I personally liked the anonamuos part of the first chapter. Also, right now
I would like to point out that I did not change Hermione's personality, I
only added a part of her we didn't already know. The part we did know is a
lie she made up, a lie she almost became, but not quite.
Oh yea, All charactors and places used in my story solely belong to Joanne Katherine Rowling. The ideas are mine and not to be stolen. Some ideas were taken from the forwarding created by J.K. Rowling, and any new charactors are also mine.
So begins the next chapter of..
The Destination of Fantasy
Chapter 2
Twice now, she felt it becon.
Hermione knew where it would be and for what reason, but she held off, debating contantly with herself.
What would her friends say? 'Nothing' she chided herself, they wouldn't care. Besides, I don't have friends, friends wouldn't abandon me, ever, no matter the circumstances.
The pressure was unbearable, it pulled at her, twisting and turning her insides, making it immposible to consintrate.think.even breath.
But what could it hurt, a little knowledge would be useful. She'de know both sides and do what she must to get what she wants and to survive. She couldn't be branded, and if she got killed, big woop! She certinly didn't care, although she was pretty sure it wouldn't happen. It was her intuition, and Hermione's intuition was never wrong.
No! No! No! She wouldn't go, it isn't who she is, but then again, who is Hermione Granger, just a character in a faery tale, a fantasy. It isn't even her real last name, but upon taking that name, she created an image for herself, gave herself a clean slate with the ability to become whoever she wanted to be, to start new.
And that is what she did, she became 'know it all Granger' as opposed to 'I don't give a shit Twighlight', as she was known in elementry/grammer school. Twighlight, that is who she really was, but Hermione didn't know who Hermione Twighlight was, she could be anybody. She never did find out. Hermione spent so much time trying to fit into the role of Hermione Granger, best grades, best student, always doing her homework, snobby know it all, stuck up, and always trying to do whats right while keeping others out of trouble, that she almost forgot who she really was.
Once again she felt it becon, but this time more insistant. It was becoming nearly immpossible to refuse. Maybe this was her true self telling her to go, or maybe it wasn't. Maybe this is how they were called, maybe it wasn't. Maybe it was fate. Maybe the feeling was just a fantasy. Who knew?
Certainly not her.
Trying to keep her hands busy, Hermione pulled out a book called 'Death Omins: What to do when you know the worst is coming'.
She sat down and begun to speed read through the book, turning the pages every seven or so seconds.
Hermione got about halfway through the very thick book when she closed it, having made up her mind.
She would go. She had no reason not to, it could be fun. Fun, yes, she would be a terror, she would be her mother. She would be the person her mother wanted her to be. She would be Her.
Hermione dressed in a long blood red skirt and a loose fitting black silk blouse. She then took the glamours off of herself, revieling amazing eyes colored somewhere between a gold, red, brown, gray and black, which changed with her moods and wavy, Dark brown hair, almost black, with natual red highlights, and a few golden highlights from the summer sun as opposed to the frizzy light brown hair and dull brown eyes of Hermione Granger. Not all that different, but enough to make a difference. Her natural colors were too elegent and powerful looking for the goody too shoe image she was going for.
Hermion took a expensive black cloak out of the closet and put it on, bringing up the hood to put a shadow on her face. She was tall, thin, and strong. In her real looks, she could impose on anyone with just a look. She held the air of eligence and power so, as one of royalty would have. She got that from her mother. She got her light skin coloring from her father, who was, in reality related to Draco Malfoy.
Her father was brother to Narcissa Malfoy. Narcissa had changed her last name 3 times before she got married to Lucius Malfoy, but it was origanally Twighlight, like hers.
Hermione shook herself out of her musings and took a nail polish out of her make up cabonit. It was made out of posionis snake venum and was a bright blood red color, perfect to match her skirt. She painted it on her nails, making sure not to get any on her skin, less it burn through and kill her.
Once Hermione was completely ready, looking extremely dark, a look that would have made her mother proud, had she seen her, Hermione took a deep breath and illegally apperated.
Right into the middle of the main circle of Death Eaters, and right in front of Voldemort himself.
~:://::~
~EclypsCC1~
Well, what do you think? This will probaly be the last chapte for a while that I use that anonamus thing I do but I think it was pretty good. I got Hermione to go a bit dark, with out changing her from the Hermione Granger we all know, since I made that Hermione not real, just a lie. Also, in case you didn't notice, Draco is now Hermione's cousin although he does not know it just yet, but I assuare you, he will, sooner or later.
I got this chapter up within 8 hours of the first chapter, but don't expect that all the time, some times I may get the chapters up within a day of each other but usually it is about 3 days apart. If I havn't updated in over a week and a half, you can be assuared that my mother has taken my keyboard and mouse and I wont be able to post till I can bribe her and get it back. But when I do, I'll put up a bunch of chapters right away.
This is the first story that I havn't written ahead in a note book, so If you have any suggestions, I'm open to put them in if I think they are good.
Thanks to all of my 3 reviewers:
Kylee (Hermione_Snape@hotmail.com) ~ As I said before I did not completely change Hermione's character, there never really was a Hermione Granger. Thank you for being my first reviewer.
Cosette ~ That's why I like Hermione so much, she has such a developed character, but you know nothing about her past other than her parents are dentists, but that can be argued away easily.
Aries ~ Thanks
Thanks again to my reviewers
To everyone else,
Please Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew!
~CiErRa~
Oh yea, All charactors and places used in my story solely belong to Joanne Katherine Rowling. The ideas are mine and not to be stolen. Some ideas were taken from the forwarding created by J.K. Rowling, and any new charactors are also mine.
So begins the next chapter of..
The Destination of Fantasy
Chapter 2
Twice now, she felt it becon.
Hermione knew where it would be and for what reason, but she held off, debating contantly with herself.
What would her friends say? 'Nothing' she chided herself, they wouldn't care. Besides, I don't have friends, friends wouldn't abandon me, ever, no matter the circumstances.
The pressure was unbearable, it pulled at her, twisting and turning her insides, making it immposible to consintrate.think.even breath.
But what could it hurt, a little knowledge would be useful. She'de know both sides and do what she must to get what she wants and to survive. She couldn't be branded, and if she got killed, big woop! She certinly didn't care, although she was pretty sure it wouldn't happen. It was her intuition, and Hermione's intuition was never wrong.
No! No! No! She wouldn't go, it isn't who she is, but then again, who is Hermione Granger, just a character in a faery tale, a fantasy. It isn't even her real last name, but upon taking that name, she created an image for herself, gave herself a clean slate with the ability to become whoever she wanted to be, to start new.
And that is what she did, she became 'know it all Granger' as opposed to 'I don't give a shit Twighlight', as she was known in elementry/grammer school. Twighlight, that is who she really was, but Hermione didn't know who Hermione Twighlight was, she could be anybody. She never did find out. Hermione spent so much time trying to fit into the role of Hermione Granger, best grades, best student, always doing her homework, snobby know it all, stuck up, and always trying to do whats right while keeping others out of trouble, that she almost forgot who she really was.
Once again she felt it becon, but this time more insistant. It was becoming nearly immpossible to refuse. Maybe this was her true self telling her to go, or maybe it wasn't. Maybe this is how they were called, maybe it wasn't. Maybe it was fate. Maybe the feeling was just a fantasy. Who knew?
Certainly not her.
Trying to keep her hands busy, Hermione pulled out a book called 'Death Omins: What to do when you know the worst is coming'.
She sat down and begun to speed read through the book, turning the pages every seven or so seconds.
Hermione got about halfway through the very thick book when she closed it, having made up her mind.
She would go. She had no reason not to, it could be fun. Fun, yes, she would be a terror, she would be her mother. She would be the person her mother wanted her to be. She would be Her.
Hermione dressed in a long blood red skirt and a loose fitting black silk blouse. She then took the glamours off of herself, revieling amazing eyes colored somewhere between a gold, red, brown, gray and black, which changed with her moods and wavy, Dark brown hair, almost black, with natual red highlights, and a few golden highlights from the summer sun as opposed to the frizzy light brown hair and dull brown eyes of Hermione Granger. Not all that different, but enough to make a difference. Her natural colors were too elegent and powerful looking for the goody too shoe image she was going for.
Hermion took a expensive black cloak out of the closet and put it on, bringing up the hood to put a shadow on her face. She was tall, thin, and strong. In her real looks, she could impose on anyone with just a look. She held the air of eligence and power so, as one of royalty would have. She got that from her mother. She got her light skin coloring from her father, who was, in reality related to Draco Malfoy.
Her father was brother to Narcissa Malfoy. Narcissa had changed her last name 3 times before she got married to Lucius Malfoy, but it was origanally Twighlight, like hers.
Hermione shook herself out of her musings and took a nail polish out of her make up cabonit. It was made out of posionis snake venum and was a bright blood red color, perfect to match her skirt. She painted it on her nails, making sure not to get any on her skin, less it burn through and kill her.
Once Hermione was completely ready, looking extremely dark, a look that would have made her mother proud, had she seen her, Hermione took a deep breath and illegally apperated.
Right into the middle of the main circle of Death Eaters, and right in front of Voldemort himself.
~:://::~
~EclypsCC1~
Well, what do you think? This will probaly be the last chapte for a while that I use that anonamus thing I do but I think it was pretty good. I got Hermione to go a bit dark, with out changing her from the Hermione Granger we all know, since I made that Hermione not real, just a lie. Also, in case you didn't notice, Draco is now Hermione's cousin although he does not know it just yet, but I assuare you, he will, sooner or later.
I got this chapter up within 8 hours of the first chapter, but don't expect that all the time, some times I may get the chapters up within a day of each other but usually it is about 3 days apart. If I havn't updated in over a week and a half, you can be assuared that my mother has taken my keyboard and mouse and I wont be able to post till I can bribe her and get it back. But when I do, I'll put up a bunch of chapters right away.
This is the first story that I havn't written ahead in a note book, so If you have any suggestions, I'm open to put them in if I think they are good.
Thanks to all of my 3 reviewers:
Kylee (Hermione_Snape@hotmail.com) ~ As I said before I did not completely change Hermione's character, there never really was a Hermione Granger. Thank you for being my first reviewer.
Cosette ~ That's why I like Hermione so much, she has such a developed character, but you know nothing about her past other than her parents are dentists, but that can be argued away easily.
Aries ~ Thanks
Thanks again to my reviewers
To everyone else,
Please Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew! Reiew!
~CiErRa~