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Bill, Fred, and (close-up) Dr. Donez were in front of the Mushroom Hall, where Bowser was pressing a little button on a machine in his hand.
"C'mon! Work! Work!" he said. Donez went up to him, and took out his (close- up) ice pick.
"Super Ice Pick Attack!" Donez yelled. Bowser's shell went flying, and then Fred yelled "Ray of Death!" His Ray of Death hit Bowser (who had no way to protect himself), who disintegrated, strangely leaving the machine intact.
"Let's go unfreeze Ness!" Bill said. They did just that. Then Bill got smacked in the head with Ness's bat. Then Ness got hit by Fred's Deathray. Then Bill used the Extra Move on Ness again.
They ran to the exit of Final Destination. Donez unfroze Ness. Then they ran out of the room.
Standing outside the room was Mario. "Hey, I got a good idea." Fred said. "Let's throw Mario in to deal with the angry Ness." Fred grabbed Mario, and then threw him through the door which Donez had opened. Donez quickly shut the door.
That night, everyone (including Mario, although viciously injured by Ness because he hit him in the head while flying around Final Destination) gathered in the Celebration Hall. Master Hand went onto the platform at the end of the room.
"First of all, I would like to welcome the newcomers to Super Smash Brothers!" Every one clapped and cheered. "It seems that they have some unique abilities shown off in their first matches. How's about us take a look." A movie screen behind him started as Master Hand got off the stage.
First, it showed Bill's shocking 1 second victory. Everyone cheered. Next, they showed Fred's match against Samus. At first, Samus was winning, but that changed when Fred used his Deathly Deathray of Deathly Deathness on her, resulting in victory to Fred. Finally, (close-up) Dr. Donez was shown fighting Roy with the (close-up) Ice Pick. He won because of his Ice Pick Beam.
Master Hand got back up on stage. "Now, I believe that proves first impressions aren't everything. Now, if Fred the Spanyard, Bill the Extra Guy, and (Close-up) Dr. Donez please come give a speech."
The got up there and Bill started to speak. "I think that this place is pretty cool, but they should kick out Mario. Luigi, I don't really care about him."
"This place needs a mad scientist, so I'm the person here for it. I like it here, but it smells to much like orange juice in the Mushroom Kingdom and NC corner." Donez said.
"This is a cool place 'cause I get to fight with people who don't occasionally blow up the world." Fred said.
Just then, a Toad came in. "I have a message for the new people. Go to the roof at midnight." The toad then looked at Mario, and then had a heart attack because of the hideous image.
Bill looked at Fred. "I guess we have to stay up." Fred cheered. "Can I eat a hundred tacos again?"
Author's Notes: I decided to update anyway, I just want you to read it. Review this time. Also, if you want the NC website, it's http://www.smbhq.com/nc/. Also, if you have any questions, ask me. I hope you liked the story!
Bill, Fred, and (close-up) Dr. Donez were in front of the Mushroom Hall, where Bowser was pressing a little button on a machine in his hand.
"C'mon! Work! Work!" he said. Donez went up to him, and took out his (close- up) ice pick.
"Super Ice Pick Attack!" Donez yelled. Bowser's shell went flying, and then Fred yelled "Ray of Death!" His Ray of Death hit Bowser (who had no way to protect himself), who disintegrated, strangely leaving the machine intact.
"Let's go unfreeze Ness!" Bill said. They did just that. Then Bill got smacked in the head with Ness's bat. Then Ness got hit by Fred's Deathray. Then Bill used the Extra Move on Ness again.
They ran to the exit of Final Destination. Donez unfroze Ness. Then they ran out of the room.
Standing outside the room was Mario. "Hey, I got a good idea." Fred said. "Let's throw Mario in to deal with the angry Ness." Fred grabbed Mario, and then threw him through the door which Donez had opened. Donez quickly shut the door.
That night, everyone (including Mario, although viciously injured by Ness because he hit him in the head while flying around Final Destination) gathered in the Celebration Hall. Master Hand went onto the platform at the end of the room.
"First of all, I would like to welcome the newcomers to Super Smash Brothers!" Every one clapped and cheered. "It seems that they have some unique abilities shown off in their first matches. How's about us take a look." A movie screen behind him started as Master Hand got off the stage.
First, it showed Bill's shocking 1 second victory. Everyone cheered. Next, they showed Fred's match against Samus. At first, Samus was winning, but that changed when Fred used his Deathly Deathray of Deathly Deathness on her, resulting in victory to Fred. Finally, (close-up) Dr. Donez was shown fighting Roy with the (close-up) Ice Pick. He won because of his Ice Pick Beam.
Master Hand got back up on stage. "Now, I believe that proves first impressions aren't everything. Now, if Fred the Spanyard, Bill the Extra Guy, and (Close-up) Dr. Donez please come give a speech."
The got up there and Bill started to speak. "I think that this place is pretty cool, but they should kick out Mario. Luigi, I don't really care about him."
"This place needs a mad scientist, so I'm the person here for it. I like it here, but it smells to much like orange juice in the Mushroom Kingdom and NC corner." Donez said.
"This is a cool place 'cause I get to fight with people who don't occasionally blow up the world." Fred said.
Just then, a Toad came in. "I have a message for the new people. Go to the roof at midnight." The toad then looked at Mario, and then had a heart attack because of the hideous image.
Bill looked at Fred. "I guess we have to stay up." Fred cheered. "Can I eat a hundred tacos again?"
Author's Notes: I decided to update anyway, I just want you to read it. Review this time. Also, if you want the NC website, it's http://www.smbhq.com/nc/. Also, if you have any questions, ask me. I hope you liked the story!