EMI- nice fic so far ^^ ^^;; althought the characters seem to go
very "fast" as if nothing surprised them (like the "I think I love you" and
"I didn't saw that one coming") :) but it's good. Next chap soon? *gives
thumbs up*
Sorry for going so fast, a few people have told me about that. I promise I'll slow down some. Scout's honor.
If anyone writes a good fic, please e-mail me and tell me the name.
Locket
Chapter 2
The next morning went by so quickly that before anyone knew what was happening, they were going on to platform 9 ¾ . First Harry and Ginny went through, then Ron and Hermione. They went to the last car where they almost always got and area all to them selves. Harry put his trunk in and then came back and got Ginny's for her. Everyone was saying their goodbyes as the train started to move. Ginny came and sat next to Harry and leaned her head on him. Harry caressed her when Crookshanks came and jumped on his lap. ( A/N- this has something to do with Harry being an animagi.)
When the lunch cart came by, Harry got up and bought some food for everyone. Harry opened a chocolate frog first. On the card was Malinda Worshow, Harry had a pretty large card collection now. After a long time of talking, playing a few games of exploding snap, and thinking up pranks for Malfoy, (This year they were in on torturing him) it got really dark and the trained slowed to reveal that they were pulling into the Hogsmeade Station.
As Harry got out of the train, he heard a familiar voice.
"Firs' years ova' 'ere."
Harry waved a Hagrid and, after Hagrid waved back, followed Ron, Hermione and Ginny into one of the horse-less carriages, which immediately set off for Hogwarts.
The night went by all to quickly. First was the sorting, there were 3 new Gryfindors. Then Professor Dumbledore made his announcements for the year. The forest on the grounds was forbidden, and the students had to be back in their dormitories by 10:00 (22:00) each night. Then came the start of the feast. They ate then went up to their dormitories to bed. As Harry walked up to the staircase he noticed that not everyone had made it up to their beds. There were 4 or 5 people that just fell asleep in the fluffy chairs that were set around the common room.
That night, all Harry could think about was Ginny. Slowly he fell asleep and had a very weird dream. Harry was underneath the invisible cloak and holding the Marauder's map. Then he went into the Forbidden Forest. He stopped suddenly when he saw Ginny on the ground, her back to him, curled up and crying. He longed to reach out to her but held himself back. He turned his head slightly when he saw Sirius, bound and gagged, trashing on the ground trying to get free. They seemed to be held there by some sort of barrier. He turned around, obviously going to run and get help when he came face to face with Lord Voldemort! A fully restored Lord Voldemort at that
Harry suddenly jerked awake. At first he thought it was the dream, but then he noticed an owl tapping on the window. Fighting the urge to tell Dumbledore about the dream (His scar had not hurt.) He opened up the widow, letting the owl flutter in, drop a letter in his bed and flutter back out again. Harry opened the letter and immediately recognized the handwriting, it was from Sirius.
Harry,
Tomorrow I will be starting a position at Hogwarts. Obviously it is defense agenst the dark arts, since that is the only available position. Professor Dumbledore gladly gave me the position seeing as nobody else wanted it. I've been hearing rumors and wanted to keep you safe. Have good faith and I'll see you soon.
Love,
Sirius.
p.s Buckbeat sends his love.
I have more but I'm saving it for the next chapter, and I would like to apologize for going on such a fast pace in the story, I will try to slow it down. Also I wanted to get the beginning done with so I can write my ideas, I have a bad memory, I forget some things easily, AhchooHOMEWORK!!! Lol. Please tell me what you think of this new chapter. I had to rewrite it 4 times before I got it how I liked.
Push that little button and submit a review, Please, *Pouts and sticks out lower lip*
If you don't I am likely to develop o stutter, "P-P-Please D-Don't do this to me." Quoted from 'Big Daddy'
Sorry for going so fast, a few people have told me about that. I promise I'll slow down some. Scout's honor.
If anyone writes a good fic, please e-mail me and tell me the name.
Locket
Chapter 2
The next morning went by so quickly that before anyone knew what was happening, they were going on to platform 9 ¾ . First Harry and Ginny went through, then Ron and Hermione. They went to the last car where they almost always got and area all to them selves. Harry put his trunk in and then came back and got Ginny's for her. Everyone was saying their goodbyes as the train started to move. Ginny came and sat next to Harry and leaned her head on him. Harry caressed her when Crookshanks came and jumped on his lap. ( A/N- this has something to do with Harry being an animagi.)
When the lunch cart came by, Harry got up and bought some food for everyone. Harry opened a chocolate frog first. On the card was Malinda Worshow, Harry had a pretty large card collection now. After a long time of talking, playing a few games of exploding snap, and thinking up pranks for Malfoy, (This year they were in on torturing him) it got really dark and the trained slowed to reveal that they were pulling into the Hogsmeade Station.
As Harry got out of the train, he heard a familiar voice.
"Firs' years ova' 'ere."
Harry waved a Hagrid and, after Hagrid waved back, followed Ron, Hermione and Ginny into one of the horse-less carriages, which immediately set off for Hogwarts.
The night went by all to quickly. First was the sorting, there were 3 new Gryfindors. Then Professor Dumbledore made his announcements for the year. The forest on the grounds was forbidden, and the students had to be back in their dormitories by 10:00 (22:00) each night. Then came the start of the feast. They ate then went up to their dormitories to bed. As Harry walked up to the staircase he noticed that not everyone had made it up to their beds. There were 4 or 5 people that just fell asleep in the fluffy chairs that were set around the common room.
That night, all Harry could think about was Ginny. Slowly he fell asleep and had a very weird dream. Harry was underneath the invisible cloak and holding the Marauder's map. Then he went into the Forbidden Forest. He stopped suddenly when he saw Ginny on the ground, her back to him, curled up and crying. He longed to reach out to her but held himself back. He turned his head slightly when he saw Sirius, bound and gagged, trashing on the ground trying to get free. They seemed to be held there by some sort of barrier. He turned around, obviously going to run and get help when he came face to face with Lord Voldemort! A fully restored Lord Voldemort at that
Harry suddenly jerked awake. At first he thought it was the dream, but then he noticed an owl tapping on the window. Fighting the urge to tell Dumbledore about the dream (His scar had not hurt.) He opened up the widow, letting the owl flutter in, drop a letter in his bed and flutter back out again. Harry opened the letter and immediately recognized the handwriting, it was from Sirius.
Harry,
Tomorrow I will be starting a position at Hogwarts. Obviously it is defense agenst the dark arts, since that is the only available position. Professor Dumbledore gladly gave me the position seeing as nobody else wanted it. I've been hearing rumors and wanted to keep you safe. Have good faith and I'll see you soon.
Love,
Sirius.
p.s Buckbeat sends his love.
I have more but I'm saving it for the next chapter, and I would like to apologize for going on such a fast pace in the story, I will try to slow it down. Also I wanted to get the beginning done with so I can write my ideas, I have a bad memory, I forget some things easily, AhchooHOMEWORK!!! Lol. Please tell me what you think of this new chapter. I had to rewrite it 4 times before I got it how I liked.
Push that little button and submit a review, Please, *Pouts and sticks out lower lip*
If you don't I am likely to develop o stutter, "P-P-Please D-Don't do this to me." Quoted from 'Big Daddy'