Making it Better
A/N: ok so since I wrote this awhile back ago I wrote it sorta like a script. I'm trying to change it as I'm typing this up and making it more into my kinda better style you could say haha. So when you see it like a script kinda that's when I couldn't think of anything and just went with the other version lol I'm doing another story most of you that are giving me reviews know since I see you on the other story too haha thanks by the way!! You guys are a big help and support lol. So not to bribe you know the drill any comments or helpful things just review me and leave me a note or... you know what will happen [no!! this isnt a threat..I dont think so lol!! but just review me lol!!] To everyone that has: Thank you!!! I love you guys!!! haha. I'll get cracking to the other story's new chapter; Needing You Ch.5 after I finish this one. Byee hope you enjoy!! -Sali
So..on with the story...
Max looked at Liz as she headed over to the drivers side. He'd never seen her smileso bright as he did now. Something in his gut told him things were going to get better. He just knew it. 'So..are we going to figure out what were going to do for our anniversary tomorrow?!?' Smiling at her as he saw her stop and look up at him. * God I missed her.* 'Well?!?' waiting for her response as she started the jeep. He climbed in the back even though he didn't hear a response from her. Liz looked up at him wondering why he was doing that as he had his arms around her while she drove. Nothing else was said. Nothing could be said. Max and Liz were content with everything at the moment. * I've missed this* as Max hugged her more from behind..*God this is so great!!* After awhile Max asked what they were doing again. They'd headed out of town into the desert and he was wondering where she was taking him. ' You're not going to abduct me are you Liz Parker?!?' making her smile and laugh at him. She looked up and said with a brillance that just lifted his spirit even more. ' Well..we're going to straighten things out before tomorrow. How's that sound to you?? And me abduct you?!? ...Maybe...' laughing as she saw his grin in the mirror. 'I love you' he said to her as he started to massage her shoulders, desperately trying to distract her. *Which was already working * Liz thought moaning at how good it felt. ' You shouldn't do that while I'm driving..'
Max smiled. ' You shouldn't do this to me period '. Liz smiled and stopped the car. They we're as far in the desert as they could get to attain some privacy. * No one will come what's the harm* she thought as she climbed in the back of the jeep into Max's welcoming lap. She could see the pure joy and toture he wanted to give and take from her. He clenched her hip and brought her head down to his, about ready to give in to the temptation of her scent and kiss her, Liz leaned in a little closer and Max could feel her soft breathe against his skin. Liz slightly kissed his cheek and then his forehead and all too soon Max heard her speak. ' Max, we have to talk about us. We're jumping the gun a little don't you think??' Max smiled and moaned as Liz's lips played with his ear. 'Umm.. ok. But if you wannt talk you have to stop... what you're.. doing right.... Liz...' Liz looked up at Max and smiled. She started to massage his shoulders lightly then ran her hands down his arms gathering his hands in hers. She leaned down so that she could hear his heartbeat and rested her head lightly on his chest that he felt like he couldn't feel her at all. *Maybe that's because she's making me high... of her..God did I miss her. Doing this and.. mmm. Everything else she does to me* Max thought as Liz looked up and kissed his cheek as he did hers. After she smiled and got up and turned around so that she was in the drivers seat again. Max moaned in protest. ' Uhh..no, Come back.' he said in a low tonely matter. Liz had never let go of Max's hand. She was still holding on to him as she started to drive again. 'Don't worry Were almost there.' Max looked up as if broken from her trance.' Liz where are we going?!?' Liz looked back into the rear view mirror and smiled at him. ' You'll see..'
After a few minutes the car got silent again, but this time it wasn't tension that filled the air but a sense of comfort that hadn't been there between Max and Liz for a long time. After that came thought came to Liz's mind she looked in the rear view mirror and realized tha tMax had fallen asleep, but he seemed so relaxed holding Liz's hand. She realized that after 15 minutes she had reached her "destination", no where in particular in the desert. She had a new location to tell Max her secret, because before she knew Max remembered their "anniversary" she knew sh ewas going to tell him the truth about everything. Today. He deserved the truth ,and now she needed to head to that "some dive" outside Phoenix, AR. * This trip might take awhile.. Thank God tomorrow's Friday, and our anniversary..* Liz smiled, the thought that Max said "our anniversary" just amd her get excited inside. * I should call Isable to tell Max's parents he's okay and with me...oh and my dad. Just in case.* Liz pulled over and climbed into the backseat, gently moving Max's head so that instead of him using her bag and his jacket as a pillow he could use her lap. Max could sense the movement and bolted upright hitting his head on the bar above him in one fast motion. Liz smiled in a weak sympathetic way and reached for him to lie back down.
Max: Liz? Where are we?!? Liz??
Reaching over and turning his face to hers as she made him lie down she said, 'Shh.. I'm right here.' grabbing Max's hands, sensing that he was worried for her. When Max looked at her, he smiled as if reassured everything would be okay. He leaned his head against her again and tried to go back to sleep. Smiling Liz leaned down and kissed his forehead as he closed his eyes.
Max: Are we there yet?!?
Liz: No not yet. I thought of somewhere better then here. I'll wkae you when were there.
Max: Want me to drive?
Liz: No. You go to sleep. Seems like you haven't been sleeping in forever..
Max: Practically.' Smiling as he thought about his sleepless nights thinking about Liz.
Liz smiled down at him. Bringing her hand down to Max's chest and rubbing it in a circular form. 'Sleep..' she kissed him again as she reached for her cell phone. She punched in Max's home number and looked at the clock. *5pm. She should be home bye now.* After three rings Isable picked up.
Isabel: Hello?
Liz: Isabel, hi, its me Liz.
Isabel: Oh, hey, I'm in the middle of something. Max was suppose to meet me and Michael at the Crashdown but he never showed up. Wait.. were'd you suppose to have a shift today Liz? Have you seen Max?!?
Max suddenly looked up at Liz asking silently, 'What are you doing?'
Liz: Calling your familiy so they don't worry, go back to sleep!' Laughing as he just smiled at her and got more comfortable at her lap. She combed her hands through his hair and pulled his jacket over him. Making sure he was really with her. * God I can't believe this..*
Isabel: Liz? Was that Max?!Liz. Did something happen? Are you okay?
Liz: Yeah.. I'm fine. We're just going for a drive, actually I just wanted to tell you not to worry, that Max is with me. Everything's fine Isabel.
Isabel: Why is he with you?
Liz laughed and looked at Max's face. He seemed so content. So relaxed. He hasn't looked this relaxed since..well since Tess first came.
Isabel: Liz??
Liz: Umm..he needed a vacation and deserved some truth.
Isabel: The truth? about what?!?
Liz: He didn't tell you?
Isabel: Tell me what? Liz, you tell me. What's going on?
Suddenly Max took the phone from Liz. ' Nothing, Isabel. Nevermind. Just tell mom and dad..' Liz smiled and took her cell phone back hitting Max playfully.' Isabel. Just tell your parents that we, I mean, Max won't be back until Sunday, at the latest okay?'
Isabel: But we still have school tomorrow. What about that science test you two have tomorrow?
Liz: So we'll both get an F. Don't worry, if Max starts to fail. I'll tutor him.' Liz heard Isabel snort. Liz rolled her eyes at Isabel's responce.
Isabel: I'll bet you'll tutor him.
Liz: Hey. I may love your brother to death, but when it comes to education, I'm very serious with him.
Isabel: Which is why he missed his science class today right?
Liz: The teacher wasnt there! ' Liz said in defense.
Isabel: So what you kidnapped him??
Liz: More like "abducted" him.' Laughing as she heard Isabel laugh too. ' I just wanted to tell you that Max is fine, and we won't be home until Sunday, at the latest, and tell Maria that I'm fine okay??
Isabel: Okay, just take care of yourself. Max too.
Liz: I would never hurt your brother you know that..
Isabel: I thought otherwise when I heard about you and Kyle Valenti.. is it true?!?
Liz: Goodbye Isabel.' hanging up shaking her head at Isabel's nosyiness' She had to straighten things out with Max before she could straighten things out with anybody else. Liz looked at Max, who was looking at her. She smiled at him.
Max: Why'd you call Isabel?
Liz: We might be gone for a couple of days. I'm thinking latest Sunday..That okay with you?
Max: Where are you taking me, Liz Parker?' smiling up at her..
Liz: I'm taking you to a special place. After I call my father for money. Hold on.' Liz called her father to wire money to her. She laughed when she heard his response.
Mr.Parker: Where are you going?
Liz: Arizona.
Mr.Parker: Arizona? Do his parents know?
Liz: Yeah. They trust me not to kill or hurt their son.
Mr.Parker: Make sure you dont. Because then its on me.
Liz: I know. Just wire the money dad to Phoenix, Arizona. Call me when you do..Then I'll get it and see what happens from there.
Mr.Parker: Ok. Take care Liz. Come home soon..
Liz: I always do. Love you dad.
After Liz made some more phone calls she started to drive again. * Only where to?? "Some dive outside Phoenix" .. Like that'll help.* It was about 7:30pm when instant flashes began to over take her coming from now where. Making Liz react instantly..
-Flash-
Liz and Future Max dancing on her balcony before he left.
"We danced all night long"..." Some dive outside Phoenix"
A small restaurant with old boots like in 50's style. Looking in Liz saw two people dancing to ' I Shall Believe'
"I love you.."
"I love you too...Mrs.Evans. Liz Parker Evans, I like the sound of that"
"So do I."
-end Flash-
As soon as Liz cam crashing back into reality, she almost crashed into a coming truck. She quickly pulled over and jumped out to compose herself.. *Breathe.. just breathe* Max had been asleep since she had called home. She didn't think he would wake up now. She walked out over to a large rock and quickly sat down. Then she heard someone talk to her and jumped when she saw who it was..* Speak of the devil. I thought he left..* Future Max sat down with her and held her to him...'Hey Liz..'. Looking up Liz stared at him as she looked bewildered to what was happening..* Oh God..someone help me..*
to be continued..
ok so what do you think?? any comments? maybe some help? though I do like comments haha. review me so I can put up the next chapter!! oh and check out Needing You.. chapter 5 will be up soon for that as well.. after I write it haha byee..-Sali
A/N: ok so since I wrote this awhile back ago I wrote it sorta like a script. I'm trying to change it as I'm typing this up and making it more into my kinda better style you could say haha. So when you see it like a script kinda that's when I couldn't think of anything and just went with the other version lol I'm doing another story most of you that are giving me reviews know since I see you on the other story too haha thanks by the way!! You guys are a big help and support lol. So not to bribe you know the drill any comments or helpful things just review me and leave me a note or... you know what will happen [no!! this isnt a threat..I dont think so lol!! but just review me lol!!] To everyone that has: Thank you!!! I love you guys!!! haha. I'll get cracking to the other story's new chapter; Needing You Ch.5 after I finish this one. Byee hope you enjoy!! -Sali
So..on with the story...
Max looked at Liz as she headed over to the drivers side. He'd never seen her smileso bright as he did now. Something in his gut told him things were going to get better. He just knew it. 'So..are we going to figure out what were going to do for our anniversary tomorrow?!?' Smiling at her as he saw her stop and look up at him. * God I missed her.* 'Well?!?' waiting for her response as she started the jeep. He climbed in the back even though he didn't hear a response from her. Liz looked up at him wondering why he was doing that as he had his arms around her while she drove. Nothing else was said. Nothing could be said. Max and Liz were content with everything at the moment. * I've missed this* as Max hugged her more from behind..*God this is so great!!* After awhile Max asked what they were doing again. They'd headed out of town into the desert and he was wondering where she was taking him. ' You're not going to abduct me are you Liz Parker?!?' making her smile and laugh at him. She looked up and said with a brillance that just lifted his spirit even more. ' Well..we're going to straighten things out before tomorrow. How's that sound to you?? And me abduct you?!? ...Maybe...' laughing as she saw his grin in the mirror. 'I love you' he said to her as he started to massage her shoulders, desperately trying to distract her. *Which was already working * Liz thought moaning at how good it felt. ' You shouldn't do that while I'm driving..'
Max smiled. ' You shouldn't do this to me period '. Liz smiled and stopped the car. They we're as far in the desert as they could get to attain some privacy. * No one will come what's the harm* she thought as she climbed in the back of the jeep into Max's welcoming lap. She could see the pure joy and toture he wanted to give and take from her. He clenched her hip and brought her head down to his, about ready to give in to the temptation of her scent and kiss her, Liz leaned in a little closer and Max could feel her soft breathe against his skin. Liz slightly kissed his cheek and then his forehead and all too soon Max heard her speak. ' Max, we have to talk about us. We're jumping the gun a little don't you think??' Max smiled and moaned as Liz's lips played with his ear. 'Umm.. ok. But if you wannt talk you have to stop... what you're.. doing right.... Liz...' Liz looked up at Max and smiled. She started to massage his shoulders lightly then ran her hands down his arms gathering his hands in hers. She leaned down so that she could hear his heartbeat and rested her head lightly on his chest that he felt like he couldn't feel her at all. *Maybe that's because she's making me high... of her..God did I miss her. Doing this and.. mmm. Everything else she does to me* Max thought as Liz looked up and kissed his cheek as he did hers. After she smiled and got up and turned around so that she was in the drivers seat again. Max moaned in protest. ' Uhh..no, Come back.' he said in a low tonely matter. Liz had never let go of Max's hand. She was still holding on to him as she started to drive again. 'Don't worry Were almost there.' Max looked up as if broken from her trance.' Liz where are we going?!?' Liz looked back into the rear view mirror and smiled at him. ' You'll see..'
After a few minutes the car got silent again, but this time it wasn't tension that filled the air but a sense of comfort that hadn't been there between Max and Liz for a long time. After that came thought came to Liz's mind she looked in the rear view mirror and realized tha tMax had fallen asleep, but he seemed so relaxed holding Liz's hand. She realized that after 15 minutes she had reached her "destination", no where in particular in the desert. She had a new location to tell Max her secret, because before she knew Max remembered their "anniversary" she knew sh ewas going to tell him the truth about everything. Today. He deserved the truth ,and now she needed to head to that "some dive" outside Phoenix, AR. * This trip might take awhile.. Thank God tomorrow's Friday, and our anniversary..* Liz smiled, the thought that Max said "our anniversary" just amd her get excited inside. * I should call Isable to tell Max's parents he's okay and with me...oh and my dad. Just in case.* Liz pulled over and climbed into the backseat, gently moving Max's head so that instead of him using her bag and his jacket as a pillow he could use her lap. Max could sense the movement and bolted upright hitting his head on the bar above him in one fast motion. Liz smiled in a weak sympathetic way and reached for him to lie back down.
Max: Liz? Where are we?!? Liz??
Reaching over and turning his face to hers as she made him lie down she said, 'Shh.. I'm right here.' grabbing Max's hands, sensing that he was worried for her. When Max looked at her, he smiled as if reassured everything would be okay. He leaned his head against her again and tried to go back to sleep. Smiling Liz leaned down and kissed his forehead as he closed his eyes.
Max: Are we there yet?!?
Liz: No not yet. I thought of somewhere better then here. I'll wkae you when were there.
Max: Want me to drive?
Liz: No. You go to sleep. Seems like you haven't been sleeping in forever..
Max: Practically.' Smiling as he thought about his sleepless nights thinking about Liz.
Liz smiled down at him. Bringing her hand down to Max's chest and rubbing it in a circular form. 'Sleep..' she kissed him again as she reached for her cell phone. She punched in Max's home number and looked at the clock. *5pm. She should be home bye now.* After three rings Isable picked up.
Isabel: Hello?
Liz: Isabel, hi, its me Liz.
Isabel: Oh, hey, I'm in the middle of something. Max was suppose to meet me and Michael at the Crashdown but he never showed up. Wait.. were'd you suppose to have a shift today Liz? Have you seen Max?!?
Max suddenly looked up at Liz asking silently, 'What are you doing?'
Liz: Calling your familiy so they don't worry, go back to sleep!' Laughing as he just smiled at her and got more comfortable at her lap. She combed her hands through his hair and pulled his jacket over him. Making sure he was really with her. * God I can't believe this..*
Isabel: Liz? Was that Max?!Liz. Did something happen? Are you okay?
Liz: Yeah.. I'm fine. We're just going for a drive, actually I just wanted to tell you not to worry, that Max is with me. Everything's fine Isabel.
Isabel: Why is he with you?
Liz laughed and looked at Max's face. He seemed so content. So relaxed. He hasn't looked this relaxed since..well since Tess first came.
Isabel: Liz??
Liz: Umm..he needed a vacation and deserved some truth.
Isabel: The truth? about what?!?
Liz: He didn't tell you?
Isabel: Tell me what? Liz, you tell me. What's going on?
Suddenly Max took the phone from Liz. ' Nothing, Isabel. Nevermind. Just tell mom and dad..' Liz smiled and took her cell phone back hitting Max playfully.' Isabel. Just tell your parents that we, I mean, Max won't be back until Sunday, at the latest okay?'
Isabel: But we still have school tomorrow. What about that science test you two have tomorrow?
Liz: So we'll both get an F. Don't worry, if Max starts to fail. I'll tutor him.' Liz heard Isabel snort. Liz rolled her eyes at Isabel's responce.
Isabel: I'll bet you'll tutor him.
Liz: Hey. I may love your brother to death, but when it comes to education, I'm very serious with him.
Isabel: Which is why he missed his science class today right?
Liz: The teacher wasnt there! ' Liz said in defense.
Isabel: So what you kidnapped him??
Liz: More like "abducted" him.' Laughing as she heard Isabel laugh too. ' I just wanted to tell you that Max is fine, and we won't be home until Sunday, at the latest, and tell Maria that I'm fine okay??
Isabel: Okay, just take care of yourself. Max too.
Liz: I would never hurt your brother you know that..
Isabel: I thought otherwise when I heard about you and Kyle Valenti.. is it true?!?
Liz: Goodbye Isabel.' hanging up shaking her head at Isabel's nosyiness' She had to straighten things out with Max before she could straighten things out with anybody else. Liz looked at Max, who was looking at her. She smiled at him.
Max: Why'd you call Isabel?
Liz: We might be gone for a couple of days. I'm thinking latest Sunday..That okay with you?
Max: Where are you taking me, Liz Parker?' smiling up at her..
Liz: I'm taking you to a special place. After I call my father for money. Hold on.' Liz called her father to wire money to her. She laughed when she heard his response.
Mr.Parker: Where are you going?
Liz: Arizona.
Mr.Parker: Arizona? Do his parents know?
Liz: Yeah. They trust me not to kill or hurt their son.
Mr.Parker: Make sure you dont. Because then its on me.
Liz: I know. Just wire the money dad to Phoenix, Arizona. Call me when you do..Then I'll get it and see what happens from there.
Mr.Parker: Ok. Take care Liz. Come home soon..
Liz: I always do. Love you dad.
After Liz made some more phone calls she started to drive again. * Only where to?? "Some dive outside Phoenix" .. Like that'll help.* It was about 7:30pm when instant flashes began to over take her coming from now where. Making Liz react instantly..
-Flash-
Liz and Future Max dancing on her balcony before he left.
"We danced all night long"..." Some dive outside Phoenix"
A small restaurant with old boots like in 50's style. Looking in Liz saw two people dancing to ' I Shall Believe'
"I love you.."
"I love you too...Mrs.Evans. Liz Parker Evans, I like the sound of that"
"So do I."
-end Flash-
As soon as Liz cam crashing back into reality, she almost crashed into a coming truck. She quickly pulled over and jumped out to compose herself.. *Breathe.. just breathe* Max had been asleep since she had called home. She didn't think he would wake up now. She walked out over to a large rock and quickly sat down. Then she heard someone talk to her and jumped when she saw who it was..* Speak of the devil. I thought he left..* Future Max sat down with her and held her to him...'Hey Liz..'. Looking up Liz stared at him as she looked bewildered to what was happening..* Oh God..someone help me..*
to be continued..
ok so what do you think?? any comments? maybe some help? though I do like comments haha. review me so I can put up the next chapter!! oh and check out Needing You.. chapter 5 will be up soon for that as well.. after I write it haha byee..-Sali