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Updates:
First of I would like to point out that, Yes, my story IS an "OMG I got sucked into another dimension so I can glomp my favorite character", as figured out by Tigrin, thank you my dear. But I would like to clear for you is that this story takes place BEFORE the movie comes out, if you notice, it takes place to 2001 October 1st, or so it should. So I don't even Know the characters yet. But of course, I won't get angry about people saying "Oh boy, not another one of these stories." Cause I have perfect self- esteem sadly. I also want to say that, yes I have been making many spelling errors and I will be sure to look over my stories and fix spelling mistakes and take out unnecessary words/sentences/and so forth, like "their" instead of "there" and things like that, that was also pointed out by Tigrin, and yes I have also noticed I used "&" instead of spelling out "and" a whole lot in my stories and I have a VERY bad habit of doing that. I also seam to have used shorthand like "u"... So I promise to look over BOTH stories again and fix about everything I can find. I also read that, and I quote Tigrin"sometimes you repeat yourself a bit." Yes, I do seam to do that in the dream sequence, but be assured your talking to a 10th grader here, don't expect to much of a wow, but yes I will work on that a bit. I will also say that my friends & I do seam to "repeat each other" as Tigrin also said in her review "it's more like one character mirrored a couple times than three separate individuals." Soon in the story I will make different character backgrounds, as in the story my Friends and I are introduced with the crew (possibly in the 4th or 5th chapter).
Thank-you's go out to the only 2 people how cared to review my story for the hell of it:
I would first like to thank Mustang-grl, you my dear are the first to have written a review at all!! (Bows gracefully) I am in your dept, thank you very much for the support. I would also like to thank Tigrin, who was above all a BIG help in giving me suggestions which I have put up above. I am more use to writing fantasy stories than fanfiction, so yes my descriptions are very visual, they give "nice imagery" as she said, and I am most gifted in dream sequences it looks like. Thank you very much, BTW Tigrin, your story "Stationary" is quite nice, very touching.
Well that's all I've got to say, hope to get more reviews soon, and hopefully, get the other damn chapters up.
Peace, Love, and Chicken Grease.
Sarafina16
Updates:
First of I would like to point out that, Yes, my story IS an "OMG I got sucked into another dimension so I can glomp my favorite character", as figured out by Tigrin, thank you my dear. But I would like to clear for you is that this story takes place BEFORE the movie comes out, if you notice, it takes place to 2001 October 1st, or so it should. So I don't even Know the characters yet. But of course, I won't get angry about people saying "Oh boy, not another one of these stories." Cause I have perfect self- esteem sadly. I also want to say that, yes I have been making many spelling errors and I will be sure to look over my stories and fix spelling mistakes and take out unnecessary words/sentences/and so forth, like "their" instead of "there" and things like that, that was also pointed out by Tigrin, and yes I have also noticed I used "&" instead of spelling out "and" a whole lot in my stories and I have a VERY bad habit of doing that. I also seam to have used shorthand like "u"... So I promise to look over BOTH stories again and fix about everything I can find. I also read that, and I quote Tigrin"sometimes you repeat yourself a bit." Yes, I do seam to do that in the dream sequence, but be assured your talking to a 10th grader here, don't expect to much of a wow, but yes I will work on that a bit. I will also say that my friends & I do seam to "repeat each other" as Tigrin also said in her review "it's more like one character mirrored a couple times than three separate individuals." Soon in the story I will make different character backgrounds, as in the story my Friends and I are introduced with the crew (possibly in the 4th or 5th chapter).
Thank-you's go out to the only 2 people how cared to review my story for the hell of it:
I would first like to thank Mustang-grl, you my dear are the first to have written a review at all!! (Bows gracefully) I am in your dept, thank you very much for the support. I would also like to thank Tigrin, who was above all a BIG help in giving me suggestions which I have put up above. I am more use to writing fantasy stories than fanfiction, so yes my descriptions are very visual, they give "nice imagery" as she said, and I am most gifted in dream sequences it looks like. Thank you very much, BTW Tigrin, your story "Stationary" is quite nice, very touching.
Well that's all I've got to say, hope to get more reviews soon, and hopefully, get the other damn chapters up.
Peace, Love, and Chicken Grease.
Sarafina16