Okay, forget what I said about waiting before I get at least 2 reviews per chapter to publish the next chapter. I'm addicted to writing this now and I can't stop. I tried to wait more than an hour before starting the next chapter, but my will crumbled, so here I am again. You may be seeing more than one new chapter of this per day now...
Oh, and no, I don't hate Han. I just like to use him for comic relief. Keep that in mind.
Suggested Reading: 'A Second Chance' or 'Second Chances,' I forget which one it is but it's the best Star Wars fanfic I've seen on this site so far. Can't remember the author's name either... gah... I can't remember anything that I didn't make up myself lol XD
The story so far: Ahsilna happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time, and now the gate between the Otherworlds is open forever. And what Otherworld did she fall into? Read and find out! Though I think that anyone with even half of a brain has already guessed, there is still the question of what planet in that Otherworld she's on right now...
- Where Ahsilna is -
The girl groaned as she opened her eyes. Her whole body felt like ice, and when she tried to stand up, she was blinded by the swirling snow. 'What the hell just happened?!' she thought to herself as she shielded her eyes with one hand and peered out across the barren wasteland before her. The whole land was covered in snow, and when she walked a few steps she realized that the ground on which she was standing was not dirt, but solid ice. 'It was October back home... am I dreaming? I probably just dozed off in school...' She gazed off into the distance. There was no sign of any people around, and she couldn't convince herself that it was really just a dream. It felt all too real.
"Is anyone here?" she yelled, "I'm lost! Can anybody help me? Please?" Her cry echoed off of the ice ridge nearby, but the whole world seemed silent but for the wailing of the wind. She thought bitterly to herself, 'Of course there's nobody living here... who would want to live on some damn planet with an eternal winter?! I'll probably just starve to death, considering my luck.' But she was freezing fast, and she knew that she'd have to keep moving if she didn't want to turn into a statue frozen just like everything else here. So she started walking towards the ridge for lack of any other landmarks, and moved as quickly as she could through the worsening blizzard...
- At the new rebel base -
Luke paced back and forth. He'd been appointed the leader of the current Rebel army by both the Senate and the Jedi council - by the Senate because he was well trained in the ways of war and was a natural leader, and by the council for the simple fact that he had no Padawan to train. He was trying to find one, of course, but most of the students at the Jedi academy who were strong enough in the force to become Padawans already had a master - so he had agreed to lead the war effort until he could find an apprentice.
He was sending out a couple of pilots and some soldiers to each old Rebel base to see if they were in good enough shape to be used again. All of the teams but one had already been given their assigned planet, and the last team stood before him, awaiting his orders. There was a scarcity of good - or even decent - pilots, and he still had many bases left that he had wanted checked. But it looked like he was going to be forced to just leave most of them. He stopped pacing.
"Han Solo," he said with a smile, "You and your team will go and try to repair the Hoth base."
Han gave him a grin, and then walked off. "Hey Chewie, did you finish with those repairs yet?" A series of strange howls answered him. Luke had to force himself not to laugh as he roughly translated it to, "No, because you're an imbicil and you told me the hyperdrive was broken! It was just a snapped cable!" Han hissed. "Why you little-" He sprang for Chewie just as the Wookie hit him over the head with a wrench.
One of the soldiers scratched his head as Chewie carried Han's prone form into the Millenium Falcon and dumped him uncerimoniously on the floor. "Well, looks like we're leaving..."
Short, I know. But I'm posting the next chapter in a couple seconds so HA! you can't complain about it being too short! Oh, and I know that the title's been 'Tears of Innocence' up till now... well, that was a typo on my part. I fixed it, and from now on it will be called 'Tears for Innocence.'
Oh, and no, I don't hate Han. I just like to use him for comic relief. Keep that in mind.
Suggested Reading: 'A Second Chance' or 'Second Chances,' I forget which one it is but it's the best Star Wars fanfic I've seen on this site so far. Can't remember the author's name either... gah... I can't remember anything that I didn't make up myself lol XD
The story so far: Ahsilna happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time, and now the gate between the Otherworlds is open forever. And what Otherworld did she fall into? Read and find out! Though I think that anyone with even half of a brain has already guessed, there is still the question of what planet in that Otherworld she's on right now...
- Where Ahsilna is -
The girl groaned as she opened her eyes. Her whole body felt like ice, and when she tried to stand up, she was blinded by the swirling snow. 'What the hell just happened?!' she thought to herself as she shielded her eyes with one hand and peered out across the barren wasteland before her. The whole land was covered in snow, and when she walked a few steps she realized that the ground on which she was standing was not dirt, but solid ice. 'It was October back home... am I dreaming? I probably just dozed off in school...' She gazed off into the distance. There was no sign of any people around, and she couldn't convince herself that it was really just a dream. It felt all too real.
"Is anyone here?" she yelled, "I'm lost! Can anybody help me? Please?" Her cry echoed off of the ice ridge nearby, but the whole world seemed silent but for the wailing of the wind. She thought bitterly to herself, 'Of course there's nobody living here... who would want to live on some damn planet with an eternal winter?! I'll probably just starve to death, considering my luck.' But she was freezing fast, and she knew that she'd have to keep moving if she didn't want to turn into a statue frozen just like everything else here. So she started walking towards the ridge for lack of any other landmarks, and moved as quickly as she could through the worsening blizzard...
- At the new rebel base -
Luke paced back and forth. He'd been appointed the leader of the current Rebel army by both the Senate and the Jedi council - by the Senate because he was well trained in the ways of war and was a natural leader, and by the council for the simple fact that he had no Padawan to train. He was trying to find one, of course, but most of the students at the Jedi academy who were strong enough in the force to become Padawans already had a master - so he had agreed to lead the war effort until he could find an apprentice.
He was sending out a couple of pilots and some soldiers to each old Rebel base to see if they were in good enough shape to be used again. All of the teams but one had already been given their assigned planet, and the last team stood before him, awaiting his orders. There was a scarcity of good - or even decent - pilots, and he still had many bases left that he had wanted checked. But it looked like he was going to be forced to just leave most of them. He stopped pacing.
"Han Solo," he said with a smile, "You and your team will go and try to repair the Hoth base."
Han gave him a grin, and then walked off. "Hey Chewie, did you finish with those repairs yet?" A series of strange howls answered him. Luke had to force himself not to laugh as he roughly translated it to, "No, because you're an imbicil and you told me the hyperdrive was broken! It was just a snapped cable!" Han hissed. "Why you little-" He sprang for Chewie just as the Wookie hit him over the head with a wrench.
One of the soldiers scratched his head as Chewie carried Han's prone form into the Millenium Falcon and dumped him uncerimoniously on the floor. "Well, looks like we're leaving..."
Short, I know. But I'm posting the next chapter in a couple seconds so HA! you can't complain about it being too short! Oh, and I know that the title's been 'Tears of Innocence' up till now... well, that was a typo on my part. I fixed it, and from now on it will be called 'Tears for Innocence.'