YYYYYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!1 this story finally got a
review!!!!!! And I thought no one would read it!!!! Thx trunks fan!!!!
So back to the story.......
A little reminder
"Gohan!!"
yes??
"That wasn't in the script!!"
I know but I couldn't resist! I'm starting to like this all powerful narrator thing.
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"er Gohan, you sure your ok???"
yeah Bulma I'm fine. And don't worry I'll be leaving the other ducklings alone.. mutters maybe.
"Brat!!!"
geez Vegeta I was only kidding.
"Could we just get on with the story Gohan?"
sure Krillen. Where were we... oh yeah.The next day, the proud substitute mother duck took her babies home to the farmyard for the first time.
*piccolo reading from script* "come children. I will take you to the farmyard to show the other animals how wonderful you are."
"yes mother"
the other birds teased the poor duckling. Soon even his own brothers and sisters called him "Ugly" and wouldn't...spar?? with him?? Hey who changed the script???
"Sayajin's don't "play"!"
fine. They called him "ugly and wouldn't spar with him.
"Ewwww..get away from me!! Your too ugly!"
"Onna?? Now what'd I do!! Dam woman!!"
Vegeta she's only acting!
"so this is your fault brat!"
No No it's not real! She doesn't really think your ugly.
"Humph!"
Now back to the script. *Reading* as the days passed, the duckling grew more ugly.
"I'm so handsome!"
Vegeta!!
"Grrr fine *reading from script this time* I'm so ugly"
and the teasing grew worse and worse.
"why did I have to do this kakarott would have been better in this role!"
just because! Now will you quit moaning for a minute and read the line.
"No I refuse to be ordered around by you brat!"
Bulma!!!! Help!!!!
"Vegeta!! Read the dam line!!"
"or what?!"
"Or I'll not feed you for 6 months!"
"I'd count that as a blessing"
"and I'll shut down your precious Gravity Room!!!"
"Shit! Dam Onna *reading* Everyone hates me!"
finally he decided to run away.
"I'll go find someplace where everyone is as handsome as me!"
oh come on now Vegeta just read the lines right?
mumble mumble revenge mumble "I'll go find someplace where everone is as ugly as me."
Better. The duckling wandered through the fields until he came to a swamp where the wild geese lived.
"I won't!!!"
Say it!!
"No!"
SAY IT!
"*Sarcastically* whoo hoo! Maybe they won't think I'm ugly!"
but before the ugly duckling could speak to the geese a dog came by and chased them away.
"COME BACK!!"
there see now your getting it Vegeta!
" no I just wanted to show them how weak that dog really is!"
er...Vegeta you don't have your saiyajin strength in this story.
"WHAT!"
You might wanna run.
"You just had to make the dog a monster didn't you brat!"
Hehe yep! (Insert son grin here!) now as I was saying,..A s soon as he was sure the dogs were gone, the lonely LITTLE..
"I'm not little I'm of royal blood!!!"
I'll repeat that sentence.
"just try it!!"
ok..uh hum...A s soon as he was sure the dogs were gone, the lonely LITTLE duckling set off again, looking for company.
"final flash!!"
hehehe I all ready told you, you can't use your attacks in this story.
"how come the Namek can use ki blasts?!!"
well I let him cause he's not gonna try and KILL me with them!!
"ok so where am I supposed to go now?? I'm still in this stinking swamp!!!"
I don't know. Look around.
"oh! Great help you are!! Whats that??"
looks like a hut.
" I know what it looks like brat!! I wanna know if I should go in!!!"
what are you asking me for?? It's as good a place as any.
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what'll await our prince inside???
What'll Gohan do to veggie next???
Gohan-chan: hehe I know!!!
Shush don't tell them yet!!! And you should be with the other story!!!
Gohan-chan: oh don't worry about that!! Dad's looking after it...dam
You said it!!! Bye ppl I gotta a story to save....
Gohan-chan: don't forget to R+R!!!!! plz????
So back to the story.......
A little reminder
"Gohan!!"
yes??
"That wasn't in the script!!"
I know but I couldn't resist! I'm starting to like this all powerful narrator thing.
**************************************
"er Gohan, you sure your ok???"
yeah Bulma I'm fine. And don't worry I'll be leaving the other ducklings alone.. mutters maybe.
"Brat!!!"
geez Vegeta I was only kidding.
"Could we just get on with the story Gohan?"
sure Krillen. Where were we... oh yeah.The next day, the proud substitute mother duck took her babies home to the farmyard for the first time.
*piccolo reading from script* "come children. I will take you to the farmyard to show the other animals how wonderful you are."
"yes mother"
the other birds teased the poor duckling. Soon even his own brothers and sisters called him "Ugly" and wouldn't...spar?? with him?? Hey who changed the script???
"Sayajin's don't "play"!"
fine. They called him "ugly and wouldn't spar with him.
"Ewwww..get away from me!! Your too ugly!"
"Onna?? Now what'd I do!! Dam woman!!"
Vegeta she's only acting!
"so this is your fault brat!"
No No it's not real! She doesn't really think your ugly.
"Humph!"
Now back to the script. *Reading* as the days passed, the duckling grew more ugly.
"I'm so handsome!"
Vegeta!!
"Grrr fine *reading from script this time* I'm so ugly"
and the teasing grew worse and worse.
"why did I have to do this kakarott would have been better in this role!"
just because! Now will you quit moaning for a minute and read the line.
"No I refuse to be ordered around by you brat!"
Bulma!!!! Help!!!!
"Vegeta!! Read the dam line!!"
"or what?!"
"Or I'll not feed you for 6 months!"
"I'd count that as a blessing"
"and I'll shut down your precious Gravity Room!!!"
"Shit! Dam Onna *reading* Everyone hates me!"
finally he decided to run away.
"I'll go find someplace where everyone is as handsome as me!"
oh come on now Vegeta just read the lines right?
mumble mumble revenge mumble "I'll go find someplace where everone is as ugly as me."
Better. The duckling wandered through the fields until he came to a swamp where the wild geese lived.
"I won't!!!"
Say it!!
"No!"
SAY IT!
"*Sarcastically* whoo hoo! Maybe they won't think I'm ugly!"
but before the ugly duckling could speak to the geese a dog came by and chased them away.
"COME BACK!!"
there see now your getting it Vegeta!
" no I just wanted to show them how weak that dog really is!"
er...Vegeta you don't have your saiyajin strength in this story.
"WHAT!"
You might wanna run.
"You just had to make the dog a monster didn't you brat!"
Hehe yep! (Insert son grin here!) now as I was saying,..A s soon as he was sure the dogs were gone, the lonely LITTLE..
"I'm not little I'm of royal blood!!!"
I'll repeat that sentence.
"just try it!!"
ok..uh hum...A s soon as he was sure the dogs were gone, the lonely LITTLE duckling set off again, looking for company.
"final flash!!"
hehehe I all ready told you, you can't use your attacks in this story.
"how come the Namek can use ki blasts?!!"
well I let him cause he's not gonna try and KILL me with them!!
"ok so where am I supposed to go now?? I'm still in this stinking swamp!!!"
I don't know. Look around.
"oh! Great help you are!! Whats that??"
looks like a hut.
" I know what it looks like brat!! I wanna know if I should go in!!!"
what are you asking me for?? It's as good a place as any.
*************************
what'll await our prince inside???
What'll Gohan do to veggie next???
Gohan-chan: hehe I know!!!
Shush don't tell them yet!!! And you should be with the other story!!!
Gohan-chan: oh don't worry about that!! Dad's looking after it...dam
You said it!!! Bye ppl I gotta a story to save....
Gohan-chan: don't forget to R+R!!!!! plz????