Okay, this is my story. I was planning on putting this infront of my first
chapter but. Oh well. I love Tolkien's work. He is by far my favorite
writer. I don't mean any harm to the story just like everyone else who does
remakes of it. We want to change things as in all books. True this story
sounds like the book and movie combined a lot it is still my own. (I don't
own anything except my foxixes Hee Hee ;))
Silence was heard until they passed into the Shire. ' Look straight ahead. That's Bag End, Underhill, Hobbiton, Shire,' Gandalf said,' Where Bilbo and Frodo Baggins live. That's the party I am tending to.' 'Wow!!!' gasped Kiara,' It's gorgeous, but that's a really long name.' 'It's called just Bag End, my wolf. Now about Frodo and Bilbo Baggins. It is their birthday. Both the same day. Today is a big event,' said Gandalf. Kiara turned around and stood up on her hind legs. She saw young hobbit children running after the cart calling Gandalf's name. She giggled and hopped in the back. She dug for a small firecracker. Finding the right one, she held it by the stick and she blew a small flame at the string. The firecracker hissed and then exploded. The children laughed and called for more. Kiara's face was blackened by the explosion. She hopped back in front and Gandalf chuckled at her. 'I told you not to touch,' chuckled Gandalf. Kiara gave him a sort of glare. She licked her paw and rubbed her face. After a hard rubbing it all came off. 'Next time, leave it to the professionals,' Gandalf said, and a few more fireworks exploded. 'I'm not a wizard,' Kiara replied with a smile,' all fire.' 'And no brain,' Gandalf laughed. Kiara turned around and saw a person cloaked all in white watching them. Beside him was a stick, but it was black with a shiny top. 'Strange,' she thought. 'Gandalf!' came a cheery voice,' You're late.' 'A wizard is never late. Nor is he early. He arrives precisely when he means too,' said Gandalf. A young hobbit hopped into the cart. 'Hello Frodo,' said Gandalf. 'Hello Gandalf,' said the young hobbit giving Gandalf a hug. Then he turned to Kiara and asked,' Who are you?' 'I'm Kiara,' said the foxix with a smile. 'Well, I'm Frodo. Your name sounds familiar. Do I know you?' said the young hobbit. 'You once did,' said Gandalf as if talking to himself,' You once did.' 'I dunno. If that's what Gandalf says then I must have,' said the foxix. 'How old are you?' asked Frodo. 'As a elf-maiden I'm fourteen, but I'm actually a foxix. An elfish golden foxix to be exact. As a foxix a year and a half,' said Kiara,' How 'bout you?' 'As a hobbit, twenty,' Frodo laughed. Kiara giggled. 'Are all the fireworks for your birthday?' asked Kiara. 'Mine and my Uncle Bilbo's,' said Frodo. 'Happy birthday then,' said Kiara. 'Thanks,' said Frodo. ' Are you twenty and going to be twenty-one or are you twenty today?' asked Kiara. 'Twenty today. That's young for a hobbit, I should mention. My uncle's going to be one-hundred and eleven. That's a respectable age for a hobbit,' said Frodo. ' Wow! That's a long time....but foxixes live longer,' said Kiara. She smiled. 'The Old Took, who was a part of my family was one hundred and thirty years old. Uncle Bilbo wants to beat that age,' said Frodo,' I just hope tonight he doesn't...' 'Does not what, dear Frodo,' said Gandalf. 'Leave,' Frodo replied sadly,' he's up to something.' 'Oh really?' asked Gandalf. 'Fine keep your secrets,' said Frodo,' Before you came around we Bagginses were highly respect. Never had any adventures or did anything unexpected.' 'If you're referring to the incident with the dragon I was barely involved. All I did was give your uncle a little....nudge out of the door,' said Gandalf. 'Sounds like a push,' said Kiara. 'Whatever you did, you've been labeled a disturber of the peace,' said Frodo. 'Oh really?' said Gandalf. He didn't seem surprised. Kiara giggled. 'Hobbits are boring creatures,' said Kiara with a yawn. 'What do you mean?' asked Frodo. 'I mean,you don't do anything exciting. Other then Bilbo, all you do is sit around and smoke on your pipeweed,' said Kiara,' Foxixes are more adventurous. We do a lot more interesting things.' 'Like what?' asked Frodo. 'Um...Like hunt and travel far distances and um... Adventure,' Kiara said. Frodo laughed,' Sounds like you've got a lot on your mind about adventuring.' Kiara looked him in the eyes. 'So do you young hobbit.' She spoke into his mind. 'So do you.' Frodo was spooked. He became a little bit unsure about her. 'Let's put all that behind us and be friends,' said Kiara. 'Okay. You're coming to the party correct,' said Frodo. 'Indeed,' Kiara smiled. 'And she shalln't cause any mischief, correct?' asked Gandalf. He gane her a stern look. 'I'll see what I can do. Young foxixes by nature are mischievous,' Kiara smiled. 'And you are the most mischievous of all,' said Gandalf. They pulled up to the house. It was full of chaos. People were running around finishing off deliveries. Kiara got out and walked up to the gate. Frodo and Gandalf went inside. Kiara read the sign before entering. It read: "No visitors except on party business." 'I guess I'm not aloud in then,' Kiara called to Gandalf and Frodo. When they didn't answer her, she followed anyway.
Silence was heard until they passed into the Shire. ' Look straight ahead. That's Bag End, Underhill, Hobbiton, Shire,' Gandalf said,' Where Bilbo and Frodo Baggins live. That's the party I am tending to.' 'Wow!!!' gasped Kiara,' It's gorgeous, but that's a really long name.' 'It's called just Bag End, my wolf. Now about Frodo and Bilbo Baggins. It is their birthday. Both the same day. Today is a big event,' said Gandalf. Kiara turned around and stood up on her hind legs. She saw young hobbit children running after the cart calling Gandalf's name. She giggled and hopped in the back. She dug for a small firecracker. Finding the right one, she held it by the stick and she blew a small flame at the string. The firecracker hissed and then exploded. The children laughed and called for more. Kiara's face was blackened by the explosion. She hopped back in front and Gandalf chuckled at her. 'I told you not to touch,' chuckled Gandalf. Kiara gave him a sort of glare. She licked her paw and rubbed her face. After a hard rubbing it all came off. 'Next time, leave it to the professionals,' Gandalf said, and a few more fireworks exploded. 'I'm not a wizard,' Kiara replied with a smile,' all fire.' 'And no brain,' Gandalf laughed. Kiara turned around and saw a person cloaked all in white watching them. Beside him was a stick, but it was black with a shiny top. 'Strange,' she thought. 'Gandalf!' came a cheery voice,' You're late.' 'A wizard is never late. Nor is he early. He arrives precisely when he means too,' said Gandalf. A young hobbit hopped into the cart. 'Hello Frodo,' said Gandalf. 'Hello Gandalf,' said the young hobbit giving Gandalf a hug. Then he turned to Kiara and asked,' Who are you?' 'I'm Kiara,' said the foxix with a smile. 'Well, I'm Frodo. Your name sounds familiar. Do I know you?' said the young hobbit. 'You once did,' said Gandalf as if talking to himself,' You once did.' 'I dunno. If that's what Gandalf says then I must have,' said the foxix. 'How old are you?' asked Frodo. 'As a elf-maiden I'm fourteen, but I'm actually a foxix. An elfish golden foxix to be exact. As a foxix a year and a half,' said Kiara,' How 'bout you?' 'As a hobbit, twenty,' Frodo laughed. Kiara giggled. 'Are all the fireworks for your birthday?' asked Kiara. 'Mine and my Uncle Bilbo's,' said Frodo. 'Happy birthday then,' said Kiara. 'Thanks,' said Frodo. ' Are you twenty and going to be twenty-one or are you twenty today?' asked Kiara. 'Twenty today. That's young for a hobbit, I should mention. My uncle's going to be one-hundred and eleven. That's a respectable age for a hobbit,' said Frodo. ' Wow! That's a long time....but foxixes live longer,' said Kiara. She smiled. 'The Old Took, who was a part of my family was one hundred and thirty years old. Uncle Bilbo wants to beat that age,' said Frodo,' I just hope tonight he doesn't...' 'Does not what, dear Frodo,' said Gandalf. 'Leave,' Frodo replied sadly,' he's up to something.' 'Oh really?' asked Gandalf. 'Fine keep your secrets,' said Frodo,' Before you came around we Bagginses were highly respect. Never had any adventures or did anything unexpected.' 'If you're referring to the incident with the dragon I was barely involved. All I did was give your uncle a little....nudge out of the door,' said Gandalf. 'Sounds like a push,' said Kiara. 'Whatever you did, you've been labeled a disturber of the peace,' said Frodo. 'Oh really?' said Gandalf. He didn't seem surprised. Kiara giggled. 'Hobbits are boring creatures,' said Kiara with a yawn. 'What do you mean?' asked Frodo. 'I mean,you don't do anything exciting. Other then Bilbo, all you do is sit around and smoke on your pipeweed,' said Kiara,' Foxixes are more adventurous. We do a lot more interesting things.' 'Like what?' asked Frodo. 'Um...Like hunt and travel far distances and um... Adventure,' Kiara said. Frodo laughed,' Sounds like you've got a lot on your mind about adventuring.' Kiara looked him in the eyes. 'So do you young hobbit.' She spoke into his mind. 'So do you.' Frodo was spooked. He became a little bit unsure about her. 'Let's put all that behind us and be friends,' said Kiara. 'Okay. You're coming to the party correct,' said Frodo. 'Indeed,' Kiara smiled. 'And she shalln't cause any mischief, correct?' asked Gandalf. He gane her a stern look. 'I'll see what I can do. Young foxixes by nature are mischievous,' Kiara smiled. 'And you are the most mischievous of all,' said Gandalf. They pulled up to the house. It was full of chaos. People were running around finishing off deliveries. Kiara got out and walked up to the gate. Frodo and Gandalf went inside. Kiara read the sign before entering. It read: "No visitors except on party business." 'I guess I'm not aloud in then,' Kiara called to Gandalf and Frodo. When they didn't answer her, she followed anyway.