Well, this is where I get stuck, the plot is a bit etchy from here on in,
but I think I can pull through it successfully, and I'm sure if I don't,
you'll tell me. You know, it was very tempting to just leave this story
alone with that last chapter. but then I realised that Tyson and co had
talked about saving Kai so I couldn't, so you get me for while longer -
that better be a good thing, I don't wanna hear no groaning!! Anywho, this
chapter was fun to write. Read it!! I order you to!!
Awakening
Jin's village was ravenously dressed with tall wooden caverns lining each pebbled street. People walked happily through the village as if nothing was wrong. Kai walked down an alley, head lowered, wearing the clothes Jin had picked out for him. A black spiked collar wrapped round his neck, covering one of the love bites that marked his body. An open white shirt revealed his toned chest to onlookers, with black wristbands tucking in the sleeves. Tight black leather trousers emphasis every curve of his legs with the strap around his ankle still hung there, resting on his bare feet.
Kai walked out of the dark alley and into the park where small children played, smiles gracing their features. Kai watched them chase each other up the steps of the slide and follow each other down, creating a thick pile of bodies at the foot on the soft mattress. Seeing all those bodies lying there reminded him as to why he was here in the first place. He was the one who couldn't stand fighting, he was the one who called his grandfather over to bring him Black Dranzer, he was the one who fought Jin, he was the one who let his feelings get in the way of victory.
From out of his pocket, Kai pulled out Black Dranzer and held it tightly in his hand, staring at it intensely, as if he'd be able to talk with the beast inside.
"You would've let them die, wouldn't you?" Kai growled.
Black Dranzer glowed and Kai could feel the evil seeping through him again.
"Don't you care about me? Is all you care about the victory? Oh, I forgot, my grandfather trained you, of course you have no feelings. as I did. A cold, heartless bastard who was being toyed with. But now, I'm weak, as he said I would if I let my heart guide me. I met him and I tried to keep my façade stern but, he got to me, and now, whenever I'm around him, I can't help but want to be cared for and throw away the attitude that had been beaten into me for all those years. Maybe you could learn from that. Power? You are already the most powerful beast around, if you worked together with a strong blader you could be the best. The best, I wanted that, I still want it, but I have faults, but that's what makes me human, without faults, you can't be human, and that's why I feel dead around my grandfather, and you... If I show faults, I get punished, so I've learned not to show them in front of you two. The power that runs through my veins overwhelms me when I work with you and I just want to have it all, why do you do that to me? I'm not like that anymore!"
A red blade rolled over and collapsed at Kai's feet. Looking at it for a while, he picked it up and studied it. There's no bit-beast within it, just a simple new beyblade that kids use to pass the time away. The side of Kai's mouth twitched up into a grin as he thought about it for a while. A small girl that reminded him of Mariah ran up to him and held out her hand.
"Can I have my blade back, sir." The girl asked, smiling innocently at Kai.
"Sure. There you go." Kai placed the blade gently in her hand.
"What's that?" The girl asked, pointing to Black Dranzer.
"This? This is my blade, well, my second blade, I have another one that I tend to use more than this." Kai explained as simply as possible.
"Wanna fight me?" The girl giggled.
"I think I'm a bit too experienced for you." Kai smiled, amused by the little girl.
"Oh, come on. I haven't battled you before and I've already taken on everyone else. Please!" The girl pleaded, lovingly.
"Okay, kid" Kai gave in, not wanting to upset such a pretty creature.
"Yey!" The girl yelled.
She grabbed Kai's hand and dragged him over to the small beyblade stadium. The girl bounced over to the other side and readied herself. Kai looked down at Black Dranzer, worried. He didn't want to hurt this girl. He took out Black Dranzer's bit-piece and held it tightly in his hand.
"Kid. You got some string?" Kai asked.
"Yep." The girl nodded.
She rushed round and gave Kai the string before heading back to her side of the dish. Kai wrapped the bit-piece in the string then attached it round his neck. Black Dranzer glowed in front of his heart.
"You ready?!" The girl squeaked.
"Always." Kai growled, trying to stop Black Dranzer taking over, but allowing it to work with Kai as best he could.
"3. 2. 1.. Let it rip!" The girl yelled happily.
The girl let her blade hit the stadium floor before it started to circle round. Kai let Black Dranzer go and it hit the floor with such force it made her blade jump. No, Black Dranzer, she's a little girl without a bit- beast, let her be and just try to enjoy yourself. Kai tried to control Black Dranzer as best he could, but he was once again loosing control numerous of times. Over and over again Kai reminded it of the girl's innocence and the childlike nature of this battle. This was testing Kai and he was having trouble concentrating. Black Dranzer was not enjoying being held back and was thrusting himself forward to take over. The girl watched Kai, confused.
"Are you okay, mister?" She asked, tilting her head to the side.
"Fine, little girl. Just keep your eye on the blade or you'll lose more than just the match." Kai growled, blank eyes piercing into her soul.
The girl jumped at his harsh words and huddled back, tears in her eyes. Kai shook his head, forcing Black Dranzer back.
"Hey, it's okay! I'm just used to talking trash at the tournaments, that's all. Don't cry." Kai assured her sweetly.
"You scared me." The girl complained.
"I'm sorry, kid it's just that..."
A blade shot out of the dish and landed in the sandpit. Kai looked down into the dish and found the girl's red blade still spinning. Kai smiled to himself. He knelt down and picked up his blade. The girl skipped over, joyfully.
"Well, looks like you won. Well done." Kai ruffled the girl's hair.
"You let me win! But that's okay. I like you. What's your name?" The girl skipped.
"Kai-kun, and you?" Kai asked, being as friendly as Black Dranzer would let him.
"Anasha-chan, I'm Jin-sama's sister." She giggled.
Kai's eyes opened with surprise at such an adorable girl belonging to that ogre. The girl looked at her watch then back up at Kai.
"I have to go, Kai-kun. Bye de bye." The girl waved her hand.
"Bye." Kai replied.
The girl skipped out of the park and Kai followed her steps. She turned to go down the alley and there, watching Kai, stood Jin. Kai didn't care now, he let Black Dranzer take control and slipped into his own world. Jin stepped forward to stand inches from Kai. Kai stared up at him, ice cold eyes showing nothing, he was emotionless. This distressed Jin for a while, but he soon pulled himself back together.
"That was very kind of you, Kai-koi. What made you do it?" Jin purred, stroking Kai's cheek.
"That's non of your concern." Kai spoke, slapping Jin's hand away.
"Heh. Doesn't matter. It was sweet." Jin said, his cold fingers travelling down Kai's exposed skin.
Kai breathed deeply to stop himself from shaking under the touch, the entire time keeping his eyes locked with Jin's. How he wanted to rip this guy to shreds and feed him to the hungry predators of the forest.
"You do realise that your friends will probably try to rescue you." Jin stated.
"What a shame." Kai said.
"Now, we can't be having that, so I think it best if you stayed indoors from now on." Jin alliterated.
"Keep me locked up like a prisoner." Kai said.
"If that's what you want to call it." Jin played Kai's game.
Jin wrapped his arms around Kai's waist and Black Dranzer let him, encouraging him by circling his arms around Jin's neck. Kai wanted to strangle Black Dranzer, what was he thinking?! Jin grinned at Kai's response and leaned forward to kiss Kai. Kai tilted his head and kissed Jin back, putting all his energy into it. Jin relaxed into the embrace, his hands moving across Kai's back and squeezing his butt. Jin's tongue played along Kai's lower lip, who opened willingly, starting a battle for domination. Kai had to give in, Jin would not let down, much to his annoyance. Kai squinted at the feel of a foreign and unwanted tongue roaming his mouth, yet he groaned, at least to show that he was enjoying it.
They separate and Kai gives him a quick kiss before going down in his knees. Kai unzipped his trousers and lowered them to his knees. He rubbed Jin's erection from behind his boxers and Jin groaned out load, wanting more. Kai rubbed harder and Jin groaned loader and more frequently, matching every stroke Kai gave him.
This continued and Jin went into his little world of pure bliss. Black Dranzer kicked fully into Kai's system and pushed Jin to the ground, leaping up onto his feet and running towards the hill that lead to Rei's village. As he reached the foot of the hill, Yuto, Mikio and Riki attacked Kai and forced him to the floor. Mikio grabbed his arms and held them above his head while Yuto held his legs down and Riki sat on his stomach. Black Dranzer went into his bit-piece and left Kai to handle this situation.
Jin walked up slowly, pulling himself together. He knelt down next to Kai and slapped him around the face. Kai acted as if it didn't even phase him, a bit of Black Dranzer had rubbed off on him, reminding him of his grandfather's lessons.
"That's for being a naughty boy, Kai-koi. Take him to my room and chain him up." Jin ordered.
Yuto lifted Kai and twisted his arms round his back and led Kai back to Jin's cabin. All the while Black Dranzer was seeping into Kai without him noticing, turning his heart black and bringing out the original Kai, the evil Kai, the so-called strongest Kai. A slight grin was hidden beneath Kai's indifferent face as he was dragged towards his little pathetic prison.
I just had to have the girl saying "Bye de Bye", I just had to!! Well, I had fun writing this. Whether you had fun reading it is another question, well, did you? Tell me!! I finally understand the entire plot and can see the ending as clearly as I see your faces.. Wait that doesn't work...oh well, I know what I'm doing now and that's all that matters. Thank you all and thank you Chapter 10 for helping me to understand my fic. Thank you all!!!
Bye de Bye
Awakening
Jin's village was ravenously dressed with tall wooden caverns lining each pebbled street. People walked happily through the village as if nothing was wrong. Kai walked down an alley, head lowered, wearing the clothes Jin had picked out for him. A black spiked collar wrapped round his neck, covering one of the love bites that marked his body. An open white shirt revealed his toned chest to onlookers, with black wristbands tucking in the sleeves. Tight black leather trousers emphasis every curve of his legs with the strap around his ankle still hung there, resting on his bare feet.
Kai walked out of the dark alley and into the park where small children played, smiles gracing their features. Kai watched them chase each other up the steps of the slide and follow each other down, creating a thick pile of bodies at the foot on the soft mattress. Seeing all those bodies lying there reminded him as to why he was here in the first place. He was the one who couldn't stand fighting, he was the one who called his grandfather over to bring him Black Dranzer, he was the one who fought Jin, he was the one who let his feelings get in the way of victory.
From out of his pocket, Kai pulled out Black Dranzer and held it tightly in his hand, staring at it intensely, as if he'd be able to talk with the beast inside.
"You would've let them die, wouldn't you?" Kai growled.
Black Dranzer glowed and Kai could feel the evil seeping through him again.
"Don't you care about me? Is all you care about the victory? Oh, I forgot, my grandfather trained you, of course you have no feelings. as I did. A cold, heartless bastard who was being toyed with. But now, I'm weak, as he said I would if I let my heart guide me. I met him and I tried to keep my façade stern but, he got to me, and now, whenever I'm around him, I can't help but want to be cared for and throw away the attitude that had been beaten into me for all those years. Maybe you could learn from that. Power? You are already the most powerful beast around, if you worked together with a strong blader you could be the best. The best, I wanted that, I still want it, but I have faults, but that's what makes me human, without faults, you can't be human, and that's why I feel dead around my grandfather, and you... If I show faults, I get punished, so I've learned not to show them in front of you two. The power that runs through my veins overwhelms me when I work with you and I just want to have it all, why do you do that to me? I'm not like that anymore!"
A red blade rolled over and collapsed at Kai's feet. Looking at it for a while, he picked it up and studied it. There's no bit-beast within it, just a simple new beyblade that kids use to pass the time away. The side of Kai's mouth twitched up into a grin as he thought about it for a while. A small girl that reminded him of Mariah ran up to him and held out her hand.
"Can I have my blade back, sir." The girl asked, smiling innocently at Kai.
"Sure. There you go." Kai placed the blade gently in her hand.
"What's that?" The girl asked, pointing to Black Dranzer.
"This? This is my blade, well, my second blade, I have another one that I tend to use more than this." Kai explained as simply as possible.
"Wanna fight me?" The girl giggled.
"I think I'm a bit too experienced for you." Kai smiled, amused by the little girl.
"Oh, come on. I haven't battled you before and I've already taken on everyone else. Please!" The girl pleaded, lovingly.
"Okay, kid" Kai gave in, not wanting to upset such a pretty creature.
"Yey!" The girl yelled.
She grabbed Kai's hand and dragged him over to the small beyblade stadium. The girl bounced over to the other side and readied herself. Kai looked down at Black Dranzer, worried. He didn't want to hurt this girl. He took out Black Dranzer's bit-piece and held it tightly in his hand.
"Kid. You got some string?" Kai asked.
"Yep." The girl nodded.
She rushed round and gave Kai the string before heading back to her side of the dish. Kai wrapped the bit-piece in the string then attached it round his neck. Black Dranzer glowed in front of his heart.
"You ready?!" The girl squeaked.
"Always." Kai growled, trying to stop Black Dranzer taking over, but allowing it to work with Kai as best he could.
"3. 2. 1.. Let it rip!" The girl yelled happily.
The girl let her blade hit the stadium floor before it started to circle round. Kai let Black Dranzer go and it hit the floor with such force it made her blade jump. No, Black Dranzer, she's a little girl without a bit- beast, let her be and just try to enjoy yourself. Kai tried to control Black Dranzer as best he could, but he was once again loosing control numerous of times. Over and over again Kai reminded it of the girl's innocence and the childlike nature of this battle. This was testing Kai and he was having trouble concentrating. Black Dranzer was not enjoying being held back and was thrusting himself forward to take over. The girl watched Kai, confused.
"Are you okay, mister?" She asked, tilting her head to the side.
"Fine, little girl. Just keep your eye on the blade or you'll lose more than just the match." Kai growled, blank eyes piercing into her soul.
The girl jumped at his harsh words and huddled back, tears in her eyes. Kai shook his head, forcing Black Dranzer back.
"Hey, it's okay! I'm just used to talking trash at the tournaments, that's all. Don't cry." Kai assured her sweetly.
"You scared me." The girl complained.
"I'm sorry, kid it's just that..."
A blade shot out of the dish and landed in the sandpit. Kai looked down into the dish and found the girl's red blade still spinning. Kai smiled to himself. He knelt down and picked up his blade. The girl skipped over, joyfully.
"Well, looks like you won. Well done." Kai ruffled the girl's hair.
"You let me win! But that's okay. I like you. What's your name?" The girl skipped.
"Kai-kun, and you?" Kai asked, being as friendly as Black Dranzer would let him.
"Anasha-chan, I'm Jin-sama's sister." She giggled.
Kai's eyes opened with surprise at such an adorable girl belonging to that ogre. The girl looked at her watch then back up at Kai.
"I have to go, Kai-kun. Bye de bye." The girl waved her hand.
"Bye." Kai replied.
The girl skipped out of the park and Kai followed her steps. She turned to go down the alley and there, watching Kai, stood Jin. Kai didn't care now, he let Black Dranzer take control and slipped into his own world. Jin stepped forward to stand inches from Kai. Kai stared up at him, ice cold eyes showing nothing, he was emotionless. This distressed Jin for a while, but he soon pulled himself back together.
"That was very kind of you, Kai-koi. What made you do it?" Jin purred, stroking Kai's cheek.
"That's non of your concern." Kai spoke, slapping Jin's hand away.
"Heh. Doesn't matter. It was sweet." Jin said, his cold fingers travelling down Kai's exposed skin.
Kai breathed deeply to stop himself from shaking under the touch, the entire time keeping his eyes locked with Jin's. How he wanted to rip this guy to shreds and feed him to the hungry predators of the forest.
"You do realise that your friends will probably try to rescue you." Jin stated.
"What a shame." Kai said.
"Now, we can't be having that, so I think it best if you stayed indoors from now on." Jin alliterated.
"Keep me locked up like a prisoner." Kai said.
"If that's what you want to call it." Jin played Kai's game.
Jin wrapped his arms around Kai's waist and Black Dranzer let him, encouraging him by circling his arms around Jin's neck. Kai wanted to strangle Black Dranzer, what was he thinking?! Jin grinned at Kai's response and leaned forward to kiss Kai. Kai tilted his head and kissed Jin back, putting all his energy into it. Jin relaxed into the embrace, his hands moving across Kai's back and squeezing his butt. Jin's tongue played along Kai's lower lip, who opened willingly, starting a battle for domination. Kai had to give in, Jin would not let down, much to his annoyance. Kai squinted at the feel of a foreign and unwanted tongue roaming his mouth, yet he groaned, at least to show that he was enjoying it.
They separate and Kai gives him a quick kiss before going down in his knees. Kai unzipped his trousers and lowered them to his knees. He rubbed Jin's erection from behind his boxers and Jin groaned out load, wanting more. Kai rubbed harder and Jin groaned loader and more frequently, matching every stroke Kai gave him.
This continued and Jin went into his little world of pure bliss. Black Dranzer kicked fully into Kai's system and pushed Jin to the ground, leaping up onto his feet and running towards the hill that lead to Rei's village. As he reached the foot of the hill, Yuto, Mikio and Riki attacked Kai and forced him to the floor. Mikio grabbed his arms and held them above his head while Yuto held his legs down and Riki sat on his stomach. Black Dranzer went into his bit-piece and left Kai to handle this situation.
Jin walked up slowly, pulling himself together. He knelt down next to Kai and slapped him around the face. Kai acted as if it didn't even phase him, a bit of Black Dranzer had rubbed off on him, reminding him of his grandfather's lessons.
"That's for being a naughty boy, Kai-koi. Take him to my room and chain him up." Jin ordered.
Yuto lifted Kai and twisted his arms round his back and led Kai back to Jin's cabin. All the while Black Dranzer was seeping into Kai without him noticing, turning his heart black and bringing out the original Kai, the evil Kai, the so-called strongest Kai. A slight grin was hidden beneath Kai's indifferent face as he was dragged towards his little pathetic prison.
I just had to have the girl saying "Bye de Bye", I just had to!! Well, I had fun writing this. Whether you had fun reading it is another question, well, did you? Tell me!! I finally understand the entire plot and can see the ending as clearly as I see your faces.. Wait that doesn't work...oh well, I know what I'm doing now and that's all that matters. Thank you all and thank you Chapter 10 for helping me to understand my fic. Thank you all!!!
Bye de Bye