULE! *hugs tightly* I have one of your Harry/Lucius fics on my fave list too ^.^!!! IN FACT! That fic inspired me to work on a notebook fic (a fic I work on while I'm school when I get bored). Thank you so much for writing such awesome angsty stuff an WRITE MROE of that Harry/Luci goodness! ^.^ I love PoU!!! Are you going to write more for FOM?))
***EVERYONE!!! If you like HARRY/LUCIUS slash I *highly* reccomend Atie's Periods of Unrest and For One Moment!!!! ((((http://www.fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=159885))))***
((Alex, I might end up doing so, but if I do it will be later in the fanfic. I don't want to bring up the rating until it needs to go up. When I finish this one, I have three different stories I might be posting, and one of those three candidates is a HP/TMR MPREG fic. Another one is a HP/DM one that might end up MPREG near the end. *shruggs* Anyhoo- glad you like this fic. I actually don't really like it because it's so... unfinished and so... childish I suppose. UNFORTUNATELY, being fourteen is NO excuse to write sloppily! ^.^))
Thank you all for reviewing:
Creamy Mimi,
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J. Lynn ((Thanks! I love the Drakester!)),
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moj ((hehe. HG/DM/RL eh? lol. I'm almost daring enough to try that, but I don't want to freak anyone out. lol. Maybe I'll do that as a ficlet or songfic sometime though! *giggles* Thanks!)),
Jacquie ((I try)),
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Jessika,
Phoenix,
ray,
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Lee Lee Potter,
and
Sadie.
If I missed anyone that left a review before 5:20 p.m. Eastern Time 11/20/02, well then you can have a cookie of apology right now.
Rating: PG-13/R Overall
Summary: Harry is in a very serious relationship, with the man he loves more than anything. But a problem arises while at the Dursleys. A mad godfather, pissed werewolf, and scared witless relatives on the way.
Warnings: Slash, MPREG, Teacher/Student relationship (over age of consent).
Disclaimer:
Nagini: On my bio page damn you! *shakes fist*
Chibi Psycho-Pyro: You overreact far too much.
Nagini: You've been spending too much time around Black.
JewlzBlack: *grins*
Nagini: THAT WASN'T A COMPLIMENT!
Midori-sama: *scoffs* Idiots.
Chibi Psycho-Pyro: Meep
JewlzBlack: Jeepers!
Midori-sama: What?
Chibi + Jewlz: You sound like... MANGE! *shudder simultaneously*
Mange-Nagini: Does not. She's not nearly creepy enough, nor does her voice hold the proper lack of respect and high enough amount of evilness.
Nagini: ^.^
Midori-sama: *blinks* Okaaaaay.
Chapter's Rating:
**Begining Notes**: Hiya. Um.... HIYA! ^.^ I just want to let people know that I'll only being doing replies to reviews if there is a specific question needing to be answered, a flame to be fought, or if I just happen to have the time. ^.^ So PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE don't be disspointed if I don't answer your reviews. Oooh! If you leave a really long one I promise to reply to it though. ^.^ Heh. So ask away and ummm stuff! ^.^
I'm REALLY not feeling well, ((I got shingles that are slowly going away)) so I might not be able to get things out quickly, plus I've been out of school for two weeks and I'm going back on Monday, so I'll end up out of whack. I'm going to be trying for one-two chapters per week.
Erm, forgive if I make Petunia Dursley to be at least a somewhat decent person. *twiddles thumbs*
Most of my chapters will be 1,000 to 2,000 words long, depending on how creative I'm feeling. I think I have a 3,000 word long chapter for a fic, but I'm sad to say I'm a writer who writes short chapters and sucky ones at that, taking a moneth to get it out. This, I hope, will be my breakthrough fic to get me to write more.
******This will be editted for spelling, typos, and grammar once I get some decent sleep. For now, you get the 'I haven't even looked this over yet' version. I apologize for it being short but it seemed a good place to end as any.******
CHAPTER TWO: Back to Four Privet Drive
Harry had changed into his muggle garb, consisting of over-sized and ratty clothes which once belonged to Dudley... well, except the jumper he was wearing. That was a Weasley one. He had gotten for Christmas from Mrs. Weasley, a handsome bottle green colour with a small golden snitch over the left breast. He just hoped the Dursleys wouldn't think it to be something magical.
Harry pulled his trunk, with his snowy and loyal owl on top of it, off of Platform 9 3/4, and back to the muggle world. A small rumbly, odd sensation occurred in his stomach, and he bit back the urge to vomit, making a face as he wheeled his trunk up to where his Uncle Vernon was, waiting with Dudley.
"Harry!" Hermione shouted, running over to him, and giving him a small hug and a peck on the cheek, to Dudley's amazement. "Try not to let the Dursleys get you down," she whispered softly into his ear as she patted his back. Harry made an odd face and took a hold of her hand, looking at her questioningly.
"Your ring..." Harry said, breaking off. He could see Malfoy from the corner of his eye, he and his father were talking animatedly, and he looked back into Hermione's brown eyes.
"My ring probably left a dent mark on Ron's forehead," she said briskly, then gave Harry a sad smile. "He'll get over it, I'm sure. We're best friends." Harry nodded, not really believing her, but he didn't want Hermione to make a big deal out of it.
Vernon grunted groughly and once Harry took Hedwig's cage in hand, his uncle took the trunk and went to the care. Harry waved at Hermione and followed his uncle and cousin. Once Harry was in the car, he ran a hand through his tousled hair with a sigh, and then noticing that Dudley was staring at him coldly, he rolled his eyes.
"What?" Harry nearly snapped at him, this had already been a bad enough day as it was. He didn't need Dudley messing it up some more.
"Was that your freak girlfriend?" Dudley said with an eyebrow raised. Harry snorted. Girlfriend. Yeah right. Harry smirked and shook his head.
"No, just a friend." Harry said monotonously, tapping his foot up and down. Hermione had a small crush on him in Fifth year... that was when he told her he was gay. The bushy-haired bookworm had been startled, but after a day of silence she welcomed him with open arms. Although she had been a bit put-out that she would never have a chance with Harry. Dudley interrupted his thought with a loud snigger.
"I knew it. You couldn't ever get a girlfriend if you tried. You're too dorky," the fat blob sneered. Harry wanted to laugh at just how wrong that was; if he really wanted to date someone, just to say he had a girlfriend, he could probably have any with girl of his liking in a heartbeat.
Of course that wasn't going to happen; ever. Not only did the thought of kissing a girl give him the hives, but he was perfectly content with his Potions Master.
"If you insist, Dudley," Harry said with a shrug. /Don't let him get to you, Harry, don't let him, don't let him get to you, don't *let* him..../ "Do *you* have a girlfriend?" Harry asked casually with a smirk in his mind, tapping on the inside door handle.
"No," Dudley sputtered indignantly, trying to think up a good excuse why not. Harry smiled at him.
"Then you shouldn't be so rude about me not having one either," Harry said lightly, glad Vernon was too busy yelling at the radio station's talk show to hear Harry.
Dudley mumbled something incoherantly, and glared at Harry, who was more than content to look out the window again.
*****
The car parked outside of 4 Privet Drive, and Dudley jumped out of the car faster than Harry thought the obese boy could move, and Vernon unlocked the trunk of the car. Harry sighed, unbuckling his belt and stared at the house. He was back, back with the Dursleys, back with muggles. He got out of the car and took Hedwig's cage out, setting it down in the front hallway of the house, as he went back for his trunk.
Hauling it out of the car, he opened it, looking around shiftily and quickly snuck his invisibilty cloak out, and shoved it under his baggy, sagging clothes to hide it.
"Hurry up boy!" Vernon yelled from inside, "We don't want this bird around, smelling up the house!" he said cruelly.
"Coming!" Harry shouted, dragging the trunk best he could, and wishing he had put a lightweight charm on it back on the train. As soon as it was inside, Vernon grabbed it and shoved the trunk into the little cupboard under the stairs, and locked it up tightly. No less than Harry had expected. Harry quickly grabbed Hedwig's cage and went up the stairs quickly into his room.
He could hear Dudley whining downstairs as his Aunt started making dinner, the smell of ham wafting up through the air vents. As Harry smelled it, he turned green from the smell, and he raced to the bathroom and began retching. Ever since three weeks ago he smelled breakfast ham in the Great Hall, he'd been getting sick from the smell ever since.
*****
"Duddydums, why don't you go upstairs and wash up for dinner," Petunia said lovingly, as she checked the asparagus that was busy steaming away on the stove.
Dudley nodded, thudding up the stairs and as he reached the top step, he heard an awful gagging sound. Tentatively, he walked around the corner of the hallway to see the bathroom door half-open and Harry bent over the toilet, clutching his stomach. Wide-eyed, the larger boy thudded right back down the stairs into the kitchen.
"Did you wash up? That was rather quick," Petunia said with a raised eyebrow. Dudley shook his head and made a face.
"Harry's in the bathroom throwing up," Dudley said in a whiny voice. Petunia frowned. /He'll be cleaning that toilet bowl until it's completely spotless before *he* gets any dinner,/ she thought to herself.
"Alright, well then use the kitchen sink," she said, wiping her hands on a dishtowel and looking up the stairs. "That boy better not have brought home some freak disease," she said in an undertone.
*****
Splashing his face with cool water, Harry looked in the mirror of the sink as he wiped his face off with a towel. /What's wrong with me?/ he moaned in thought. Harry glanced at his wristwatch and groaned. He checked quicvkly to make sure he didn't drip any vomit onto the toilet, then went back into his room, lying down on the bed, feeling better nearly immediately to his shock.
"I should probably owl Severus, see if he can figure out what's wrong with me," he whispered to himself.
NEXT CHAPTER: Harry owls Severus and there is a nifty flashback of slashy Sevvie/Harry goodness.
End notes:
I've never been pregnant and hope I never will be, so I was just wondering if you could either direct me to an informative site on pregnancies, or tell me a little about it, just so I don't screw up the whole fic. ^.^ It would be doubly appreciated!
ARGH! I once claimed I would NEVER become the type of person who's Author Notes would be longer than my chapter. SO if I end up continuing writing the responses to the reviews, I might just put it on my website and link you. &.& *dizzy*
(((Reviews as of: 5:20 p.m. Eastern Time 11/20/02 [except Alex's] -- I'll get to the rest next chapter, sorry y'all)))
WOW!!!! Within an HOUR of posting I had NINE reviews and an E-Mail! I love you guys! *huggles all* Thanks!
And then... *stutters noislessly* Wow. I got so many reviews. *drools at the sight of them and dances around happily*
((Thank you, Whimp, I had compeltely forgotten about that. I changed a line or two. Yes, it's a bit overly dramatic, but once this is finished I plan on going over it and fixing things. for now I'd rather just put up more. ^.^ I also have a bad tendency to over-react. *blushes* Whoever said he would be back at Hogwarts? ^.^ Even if I divulged into a Remus/Hermione ((^.^)) romance, it doesn't mean he would have to be at Hogwarts. Good point on the Draco/Hermione bit though. I'd have to develop the friendship first, and his with Harry is already slightly rocky as it is. It would take ages for him to be attracted to a mudblood. Thank-you!)))
((Thanks for the e-mail, Michelle! Really? Punk rockers..... *drools* Well then! ^.^ *hops on a plain to the UK* Thanks for the insight! ^.^)))
((Artemis Luna Diana, heya! ^.^ I would seperate the prologue and 1st chapter, but I'd really hate for it to look like a two chaptered fic being less than 2000 words. Perhaps later on in the story I'll work something like that out. ^.^ Thanks! I luv MPREG stories, and there needs to be more Harry MPREGed fics, period. When I finish this one I'm considering doing a Harry/Voldemort MPREG (tricky pairing there) fic, but I don't want to seem boring with being the weirdo who keeps making out hero pregnant. lol. Hermione knew he was gay, but she doesn't know about Severus. Darn. I'll fix that in the re-write, so I'll be keeping your review (I have review- alert) in my FANFIC Email folder so I'll remember it down the road. Thank you. I think I know a way to get Remus and Hermione together without it being TOO weird. If it doesn't work out, I'll try for HG/DM if the readers don't dissaprove. ^.^))
((Hi WM! Thanks for the review! Actually, yesh, Harry shall be pregnant. *devious grin* If I don't pair up Remus with Hermione, I really don't see him with anyone else, except maybe Lucius Malfoy ((too hard to do in this fic, so I won't)) because I'm really a Remus/Sev shipper at heart. While Sirius/Remus is cute, I got tired of reading how they're together in nearly every fic that people like having slash. (But if a lot of people want it I might put a little bit in on the side.) lol. ^.^ Yeah, if I let Ron off the hook there will be a LOT of groveling, I assure you. Currently I hate the weasel, but hey. ^.^)))
((Thanks SilverMoon! W00t! Another Remus/Hermione yay voter. *drools* Yeah, well Dray, while I hate to admit it, is an asshole. ^.^ I'm updating, aren't I? ^.^)))
((Rachel! Sorry, Hermione/Weasley makes me ill. They will NOT be getting back together. *shudders* Sorry hun. *cries* Unfortunately Sevvie, for while, will only be showing up in flashbacks and little cut overs to his P.O.V. at Hogwarts. *sighs* Hopefully I'll be able to wrangle him in soon ^.^ Lol! I know a few differences and such, but my friend from Ireland keeps griping how American I make my Harry Potter peoples. Lol.)))
((*hugs Nymphean* Awww! ^.^ Thank you!!!! It's scary, usually after I've written the first chapter to a fic, I have no interest in continuing. I hope this will be my big fic, because currently the only "long fic" I have is full of EVIL Mary-Sues. *grins* Thank god I learned to stop writing them in a while back. Yeah, I'm leaning sort of towards Ron being forgiven, but I'm not 100% positive yet. And if he is, it'll be later on in the story, but major guilt trips for Ronniekins squished in. ^.^ Yeah, I usually jump straight into their friendship *blushes awkwardly* but this time I wanted to make it more realistic. *huggles the Remus/Hermione fan* Yay. ^.^ Yeah, I SO do not see Severus being NOT his sarcastic self, even if he IS in love. He wouldn't be Snape then! ^.^ Thank you!))
((Thank you bramblerose! Argh. *smacks forehead* I hate it when I go and do things like that. This is what I get for watching Anime too often. Somewhere along the line I'll edit that bit. *smacks Ron* Thanks for bringing it to my attention though! ^.^))
((Shinigami! ^.^ Actually Harry has no clue he's pregnant yet. He thinks it's just stomach problems. Oh You'll see........ Actually I'm too into Remus/Sev or Remus/Harry or Remus/Hermione to do a Sirius/Remus, UNLESS a lot of people mention they're like to see it. lol! That is a rather amusing idea! Thankiez!^.^))
((Redone ^.^- ASHMANED! ^.^ lol. Say it out loud, it sounds funny. SS/HG is rather sweet, but I like slashyness slightly more. Maybe one of these days I'll get to finishing my one shot HG/SS fic. (If I ever find it.) Okay, one more for HG/DM ^.^)))
((Thanks for the helpful criticism rebecca!Yeah, I know I should get one, *sigh*, I'm just so anxious to get this fic out. ^.^ I'm pretty sure it's 'pouf', but a few people pointed that out and I already changed it. ^.^ Yeah, I know, the typo deal. I'm sort of one of those people. *hits her evil compy* T'has no spell check. *grumbles* Thank you!)))
((Lei Dumbledore.... *stutters* *dies* My gawd. Y-y-you reviewed my ficcy? *faints* ^.^ *hugs* THANK YOU! Yeah, Ron based on a 98% chance will be feeling very guilty and ashamed and shall be begging for forgiveness. *points and laughs at Ron* Er.. *coughs* Sw33t. Tankiez!)))
((Deity- *meeps* Hihi! ^.^ Thank you! lol. Ron Muse, *chuckles*. No, certainly NOT two months. ^.^))
(((AtieJen ^.^ NEVER enough! ^.^ .... OMG!!! *squeals* I love your Harry Potter works!!!! *dies* YOU RULE! *hugs tightly* I have one of your Harry/Lucius fics on my fave list too ^.^!!! IN FACT! That fic inspired me to work on a notebook fic (a fic I work on while I'm school when I get bored). Thank you so much for writing such awesome angsty stuff an WRITE MROE of that Harry/Luci goodness! ^.^ I love PoU!!! Are you going to write more for FOM?))
***EVERYONE!!! If you like HARRY/LUCIUS slash I *highly* reccomend Atie's Periods of Unrest and For One Moment!!!! ((((http://www.fanfiction.net/profile.php?userid=159885))))***
((Alex, I might end up doing so, but if I do it will be later in the fanfic. I don't want to bring up the rating until it needs to go up. When I finish this one, I have three different stories I might be posting, and one of those three candidates is a HP/TMR MPREG fic. Another one is a HP/DM one that might end up MPREG near the end. *shruggs* Anyhoo- glad you like this fic. I actually don't really like it because it's so... unfinished and so... childish I suppose. UNFORTUNATELY, being fourteen is NO excuse to write sloppily! ^.^))
Thank you all for reviewing:
Creamy Mimi,
Egyptian Mistress Isis,
J. Lynn ((Thanks! I love the Drakester!)),
ancientegypt14 ((I don't plan to- No worries.)),
Darkflame ((Yesh it went WAY too fast. *sigh*)),
Charzy ((lol! Me too!)),
Abby ((Hope you got my e-mail!)),
Mikee ((lol, thankiez! ^.^)),
Random Insanity ((Thanks hun! ^.^ And I'll try to work on actions further on down the road! ^.^)),
moj ((hehe. HG/DM/RL eh? lol. I'm almost daring enough to try that, but I don't want to freak anyone out. lol. Maybe I'll do that as a ficlet or songfic sometime though! *giggles* Thanks!)),
Jacquie ((I try)),
Melissa,
Naraelien Endliste ((^.^)),
Lesa ((W00t, w00t!)),
Jessika,
Phoenix,
ray,
Mister/Miss Anonymous person who didn't leave a name,
Lee Lee Potter,
and
Sadie.
If I missed anyone that left a review before 5:20 p.m. Eastern Time 11/20/02, well then you can have a cookie of apology right now.