*Oh, I am so happy! I got 3 reviews today! I am sipping coffee to get me going. And I think I am in the process of turning into this creature of the night. * hoot hoot * eek! I have turned into an owl! Heehee... Okay now back to work! Oh my, I am so inspired! :) How do I get that stinking Beta Reader anyways??? Anyone? Ouch!! I guess I have to really watch out for my grammar this time. Dang!
Rue's Note: I have changed some errors and parts of the story in chapter 1. I changed the date of the "Hunting Festival" from 2 days to 5 days. Oki! That would be all! :)
Chapter 3: Fallen Angel
She had a long hair, dyed in brown and highlighted blonde. Her hair color is perfect to make her face shine even though she looks pale and weak. He never saw such creature before. But of course! This one has "wings".
This is an Angel.
Legolas stood in awe. He still cannot believe what he is seeing. He stood there for a minute in such amazement. He then remembered the red stained trail of feathers that he was following a while ago...
Blood.
He felt her pulse. She is still alive. Legolas quickly carried the angel on his back and headed to his "sanctuary". It is just impossible for him to bring AN Angel to their castle! He thought. In addition, of course Shalwel will be there. He does not want to disappoint the Elf upon bringing a girl home. As they are headed to his "sanctuary", Legolas can feel her breathing on his neck.
"Stay with me my Lady... " He said.
Moreover, thank God for his Elvish speed, they arrived in his "sanctuary" in no time.
It is a small hut capable of occupying two people. Inside is a table and a bed made of wood and autumn leaves. This is where he heads when he wants to get away from it all.
Legolas carefully laid the unconscious Angel in the bed. She is a mess. She had bloodstains almost all over. Her wrists... just what had happened? And her right wing... it seems to be broken. She is wearing a white dress. Legolas can tell that it was long before it was ripped off. The rip made a long slit on the Angel's right leg exposing almost her inner thigh. It made his heart skip a beat. What was he thinking?! Legolas shook his head. However, there is no doubt that she is a beauty. She has a fair skin. She is tall judging by her long legs exposing. Legolas then wondered how it feels to touch her... TOUCH HER?! SNAP OUT OF IT ELF! Legolas sighed.
"What mystery do you hold my lady?" He thought aloud.
Legolas opened the window and cold breeze entered. The Angel let out a soft moan.
"Rest my lady. You are now safe." He looked at the sky and noticed that sunset is nearing. Unfortunately, though he does not want to, he needs to depart soon before one of his father's men go looking for him. Legolas looked at the Angel for the last time... today.
"I shall leave you for now, but I will come back for you as soon as the sun rises tomorrow my lady. I promise."
Legolas hurriedly snatched his bow and quiver and ran back to the castle as to please his father for coming home earlier than expected.
Back in the castle...
"Ah my son! You are early! Wonderful!" said his father. Legolas bowed to show respect to the King.
Legolas smiled. " I have to father. For I would not want to keep a girl wait."
" Very well Legolas, I am impressed. " said the King.
"I shall proceed to my room then father. I need to prepare." Legolas said bowing again.
"So be it my son. I shall see you this evening." The King bid farewell to Legolas.
Legolas then made his way to his room. He closed the door and lay on his bed. He took out something from his pocket. It is a feather. He held it in his hand and placed it in his chest... in his heart.
"Be well soon my lady... I would love to see your beauty shine again."
He whispered as he drifted off to sleep. Thoughts filled of the Angel.
*Hmmm... naughty naughty Legolas! Just what was he really thinking?! Staring at the Angel's exposed legs?! May thunder strike you!
Legolas: Ahhhhhh! * Lightning strikes on the poor elf * Oh man, who could resist? I cannot help it... * pouts *
Angel: *pretending to still lie unconsciously* (heeheeheee! I knew it!)
Nyahahaha! Icebreaker for you guys. Sorrie about this one being short but don't worry! I will post 2 chapters today just for you guys! :) And oh! I have some people to thank for:
Anna Arkadyevna Karenina: Hello! Chapter 3 is up! I'm looking forward to your review :) Thanks!
princess-alora-greenleaf : yeah, you're cool too! Thanks a bunch! :)
Krillball6: heya dude! Chapter 3 is up! I hope you received my mail! Thanks a lot!
And Telboriel for praising my writing ability though I sucked at the first part. Hehe! Man I just hope I did fine in this chapter. Can't thank you enough guys! Thank You! Thank You! Okay now on to the next chapter! :) ------
Rue's Note: I have changed some errors and parts of the story in chapter 1. I changed the date of the "Hunting Festival" from 2 days to 5 days. Oki! That would be all! :)
Chapter 3: Fallen Angel
She had a long hair, dyed in brown and highlighted blonde. Her hair color is perfect to make her face shine even though she looks pale and weak. He never saw such creature before. But of course! This one has "wings".
This is an Angel.
Legolas stood in awe. He still cannot believe what he is seeing. He stood there for a minute in such amazement. He then remembered the red stained trail of feathers that he was following a while ago...
Blood.
He felt her pulse. She is still alive. Legolas quickly carried the angel on his back and headed to his "sanctuary". It is just impossible for him to bring AN Angel to their castle! He thought. In addition, of course Shalwel will be there. He does not want to disappoint the Elf upon bringing a girl home. As they are headed to his "sanctuary", Legolas can feel her breathing on his neck.
"Stay with me my Lady... " He said.
Moreover, thank God for his Elvish speed, they arrived in his "sanctuary" in no time.
It is a small hut capable of occupying two people. Inside is a table and a bed made of wood and autumn leaves. This is where he heads when he wants to get away from it all.
Legolas carefully laid the unconscious Angel in the bed. She is a mess. She had bloodstains almost all over. Her wrists... just what had happened? And her right wing... it seems to be broken. She is wearing a white dress. Legolas can tell that it was long before it was ripped off. The rip made a long slit on the Angel's right leg exposing almost her inner thigh. It made his heart skip a beat. What was he thinking?! Legolas shook his head. However, there is no doubt that she is a beauty. She has a fair skin. She is tall judging by her long legs exposing. Legolas then wondered how it feels to touch her... TOUCH HER?! SNAP OUT OF IT ELF! Legolas sighed.
"What mystery do you hold my lady?" He thought aloud.
Legolas opened the window and cold breeze entered. The Angel let out a soft moan.
"Rest my lady. You are now safe." He looked at the sky and noticed that sunset is nearing. Unfortunately, though he does not want to, he needs to depart soon before one of his father's men go looking for him. Legolas looked at the Angel for the last time... today.
"I shall leave you for now, but I will come back for you as soon as the sun rises tomorrow my lady. I promise."
Legolas hurriedly snatched his bow and quiver and ran back to the castle as to please his father for coming home earlier than expected.
Back in the castle...
"Ah my son! You are early! Wonderful!" said his father. Legolas bowed to show respect to the King.
Legolas smiled. " I have to father. For I would not want to keep a girl wait."
" Very well Legolas, I am impressed. " said the King.
"I shall proceed to my room then father. I need to prepare." Legolas said bowing again.
"So be it my son. I shall see you this evening." The King bid farewell to Legolas.
Legolas then made his way to his room. He closed the door and lay on his bed. He took out something from his pocket. It is a feather. He held it in his hand and placed it in his chest... in his heart.
"Be well soon my lady... I would love to see your beauty shine again."
He whispered as he drifted off to sleep. Thoughts filled of the Angel.
*Hmmm... naughty naughty Legolas! Just what was he really thinking?! Staring at the Angel's exposed legs?! May thunder strike you!
Legolas: Ahhhhhh! * Lightning strikes on the poor elf * Oh man, who could resist? I cannot help it... * pouts *
Angel: *pretending to still lie unconsciously* (heeheeheee! I knew it!)
Nyahahaha! Icebreaker for you guys. Sorrie about this one being short but don't worry! I will post 2 chapters today just for you guys! :) And oh! I have some people to thank for:
Anna Arkadyevna Karenina: Hello! Chapter 3 is up! I'm looking forward to your review :) Thanks!
princess-alora-greenleaf : yeah, you're cool too! Thanks a bunch! :)
Krillball6: heya dude! Chapter 3 is up! I hope you received my mail! Thanks a lot!
And Telboriel for praising my writing ability though I sucked at the first part. Hehe! Man I just hope I did fine in this chapter. Can't thank you enough guys! Thank You! Thank You! Okay now on to the next chapter! :) ------