Maelgwyn brought it to my attention that my story looked a bit.. off.. So
thanks to him, and anyone else who reviewed today and I just haven't seen.
Much 'preciated. I didn't exactly get anybody saying where they wanted the
story to go, so I am writing it my favorite way in my new copy. If anyone
can tell me how to make wordpad (not microsoft word, wordpad.. the old one)
save my files in html, I'll give them a cookie, but til then, guess it will
all stay just like this, no boldies or anything.. which is really a shame
because I had big plans for this chapter esecially. Anyway, I've said my
piece.. you know where I stand.. OH YEAH! Disclaimer.. Might as well put it
in now:
DISCLAIMER: I don't own zoids, of course, and if I did, I'd be busy making another series of it reather than wriying stories for the pleasure of those on this site. The only things I really can possibly claim are the Thunder Bird, and Pegasus, and those actually weren't MY ideas.. it was a group effort of myself and some friends. Anyway, just so ya know, I don't own Zoids, Zeeke, Van, Fiona, or anything to do with this story.. And just for this one story, I need to mention.. I don't own Diablo, thus I don't own the Tavern of the Rising Sun. Chapter 3:
'Deploy the Thunder Birds!'
Fiona is led quietly back to her cell, stripped to her birthday suit, and whimpering still over the harsh treatment she had just received.
Moonbay is still oblivious to her having been gone, and her current state of slumber is a guarantee she won't know unless someone tells her. As the tubby guards finally get her to the cell, one opens the door while the other throws in a change of clothes.
The third holds her hands together behind her, and leads her in. The other two quickly run in, waking up the guard who had fallen asleep there, and telling him to hurry upstairs and guard his floor before Yavanche finds out that he is sleeping on the job.
Fiona remains silent, and keeps her eyes close. She feels so violated by the whole thing, completly disgusted with the whole compound. The guards release her abd run out, the lazy one who had been asleep running up the steps quickly to take his post. The men slam the bars home and proceed after the other guard, laughing the whole time.
"mmm..mm...m..Fiona?" Moonbay rolls over, awakened by the sudden fit of laughter the guards had as they ran out. Fiona is deathly quiet. Moonbay opens her eyes fully and wipes the sleep from them, "Oh my god what happened!?!" She yells, shocked at her friend's appearance.
"I don't know.. but I didn't like it.." He voice sounds shaken, and she turns, tears pouring from her still closed eyelids. She picks up the pile of clothes, and starts getting dressed, Moonbay still lying there in drop jawed bewilderment, amazed at how good, yet hurt her friend looks. The thing that worried moonbay most was the fact that she thought Fiona looked good in the nude..
-----------Republic Stronghold*Area 4b------------
Thomas sits behind a large desk, staring at a picture of Fiona longingly. He sighs and looks around, "Maybe I should quit.. Its bad enough to work for the republic, but to be so high a rank and so confused... its stupid.." He sighs.
"Stupid major?" Thomas looks up shocked, there stood a yound cadet, looking puzzled. Thomas sneezes rather loudly, then looks about to see if there are any other surprise visitors. Finding there aren't, he stands, and stares down the cadet.
"You always knock before entering this office Cadet Williams.." "Yes'ir, but I thought I should warn you, the burglary of hanger 19 a few weeks back still hasn't been fixed.. Van isn't back yet. The president is worried, and he's planning to blame it on you since your forces were in the area."
Thomas sighs deeply, "Thought he would. Have those Redlers and Red Horns got back with the computers yet?" "Yes'ir, got in last night. They used the tunnels to get here. The president was pleased to hear that sir." "Could you tell Rudolpho to distribute those to the band of..." He coughs, "To team 4-19?" The cadet nods with an evil grin, "I can tell him, but he already has. Do you wish me to ask permission for you to use the team's Zoids?"
To that thomas smiles, "You know it." The cadet looks to the report he holds in his hand, "One other thing sir.." Thomas sighs, "Yes cadet?" The young soldier nervously continues, "We have comfirmation.. Fiona and Moonbay were the ones kidnapped..."
--------------The Tavern of the Rising Sun--------------
Krane walks into the tavern and inn known to be a safe-haven for criminals in its area, carrying Van over a shoulder. The mans long, white hair blows as a gust of wind enters the tavern from the still opened door. With his foot, he slams it shut, and grins, "I'll be needin' a room!" "Oh yessa, yessa Krane.. You be needed room 3 right! I be's gettin it for ya!" The man with a leg gone and replaced by a steel peg clanks over the the wall and takes the key in his hooked hand. He walks back over, and places it on the counter, "No charge!"
Krane retreats upstairs with the key and Van. With an evil smirk he opens the door and enters, throwing Van onto the bed. He goes to, and locks, the door. Krane gives a demonic laugh as Van comes to. Van starts rubbing his temples, his head throbbing for some reason unknown to him.
Ashe looks up though, Van realizes where he is and who brought his here, and he gasps in horror, reaching for a knife he had placed in his boot. It is gone. He then goes to take the pistol from his other... gone. When he tries to get a wrench from his belt, he realises it is gone too. He gulped, looking at Krane, who had all three items on the desk in the room.
"Let's play.." Krane approaches Van, smirking as he goes..
------end chapter 3--------- Okay okay okay, I know. It is hideous. And I apologize. I had good plans for that last part and I was going to make it even longer, but unfortunatly life, and other nightmares, got in the way.. Hope you enjoy some of it atleast.. gama out.. p.s. I may change or add to this later, so be looking for updates in that!
DISCLAIMER: I don't own zoids, of course, and if I did, I'd be busy making another series of it reather than wriying stories for the pleasure of those on this site. The only things I really can possibly claim are the Thunder Bird, and Pegasus, and those actually weren't MY ideas.. it was a group effort of myself and some friends. Anyway, just so ya know, I don't own Zoids, Zeeke, Van, Fiona, or anything to do with this story.. And just for this one story, I need to mention.. I don't own Diablo, thus I don't own the Tavern of the Rising Sun. Chapter 3:
'Deploy the Thunder Birds!'
Fiona is led quietly back to her cell, stripped to her birthday suit, and whimpering still over the harsh treatment she had just received.
Moonbay is still oblivious to her having been gone, and her current state of slumber is a guarantee she won't know unless someone tells her. As the tubby guards finally get her to the cell, one opens the door while the other throws in a change of clothes.
The third holds her hands together behind her, and leads her in. The other two quickly run in, waking up the guard who had fallen asleep there, and telling him to hurry upstairs and guard his floor before Yavanche finds out that he is sleeping on the job.
Fiona remains silent, and keeps her eyes close. She feels so violated by the whole thing, completly disgusted with the whole compound. The guards release her abd run out, the lazy one who had been asleep running up the steps quickly to take his post. The men slam the bars home and proceed after the other guard, laughing the whole time.
"mmm..mm...m..Fiona?" Moonbay rolls over, awakened by the sudden fit of laughter the guards had as they ran out. Fiona is deathly quiet. Moonbay opens her eyes fully and wipes the sleep from them, "Oh my god what happened!?!" She yells, shocked at her friend's appearance.
"I don't know.. but I didn't like it.." He voice sounds shaken, and she turns, tears pouring from her still closed eyelids. She picks up the pile of clothes, and starts getting dressed, Moonbay still lying there in drop jawed bewilderment, amazed at how good, yet hurt her friend looks. The thing that worried moonbay most was the fact that she thought Fiona looked good in the nude..
-----------Republic Stronghold*Area 4b------------
Thomas sits behind a large desk, staring at a picture of Fiona longingly. He sighs and looks around, "Maybe I should quit.. Its bad enough to work for the republic, but to be so high a rank and so confused... its stupid.." He sighs.
"Stupid major?" Thomas looks up shocked, there stood a yound cadet, looking puzzled. Thomas sneezes rather loudly, then looks about to see if there are any other surprise visitors. Finding there aren't, he stands, and stares down the cadet.
"You always knock before entering this office Cadet Williams.." "Yes'ir, but I thought I should warn you, the burglary of hanger 19 a few weeks back still hasn't been fixed.. Van isn't back yet. The president is worried, and he's planning to blame it on you since your forces were in the area."
Thomas sighs deeply, "Thought he would. Have those Redlers and Red Horns got back with the computers yet?" "Yes'ir, got in last night. They used the tunnels to get here. The president was pleased to hear that sir." "Could you tell Rudolpho to distribute those to the band of..." He coughs, "To team 4-19?" The cadet nods with an evil grin, "I can tell him, but he already has. Do you wish me to ask permission for you to use the team's Zoids?"
To that thomas smiles, "You know it." The cadet looks to the report he holds in his hand, "One other thing sir.." Thomas sighs, "Yes cadet?" The young soldier nervously continues, "We have comfirmation.. Fiona and Moonbay were the ones kidnapped..."
--------------The Tavern of the Rising Sun--------------
Krane walks into the tavern and inn known to be a safe-haven for criminals in its area, carrying Van over a shoulder. The mans long, white hair blows as a gust of wind enters the tavern from the still opened door. With his foot, he slams it shut, and grins, "I'll be needin' a room!" "Oh yessa, yessa Krane.. You be needed room 3 right! I be's gettin it for ya!" The man with a leg gone and replaced by a steel peg clanks over the the wall and takes the key in his hooked hand. He walks back over, and places it on the counter, "No charge!"
Krane retreats upstairs with the key and Van. With an evil smirk he opens the door and enters, throwing Van onto the bed. He goes to, and locks, the door. Krane gives a demonic laugh as Van comes to. Van starts rubbing his temples, his head throbbing for some reason unknown to him.
Ashe looks up though, Van realizes where he is and who brought his here, and he gasps in horror, reaching for a knife he had placed in his boot. It is gone. He then goes to take the pistol from his other... gone. When he tries to get a wrench from his belt, he realises it is gone too. He gulped, looking at Krane, who had all three items on the desk in the room.
"Let's play.." Krane approaches Van, smirking as he goes..
------end chapter 3--------- Okay okay okay, I know. It is hideous. And I apologize. I had good plans for that last part and I was going to make it even longer, but unfortunatly life, and other nightmares, got in the way.. Hope you enjoy some of it atleast.. gama out.. p.s. I may change or add to this later, so be looking for updates in that!