Authors note: Hey peoples........this is a total rewrite......so if it
looks different its because it is........im going to try and make it
better........alot better.Okay?
Oh by the way, a couple of things you need to know to understand :
-Mr Evans is a wizard, Mrs Evans not(or appears to be, you'll understand later on in the story)
-Pet is Petunia,
-Pet is actually nice to Lily, yet she is jealous of Lily
-Pet is not ugly like a horse she is after all a normal person
-Pet is 16 when Lily is 11
-Lily has a magical power.....that power is.........aaaaawww......I think I'll let you read and find out!
Okay, that's about it. Bye Bye (p.s. read on :P)
Introduction
Ever since Petunia was eleven, she had been expecting her letter from Hogwarts or any other school of witchcraft and wizardry but not once did it ever happen. She had been unlucky, that was all.......right?
As Pet was getting out of the shower, she heard her mother telling her younger sister Lily that she was to go down for breakfast and that she had received a letter.
That was when it clicked.
Her sister was eleven and had probably been invited to Hogwarts. Pet was of course jealous about the fact that her sister would probably be attending Hogwarts; but she wouldn't let that get in between the incredible relationship she had with her sister.
Ever since Pet knew she wasn't a witch, she had hoped that her younger sister wouldn't become one either; yet she knew she was wishing for the impossible.
She had hoped that her father's magical genes wouldn't be given to anyone if they weren't given to her, but yet she knew they had been given to her sister ever since Lily had been five years old.
It was one day when they were out shopping and they were at the pet store. Lily had seen the dogs and kittens in the window and had just started crying when they looked at her. It was as if they were talking to her. It was as if she understood them.
Then Lily stopped crying and walked away. As she walked away the puppies and kittens somehow got through the glass windows and followed her out. That was about a year before Pet had learned about Hogwarts and that she hadn't been accepted.
That was the year before she learned that her sister was indeed a witch still growing and that she herself was a "squib" as the wizards called it. Pet had learned where her dad went to work and everything else about the magical world.
That year she found out that her bestfriend had been taken by a dark wizard named Voldermort.
A dark wizard rising.....sought out for. A wizard she HATED!
That was when Petunia Evans decided right then and there not to treat her sister any differently.
Lily Evans
"Lily!! Come down for breakfast!" screamed Mrs Evans, for the millionth time. "You've got a letter!!"
When Lily heard the mentioning of the letter, she quickly brushed her auburn hair into a quick ponytail and put on a tank top and litterally jumped the stairs.
"Hi mum! Who did I get the letter from?" Lily wondered aloud while eyeing the toast, eggs, bacon and sausage on the kitchen counter.
Mrs Evans seeing her youngest daughter's eyes wandering around the plate, replied "The letter is from Hogwarts" She added "- and that plate is for you Lily".
Lily took the plate like a hungry lion pouncing on its prey and started to gulp down the food.
While chewing Lily muttered "Hog*munch*warts*munch*What*munch*kind of place*munch*is that?*munch*"
Mrs Evans, deep in thought, was interrupted by her jolly husband, John Evans.
"Hi Molly! Hi Lily! Where's Pet?"
Mr.Evans went up to Mrs Evans ear and whispered so that little nosy ones couldn't hear him.
He muttered "Molly, dear, did Lily get her acceptance letter from Hogwarts?"
"Yes John, she did. I was about to explain to her what Hogwarts is. I was going to ask you to take her to Diagon Alley tomorrow since you know where it is and I can't go!"
"Sure honey, I'll take her tomorrow, and maybe today you can explain things to her and maybe go shopping for muggle-" but he was interrupted by his wife's glare. "-sorry I meant to say normal clothes."
"Ummmmm sure John. Do you want me to tell her where you actually work? Do you want me to tell her everything? The fact that I'm muggle and also that im not her real mum?And that her sister is a squib as you call her and everything else?"
"Yes Molly. I want you to tell her everything! But don't tell her your not her real mum!!!!!!"
"Well alright honey!"
Just as they finished their private conversation, Petunia walked in.
Now Petunia, she wasn't like the average girl. She may have looked like one, but she was different...she had morals...she had a different way of looking at the world.
Petunia had the usual blonde hair and green eyes. She was good looking.....sexy......she had boys all over her....but her heart was stuck on one boy. A boy that would bring nothing but trouble. A JOCK!!!!!!
"Hi mum, hi dad, hi Lily. I heard you got a letter Lily? Who was it from?" asked a rather hungry Petunia.
Pet saw the plate with the the bacon, eggs, toast and sausage. Then she saw the apple and bowl of cereal. She really would of like to have the big breakfast but she was on a diet. She thought she was too fat.
"Oh...., I got a letter from Hogwarts. I don't know what the letter looks like, I just came down and started eating. Oh mum, can I have an other serving of bacon?"
"Sure honey,but wait a second, the bacon is still cooking." replied her mom in front of the stove.
"Lily I dont know how you can eat that much and stay so small. How do you do it? Asked a rather jealous Pet
"Metabolism, dear Pet.You should know that shouldn't you?" replied sarcasticly Lily with a mouthful of bacon.
"Oh shut up brat face!! At least I dont look like a horse!" replied Pet as a comeback (a/n : sorry I had to say it!!)
"Your right you look like a rat!!" laughed Lily while sputtering other frightful words.
"Do not"
"Do so"
"Do not"
"Do s-"
"ENOUGH GIRLS!!" They're father interrupted. "Well I'm off to work. See you all tonight. Hopefully all in one piece!" He added and on that note he laughed, kissed Lily and Pet on the forehead, and gave his wife a quick kiss on the lips.
"Bye John, dont forget tomorrow. Make sure you wont have to work."
"I won't forget. Have a nice day. Oh Lily! Maybe when I get home tonight you can explain to me what kind of letter you got?huh?"
"Sure dad! Mum can I go play with Joe, Tom and Ryan and the rest of the guys. I wanted to play some football before lunch!?"
"Honey, we have to have a nice long talk about Hogwarts. And I have to explain a couple of things to you. And then we have to go shopping, you need new clothes! So maybe you can later on, maybe tomorrow!"
"Ahh, fine mom I'll call Ryan and tell him I can't go out and play, because my mum and I have to talk and then we have to go shopping and its a whole day thing!.....................Am I in trouble again??"
"No Lily your not in trouble, and please go change cause were going to the BIG mall, the one about 3 hours away from here"
"Why do I have to change?" Lily asked even though she knew the answer to that question.
"Because Lily your not in clothes that are feminin in any way shape or form, the only thing feminin about you right now is your bra and even there its a sports bra."
"Fine mum I'll go change!" she was half way up the stairs running when her mom screamed.
"LILY EVANS STOP RUNNING UP THE STAIRS, ONE DAY YOU'LL SLIP AND FALL AND BREAK YOUR NECK!!!" yelled a quite furious Mrs Evans.
"Fine mum!"
An exasperated Mrs Evans whisper's to her daughter Pet's ear.
"Pet go up there and help her pick something to wear you know she'll be up there for a half hour wondering what to wear to meet up with my standards!"
"Fine mum, ill go help my darling siter who never does anything wrong!" on her corny little joke Pet started giggling and ran up the stairs.
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Meanwhile in Lily's room
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"I finally found it!" Proudly she held up a nice jumper.She found the rest of her "needed" articles of clothing and as she was about to find some dress shoes her sister walked in and gasped
"Oh my god, you can actually dress worth something!!!!! Im sooo.......proud of you Lily!!!!!!! You can actually dress like a girl and not a guy!!!!!"
"Shut up Pet! And help me find my dress shoes that mom bought. And by the way this is a stupid outfit mum bought me not something I would ever wear even if i was trying to look like a girl."
"Ah man and I thought you could actually dress yourself." Pet said in a sarcastic tone.
"Shut up and get out Petty" on that she jumped on her sister and started tickling her. 10 minutes later Pet managed to get out.
"Get off me Lily your outfit will be all wrinkled." yelled furiously Petunia Evans.
"Do I look like I care?!?!?!" screamed back Lily.
"No but I for one do care and so does mum." she pushed her sister off her and got up. she unwrinckled her own clothes and helped her sister unwrinckle her clothes.
"There now take your hair out of that ponytail and find me your brush."
"No i want to keep my ponytail in Pet" yelled Lily like a small child being prived of its favorite toy.
"No." Pet yanked her ponytail out and found Lily's brush. She sat her sister down even with the whines and muttering. An other 10 minutes passed and she had brushed Lily's hair intp a beautiful "Do". Lily looked like a doll. And she hated every moment of it!
"Okay now let me go brush my teeth so I can go downstairs so we can leave. Are you coming pet?"
"NO!..............This is time for you and your mother."
"Fine, geez you'd swear she was telling me something that would change my life!" replied Lily a little baffled from her sister's outburst.
"You'll see" replied Petunia mysteriously
"What are you talkin about? Well I don't have time to worry about that. I have to go down now!" What the catch really was, was Lily really didn't know what she was about to find out, she thought it was just one of those silly shopping adventures with her mom, where she would get big speaches about her not dressing feminine enough. While she was pondering on that thought she rushed off to the kitchen. Pet sighed and followed after her bouncy and cheerfull sister, also known as Lily.
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At the front door before leaving
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"Pet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Were leaving!!!!!!!!!!" said a little nervous Mrs Evans.
"Oh Lily, grab that letter of yours!" Mrs Evans added without further ado.
"Fine mum, but can we just leave I'm really uncomfortable in this stupid dress and I also want to be home when dad gets home!" replied a whinny Lily
"Fine, as soon as Pet comes down here"
"PPPPPPPEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTT!!!" cried Lily this time.
"Im coming im almost there!!!GGGGGGEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZ" screamed back Petunia Evans.
While Ms. Evans was fixing her skirt and Lily was finding a way to get out of her dress, without her mum noticing, Pet walked down the stairs!
"I'm here mom!"
"Okay Pet, no party's, you may have Vernon over and a few friends maximum 10 friends over, i left some money on the counter! You can either go shopping or order pizza's or something! Ooh and last but not least BEHAVE!!!!!! If I come back and this house is a mess I will be very upset and someone will suffer the consequences!" replied sternly yet with a hint of niceness to it(A/n : dont even know if thats a word)
"It wasn't me" screamed Lily out of nowhere "Oh......sorry mum reflex!"
"Well were off! Lily get that letter of yours!" On that note Mrs Evans left the house with Lily hot on her heels with the letter of course, in her hand.
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Hey guys!!!!! SSSooooooo.............. what did you guys think? its an edited version. Where I think it's sooo much better than the first time written!!! Well later peoples!!!!!
Toodles
Nat
Oh by the way, a couple of things you need to know to understand :
-Mr Evans is a wizard, Mrs Evans not(or appears to be, you'll understand later on in the story)
-Pet is Petunia,
-Pet is actually nice to Lily, yet she is jealous of Lily
-Pet is not ugly like a horse she is after all a normal person
-Pet is 16 when Lily is 11
-Lily has a magical power.....that power is.........aaaaawww......I think I'll let you read and find out!
Okay, that's about it. Bye Bye (p.s. read on :P)
Introduction
Ever since Petunia was eleven, she had been expecting her letter from Hogwarts or any other school of witchcraft and wizardry but not once did it ever happen. She had been unlucky, that was all.......right?
As Pet was getting out of the shower, she heard her mother telling her younger sister Lily that she was to go down for breakfast and that she had received a letter.
That was when it clicked.
Her sister was eleven and had probably been invited to Hogwarts. Pet was of course jealous about the fact that her sister would probably be attending Hogwarts; but she wouldn't let that get in between the incredible relationship she had with her sister.
Ever since Pet knew she wasn't a witch, she had hoped that her younger sister wouldn't become one either; yet she knew she was wishing for the impossible.
She had hoped that her father's magical genes wouldn't be given to anyone if they weren't given to her, but yet she knew they had been given to her sister ever since Lily had been five years old.
It was one day when they were out shopping and they were at the pet store. Lily had seen the dogs and kittens in the window and had just started crying when they looked at her. It was as if they were talking to her. It was as if she understood them.
Then Lily stopped crying and walked away. As she walked away the puppies and kittens somehow got through the glass windows and followed her out. That was about a year before Pet had learned about Hogwarts and that she hadn't been accepted.
That was the year before she learned that her sister was indeed a witch still growing and that she herself was a "squib" as the wizards called it. Pet had learned where her dad went to work and everything else about the magical world.
That year she found out that her bestfriend had been taken by a dark wizard named Voldermort.
A dark wizard rising.....sought out for. A wizard she HATED!
That was when Petunia Evans decided right then and there not to treat her sister any differently.
Lily Evans
"Lily!! Come down for breakfast!" screamed Mrs Evans, for the millionth time. "You've got a letter!!"
When Lily heard the mentioning of the letter, she quickly brushed her auburn hair into a quick ponytail and put on a tank top and litterally jumped the stairs.
"Hi mum! Who did I get the letter from?" Lily wondered aloud while eyeing the toast, eggs, bacon and sausage on the kitchen counter.
Mrs Evans seeing her youngest daughter's eyes wandering around the plate, replied "The letter is from Hogwarts" She added "- and that plate is for you Lily".
Lily took the plate like a hungry lion pouncing on its prey and started to gulp down the food.
While chewing Lily muttered "Hog*munch*warts*munch*What*munch*kind of place*munch*is that?*munch*"
Mrs Evans, deep in thought, was interrupted by her jolly husband, John Evans.
"Hi Molly! Hi Lily! Where's Pet?"
Mr.Evans went up to Mrs Evans ear and whispered so that little nosy ones couldn't hear him.
He muttered "Molly, dear, did Lily get her acceptance letter from Hogwarts?"
"Yes John, she did. I was about to explain to her what Hogwarts is. I was going to ask you to take her to Diagon Alley tomorrow since you know where it is and I can't go!"
"Sure honey, I'll take her tomorrow, and maybe today you can explain things to her and maybe go shopping for muggle-" but he was interrupted by his wife's glare. "-sorry I meant to say normal clothes."
"Ummmmm sure John. Do you want me to tell her where you actually work? Do you want me to tell her everything? The fact that I'm muggle and also that im not her real mum?And that her sister is a squib as you call her and everything else?"
"Yes Molly. I want you to tell her everything! But don't tell her your not her real mum!!!!!!"
"Well alright honey!"
Just as they finished their private conversation, Petunia walked in.
Now Petunia, she wasn't like the average girl. She may have looked like one, but she was different...she had morals...she had a different way of looking at the world.
Petunia had the usual blonde hair and green eyes. She was good looking.....sexy......she had boys all over her....but her heart was stuck on one boy. A boy that would bring nothing but trouble. A JOCK!!!!!!
"Hi mum, hi dad, hi Lily. I heard you got a letter Lily? Who was it from?" asked a rather hungry Petunia.
Pet saw the plate with the the bacon, eggs, toast and sausage. Then she saw the apple and bowl of cereal. She really would of like to have the big breakfast but she was on a diet. She thought she was too fat.
"Oh...., I got a letter from Hogwarts. I don't know what the letter looks like, I just came down and started eating. Oh mum, can I have an other serving of bacon?"
"Sure honey,but wait a second, the bacon is still cooking." replied her mom in front of the stove.
"Lily I dont know how you can eat that much and stay so small. How do you do it? Asked a rather jealous Pet
"Metabolism, dear Pet.You should know that shouldn't you?" replied sarcasticly Lily with a mouthful of bacon.
"Oh shut up brat face!! At least I dont look like a horse!" replied Pet as a comeback (a/n : sorry I had to say it!!)
"Your right you look like a rat!!" laughed Lily while sputtering other frightful words.
"Do not"
"Do so"
"Do not"
"Do s-"
"ENOUGH GIRLS!!" They're father interrupted. "Well I'm off to work. See you all tonight. Hopefully all in one piece!" He added and on that note he laughed, kissed Lily and Pet on the forehead, and gave his wife a quick kiss on the lips.
"Bye John, dont forget tomorrow. Make sure you wont have to work."
"I won't forget. Have a nice day. Oh Lily! Maybe when I get home tonight you can explain to me what kind of letter you got?huh?"
"Sure dad! Mum can I go play with Joe, Tom and Ryan and the rest of the guys. I wanted to play some football before lunch!?"
"Honey, we have to have a nice long talk about Hogwarts. And I have to explain a couple of things to you. And then we have to go shopping, you need new clothes! So maybe you can later on, maybe tomorrow!"
"Ahh, fine mom I'll call Ryan and tell him I can't go out and play, because my mum and I have to talk and then we have to go shopping and its a whole day thing!.....................Am I in trouble again??"
"No Lily your not in trouble, and please go change cause were going to the BIG mall, the one about 3 hours away from here"
"Why do I have to change?" Lily asked even though she knew the answer to that question.
"Because Lily your not in clothes that are feminin in any way shape or form, the only thing feminin about you right now is your bra and even there its a sports bra."
"Fine mum I'll go change!" she was half way up the stairs running when her mom screamed.
"LILY EVANS STOP RUNNING UP THE STAIRS, ONE DAY YOU'LL SLIP AND FALL AND BREAK YOUR NECK!!!" yelled a quite furious Mrs Evans.
"Fine mum!"
An exasperated Mrs Evans whisper's to her daughter Pet's ear.
"Pet go up there and help her pick something to wear you know she'll be up there for a half hour wondering what to wear to meet up with my standards!"
"Fine mum, ill go help my darling siter who never does anything wrong!" on her corny little joke Pet started giggling and ran up the stairs.
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Meanwhile in Lily's room
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"I finally found it!" Proudly she held up a nice jumper.She found the rest of her "needed" articles of clothing and as she was about to find some dress shoes her sister walked in and gasped
"Oh my god, you can actually dress worth something!!!!! Im sooo.......proud of you Lily!!!!!!! You can actually dress like a girl and not a guy!!!!!"
"Shut up Pet! And help me find my dress shoes that mom bought. And by the way this is a stupid outfit mum bought me not something I would ever wear even if i was trying to look like a girl."
"Ah man and I thought you could actually dress yourself." Pet said in a sarcastic tone.
"Shut up and get out Petty" on that she jumped on her sister and started tickling her. 10 minutes later Pet managed to get out.
"Get off me Lily your outfit will be all wrinkled." yelled furiously Petunia Evans.
"Do I look like I care?!?!?!" screamed back Lily.
"No but I for one do care and so does mum." she pushed her sister off her and got up. she unwrinckled her own clothes and helped her sister unwrinckle her clothes.
"There now take your hair out of that ponytail and find me your brush."
"No i want to keep my ponytail in Pet" yelled Lily like a small child being prived of its favorite toy.
"No." Pet yanked her ponytail out and found Lily's brush. She sat her sister down even with the whines and muttering. An other 10 minutes passed and she had brushed Lily's hair intp a beautiful "Do". Lily looked like a doll. And she hated every moment of it!
"Okay now let me go brush my teeth so I can go downstairs so we can leave. Are you coming pet?"
"NO!..............This is time for you and your mother."
"Fine, geez you'd swear she was telling me something that would change my life!" replied Lily a little baffled from her sister's outburst.
"You'll see" replied Petunia mysteriously
"What are you talkin about? Well I don't have time to worry about that. I have to go down now!" What the catch really was, was Lily really didn't know what she was about to find out, she thought it was just one of those silly shopping adventures with her mom, where she would get big speaches about her not dressing feminine enough. While she was pondering on that thought she rushed off to the kitchen. Pet sighed and followed after her bouncy and cheerfull sister, also known as Lily.
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At the front door before leaving
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"Pet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Were leaving!!!!!!!!!!" said a little nervous Mrs Evans.
"Oh Lily, grab that letter of yours!" Mrs Evans added without further ado.
"Fine mum, but can we just leave I'm really uncomfortable in this stupid dress and I also want to be home when dad gets home!" replied a whinny Lily
"Fine, as soon as Pet comes down here"
"PPPPPPPEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTT!!!" cried Lily this time.
"Im coming im almost there!!!GGGGGGEEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZ" screamed back Petunia Evans.
While Ms. Evans was fixing her skirt and Lily was finding a way to get out of her dress, without her mum noticing, Pet walked down the stairs!
"I'm here mom!"
"Okay Pet, no party's, you may have Vernon over and a few friends maximum 10 friends over, i left some money on the counter! You can either go shopping or order pizza's or something! Ooh and last but not least BEHAVE!!!!!! If I come back and this house is a mess I will be very upset and someone will suffer the consequences!" replied sternly yet with a hint of niceness to it(A/n : dont even know if thats a word)
"It wasn't me" screamed Lily out of nowhere "Oh......sorry mum reflex!"
"Well were off! Lily get that letter of yours!" On that note Mrs Evans left the house with Lily hot on her heels with the letter of course, in her hand.
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Hey guys!!!!! SSSooooooo.............. what did you guys think? its an edited version. Where I think it's sooo much better than the first time written!!! Well later peoples!!!!!
Toodles
Nat