I know that I haven't been updating in the longest, November I think anyway
please read and review if u like and keep giving ideas. T hanks
Lucilla arrived back at the place. Maximus was watching for her and he was upset.
Maximus: Lucilla were have you been? Lucilla: I was shopping in town Maximus: Don't lie to me Lucilla: You wouldn't understand Maximus: Then tell me Lucilla: Maximus, I can't even if I could you would not understand Maximus: Why cant you tell me? Lucilla: Because you would stop loving me
Commodus' Jail Cell- Day Commodus is laying on his bed he stands up and walks around he is upset and crying a little bit. He is thinking.
A Restaurant- Outside Town- Day Senator Gracchus is in town watching a man who is acting for a crowd of people. He laughs to himself, shadow appears on Senator Gracchus' right shoulder
Voice (p.o.v): Are you Senator Gracchus By now Senator Gracchus has turned around and looked at the man Senator Gracchus: Yes I am and who are you? Voice: That does not concern you Senator Gracchus: Why are you hear?
Senator Gracchus is starting to stand up when the man waves his hand
Voice (p.o.v): Senator that will not be necessary
Senator Gracchus sits back down
Voice: You shall see soon enough
The man hands him a folded piece of paper. Senator Gracchus opens it and reads it his face turns while he reads.
Senator Gracchus: Oh no!
Senator Gracchus looks up but the man is gone. Senator Gracchus looks around for him but her is gone
P.O.V is a point of view shot if some people don't know. I would also like to say that this one uploads better then the first one the first one was all put together rather then spread out like this one should be. I'll update soon. Also I hope that all the grammar is ok and also the spelling my spell check is not that good.
Lucilla arrived back at the place. Maximus was watching for her and he was upset.
Maximus: Lucilla were have you been? Lucilla: I was shopping in town Maximus: Don't lie to me Lucilla: You wouldn't understand Maximus: Then tell me Lucilla: Maximus, I can't even if I could you would not understand Maximus: Why cant you tell me? Lucilla: Because you would stop loving me
Commodus' Jail Cell- Day Commodus is laying on his bed he stands up and walks around he is upset and crying a little bit. He is thinking.
A Restaurant- Outside Town- Day Senator Gracchus is in town watching a man who is acting for a crowd of people. He laughs to himself, shadow appears on Senator Gracchus' right shoulder
Voice (p.o.v): Are you Senator Gracchus By now Senator Gracchus has turned around and looked at the man Senator Gracchus: Yes I am and who are you? Voice: That does not concern you Senator Gracchus: Why are you hear?
Senator Gracchus is starting to stand up when the man waves his hand
Voice (p.o.v): Senator that will not be necessary
Senator Gracchus sits back down
Voice: You shall see soon enough
The man hands him a folded piece of paper. Senator Gracchus opens it and reads it his face turns while he reads.
Senator Gracchus: Oh no!
Senator Gracchus looks up but the man is gone. Senator Gracchus looks around for him but her is gone
P.O.V is a point of view shot if some people don't know. I would also like to say that this one uploads better then the first one the first one was all put together rather then spread out like this one should be. I'll update soon. Also I hope that all the grammar is ok and also the spelling my spell check is not that good.