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own 2 characters in my story though, so don't steal them!
A/N: This is my first Yu-gi-oh fic, bear with me. I hope it turns out ok. Oh yes, and soon I will have a picture of my character up on my webpage. Oh yeah, this prolouge WILL be updated when I get a name for the card. But only this prolouge, unless by then I already have the 1st chapter.. Anyway, read on! *******************
PUNISHMENT OF ARCHAI SIN
PROLOUGE "I call out the Blue Eyes White Dragon! You will surely be finished now old man." the girl smugly said. The elderly man only smirked and said, "Don't be so sure of that Goddess. I've seen the way you treat your monsters. Fate will surely be upon you soon enough."
"Hmph, we'll see Sypris, we'll see. Now Blue Eyes, destroy the Dark Magician!" Goddess Yumiz said as the Blue Eyes White Dragon arose from the stone. However, Blue Eyes did nothing. Yumiz got angered by this action, "BLUE EYES! NOW! BEFORE I HAVE TO DESTROY YOU AGAIN WITH ANOTHER MONSTER!" But Blue Eyes did nothing but growl.
"Well well, Yumiz, it seems as though your dragon is not as faithful to you as you would like, hm Yumiz?" "Oh shut up Sypris! I will defeat you if it's the last thing I do!" "Now now, your temper is showing again. However, since your Blue Eyes refuses to attack, I will. Now Dark Magician, attack Yumiz's Blue Eyes White Dragon!" shouted Sypris.
Unfortuantly for the Goddess, Yumiz, that last attack wiped out her last hopeful monster. "As you see Yumiz, you have no more monsters left to defend yourself, meaning that I win. Our stakes were high, but yours higher," began Sypris as he stroked his long gray and white beard, "Now then.," he smirks evily, "YOU WILL SPEND ALL ETERNITY AS A DUEL MONSTER YOURSELF TO KNOW HOW THEY SHOULD BE TREATED! Until then, enjoy your battles and hope that you win, for you will be fighting them yourself." "What? What are you talking about you old man! Oh no..NO! YOU CAN'T DO TH." Yumiz was cut off as Sypris, being a more powerful God, captured her into a dueling monsters stone, also brainwashing her to fight as a duel monster would.
He began to walk away, but turned back, "I am sorry my daughter, but you must learn your ways, for it is a sin to treat duel monsters the way you have. As time passes, your heart will grow. I hope." He sighs, "As I see into the future, these stones will soon be gone and replaced with small thin plastic material, you would not since you are a spirit trapped in stone, so I will place yet another spell on you. As the stones will be renewed, your stone will be instantly turned into whatever it is that they call those plastic things. Good-Bye." The God, Sypris turns away and leaves to never be seen again. Or will he? ***************** Please review. If I have any facts wrong about the ancient way of playing, please tell me, but do not flame me. This is my first Yu-gi-oh fic, remember? Anyway, review if you want. -DBZsista
A/N: This is my first Yu-gi-oh fic, bear with me. I hope it turns out ok. Oh yes, and soon I will have a picture of my character up on my webpage. Oh yeah, this prolouge WILL be updated when I get a name for the card. But only this prolouge, unless by then I already have the 1st chapter.. Anyway, read on! *******************
PUNISHMENT OF ARCHAI SIN
PROLOUGE "I call out the Blue Eyes White Dragon! You will surely be finished now old man." the girl smugly said. The elderly man only smirked and said, "Don't be so sure of that Goddess. I've seen the way you treat your monsters. Fate will surely be upon you soon enough."
"Hmph, we'll see Sypris, we'll see. Now Blue Eyes, destroy the Dark Magician!" Goddess Yumiz said as the Blue Eyes White Dragon arose from the stone. However, Blue Eyes did nothing. Yumiz got angered by this action, "BLUE EYES! NOW! BEFORE I HAVE TO DESTROY YOU AGAIN WITH ANOTHER MONSTER!" But Blue Eyes did nothing but growl.
"Well well, Yumiz, it seems as though your dragon is not as faithful to you as you would like, hm Yumiz?" "Oh shut up Sypris! I will defeat you if it's the last thing I do!" "Now now, your temper is showing again. However, since your Blue Eyes refuses to attack, I will. Now Dark Magician, attack Yumiz's Blue Eyes White Dragon!" shouted Sypris.
Unfortuantly for the Goddess, Yumiz, that last attack wiped out her last hopeful monster. "As you see Yumiz, you have no more monsters left to defend yourself, meaning that I win. Our stakes were high, but yours higher," began Sypris as he stroked his long gray and white beard, "Now then.," he smirks evily, "YOU WILL SPEND ALL ETERNITY AS A DUEL MONSTER YOURSELF TO KNOW HOW THEY SHOULD BE TREATED! Until then, enjoy your battles and hope that you win, for you will be fighting them yourself." "What? What are you talking about you old man! Oh no..NO! YOU CAN'T DO TH." Yumiz was cut off as Sypris, being a more powerful God, captured her into a dueling monsters stone, also brainwashing her to fight as a duel monster would.
He began to walk away, but turned back, "I am sorry my daughter, but you must learn your ways, for it is a sin to treat duel monsters the way you have. As time passes, your heart will grow. I hope." He sighs, "As I see into the future, these stones will soon be gone and replaced with small thin plastic material, you would not since you are a spirit trapped in stone, so I will place yet another spell on you. As the stones will be renewed, your stone will be instantly turned into whatever it is that they call those plastic things. Good-Bye." The God, Sypris turns away and leaves to never be seen again. Or will he? ***************** Please review. If I have any facts wrong about the ancient way of playing, please tell me, but do not flame me. This is my first Yu-gi-oh fic, remember? Anyway, review if you want. -DBZsista