Do You Love Me?
By: Guardian Leen
Written: 5/28/02
Disclaimer: I don't own Pretear. Please don't sure me.
Plleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaasssse gimmie feeback!
Note: Hi everyone! Well…I took some time out of my *extremely* busy week and updated! My friend LAUREN kept nagging me and nagging me about continuing on with the fanfiction, so I finally gave in and wrote a little bit! Hope you enjoy this chapter!
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Do You Love Me? - Chapter 11 – Another Chance?
"Him-…"
Hayate…?
"Himen…?"
Hayate…is that you?
"Himeno?"
Sparkling crimson eyes opened at the sound of her name, "Hayate?" Himeno questioned, observing the blurry figure towering over her.
"No…" the voice softened.
Becoming fully aware of her surroundings, she looked closely at the person. "Goh?" Himeno inquired, wearily.
"Yeah…" he replied, "Are you alright?"
Himeno sat up immediately, rubbing her neck, 'What…happened before?' she asked herself, beginning to recall what happened to her.
Kaoru walked over to his daughter, "Himeno, you took quite a fall after you saved Hayate…"
Her eyes widened and turned to the group, "Hayate!" she exclaimed in fear. Himeno looked over at Hayate's peacefully sleeping form as she sighed, relieved. Smiling, she thought, 'Thank goodness…'
Takako moved Goh aside as she took his place, "Himeno…about…the 'plan'…"
Gazing up at her, Himeno stirred, clutching her hand, "I…I don't think I can go through with it any more!" she cried. Moving over to the side of the bed where Hayate lay, she continued, "Because to this…this 'plan,' Hayate was the victim of an aweful mistake I made! I can't take this much longer!"
Sasame couln't stand seeing her like this, "Himeno! This wasn't your fault!" he said sternly, kneeling down to her, "It was Hayate's own foolish error that this happened to him. He was the one out in the rain. If he were smart enough to find shelter he wouldn't have-"
"-But if I had only brought him that asprin like I was supposed to-" Himeno interrupted, rising.
"-It wouldn't have helped him much anyway." Kei ended, simply, reading a medical book on the other side of the room.
"WHAT!?" Himeno asked, surprised.
Kei closed his book, holding it up in the air for all to see, "It says right here that asprin will either have no effect for an pneumonia at all, or it will just lower the fever a little, which probably wouldn't have helped Hayate very much anyway." He stated, bluntly.
Himeno stood there, speatdropping (Anime style! :D ) as the whole room became quiet.
Mentally kicking herself, she noted, "I REALLY am an idiot!"
Coming up to her, Sasame placed a hand on her shoulder, "There was nothing any of us could have done, Himno. Now…the only question left unanswered is…Are you sure you don't want to go through with the 'plan' anymore?"
As Himeno began to speak, Mawata said, "Do it!"
Baffled, Himeno looked at her step-sister, "What!?"
"Do it!" Mawata repeated. Walking over to her, she said, quietly, "Himeno…I know thius might seem a little farfetched for me to say, but…I believe that this could be the one thing that will bring both you and Hayate together!"
"I think so too!" Mayune stated proudly.
"And I as well!" cheered Takako.
Natsue and Kaoru stepped towards Himeno. Smiling, "We could let you off from school for a little while…" Natsue stated, opening her cell phone and dialing a number. As she talked into it, Kaoru finished for her, "…but you'll have to make all of your work up AND help me with my claywork…" ending with, "…but with a little help from my assistant, Hayate, of course, when he recovers."
Mannen, Hajime, and Shin, who were observing what was happening from next to Goh, chimed together, "Yeah, Himeno-neechan! Let us help!"
Wide-eyed, Himeno watched the confessions of her friends, "I…I…" she trailed off.
Takako took Himeno's hands in her own, "C'mon! Everyone's rooting for you!" she urged, "I'll even help you spy on him if you want!" her eyes becoming sly.
For the first time that day, Himeno laughed. Laughing openly and free- heartedly, she exclaimed, "Well…if everyone wants me to, I guess I will!"
As everyone cheered and patted Himeno on the back, a soft moan could be heard from the bed.
"Oh my gosh!" Himeno whispered, "He's waking up! I've got to get out of here!"
The gang ran out the door in two seconds, not realizing they were knocking down Dr.Kirkin, who was leaning against the door. It was by the time the last person, Sasame, stepped through the door, they realized he was there. Stepping over the doctor, Sasame helped him up, "S-sorry sir!" he apologized.
Dr.Kirkin looked up angrily at Sasame, "What the hell was going on in there?!" he demanded.
Sasame sweatdropped as he said, "Look, I'm sorry, but Hayate has made a miraculous recovery! Go in and see for yourself.
The MD was shocked at what he had heard, "What!?" He opened the door, and found Hayate, a little woozy, but alive and awake. Realizing he was unnoticed by Hayate, he closed the door softly as the doctor said aloud to himself, "It's a miracle."
"Would you mind if I talked with your patient for a moment?" asked Sasame, politely.
"Uh…yeah, sure…" said Dr.Kirkin, still surprised at what happened.
Sasame walked over to Takako before opening the door, "You know what to do." Takako nodded to him.
"Yes."
Opening the door, Sasame began to walk into Hayate's chamber, preparing himself for a long, complicated conversation.
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I hope everyone liked this chapter of my fic! Please send me somefeed back! It is greatly appreciated! ^_^ Until next time!
By: Guardian Leen
Written: 5/28/02
Disclaimer: I don't own Pretear. Please don't sure me.
Plleeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaasssse gimmie feeback!
Note: Hi everyone! Well…I took some time out of my *extremely* busy week and updated! My friend LAUREN kept nagging me and nagging me about continuing on with the fanfiction, so I finally gave in and wrote a little bit! Hope you enjoy this chapter!
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Do You Love Me? - Chapter 11 – Another Chance?
"Him-…"
Hayate…?
"Himen…?"
Hayate…is that you?
"Himeno?"
Sparkling crimson eyes opened at the sound of her name, "Hayate?" Himeno questioned, observing the blurry figure towering over her.
"No…" the voice softened.
Becoming fully aware of her surroundings, she looked closely at the person. "Goh?" Himeno inquired, wearily.
"Yeah…" he replied, "Are you alright?"
Himeno sat up immediately, rubbing her neck, 'What…happened before?' she asked herself, beginning to recall what happened to her.
Kaoru walked over to his daughter, "Himeno, you took quite a fall after you saved Hayate…"
Her eyes widened and turned to the group, "Hayate!" she exclaimed in fear. Himeno looked over at Hayate's peacefully sleeping form as she sighed, relieved. Smiling, she thought, 'Thank goodness…'
Takako moved Goh aside as she took his place, "Himeno…about…the 'plan'…"
Gazing up at her, Himeno stirred, clutching her hand, "I…I don't think I can go through with it any more!" she cried. Moving over to the side of the bed where Hayate lay, she continued, "Because to this…this 'plan,' Hayate was the victim of an aweful mistake I made! I can't take this much longer!"
Sasame couln't stand seeing her like this, "Himeno! This wasn't your fault!" he said sternly, kneeling down to her, "It was Hayate's own foolish error that this happened to him. He was the one out in the rain. If he were smart enough to find shelter he wouldn't have-"
"-But if I had only brought him that asprin like I was supposed to-" Himeno interrupted, rising.
"-It wouldn't have helped him much anyway." Kei ended, simply, reading a medical book on the other side of the room.
"WHAT!?" Himeno asked, surprised.
Kei closed his book, holding it up in the air for all to see, "It says right here that asprin will either have no effect for an pneumonia at all, or it will just lower the fever a little, which probably wouldn't have helped Hayate very much anyway." He stated, bluntly.
Himeno stood there, speatdropping (Anime style! :D ) as the whole room became quiet.
Mentally kicking herself, she noted, "I REALLY am an idiot!"
Coming up to her, Sasame placed a hand on her shoulder, "There was nothing any of us could have done, Himno. Now…the only question left unanswered is…Are you sure you don't want to go through with the 'plan' anymore?"
As Himeno began to speak, Mawata said, "Do it!"
Baffled, Himeno looked at her step-sister, "What!?"
"Do it!" Mawata repeated. Walking over to her, she said, quietly, "Himeno…I know thius might seem a little farfetched for me to say, but…I believe that this could be the one thing that will bring both you and Hayate together!"
"I think so too!" Mayune stated proudly.
"And I as well!" cheered Takako.
Natsue and Kaoru stepped towards Himeno. Smiling, "We could let you off from school for a little while…" Natsue stated, opening her cell phone and dialing a number. As she talked into it, Kaoru finished for her, "…but you'll have to make all of your work up AND help me with my claywork…" ending with, "…but with a little help from my assistant, Hayate, of course, when he recovers."
Mannen, Hajime, and Shin, who were observing what was happening from next to Goh, chimed together, "Yeah, Himeno-neechan! Let us help!"
Wide-eyed, Himeno watched the confessions of her friends, "I…I…" she trailed off.
Takako took Himeno's hands in her own, "C'mon! Everyone's rooting for you!" she urged, "I'll even help you spy on him if you want!" her eyes becoming sly.
For the first time that day, Himeno laughed. Laughing openly and free- heartedly, she exclaimed, "Well…if everyone wants me to, I guess I will!"
As everyone cheered and patted Himeno on the back, a soft moan could be heard from the bed.
"Oh my gosh!" Himeno whispered, "He's waking up! I've got to get out of here!"
The gang ran out the door in two seconds, not realizing they were knocking down Dr.Kirkin, who was leaning against the door. It was by the time the last person, Sasame, stepped through the door, they realized he was there. Stepping over the doctor, Sasame helped him up, "S-sorry sir!" he apologized.
Dr.Kirkin looked up angrily at Sasame, "What the hell was going on in there?!" he demanded.
Sasame sweatdropped as he said, "Look, I'm sorry, but Hayate has made a miraculous recovery! Go in and see for yourself.
The MD was shocked at what he had heard, "What!?" He opened the door, and found Hayate, a little woozy, but alive and awake. Realizing he was unnoticed by Hayate, he closed the door softly as the doctor said aloud to himself, "It's a miracle."
"Would you mind if I talked with your patient for a moment?" asked Sasame, politely.
"Uh…yeah, sure…" said Dr.Kirkin, still surprised at what happened.
Sasame walked over to Takako before opening the door, "You know what to do." Takako nodded to him.
"Yes."
Opening the door, Sasame began to walk into Hayate's chamber, preparing himself for a long, complicated conversation.
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I hope everyone liked this chapter of my fic! Please send me somefeed back! It is greatly appreciated! ^_^ Until next time!