I don't own any charactors except for my oc mark. this is the first real story I'm doing so I'm sorry if there is any mistakes.
"when is class going to f*king end!"
I thoght, as I watch my theacher talk. A few mins passed and the bell eventuly rang. I picked up my backpack as fast as I could and ran out of the school and into my car. I was driving back to my house when I got a call from my father. "hello?" "hey mark" "hey" "is this a good time to call or are you still at school?" "ya it's fine I'm just driving back home." "can you please stop by at diffent city?" " ok, I should be there in about a hour." "ok." call ended 4 min 58 sec. I turn my car around try to set my phone gps for the address of my father's house only to see the gps app needs to be updated. I pull over to update the gps and see that it hasn't been updated in 7 years. "damn I had this phone for so long I haven't updated this damn app in 7 years." I thought as I saw the app was finished updating. an hour of driving later. I walk into the house and into the dineing room. "SURPRIZE!" I jerk back hitting my hip on a table. "ow! God can yall please never do that again." I said while laughing. "happy 20th birthday mark" my father said "thank you!" said happly. "how about you open your gifts, so we could light the cake I'm starving." my father said. I opened my first gift to see a new phone. "a new phone thank you dad!" I said "don't thank me yet open your next gift." I open my next gift with a smile to see it was a plane ticket to africa. I got yp and hugged my dad spechless for the gifts he gived me. "I know that you haven't had any real time to really relax so I broght a ticket for you to go to africa." "will you be going to?" I asked my father. "no, I got stuff to take care of, but next time we will go on a father a son trip how does that sound?" I noded in agrement to the plan. "I alredy picked the house you will stay at, so you won't have to worry about that." "thank you." I said still in shock. " you should get home to pack, the fight is tomorow." "ok." I said. I left the house with the ticket still in it's little box and the new phone in my pocket, I got in the car putting the ticket in the glove compartment and put the new phone in my hand to set it up by just loging in to my accout. After setting up my phone I start to head back to my house just relizing how dark it is. "damn I did not see how late it is I better get going. I thought. after a hour and a half of driving. I finaily got home at 11:12 pm I got out of the car super tired wondering how I did not fall asleep while driveing back. I went inside and locked the door, I went stright up the my bedroom and set my alarm to 6:15 am and fell asleep in my jeans and cod shirt.
end of chapter 1
this is my first ever story so some advive would be helpful