This chapter has been revised as well, enjoy!
When Carlie played with Flammie's drum, as usual, Flammie appeared. Karl was terrified. It was really funny watching him claw on to the dragon's back. Flammie, however, didn't even feel it. "Why do you need to visit the temple anyway?"
"Beastmen no like monks, too passive. I want to know how I can officially become one"
"But the temple is only for priests"
"I'm hoping they'll have answers" he said as they landed in the Holy City of Wendel.
"We're here" Carlie said happily. "Last one to the temple is a smelly egg" Carlie said, still proving that she's a child. Kevin ran after her with Karl behind him. Out of the six heroes, those two were the ones that always acted like kids. It seems strange to Carlie because when Kevin and her were together, he acted like a little kid. But when he was with the others, he acted like a mature adult, but with a bad vocabulary. Though, on the battlefield, he was a ruthless monster. He and Duran were the strongest ones among them, but Duran had a sword, while Kevin fought with his bare hands and feet.
Kevin got there first because he was the fastest, when he got there, some of the priests started shaking in there boots remembering what the beastmen were able to do. "No fair!" Carlie complained.
They went inside of the temple "Where priest of light?" Kevin asked. Not quite remembering his way around.
"Grandpa's dead." Carlie said morbidly.
Kevin was a little stunned so it took him a minute before saying "Sorry".
"It's okay, some other priest runs place now"
"I need answers."
"Then ask him," Carlie said pointing to the new Priest of Light. The priest was certainly younger than the old priest but didn't have as much of an aura of wisdom as the old one did. This priest looked slightly arrogant even. "Go on, ask." Carlie said pushing Kevin in front of her.
"May the goddess of Mana bless you." The priest said. This seemed to almost be a one-line saying, as if he didn't mean it or care. "Oh boy! Another one. You might as well ask me your question"
"Kevin want to become monk but don't know how"
"Becoming a monk is very simple, all you have to do is spend 20 years of your life learning the ways of Mana here in this temple." He said, somewhat sarcastically. "However, your hands are too stained with blood, beastmen are never monks because they are to ruthless and impulsive. You need to go to every city and kingdom, and ask to be forgiven because of what your people did"
"What!? How do I do that!"
"Well normally, in your case, becoming a monk can take maybe 30 to 40 years. However, I'm sure you can get by the monsters without a problem considering your heritage. May the Goddess bless you" The priest said. Kevin understood this as a sign to leave. He knew that becoming a monk wouldn't be easy. Carlie felt very sorry for Kevin, she knew about what kind of discrimination he'll have to suffer.
As Kevin was leaving the temple, Carlie ran after him. "Wait!"
Kevin paused in his steps, "What?"
"Can Carlie come too?"
"No. You stay here at the temple. It's better if I go alone"
"Well, Carlie coming anyway whether you like it or not!" Carlie pouted.
Carlie's anger seemed to amuse Kevin to a certain degree. She was very unthreatening. "Okay, you can come"
"Yay! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" Carlie repeated hugging her best friend. The only friend she has left. The only person she has left. She knew that Kevin was about to go through a lot, but she wanted to be with him supporting him every step of the way.
Sorry, I continued this without anyone reviewing it. But I needed to at least get this chapter out. Anyway, this time, please review it. Even if you didn't like it. Criticize it for all I care. As long as it's constructive criticism.
When Carlie played with Flammie's drum, as usual, Flammie appeared. Karl was terrified. It was really funny watching him claw on to the dragon's back. Flammie, however, didn't even feel it. "Why do you need to visit the temple anyway?"
"Beastmen no like monks, too passive. I want to know how I can officially become one"
"But the temple is only for priests"
"I'm hoping they'll have answers" he said as they landed in the Holy City of Wendel.
"We're here" Carlie said happily. "Last one to the temple is a smelly egg" Carlie said, still proving that she's a child. Kevin ran after her with Karl behind him. Out of the six heroes, those two were the ones that always acted like kids. It seems strange to Carlie because when Kevin and her were together, he acted like a little kid. But when he was with the others, he acted like a mature adult, but with a bad vocabulary. Though, on the battlefield, he was a ruthless monster. He and Duran were the strongest ones among them, but Duran had a sword, while Kevin fought with his bare hands and feet.
Kevin got there first because he was the fastest, when he got there, some of the priests started shaking in there boots remembering what the beastmen were able to do. "No fair!" Carlie complained.
They went inside of the temple "Where priest of light?" Kevin asked. Not quite remembering his way around.
"Grandpa's dead." Carlie said morbidly.
Kevin was a little stunned so it took him a minute before saying "Sorry".
"It's okay, some other priest runs place now"
"I need answers."
"Then ask him," Carlie said pointing to the new Priest of Light. The priest was certainly younger than the old priest but didn't have as much of an aura of wisdom as the old one did. This priest looked slightly arrogant even. "Go on, ask." Carlie said pushing Kevin in front of her.
"May the goddess of Mana bless you." The priest said. This seemed to almost be a one-line saying, as if he didn't mean it or care. "Oh boy! Another one. You might as well ask me your question"
"Kevin want to become monk but don't know how"
"Becoming a monk is very simple, all you have to do is spend 20 years of your life learning the ways of Mana here in this temple." He said, somewhat sarcastically. "However, your hands are too stained with blood, beastmen are never monks because they are to ruthless and impulsive. You need to go to every city and kingdom, and ask to be forgiven because of what your people did"
"What!? How do I do that!"
"Well normally, in your case, becoming a monk can take maybe 30 to 40 years. However, I'm sure you can get by the monsters without a problem considering your heritage. May the Goddess bless you" The priest said. Kevin understood this as a sign to leave. He knew that becoming a monk wouldn't be easy. Carlie felt very sorry for Kevin, she knew about what kind of discrimination he'll have to suffer.
As Kevin was leaving the temple, Carlie ran after him. "Wait!"
Kevin paused in his steps, "What?"
"Can Carlie come too?"
"No. You stay here at the temple. It's better if I go alone"
"Well, Carlie coming anyway whether you like it or not!" Carlie pouted.
Carlie's anger seemed to amuse Kevin to a certain degree. She was very unthreatening. "Okay, you can come"
"Yay! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!" Carlie repeated hugging her best friend. The only friend she has left. The only person she has left. She knew that Kevin was about to go through a lot, but she wanted to be with him supporting him every step of the way.
Sorry, I continued this without anyone reviewing it. But I needed to at least get this chapter out. Anyway, this time, please review it. Even if you didn't like it. Criticize it for all I care. As long as it's constructive criticism.