Ok here it finally is, I've a bit of a writers block, I couldn't figure out
how to start this. On top of that we just moved into our new
house.apartment, so I've been kinda busy. I'm trying to write as often as
possible, but it's a 30 min. walk to the nearest internet comp.real pain.
Oh well here it is!!! Thanx again for all of the reviews!!!!
Disclaimer: I don't own FF8 squaresoft does, blah, blah, blah.on with the show.story.whatever.
Chapter 4
Five minutes later, as Seifer had predicted, Selphie landed the Ragnarok on the outskirts of Balmb. Selphie jumped out of the cockpit squealing in delight. Rinoa hopped out next, just as excited about the day of shopping. Quistis smiled her small reticent smile as she followed her friends out. Rinoa and Selphie were already halfway down the street by the time Seifer got out.
"They seem pretty excited about a little shopping trip." Seifer said to Quistis as he watched the two girls round the corner.
"They've made it their life mission to buy me stylish clothes." Said Quistis as she picked up her pace, trying to catch up to her two friends.
"Says something about your current wardrobe doesn't it?" Quistis stopped. She turned to face Seifer.
"Exactly what are you implying Mr. Almasy?" Seifer smirked, pleased with himself for getting under her skin so quickly.
"If they've made it their life mission to buy you different clothes, yours must be outdated and unfashionable. Wouldn't you say?" He said, his smirk getting larger.
"There is nothing wrong with my clothes." Quistis said trying her best to stay calm. Why did Seifer's comment irk her so much? What did she care if he didn't like her clothes?
"The only thing wrong with your clothes is that it's a battle suit and the only other thing you wear is your seeD uniform. They want to buy you clothes so they can see you in something else." Quistis waved her hand signaling the end of the conversation. She turned on her heel, walking in the direction they had last seen Selphie and Rinoa heading. Seifer ran his hand through his hair and let out a frustrated sigh. Why did he care what Quistis wore anyway? He walked in step with Quistis, neither saying anything to other. Seifer had hit a soft spot and he knew that if he pursued it he'd be at the business end of Quistis's save the queen. As fun as a battle with Quistis would be, he had to be in her presence for however long it took them to finish this mission, and he didn't relish starting that off with her pissed at him.
Around the corner Selphie and Rinoa were shifting through racks of clothes, periodically pulling out a shirt or a dress. Rinoa looked up and spotted Quistis and Seifer.
"There you guys are! Quistis I found these," She handed Quistis a pile of clothes. "They'd look perfect on you!" Selphie helped Rinoa shove Quistis toward the nearest dressing room. "Try them on and let us see!" Quistis sighed as she closed the door to the dressing room. This was going to be a long day of trying clothes on. First she tried on a purple summer dress that was cut just above the knees. "Quistis! Come out we want to see!" Qusitis looked at herself in the mirror. She didn't like the dress at all but she obediently came out.
"No I don't like it, try something else." Said Selphie. Seifer leaned against the wall near the front of the store, watching Qusitis come out to model the clothes. 'They could be at this for hours.' Thought Seifer. 'I might as well go get my stuff.' He told Selphie and Rinoa were he was going. They both nodded their heads, not listening to what he was saying. He shrugged, 'at least they can't say I didn't tell them.' He exited the 'girls' clothes shop and walked to one of his favorite clothes stores down the street. He picked up a pair of black jeans and a pair of blue jeans. On his way to the dressing room, he spotted a rack full of the polyester tight shirts he preferred. He picked up a black, blue, and white shirt. He tried each on and ended up purchasing all of them. Next he went to the store he had bought his leather jacket at. The store called the leather shack sold real leather at a relatively cheap price. Seifer had special ordered his beloved trench coat there when he was fifteen. The garden had even paid for it. At the time Seifer had thought it a great gift, the garden didn't usually pay for clothes that weren't needed, later Seifer had learned that Edea had convinced her husband, the headmaster, to buy him the coat that he had wanted so badly. He entered the store the strong smell of leather washing over him. He was immediately greeted by the clerk behind the counter.
"Can I get you something today sir?" The clerk said, moving out from behind the counter.
"Yeah, were are your pants?" Asked Seifer, looking around the store trying to spot the rack.
"They're behind the trench coats on the right there." Seifer headed there and shifted through the many leather pants. "Will there be anything else sir?" Seifer nodded his head no, not looking up from his search. That's the other thing he liked about this store. The clerks didn't follow you around, asking if you needed anything every five seconds. He pulled out a few pairs of pants and went try them on. In the end he settled for the pair cut in the jeans style. He paid for the pants, then headed back to the store the three girls were in.
Quistis was still trying clothes on when he walked in, the only difference was that now both Selphie and Rinoa had an armload of clothes for themselves. They almost ran into Seifer as he walked in.
"Were are you guys going." He asked. "And where's Quistis?"
"Were going to find some shoes for these clothes." Said Selphie excited at the mere thought of buying shoes. "Tell Quisty were we are, and make sure she tries on all of those clothes we gave her!" She yelled over her shoulder.
"Wait!" Yelled Seifer, but they were already out he door. 'Damn, now I have to wait for Quistis. Why do girls take so long to shop anyway? You try on the clothes, you buy the ones you like. It only took him fifteen minutes to get his clothes, Quistis has been at it for thirty already.' Quistis came out of the dressing room wearing a pair of flared blue jeans and a plain white tank top.
"What do you guys think?" Asked Quistis, she paused looking for her friends. She locked eyes with Seifer. "Were are they?" She asked puzzled.
"They went to find some shoes for their new 'outfits'." Said Seifer, not bothering to hide his feeling for shoe shopping.
"Oh." Said Quistis. "Well then what do you think Mr. fashionable?" She asked twirling like a model in front of him. Seifer smirked at her attempt of modeling. He grabbed a silver circled belt and tossed it at her.
"Put this on and the outfit will be complete. Then and only then may you pretend to be my girlfriend." Qusitis playfully threw the belt at his head. Seifer ducked and laughed. "A little touchy today sweetie?
"Oh shut up Seifer." She said as he dropped the silver belt in her 'buy' pile. She went back into the dressing room to try on the next set of clothes. Seifer leaned against the wall, his mood brightening. 'This isn't so bad.' He thought. He watched girls in the store shuffle through the store looking for the 'perfect' outfit. It was then that he spotted a red halter top. 'Quistis would look good in that.' He thought to himself as he headed toward the rack. 'Did I just say Quistis would look good?' He stopped. 'No I didn't, red is just her color, that's what I meant.' He grabbed a size medium halter off of the rack. He threw it over the dressing room Quistis was in.
"Quistis, try this on." He said as he took up his position against the wall.
"Seifer!" Yelled Quistis through the door. "I am NOT trying this on."
"Why not?" He asked irritated. "There's nothing wrong with it. Just try it one. It's not like I'm telling you to buy it. If you don't like it I'll put it back." He heard her give and exasperated sigh.
"Fine, but I can tell you right now I won't buy it."
"Fine, just try in on." Seifer tapped his foot impatiently as he waited for Quistis to come out. A few minutes later Quistis came out. She wore the red halter top with a pair of black jeans. Seifer stared. She looked even better in it then he had imagined. Quistis twirled, "what do you think?" She asked. Seifer continued to stare. He was at a loss for words. "Seifer I said 'what do you think'?" Her hands resting on her hips as she tried to get his attention. Seifer shook his head trying to clear away the cobwebs in his mind.
"It looks fine. You should buy it."
"I don't know, it's not something I'd usually wear." She said sounding skeptical.
"Quisits do something out of the ordinary for once." Quistis still seemed doubtful. Seifer rolled his eyes. "If you're afraid you'll waste your money I'll buy it." Quistis stood silent as she battled with the words 'don't buy it, buy it.' 'What the heck' She thought. 'I'll buy it, it'll feel good to do something different.'
"That's ok Seifer I'll buy it. I'm buying all of this other stuff anyway." Soon they were both out looking for Selphie and Rinoa. They found them in a shoe store not far from the store they'd just left. They both sat next to a pile of shoes. They were currently trying on what must have been the hundredth shoe. The clerk serving them looked worn out. Quistis sympathized with the poor man. Selphie and Rinoa could try on every shoe in that store three times before they would move on to a different store. Quistis decided that she would save the poor man who was unfortunate enough to be working when the two girls entered.
"Selphie! Rinoa!" She yelled across the store. "I'm done! Come on hurry up!" Both girls grabbed a few pairs of shoes out of the pile.
"Just a second Quisty!" Yelled Selphie. They bought their shoes, much to the relief of the clerk, and left. The two girls spent the short walk back to the Ragnarok chatting excitingly about their new clothes and the shoes they bought to go with them. Quistis sighed in relief when the Ragnarok came into view. After a day of trying on clothes she was rather worn out. She just wanted to get back to the garden as quickly as possible so she could lie down.
She hopped into the Ragnarok after Seifer and heavily sat down. She rested head on the seat and closed her eyes. Maybe she would take a nice relaxing bath when they got back. She sat for a minute before she noticed that Selphie hadn't started the engine. She opened her eyes looking for an explanation. Rinoa and Selphie stood in the opening of the Ragnarok. They were both staring at Quistis.
"What?" She said slightly annoyed.
"What did you buy?" Asked Rinoa.
"Yeah! I wanna see!" Yelled Selphie excitingly. Quistis sighed as she picked up her shopping bag. She showed them every item wondering all the while why they wanted to see. They picked it all out didn't they?
"Oh how cute!" Selphie said jumping and clapping her hands. Quistis looked down at what she was holding. It was the red halter that Seifer had picked out.
"Were did you find that one Quistis?" Asked Rinoa. "We didn't give you that one."
"Seifer found it." She said packing the halter away. Selphie looked at Seifer wide eyed.
"How did you get her to buy it?"
"With my charm." Seifer answered sarcastically rolling his eyes. "Can we go?"
"No." Said Selphie. "I want to know what you bought."
"Maybe we could have the fashion show later? I'd like to get back to the garden before they send a search party out for us." Selphie crossed her arms in defiance.
"I'm not starting this engine until I get to see what you bought." She said more firmly, reinforcing her defiance.
"Seifer just show her." Said Quistis more than a little annoyed. 'If he'd just show her they could leave. What's so hard about that?'
"Fine." Seifer growled. Selphie squealed in delight. Seifer pulled out the clothes he bought earlier. Selphie nodded her head at each item of clothing as if to indicate that he would have to take them back if she didn't like it. "Can we go now?" Seifer asked clearly ticked off.
"Ok lets go!" Selphie jumped into the cockpit and started the engine. Five minutes later they were back in the garden garage. Quistis gratefully got out of the Ragnarok. 'I'll take a nice hot bath before I go to bed.' Rinoa was first to reach her room, the one that she shared with Squall. A few months ago Quistis would have been jealous of Rinoa going into that dorm, but she had finally gotten over Squall when they had become engaged. She really did consider him more of a brother type guy. He wasn't really boyfriend material, personally she couldn't see how Rinoa put up with his lack of words.
"Goodnight!" Said Selphie as she entered the dorm she shared with Irvine. Somehow the two had stayed together despite Irvine's tendency to flirt with every girl in the garden. 'I suppose that Selphie knows she's the only one for him.' Thought Quistis sadly. After the sorceress war all of her friends, including Zell, had found someone to be with. Everyone except for Quistis of course. Instead of a real boyfriend she got trepies, little immature boys who followed her around like lost puppies. Most people would have loved to have a fan club, but not Quistis. She found them rather annoying. She did her best to be patient with them, knowing that when they got older they would move on and leave her alone.
She reached her dorm without saying a word to Seifer. They never really had much to talk about. She had her group of friends and he had Fujin and Rajin. Seifer stopped with her at her dorm.
"I'll see you tomorrow then?" He asked.
"0700 in the garage. Don't be late." She said giving Seifer her best Instructor look. "No problem Instructor." He said as he walked to his dorm. Quistis entered her room and gratefully sat on her bed. 'I'll skip the bath and take a shower in the morning.' She thought as she methodically got ready for bed. She laid on her bed thinking of the days events. She actually had fun trying on clothes, which was not something she could often admit. Yet she couldn't figure out why. Selphie and Rinoa had dragged her on one of these trips before and she had hated every moment of it. What was different? Well Seifer had been there. She had thought it fun to model, and though she would never admit this out loud, she did like the red halter. Red was her color oddly enough. It worked well with her blonde hair. She rested her hands behind her head and stared at the ceiling. 'Seifer was alright. When he wasn't being a jerk anyway. Maybe the mission won't be so bad.' She smiled to herself in the dark before she fell into a peaceful sleep.
YAY! I finished another one. I'm trying to make my chappies longer. Tell me if I'm putting in too much uninteresting stuff. Oh, I need a name for my fic so if anyone has any ideas I'm open for suggestions, so review!! If anyone out there likes fantasy I have another story called the amulets of amar, it's about elves, humans, and demons. So if you have time read it!
Disclaimer: I don't own FF8 squaresoft does, blah, blah, blah.on with the show.story.whatever.
Chapter 4
Five minutes later, as Seifer had predicted, Selphie landed the Ragnarok on the outskirts of Balmb. Selphie jumped out of the cockpit squealing in delight. Rinoa hopped out next, just as excited about the day of shopping. Quistis smiled her small reticent smile as she followed her friends out. Rinoa and Selphie were already halfway down the street by the time Seifer got out.
"They seem pretty excited about a little shopping trip." Seifer said to Quistis as he watched the two girls round the corner.
"They've made it their life mission to buy me stylish clothes." Said Quistis as she picked up her pace, trying to catch up to her two friends.
"Says something about your current wardrobe doesn't it?" Quistis stopped. She turned to face Seifer.
"Exactly what are you implying Mr. Almasy?" Seifer smirked, pleased with himself for getting under her skin so quickly.
"If they've made it their life mission to buy you different clothes, yours must be outdated and unfashionable. Wouldn't you say?" He said, his smirk getting larger.
"There is nothing wrong with my clothes." Quistis said trying her best to stay calm. Why did Seifer's comment irk her so much? What did she care if he didn't like her clothes?
"The only thing wrong with your clothes is that it's a battle suit and the only other thing you wear is your seeD uniform. They want to buy you clothes so they can see you in something else." Quistis waved her hand signaling the end of the conversation. She turned on her heel, walking in the direction they had last seen Selphie and Rinoa heading. Seifer ran his hand through his hair and let out a frustrated sigh. Why did he care what Quistis wore anyway? He walked in step with Quistis, neither saying anything to other. Seifer had hit a soft spot and he knew that if he pursued it he'd be at the business end of Quistis's save the queen. As fun as a battle with Quistis would be, he had to be in her presence for however long it took them to finish this mission, and he didn't relish starting that off with her pissed at him.
Around the corner Selphie and Rinoa were shifting through racks of clothes, periodically pulling out a shirt or a dress. Rinoa looked up and spotted Quistis and Seifer.
"There you guys are! Quistis I found these," She handed Quistis a pile of clothes. "They'd look perfect on you!" Selphie helped Rinoa shove Quistis toward the nearest dressing room. "Try them on and let us see!" Quistis sighed as she closed the door to the dressing room. This was going to be a long day of trying clothes on. First she tried on a purple summer dress that was cut just above the knees. "Quistis! Come out we want to see!" Qusitis looked at herself in the mirror. She didn't like the dress at all but she obediently came out.
"No I don't like it, try something else." Said Selphie. Seifer leaned against the wall near the front of the store, watching Qusitis come out to model the clothes. 'They could be at this for hours.' Thought Seifer. 'I might as well go get my stuff.' He told Selphie and Rinoa were he was going. They both nodded their heads, not listening to what he was saying. He shrugged, 'at least they can't say I didn't tell them.' He exited the 'girls' clothes shop and walked to one of his favorite clothes stores down the street. He picked up a pair of black jeans and a pair of blue jeans. On his way to the dressing room, he spotted a rack full of the polyester tight shirts he preferred. He picked up a black, blue, and white shirt. He tried each on and ended up purchasing all of them. Next he went to the store he had bought his leather jacket at. The store called the leather shack sold real leather at a relatively cheap price. Seifer had special ordered his beloved trench coat there when he was fifteen. The garden had even paid for it. At the time Seifer had thought it a great gift, the garden didn't usually pay for clothes that weren't needed, later Seifer had learned that Edea had convinced her husband, the headmaster, to buy him the coat that he had wanted so badly. He entered the store the strong smell of leather washing over him. He was immediately greeted by the clerk behind the counter.
"Can I get you something today sir?" The clerk said, moving out from behind the counter.
"Yeah, were are your pants?" Asked Seifer, looking around the store trying to spot the rack.
"They're behind the trench coats on the right there." Seifer headed there and shifted through the many leather pants. "Will there be anything else sir?" Seifer nodded his head no, not looking up from his search. That's the other thing he liked about this store. The clerks didn't follow you around, asking if you needed anything every five seconds. He pulled out a few pairs of pants and went try them on. In the end he settled for the pair cut in the jeans style. He paid for the pants, then headed back to the store the three girls were in.
Quistis was still trying clothes on when he walked in, the only difference was that now both Selphie and Rinoa had an armload of clothes for themselves. They almost ran into Seifer as he walked in.
"Were are you guys going." He asked. "And where's Quistis?"
"Were going to find some shoes for these clothes." Said Selphie excited at the mere thought of buying shoes. "Tell Quisty were we are, and make sure she tries on all of those clothes we gave her!" She yelled over her shoulder.
"Wait!" Yelled Seifer, but they were already out he door. 'Damn, now I have to wait for Quistis. Why do girls take so long to shop anyway? You try on the clothes, you buy the ones you like. It only took him fifteen minutes to get his clothes, Quistis has been at it for thirty already.' Quistis came out of the dressing room wearing a pair of flared blue jeans and a plain white tank top.
"What do you guys think?" Asked Quistis, she paused looking for her friends. She locked eyes with Seifer. "Were are they?" She asked puzzled.
"They went to find some shoes for their new 'outfits'." Said Seifer, not bothering to hide his feeling for shoe shopping.
"Oh." Said Quistis. "Well then what do you think Mr. fashionable?" She asked twirling like a model in front of him. Seifer smirked at her attempt of modeling. He grabbed a silver circled belt and tossed it at her.
"Put this on and the outfit will be complete. Then and only then may you pretend to be my girlfriend." Qusitis playfully threw the belt at his head. Seifer ducked and laughed. "A little touchy today sweetie?
"Oh shut up Seifer." She said as he dropped the silver belt in her 'buy' pile. She went back into the dressing room to try on the next set of clothes. Seifer leaned against the wall, his mood brightening. 'This isn't so bad.' He thought. He watched girls in the store shuffle through the store looking for the 'perfect' outfit. It was then that he spotted a red halter top. 'Quistis would look good in that.' He thought to himself as he headed toward the rack. 'Did I just say Quistis would look good?' He stopped. 'No I didn't, red is just her color, that's what I meant.' He grabbed a size medium halter off of the rack. He threw it over the dressing room Quistis was in.
"Quistis, try this on." He said as he took up his position against the wall.
"Seifer!" Yelled Quistis through the door. "I am NOT trying this on."
"Why not?" He asked irritated. "There's nothing wrong with it. Just try it one. It's not like I'm telling you to buy it. If you don't like it I'll put it back." He heard her give and exasperated sigh.
"Fine, but I can tell you right now I won't buy it."
"Fine, just try in on." Seifer tapped his foot impatiently as he waited for Quistis to come out. A few minutes later Quistis came out. She wore the red halter top with a pair of black jeans. Seifer stared. She looked even better in it then he had imagined. Quistis twirled, "what do you think?" She asked. Seifer continued to stare. He was at a loss for words. "Seifer I said 'what do you think'?" Her hands resting on her hips as she tried to get his attention. Seifer shook his head trying to clear away the cobwebs in his mind.
"It looks fine. You should buy it."
"I don't know, it's not something I'd usually wear." She said sounding skeptical.
"Quisits do something out of the ordinary for once." Quistis still seemed doubtful. Seifer rolled his eyes. "If you're afraid you'll waste your money I'll buy it." Quistis stood silent as she battled with the words 'don't buy it, buy it.' 'What the heck' She thought. 'I'll buy it, it'll feel good to do something different.'
"That's ok Seifer I'll buy it. I'm buying all of this other stuff anyway." Soon they were both out looking for Selphie and Rinoa. They found them in a shoe store not far from the store they'd just left. They both sat next to a pile of shoes. They were currently trying on what must have been the hundredth shoe. The clerk serving them looked worn out. Quistis sympathized with the poor man. Selphie and Rinoa could try on every shoe in that store three times before they would move on to a different store. Quistis decided that she would save the poor man who was unfortunate enough to be working when the two girls entered.
"Selphie! Rinoa!" She yelled across the store. "I'm done! Come on hurry up!" Both girls grabbed a few pairs of shoes out of the pile.
"Just a second Quisty!" Yelled Selphie. They bought their shoes, much to the relief of the clerk, and left. The two girls spent the short walk back to the Ragnarok chatting excitingly about their new clothes and the shoes they bought to go with them. Quistis sighed in relief when the Ragnarok came into view. After a day of trying on clothes she was rather worn out. She just wanted to get back to the garden as quickly as possible so she could lie down.
She hopped into the Ragnarok after Seifer and heavily sat down. She rested head on the seat and closed her eyes. Maybe she would take a nice relaxing bath when they got back. She sat for a minute before she noticed that Selphie hadn't started the engine. She opened her eyes looking for an explanation. Rinoa and Selphie stood in the opening of the Ragnarok. They were both staring at Quistis.
"What?" She said slightly annoyed.
"What did you buy?" Asked Rinoa.
"Yeah! I wanna see!" Yelled Selphie excitingly. Quistis sighed as she picked up her shopping bag. She showed them every item wondering all the while why they wanted to see. They picked it all out didn't they?
"Oh how cute!" Selphie said jumping and clapping her hands. Quistis looked down at what she was holding. It was the red halter that Seifer had picked out.
"Were did you find that one Quistis?" Asked Rinoa. "We didn't give you that one."
"Seifer found it." She said packing the halter away. Selphie looked at Seifer wide eyed.
"How did you get her to buy it?"
"With my charm." Seifer answered sarcastically rolling his eyes. "Can we go?"
"No." Said Selphie. "I want to know what you bought."
"Maybe we could have the fashion show later? I'd like to get back to the garden before they send a search party out for us." Selphie crossed her arms in defiance.
"I'm not starting this engine until I get to see what you bought." She said more firmly, reinforcing her defiance.
"Seifer just show her." Said Quistis more than a little annoyed. 'If he'd just show her they could leave. What's so hard about that?'
"Fine." Seifer growled. Selphie squealed in delight. Seifer pulled out the clothes he bought earlier. Selphie nodded her head at each item of clothing as if to indicate that he would have to take them back if she didn't like it. "Can we go now?" Seifer asked clearly ticked off.
"Ok lets go!" Selphie jumped into the cockpit and started the engine. Five minutes later they were back in the garden garage. Quistis gratefully got out of the Ragnarok. 'I'll take a nice hot bath before I go to bed.' Rinoa was first to reach her room, the one that she shared with Squall. A few months ago Quistis would have been jealous of Rinoa going into that dorm, but she had finally gotten over Squall when they had become engaged. She really did consider him more of a brother type guy. He wasn't really boyfriend material, personally she couldn't see how Rinoa put up with his lack of words.
"Goodnight!" Said Selphie as she entered the dorm she shared with Irvine. Somehow the two had stayed together despite Irvine's tendency to flirt with every girl in the garden. 'I suppose that Selphie knows she's the only one for him.' Thought Quistis sadly. After the sorceress war all of her friends, including Zell, had found someone to be with. Everyone except for Quistis of course. Instead of a real boyfriend she got trepies, little immature boys who followed her around like lost puppies. Most people would have loved to have a fan club, but not Quistis. She found them rather annoying. She did her best to be patient with them, knowing that when they got older they would move on and leave her alone.
She reached her dorm without saying a word to Seifer. They never really had much to talk about. She had her group of friends and he had Fujin and Rajin. Seifer stopped with her at her dorm.
"I'll see you tomorrow then?" He asked.
"0700 in the garage. Don't be late." She said giving Seifer her best Instructor look. "No problem Instructor." He said as he walked to his dorm. Quistis entered her room and gratefully sat on her bed. 'I'll skip the bath and take a shower in the morning.' She thought as she methodically got ready for bed. She laid on her bed thinking of the days events. She actually had fun trying on clothes, which was not something she could often admit. Yet she couldn't figure out why. Selphie and Rinoa had dragged her on one of these trips before and she had hated every moment of it. What was different? Well Seifer had been there. She had thought it fun to model, and though she would never admit this out loud, she did like the red halter. Red was her color oddly enough. It worked well with her blonde hair. She rested her hands behind her head and stared at the ceiling. 'Seifer was alright. When he wasn't being a jerk anyway. Maybe the mission won't be so bad.' She smiled to herself in the dark before she fell into a peaceful sleep.
YAY! I finished another one. I'm trying to make my chappies longer. Tell me if I'm putting in too much uninteresting stuff. Oh, I need a name for my fic so if anyone has any ideas I'm open for suggestions, so review!! If anyone out there likes fantasy I have another story called the amulets of amar, it's about elves, humans, and demons. So if you have time read it!