Okay, I think I have fixed the problem with the text so I'll put it back in
dialog format. If you liked the paragraph form better than say so in your
reviews and I'll change it back. After all I write this for you guys. It
wouldn't be chapter 20 without your support.
Chapter 20: The City that Never Burnt
Perry: a couple.
Yuffie: That's right.
Everyone looked so awe strikin. They just stared at the two of us.
Perry: What?
Cloud: It's just that it's so hard to believe.
Barret: How do we even know it's true?
Yuffie and I looked at one another and we kissed and then everyone was still in that trance.
Perry: Oh please!
Tifa: We just never thought it would happen between you two.
Aeris: I know. You're such opposites.
Yuffie: No we're not!
Perry: Well, let's not worry about how we got together, we still have to find Sephiroth don't we?
Barret: Yeah, he's right. Les jus go. The buggy is working fine now.
Cloud: But we'll be missing a person.
Perry: What? Who?
I sounded as though something terrible had happened.
Cloud: Red XIII.
Barret: He was useful, at times.
Perry: Oh.
I had thought it was Aeris. I hadn't forgotten she would die soon. I was still thinking of ways to prevent it. Now I'm acting like Tidus trying to stop Yuna from her destiny.
Yuffie: Worried about her, huh?
Perry: Yea, still haven't though of something. But I'll do my best.
We all started to leave when Red XIII came running down the stairs after us.
Red XIII: Wait I'm coming too!
Cloud: What happened? Red XIII: I grew up a little, that's what?
Bugenhagen: Nanaki is still young, take care of yourselves and come back when in need of my wisdom.
Barret: Well, let's go.
We walked back to the now fixed buggy and drove off to our next destination.
Yuffie: Hope I don't get sick again.
Perry: If you feel sick then just close you eyes and rest you head. It's worked for me.
Yuffie: Ok.
Aeris and Tifa: awwwwww
Perry and Yuffie: Bite me!
The drive to Nibelhiem wasn't very long. We had to drive across another river but we managed. We had to leave the buggy outside the town but we didn't mind.
Cloud: What?
Tifa: How?
It was quite a sight. After hearing Cloud's story I thought Nibelheim would be a pile of rubble. But it was standing. Even better than before.
Perry: Didn't this place burn down?
Barret: What's the deal?
Tifa: Everything's perfectly fine.
Cloud: I'm not lying! I could remember the intense heat of the flames.
Perry: There has got to be something more to this than we see. Perhaps we shall find clues in town.
Going our separate ways we each checked different buildings. I headed into Tifa's House.
Perry: Nice house.
I thought I heard a voice coming from the room to the left. And a figure in a black cloak was standing there shaking violently.
???: Great Sephiroth.gone.to the mansion.
It fell and vanished leaving a small bottle in its wake.
Perry: Hmm. The mansion. Could it be the. I was interrupted by a strange noise upstairs. I naturally went up to see who it could be. The sound was coming from the room on the far left by the stairs. Going inside I saw a familiar person sitting on her bed crying.
Perry: Tifa.
Tifa: Oh.please, I don't want to be seen like this.
Perry: What's wrong?
Tifa: Just thoughts.
Perry: This reminds me of an old saying.
Tifa: Huh?
Perry: "No need be sad."
Tifa: Who said that?
Perry: Some guy named.well you wouldn't know him.
Tifa: It's just depressing being back in this house.this whole town.
Perry: Your room is very nice.
That made her cry a bit more.
Perry: Oh I'm sorry.
I sat down next to her on her bed and put my arm around her for comfort.
Tifa: It's just.it was so painful seeing this place burn and everyone die and now to come and find as though those heartbreaking moments never existed.
Perry: We'll find out what's going on.
Tifa: But I don't know if I can go on.
Perry: You don't have to if you don't want to.
Tifa: Yeah, but I have to go on.
Perry: Well I think I've stumbled onto a clue. It appears that Sephiroth has gone to some mansion.
Tifa: But the only mansion in town is.
Perry: The Shinra Mansion.
Tifa: We should tell everyone.
We both got up and left Tifa's house and waited for everyone at the well. Eventually they came.
Cloud: Find anything?
Barret: jus a bunch of odd guys in black cloaks with numbered tattoos.
Perry: Did it tell you that Sephiroth went to the Shinra Mansion.
Red XIII: Three of us should go inside and investigate.
Cloud: Perry and Yuffie come with me.
Barret: Why them? They'll just kiss the whole time in there.
Perry and Yuffie: Will not!!!!
Cloud: I try to get everyone included here.
Aeris: Be careful in there.
Perry: I'll try sis. Takes a bit of punishment to put me down.
Cloud: Well let's go.
Cloud led the way for Yuffie and I as we opened the front gate and headed into the front door to this mansion of nightmares.
How'd you like the return of dialogue. Again, if you'd rather have paragraph format than say so in your reviews and I'll write them like so. Thanks for helping me get to 20 chapters.
Chapter 20: The City that Never Burnt
Perry: a couple.
Yuffie: That's right.
Everyone looked so awe strikin. They just stared at the two of us.
Perry: What?
Cloud: It's just that it's so hard to believe.
Barret: How do we even know it's true?
Yuffie and I looked at one another and we kissed and then everyone was still in that trance.
Perry: Oh please!
Tifa: We just never thought it would happen between you two.
Aeris: I know. You're such opposites.
Yuffie: No we're not!
Perry: Well, let's not worry about how we got together, we still have to find Sephiroth don't we?
Barret: Yeah, he's right. Les jus go. The buggy is working fine now.
Cloud: But we'll be missing a person.
Perry: What? Who?
I sounded as though something terrible had happened.
Cloud: Red XIII.
Barret: He was useful, at times.
Perry: Oh.
I had thought it was Aeris. I hadn't forgotten she would die soon. I was still thinking of ways to prevent it. Now I'm acting like Tidus trying to stop Yuna from her destiny.
Yuffie: Worried about her, huh?
Perry: Yea, still haven't though of something. But I'll do my best.
We all started to leave when Red XIII came running down the stairs after us.
Red XIII: Wait I'm coming too!
Cloud: What happened? Red XIII: I grew up a little, that's what?
Bugenhagen: Nanaki is still young, take care of yourselves and come back when in need of my wisdom.
Barret: Well, let's go.
We walked back to the now fixed buggy and drove off to our next destination.
Yuffie: Hope I don't get sick again.
Perry: If you feel sick then just close you eyes and rest you head. It's worked for me.
Yuffie: Ok.
Aeris and Tifa: awwwwww
Perry and Yuffie: Bite me!
The drive to Nibelhiem wasn't very long. We had to drive across another river but we managed. We had to leave the buggy outside the town but we didn't mind.
Cloud: What?
Tifa: How?
It was quite a sight. After hearing Cloud's story I thought Nibelheim would be a pile of rubble. But it was standing. Even better than before.
Perry: Didn't this place burn down?
Barret: What's the deal?
Tifa: Everything's perfectly fine.
Cloud: I'm not lying! I could remember the intense heat of the flames.
Perry: There has got to be something more to this than we see. Perhaps we shall find clues in town.
Going our separate ways we each checked different buildings. I headed into Tifa's House.
Perry: Nice house.
I thought I heard a voice coming from the room to the left. And a figure in a black cloak was standing there shaking violently.
???: Great Sephiroth.gone.to the mansion.
It fell and vanished leaving a small bottle in its wake.
Perry: Hmm. The mansion. Could it be the. I was interrupted by a strange noise upstairs. I naturally went up to see who it could be. The sound was coming from the room on the far left by the stairs. Going inside I saw a familiar person sitting on her bed crying.
Perry: Tifa.
Tifa: Oh.please, I don't want to be seen like this.
Perry: What's wrong?
Tifa: Just thoughts.
Perry: This reminds me of an old saying.
Tifa: Huh?
Perry: "No need be sad."
Tifa: Who said that?
Perry: Some guy named.well you wouldn't know him.
Tifa: It's just depressing being back in this house.this whole town.
Perry: Your room is very nice.
That made her cry a bit more.
Perry: Oh I'm sorry.
I sat down next to her on her bed and put my arm around her for comfort.
Tifa: It's just.it was so painful seeing this place burn and everyone die and now to come and find as though those heartbreaking moments never existed.
Perry: We'll find out what's going on.
Tifa: But I don't know if I can go on.
Perry: You don't have to if you don't want to.
Tifa: Yeah, but I have to go on.
Perry: Well I think I've stumbled onto a clue. It appears that Sephiroth has gone to some mansion.
Tifa: But the only mansion in town is.
Perry: The Shinra Mansion.
Tifa: We should tell everyone.
We both got up and left Tifa's house and waited for everyone at the well. Eventually they came.
Cloud: Find anything?
Barret: jus a bunch of odd guys in black cloaks with numbered tattoos.
Perry: Did it tell you that Sephiroth went to the Shinra Mansion.
Red XIII: Three of us should go inside and investigate.
Cloud: Perry and Yuffie come with me.
Barret: Why them? They'll just kiss the whole time in there.
Perry and Yuffie: Will not!!!!
Cloud: I try to get everyone included here.
Aeris: Be careful in there.
Perry: I'll try sis. Takes a bit of punishment to put me down.
Cloud: Well let's go.
Cloud led the way for Yuffie and I as we opened the front gate and headed into the front door to this mansion of nightmares.
How'd you like the return of dialogue. Again, if you'd rather have paragraph format than say so in your reviews and I'll write them like so. Thanks for helping me get to 20 chapters.