Hey, I'm back! After almost a week of thunderstorms when I was afraid to turn on my computer to write lest it get fried again ( -_-' yeah, my computer was actually hit by lightning before... ) I can finally write again. This chapter is an update chapter, meaning that there's no part of the story here. But wait! Before you go off and read some other story instead, consider this: I only do updates when it's absolutely nessecary to ask my readers questions that will determine in what direction this story will go. So if you don't read this, and you don't like the way the story goes next, you can't complain. Therefore, I suggest you read this.
But first, the thanks:
Culf ~ wow, that is an awesome name! I'm going to have someone later in the story call Ahsilna that, as sort of a joke nickname thing. Let's say that it's because it means "wanderer" or "strange one" or something like that ^_~
jedi monkey ~ thank you! Yes, we do have a lot in common... I love the way that you ended Hard to Break, Harder to Fix by the way. That was really awesome. Hmm, as for the names, well I found something that suits her but I think that I'll use some of those for other characters. They're all cool!
Reb ~ wow, that is so wierd. I was planning on her remembering parts of songs from her past life O.o most of them you guys probably won't recognize because since Ahsilna was Japanese, I'll mainly be using the English translations of songs from different animes (that's short for Japanese animation).
littlehorse82 ~ thanks for all the compliments! I almost did that, but I found another name that will work well too. Thanks for the suggestion though!
Jewelcatcher ~ thank you! By the way, I have a poem/song in poem form that I wrote and am planning to use at some point in here, and since you're so good at poetry could you possibly edit it for me? If so, let me know and I'll send it to you via email.
MFSbtrfly ~ thank you for the compliments and for the site reccommendations! I found the name that Ahsilna will go by now on one of them. I chose it because it means star and when Rans found her it was early in the morning so you could still see the stars just fading from the sky, and so he starts calling her that. The name: Shenandoah. Or Shen for short. I think that it really suits her. (Besides, Shen is easier to spell than Ahsilna...)
WHOHOO! I'M PAST THE TWENTY REVIEW MARK! YAY! *huggles readers* XD
Okay, well here's what I needed to ask you guys:
1 ~ Should Rans start teaching Shen how to pilot an X-Wing, use a blaster, etc? After all, they are going to war and if she stays at the base she'll be in the middle of it.
2 ~ I changed their ages so now Rans is 18 and Shen is 17. Should there be a little Shen/Rans romance in this? I promise not to make it so sweet that it's sickening *cough* unlike Episode Two *cough* If I start writing about them frolicking in the flowers, you have permission to kill me.
3 ~ I was thinking that Jacen should be evil because whoever his Master is, they're using some sort of mind control type thing on him. Then maybe eventually it gets so strong that it really does turn him evil. Good idea?
That's all! Please review and answer my questions! Oh, and if you want to be part of the mailing list that will automatically be notified whenever this story is updated, email me at aslyinn@yahoo.com, let me know, and I'll add you to the list. Thanks, and bye!
But first, the thanks:
Culf ~ wow, that is an awesome name! I'm going to have someone later in the story call Ahsilna that, as sort of a joke nickname thing. Let's say that it's because it means "wanderer" or "strange one" or something like that ^_~
jedi monkey ~ thank you! Yes, we do have a lot in common... I love the way that you ended Hard to Break, Harder to Fix by the way. That was really awesome. Hmm, as for the names, well I found something that suits her but I think that I'll use some of those for other characters. They're all cool!
Reb ~ wow, that is so wierd. I was planning on her remembering parts of songs from her past life O.o most of them you guys probably won't recognize because since Ahsilna was Japanese, I'll mainly be using the English translations of songs from different animes (that's short for Japanese animation).
littlehorse82 ~ thanks for all the compliments! I almost did that, but I found another name that will work well too. Thanks for the suggestion though!
Jewelcatcher ~ thank you! By the way, I have a poem/song in poem form that I wrote and am planning to use at some point in here, and since you're so good at poetry could you possibly edit it for me? If so, let me know and I'll send it to you via email.
MFSbtrfly ~ thank you for the compliments and for the site reccommendations! I found the name that Ahsilna will go by now on one of them. I chose it because it means star and when Rans found her it was early in the morning so you could still see the stars just fading from the sky, and so he starts calling her that. The name: Shenandoah. Or Shen for short. I think that it really suits her. (Besides, Shen is easier to spell than Ahsilna...)
WHOHOO! I'M PAST THE TWENTY REVIEW MARK! YAY! *huggles readers* XD
Okay, well here's what I needed to ask you guys:
1 ~ Should Rans start teaching Shen how to pilot an X-Wing, use a blaster, etc? After all, they are going to war and if she stays at the base she'll be in the middle of it.
2 ~ I changed their ages so now Rans is 18 and Shen is 17. Should there be a little Shen/Rans romance in this? I promise not to make it so sweet that it's sickening *cough* unlike Episode Two *cough* If I start writing about them frolicking in the flowers, you have permission to kill me.
3 ~ I was thinking that Jacen should be evil because whoever his Master is, they're using some sort of mind control type thing on him. Then maybe eventually it gets so strong that it really does turn him evil. Good idea?
That's all! Please review and answer my questions! Oh, and if you want to be part of the mailing list that will automatically be notified whenever this story is updated, email me at aslyinn@yahoo.com, let me know, and I'll add you to the list. Thanks, and bye!