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chibitrunks ()
okay. that wuz a good fic, but, geez,"i THINK i luv you?" that's not sumthing that you THINK about.
He was trying to tell her and didn't quite know how
DragonFire
Decent start. Not too sure about the end. It held me, but dropped off at the end. I never really thought of Harry as a cat. Interresting. Keep up the good work and post soon.
The cat has something to do with something later in the story
Locket
Chapter 2
Know I love Her
The next day Everyone in the Weasley house went to Diagon alley. Fred and Gorge went to check on their joke shop, "Cracked" and Ron, Ginny and Harry went to get their stuff for school. After they all went to Gringots, Harry suggested that they separate to get done quicker. Harry held Ginny back and waited until Ron was out of sight. Harry and Ginny walked twards Florish and Blotts. They went behind the section on hexes, (It looked deserted) and kissed. Then they stopped when a slight gasp was heard. Harry and Ginny turned to see Hermione looking at them. "When did this start?" Harry and Ginny looked at each other, it was Ginny who answered. "Um.I guess, yesterday." Hermione gave them a disapproving look but she decided that it wasn't her business. (That's a first!) They followed her out into a few other stores. Not before long they were back at the Burrow and Mrs. Weasley was hearding them up the stairs. "Go on, you all need some sleep, I'm waking you all up early so you catch the train on time." Harry and Ron went to Ron's room and got ready for bed. Harry decided to tell Ron about Ginny. "Hey Ron, I got to tell you something." Ron looking eager said, "Yea what is it?"
"Well you know how I never had a girlfriend?"
"Yea, what about it?"
"Well, I have one now."
"Really, who?"
"Ginny."
"Huh? Are you kidding?"
"No."
"Yikes, never saw that one coming."
"So, it doesn't bother you?"
"Well it's not my choice, but, well, you'd be a nice brother-in-law." Ron sneered and went into his bed and asleep. A moment later Harry did the same.
Well what do you think? Sorry for skipping a lot of stuff in between. It is kind of short, but I promise the next chapter will be much longer.
Review! I say! Review!
chibitrunks ()
okay. that wuz a good fic, but, geez,"i THINK i luv you?" that's not sumthing that you THINK about.
He was trying to tell her and didn't quite know how
DragonFire
Decent start. Not too sure about the end. It held me, but dropped off at the end. I never really thought of Harry as a cat. Interresting. Keep up the good work and post soon.
The cat has something to do with something later in the story
Locket
Chapter 2
Know I love Her
The next day Everyone in the Weasley house went to Diagon alley. Fred and Gorge went to check on their joke shop, "Cracked" and Ron, Ginny and Harry went to get their stuff for school. After they all went to Gringots, Harry suggested that they separate to get done quicker. Harry held Ginny back and waited until Ron was out of sight. Harry and Ginny walked twards Florish and Blotts. They went behind the section on hexes, (It looked deserted) and kissed. Then they stopped when a slight gasp was heard. Harry and Ginny turned to see Hermione looking at them. "When did this start?" Harry and Ginny looked at each other, it was Ginny who answered. "Um.I guess, yesterday." Hermione gave them a disapproving look but she decided that it wasn't her business. (That's a first!) They followed her out into a few other stores. Not before long they were back at the Burrow and Mrs. Weasley was hearding them up the stairs. "Go on, you all need some sleep, I'm waking you all up early so you catch the train on time." Harry and Ron went to Ron's room and got ready for bed. Harry decided to tell Ron about Ginny. "Hey Ron, I got to tell you something." Ron looking eager said, "Yea what is it?"
"Well you know how I never had a girlfriend?"
"Yea, what about it?"
"Well, I have one now."
"Really, who?"
"Ginny."
"Huh? Are you kidding?"
"No."
"Yikes, never saw that one coming."
"So, it doesn't bother you?"
"Well it's not my choice, but, well, you'd be a nice brother-in-law." Ron sneered and went into his bed and asleep. A moment later Harry did the same.
Well what do you think? Sorry for skipping a lot of stuff in between. It is kind of short, but I promise the next chapter will be much longer.
Review! I say! Review!