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I walked down some city streets until I came across a motel I went to the front desk and got a room I had to use a fake ID but I used up the little cash I had left. I now had 5$ left to my name. I went to my room and locked the door behind me I sighed sitting down at a small table. And pulled out my laptop. I set it down on the table and logged onto my email. I knew the Gundam Pilots emails from some recent hacking. When I had fallen asleep I had calmed down about the flash backs though they were still haunting me.
I began to type a letter to the Gundam pilots. I backspaced and rewrote the letter I finally finished and it read:
Dear Pilots, Thank you for the gift no one has ever given me anything this nice or anything at all everything I have ever gotten had a price including money. I hope to find a normal job and get some money Right now I only have 5 bucks to my name but I can make it last. I'm sorry if I freaked you guys out. I had some flashbacks that really scared me. Hope to see you all soon I must being going. I wish you All the best and good luck on your missions. Angel
I hit send and logged off. I sat back in the chair and turned on the small TV in the room. I found a music channel that played my music. I liked country music I then went into the bathroom and turned the shower on to hot while I waited for it to warm up I closed the window shades and curtains I then went into the bathroom and took a shower. I came out of the bathroom Dressed with a towel on my shoulders and my hair up in a dripping bun I laid my trench coat down on the bed.
I took my hair down and combed it out with a small hairbrush when I was done I stuck it in the pocket it of my trench coat and put my hair back up into a bun. I heard a click behind me I turned around slowly there in front of me stood some men from OZ "Can I help you" I asked in a whisper. "You are to come with us His Excellency Trieze Kushrenada would like to see you." Said one of the four. "Alright" I said I grabbed my things and followed the leader of the group.
A guy stood on each side of me they acted as if they were expecting me to run. They took me to a truck and I got into the back seat with one two of them and two of them sat in the front. I pulled out a laptop and checked my mail I saw the Gundam pilots had emailed me back but I didn't want to read it in front of these guys so I just turned it off and put it away. After a small ride we got off and I was taken to Trieze's office I sat down in the chair that was there for me. "I would like you to assassinate the Gundam pilots for me" said Trieze "I'm sorry I can't help you" I said. He turned around. "Why not?" he asked simply. "I tried for someone else and failed" I said calmly. "You will do it" he said. "I'm sorry sir but I must decline the job" I said. "This is an order" he said. "Then I do not accept your order" "You will in time"
I got frustrated with him and walked out. Once I was off of the base I broke into a run until I was deep into some woods she opened the laptop and read the emails from the Gundam pilots but then I heard voice I shut the laptop and put it away beginning to run Trieze was planning to make me kill them and then kill me I figured it out. He gave to many hints. :I pulled out a cell phone from my pocket and called Quatre. "Hello" answered Quatre. "Uh hey.I uh need some help I'm being chased by OZ and if my allergies are right then there using dogs to keep track of me and I can' seem to throw them off my trail" I said quickly while running "I need help and." the phone line went dead on Quatre's end .
The OZ dogs caught up to me and began attacking me in moments I was on the ground with lots of small cuts from their bites the Soldiers drug me up and threw me into a cell by myself I laid there only half conscious. She still had her cell phone in her hand she called Quatre back "Quatre help me you guys are the only ones I know who to call I don't have anyone else I can't get up I'm in an OZ jail cell" I whispered into the phone and hung up. I closed my eyes and passed out.
I wake up in a bed the covers brought over top of me up to my chest but my arms were on top of the covers. Opened my eyes slightly to bright lights and figured I was in a hospital. I thought about what happened and remembered being in and out of conscious and being beat by the OZ soldiers and I remember Quatre and the other pilots braking in and getting me out.
It was all blurry. I opened my eyes even more and looked around. I was in a room by myself a nurse and doctor came in and began talking to me telling me about my shape all I could do was nod I understood but didn't have the strength to say anything. After checking me over the doctor and nurse left. I sighed and forced myself into a sitting position. "You know your going to hurt yourself doing that onna" said Wufei walking in. A;; the pilots walked in and sat around the room casually.
"Whatever" I whispered my throat was dry and my voice was nearly gone. "So you want to tell us why Oz was capturing someone who wasn't a Gundam pilot" asked Duo. "Trieze wanted me to kill you guys and I said I couldn't that I had already tried and failed and that was his way of forcing me to do it" I said. "Are you sure you don't want to become a Gundam pilot?" asked Trowa.
"No! I will never become a Gundam pilot" I said I got angry and tensed up and it took energy making me pass out. My dream was a flash back.
~Begin Flash Back~
There was a knock on the door then it was opened the boy who was only a couple of years older then me came in. "I brought you some bandages" He said. I didn't replay to him I just sat there staring off into space he set the bandages on the floor then looked at me. "I'm sorry about what happened to you" he said. I still didn't reply.
"Hey are you ok?" he said. I sighed and finally responded, "Yeah I'm fine" I said. "Are you supposed to be a Gundam pilot?" he asked. "Just get out of here before you get into trouble" I said still staring off into space. "Are you" he asked. "Just get out of here before you get into trouble!" with that he left I crawled onto the floor and to the bandages and started to try to patch myself up though it wasn't working out very well.
I felt tired and tried to pull myself up onto the cot but I couldn't up onto it. Instead I lay down on the cold floor even if it froze me I was at least laying down. I stared into space when my watch beeped I looked at it and sighed it was 3Am according to my watch. Time didn't matter it was all the same it was all dark cold and painful. I fell asleep on the floor after a few minutes
~End Flash Back~
I woke up back in the hospital bed in a cold sweat. Everyone was crowded around me. "Why are you guys crowded around me?" I asked raising an eyebrow. "Because you passed out and were screaming in your unconscious state" said Heero coldly. "I was?" I asked in a questioning voice "I'm just not gonna ask" I said to myself.
"So do you want to explain what the deal is with you not wanting to become a Gundam pilot and knowing Dr J" asked Heero. I just looked away closing my eyes. "Heero do you remember a little girl a couple years younger then you when you were being trained, she got beaten with a whip for disobedience and for running away and she would get locked in a room with just a cot and nothing more do you remember her?" I asked. "Yeah but that's can't be you she never escaped." He said.
"No she did you were just never told. I was forced into being recruited I was forced to do everything there after I escaped I spent a few months on the street nearly starving to death. That's when there was a shoot out where a gang tried to steal some stuff they taught me to use a gun. That's when I became an assassin and all the money I made went to buying guns and ammo and proper shooting classes and daggers and that sort of thing." I said I couldn't look at them.
"I don't believe your that little girl you don't have the scars" he said. "Heero I've gained so many wounds and scars from this life that they just all have become my skin tone" I blinked back tears. "That's why when you guys asked me to be a Gundam pilot I cerked out" My voice was bitter and I was talking through clenched teeth. "I thought once I was out of there I wouldn't have to see you again and then I did and that made it worse. I don't want to go back to that wretched place"
"I understand" Heero said in actual human tone. I looked over at them and sighed. I wiped the tears from my eyes before they could fall. I forced a smile. "A lot of things make me think about back then and when I do I shake and it all repeats through my head and I bet you I screamed because it was the only way for me to scream out that pain that I still feel" I got up out of the hospital after pulling the needles out of me. I slipped the trench coat on onto of my clothes and I begin to stagger out of the room.
The doctor and nurse come and try to stop me but I just push my way through the pilots didn't bother trying to stop me. Especially Heero because I guessed he was remembering now those times he wasn't so nice and we he and everyone else teased me because I was the only girl on the base.
As I exited the hospital and entered the streams of sunlight I smiled. I walked down city streets whole checking all my pockets I eventually ran out of pockets and had found a dollar in change so I had 6 dollars I sighed not good enough. I put it away and got a newspaper. I went to a café and got myself a small soda and began to drink that while taking out a pen and the help wanted ads.
I circled the ads where I would apply. Then something really caught my eyes it was a small add about some repair group looking for another mechanic they had good pay and I knew I qualified for the job. I threw all of the newspaper except the help wanted section into the trash and went to where this group was supposed to be located. I walked into a hanger I was supposed to find a guy name Howard according to the ad.
Some guy passed me and stopped and spoke to me. "Hey kid why don't you get out of here" he said. "For one I'm not a kid for two I'm looking for a guy named Howard" I said. "well I'm Howard what do you want" he said. "I'm here to apply to be your mechanic" I said. "Sure kid I'll give you a shot" he pointed to a heavily damaged. "If you can find a way to fix that you got the job" he said and walked off thinking he had beaten me.
I only smirked and went over to the mobile suit I took off my trench coat and set it aside. I went straight to work tearing away metal reusing it getting new metal. After about an hour it was in more pieces then imaginable and I was covered in grease. Some mechanics came over to me "Hey were going to go get a bite to eat you want to come?" asked one of them. "No thanks I'm gonna work on this" "You do know its impossible to fix that suit" said a second guy.
I smirked. "Never underestimate the impossible" I said they gave up and left with Howard not far behind. They returned a few hours later and they laughed when they saw me climbing latterly in and out of what was left of the mobile suit I would weave through tons and tons of wires like it was something hanging in a doorway. They could laugh I just kept smiling and working.
I worked until well after sun down. Everyone went to bed but I didn't I heard a noise and went to see what it was when I peeked around a tool box the Gundam pilots were there to talk to Howard I prayed they didn't find me. I just went back to work though. I was planning to work through the night and I always stuck to my plans if possible.
I knew that if I stopped working I would begin to feel hungry and tired so I didn't stop I just worked through the night. I could hear the Gundam pilots and a sleepy Howard talking on the other end of the hanger. They eventually left and I sighed in relief that they didn't find me to bug me. Howard went back to bed and I just kept working.
The next morning as the other mechanics walked out of their quarters yawning I was still wide awake and working when they looked at me and the mobile suit there jaws dropped. I had taken apart and redone nearly ¾ of it and it would soon be done. I worked up until noon and then I finished Howard walked over to me as I picked up my trench coat.
He handed me a small damp rag I wiped the grease from my face hands and arms. When I handed it back to him he handed me a wad of cash and I looked at him. "You earned it you fixed a mobile suit for us" he said. I hadn't been expecting this much cash. "Thanks" I left after waving bye to the others I split the cash up and put it all into different pockets so no one could pick pocket me and get all my money.
I went to a store and bought myself a book bag and a few necessary items and stuck into it. When I when I walked outside it began to rain I smiled I didn't mind the rain. Most people dashed into cars and stores and places that were dry but I didn't mind I loved the rain. I walked through it letting my hair get soaking wet I was glad that I was wearing a black t shirt And not a white one.
It began to storm and I didn't mind I just kept walking as if it were nothing though everyone else in the streets freaked out. I just kept walking until I bumped into someone when I looked up to say sorry my eyes widened. "Hi" I whispered. He didn't even bother looking at me just kept walking I looked down I gave him one last glance and went on walking.
That had been the guy who had once helped me out when I was first on the streets then I got him caught by the police on accident and to this day he still doesn't speak a word to me.
He wanders from country to country colony to colony as he pleases always trying to avoid me. I let him walk away but only by about 20 feet before I turn around and begin to follow way behind him. He turned down an ally and I followed. I followed him down into another ally but he was gone, I turn to leave if he was that mad to disappear suddenly then I had no right to try to get him to talk. As I turn around He is standing right there with a couple of his 'buddies' I reach behind me and grasp a dagger.
"Why were you following me?" He asked, "Are you trying to get me thrown into jail again?"
"No."
"Then what do you want, kid?"
"I came to say I'm sorry," I mumbled "and don't call me kid. Now if you'll excuse me I'll be on my way."
"Your not going anywhere. Its pay back time" He said. The way he said it didn't sound good. I took out my dagger to defend myself. All of the guys were much bigger and much stronger than me. They easily took over me and took my daggers. I didn't know what to do they were much larger and stronger I knew if these guys could they would kill me, and that opportunity had just arisen for them.
Disclaimer: .... I don't own a lot so don't sue me
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I walked down some city streets until I came across a motel I went to the front desk and got a room I had to use a fake ID but I used up the little cash I had left. I now had 5$ left to my name. I went to my room and locked the door behind me I sighed sitting down at a small table. And pulled out my laptop. I set it down on the table and logged onto my email. I knew the Gundam Pilots emails from some recent hacking. When I had fallen asleep I had calmed down about the flash backs though they were still haunting me.
I began to type a letter to the Gundam pilots. I backspaced and rewrote the letter I finally finished and it read:
Dear Pilots, Thank you for the gift no one has ever given me anything this nice or anything at all everything I have ever gotten had a price including money. I hope to find a normal job and get some money Right now I only have 5 bucks to my name but I can make it last. I'm sorry if I freaked you guys out. I had some flashbacks that really scared me. Hope to see you all soon I must being going. I wish you All the best and good luck on your missions. Angel
I hit send and logged off. I sat back in the chair and turned on the small TV in the room. I found a music channel that played my music. I liked country music I then went into the bathroom and turned the shower on to hot while I waited for it to warm up I closed the window shades and curtains I then went into the bathroom and took a shower. I came out of the bathroom Dressed with a towel on my shoulders and my hair up in a dripping bun I laid my trench coat down on the bed.
I took my hair down and combed it out with a small hairbrush when I was done I stuck it in the pocket it of my trench coat and put my hair back up into a bun. I heard a click behind me I turned around slowly there in front of me stood some men from OZ "Can I help you" I asked in a whisper. "You are to come with us His Excellency Trieze Kushrenada would like to see you." Said one of the four. "Alright" I said I grabbed my things and followed the leader of the group.
A guy stood on each side of me they acted as if they were expecting me to run. They took me to a truck and I got into the back seat with one two of them and two of them sat in the front. I pulled out a laptop and checked my mail I saw the Gundam pilots had emailed me back but I didn't want to read it in front of these guys so I just turned it off and put it away. After a small ride we got off and I was taken to Trieze's office I sat down in the chair that was there for me. "I would like you to assassinate the Gundam pilots for me" said Trieze "I'm sorry I can't help you" I said. He turned around. "Why not?" he asked simply. "I tried for someone else and failed" I said calmly. "You will do it" he said. "I'm sorry sir but I must decline the job" I said. "This is an order" he said. "Then I do not accept your order" "You will in time"
I got frustrated with him and walked out. Once I was off of the base I broke into a run until I was deep into some woods she opened the laptop and read the emails from the Gundam pilots but then I heard voice I shut the laptop and put it away beginning to run Trieze was planning to make me kill them and then kill me I figured it out. He gave to many hints. :I pulled out a cell phone from my pocket and called Quatre. "Hello" answered Quatre. "Uh hey.I uh need some help I'm being chased by OZ and if my allergies are right then there using dogs to keep track of me and I can' seem to throw them off my trail" I said quickly while running "I need help and." the phone line went dead on Quatre's end .
The OZ dogs caught up to me and began attacking me in moments I was on the ground with lots of small cuts from their bites the Soldiers drug me up and threw me into a cell by myself I laid there only half conscious. She still had her cell phone in her hand she called Quatre back "Quatre help me you guys are the only ones I know who to call I don't have anyone else I can't get up I'm in an OZ jail cell" I whispered into the phone and hung up. I closed my eyes and passed out.
I wake up in a bed the covers brought over top of me up to my chest but my arms were on top of the covers. Opened my eyes slightly to bright lights and figured I was in a hospital. I thought about what happened and remembered being in and out of conscious and being beat by the OZ soldiers and I remember Quatre and the other pilots braking in and getting me out.
It was all blurry. I opened my eyes even more and looked around. I was in a room by myself a nurse and doctor came in and began talking to me telling me about my shape all I could do was nod I understood but didn't have the strength to say anything. After checking me over the doctor and nurse left. I sighed and forced myself into a sitting position. "You know your going to hurt yourself doing that onna" said Wufei walking in. A;; the pilots walked in and sat around the room casually.
"Whatever" I whispered my throat was dry and my voice was nearly gone. "So you want to tell us why Oz was capturing someone who wasn't a Gundam pilot" asked Duo. "Trieze wanted me to kill you guys and I said I couldn't that I had already tried and failed and that was his way of forcing me to do it" I said. "Are you sure you don't want to become a Gundam pilot?" asked Trowa.
"No! I will never become a Gundam pilot" I said I got angry and tensed up and it took energy making me pass out. My dream was a flash back.
~Begin Flash Back~
There was a knock on the door then it was opened the boy who was only a couple of years older then me came in. "I brought you some bandages" He said. I didn't replay to him I just sat there staring off into space he set the bandages on the floor then looked at me. "I'm sorry about what happened to you" he said. I still didn't reply.
"Hey are you ok?" he said. I sighed and finally responded, "Yeah I'm fine" I said. "Are you supposed to be a Gundam pilot?" he asked. "Just get out of here before you get into trouble" I said still staring off into space. "Are you" he asked. "Just get out of here before you get into trouble!" with that he left I crawled onto the floor and to the bandages and started to try to patch myself up though it wasn't working out very well.
I felt tired and tried to pull myself up onto the cot but I couldn't up onto it. Instead I lay down on the cold floor even if it froze me I was at least laying down. I stared into space when my watch beeped I looked at it and sighed it was 3Am according to my watch. Time didn't matter it was all the same it was all dark cold and painful. I fell asleep on the floor after a few minutes
~End Flash Back~
I woke up back in the hospital bed in a cold sweat. Everyone was crowded around me. "Why are you guys crowded around me?" I asked raising an eyebrow. "Because you passed out and were screaming in your unconscious state" said Heero coldly. "I was?" I asked in a questioning voice "I'm just not gonna ask" I said to myself.
"So do you want to explain what the deal is with you not wanting to become a Gundam pilot and knowing Dr J" asked Heero. I just looked away closing my eyes. "Heero do you remember a little girl a couple years younger then you when you were being trained, she got beaten with a whip for disobedience and for running away and she would get locked in a room with just a cot and nothing more do you remember her?" I asked. "Yeah but that's can't be you she never escaped." He said.
"No she did you were just never told. I was forced into being recruited I was forced to do everything there after I escaped I spent a few months on the street nearly starving to death. That's when there was a shoot out where a gang tried to steal some stuff they taught me to use a gun. That's when I became an assassin and all the money I made went to buying guns and ammo and proper shooting classes and daggers and that sort of thing." I said I couldn't look at them.
"I don't believe your that little girl you don't have the scars" he said. "Heero I've gained so many wounds and scars from this life that they just all have become my skin tone" I blinked back tears. "That's why when you guys asked me to be a Gundam pilot I cerked out" My voice was bitter and I was talking through clenched teeth. "I thought once I was out of there I wouldn't have to see you again and then I did and that made it worse. I don't want to go back to that wretched place"
"I understand" Heero said in actual human tone. I looked over at them and sighed. I wiped the tears from my eyes before they could fall. I forced a smile. "A lot of things make me think about back then and when I do I shake and it all repeats through my head and I bet you I screamed because it was the only way for me to scream out that pain that I still feel" I got up out of the hospital after pulling the needles out of me. I slipped the trench coat on onto of my clothes and I begin to stagger out of the room.
The doctor and nurse come and try to stop me but I just push my way through the pilots didn't bother trying to stop me. Especially Heero because I guessed he was remembering now those times he wasn't so nice and we he and everyone else teased me because I was the only girl on the base.
As I exited the hospital and entered the streams of sunlight I smiled. I walked down city streets whole checking all my pockets I eventually ran out of pockets and had found a dollar in change so I had 6 dollars I sighed not good enough. I put it away and got a newspaper. I went to a café and got myself a small soda and began to drink that while taking out a pen and the help wanted ads.
I circled the ads where I would apply. Then something really caught my eyes it was a small add about some repair group looking for another mechanic they had good pay and I knew I qualified for the job. I threw all of the newspaper except the help wanted section into the trash and went to where this group was supposed to be located. I walked into a hanger I was supposed to find a guy name Howard according to the ad.
Some guy passed me and stopped and spoke to me. "Hey kid why don't you get out of here" he said. "For one I'm not a kid for two I'm looking for a guy named Howard" I said. "well I'm Howard what do you want" he said. "I'm here to apply to be your mechanic" I said. "Sure kid I'll give you a shot" he pointed to a heavily damaged. "If you can find a way to fix that you got the job" he said and walked off thinking he had beaten me.
I only smirked and went over to the mobile suit I took off my trench coat and set it aside. I went straight to work tearing away metal reusing it getting new metal. After about an hour it was in more pieces then imaginable and I was covered in grease. Some mechanics came over to me "Hey were going to go get a bite to eat you want to come?" asked one of them. "No thanks I'm gonna work on this" "You do know its impossible to fix that suit" said a second guy.
I smirked. "Never underestimate the impossible" I said they gave up and left with Howard not far behind. They returned a few hours later and they laughed when they saw me climbing latterly in and out of what was left of the mobile suit I would weave through tons and tons of wires like it was something hanging in a doorway. They could laugh I just kept smiling and working.
I worked until well after sun down. Everyone went to bed but I didn't I heard a noise and went to see what it was when I peeked around a tool box the Gundam pilots were there to talk to Howard I prayed they didn't find me. I just went back to work though. I was planning to work through the night and I always stuck to my plans if possible.
I knew that if I stopped working I would begin to feel hungry and tired so I didn't stop I just worked through the night. I could hear the Gundam pilots and a sleepy Howard talking on the other end of the hanger. They eventually left and I sighed in relief that they didn't find me to bug me. Howard went back to bed and I just kept working.
The next morning as the other mechanics walked out of their quarters yawning I was still wide awake and working when they looked at me and the mobile suit there jaws dropped. I had taken apart and redone nearly ¾ of it and it would soon be done. I worked up until noon and then I finished Howard walked over to me as I picked up my trench coat.
He handed me a small damp rag I wiped the grease from my face hands and arms. When I handed it back to him he handed me a wad of cash and I looked at him. "You earned it you fixed a mobile suit for us" he said. I hadn't been expecting this much cash. "Thanks" I left after waving bye to the others I split the cash up and put it all into different pockets so no one could pick pocket me and get all my money.
I went to a store and bought myself a book bag and a few necessary items and stuck into it. When I when I walked outside it began to rain I smiled I didn't mind the rain. Most people dashed into cars and stores and places that were dry but I didn't mind I loved the rain. I walked through it letting my hair get soaking wet I was glad that I was wearing a black t shirt And not a white one.
It began to storm and I didn't mind I just kept walking as if it were nothing though everyone else in the streets freaked out. I just kept walking until I bumped into someone when I looked up to say sorry my eyes widened. "Hi" I whispered. He didn't even bother looking at me just kept walking I looked down I gave him one last glance and went on walking.
That had been the guy who had once helped me out when I was first on the streets then I got him caught by the police on accident and to this day he still doesn't speak a word to me.
He wanders from country to country colony to colony as he pleases always trying to avoid me. I let him walk away but only by about 20 feet before I turn around and begin to follow way behind him. He turned down an ally and I followed. I followed him down into another ally but he was gone, I turn to leave if he was that mad to disappear suddenly then I had no right to try to get him to talk. As I turn around He is standing right there with a couple of his 'buddies' I reach behind me and grasp a dagger.
"Why were you following me?" He asked, "Are you trying to get me thrown into jail again?"
"No."
"Then what do you want, kid?"
"I came to say I'm sorry," I mumbled "and don't call me kid. Now if you'll excuse me I'll be on my way."
"Your not going anywhere. Its pay back time" He said. The way he said it didn't sound good. I took out my dagger to defend myself. All of the guys were much bigger and much stronger than me. They easily took over me and took my daggers. I didn't know what to do they were much larger and stronger I knew if these guys could they would kill me, and that opportunity had just arisen for them.