INUYASHA IS NOT A YOUKAI!!!! AND ITS SPELLED YOU KAI YOU KAI! AND
SESSHOUMARU IS SPELLED SESSHOUMARU!!! WHY'D YOU MAKE HANYOU A PERVERT?!
YOUKAI IS DEMON HANYOU IS HALF DEMON!!! GET IT RIGHT!!!
okay I wont tell you, but you soooooooooooooo do not know how to spell Sesshoumaru you spelled sha show roo sama
I spell things wrong but come on! He warped his arms around her? you spell wrapped w-r-a-p-p-e-d
It's spelled Sesshoumaru, let's repeat sesshoumaru, now let's spell it together, S-E-S-S-H-O-U-M-A-R-U, SESSHOUMARU! Okay? Now when you say 'recantation' are you sure you don't mean reincarnation? Even my friend can spell that..heehee...anyhoo...besides all the spelling mistakes it's pretty good so far
Tetsusaiga
Sesshoumaru
reincarnation
wrapped
All spelled wrong!
...........sorry...I'm...obsessed with spelling things.....gomen..gomen...(In case your wondering, it means sorry)
Listen, if you don't know how to spell things then look at other people's stories and see how they spell it, but use more that one candidate..
Argghhhhh!!!! Everyone's bothering me about spelling!!!! Sob!! This might be da last chapter!! I might not make it end anymore (
Finally waking up, Kagome peeped her eyes opened. Seeing herself in tattered, ripped up bed, the walls were full of dinginess.
"what da? Where am I?!" she thought frantically.
Remembering what had happened, she jumped out of bed and ran though the house calling out names and screaming for help.
Sensing a person watching her, she turned around and screamed.
A hideous man stood before her, dressed in a black cloak with the hood covering his head (I kno he wears that baboon thing!)
"w-w-what d-do you want from m-me?!" Kagome's voice trembled.
The man didn't say a word, just motioned her to sit down.
Trembling, she obeyed and sat down quietly.
"What do you want?" she repeated, this time more firmly.
"Kill" His voice was raspy and in a whisper.
The way he said it was creepy for kagome
"KILL INUYASHA!!" he screamed suddenly, lifting his head in such a force, he knocked the hood down and his face was red with anger, but this wasn't what scared kagome, it was his eyes, the way it glowed red for a moment, staring at her, bulging out, and finally back to it's normal color.
Catching his breath, he began again.
"He is my worst rival, his father killed mine and left me, parentless, without anybody to take care of me, leaving me to starve. I was even nearly killed I barely escaped.
~Flashback~
Seeing his parents being ripped up and eaten by dogs (belonging to Inu's father) lil Naraku ran into a cave before it got clawed open by dogs. running as fast as he could, he climbed up a tree, Naraku waited until the watchdogs finally gave up and left. Shivering in the cold, he slid down the tree and walked for days until he finally collapsed and lay there, crumpled up. Luckily, an old man found him, and took care of him, till the day he was too old and passed away, again leaving Naraku shelter less because of the man's offspring, who never liked him, shoved him out into the cold, disobeying the man's words and took all the money.
~end of flashback~
"and now! This is what have become of me!" again the man raged and his eyes turned red.
"I WILL GET MY REVENGE!!" he screamed with an insane look in his eyes.
Staring right at Kagome, who was scared to death, he slowly advanced her. Every step he took forwards, every step she took backwards.
Ramming her against the wall, and holding her by the neck, Naraku took out a knife, "You will kill Inuyasha for me..or else."
AHHHH!!!!!! I finished!! Now!! Don't complain about my spelling!!! And REVIEW!!
okay I wont tell you, but you soooooooooooooo do not know how to spell Sesshoumaru you spelled sha show roo sama
I spell things wrong but come on! He warped his arms around her? you spell wrapped w-r-a-p-p-e-d
It's spelled Sesshoumaru, let's repeat sesshoumaru, now let's spell it together, S-E-S-S-H-O-U-M-A-R-U, SESSHOUMARU! Okay? Now when you say 'recantation' are you sure you don't mean reincarnation? Even my friend can spell that..heehee...anyhoo...besides all the spelling mistakes it's pretty good so far
Tetsusaiga
Sesshoumaru
reincarnation
wrapped
All spelled wrong!
...........sorry...I'm...obsessed with spelling things.....gomen..gomen...(In case your wondering, it means sorry)
Listen, if you don't know how to spell things then look at other people's stories and see how they spell it, but use more that one candidate..
Argghhhhh!!!! Everyone's bothering me about spelling!!!! Sob!! This might be da last chapter!! I might not make it end anymore (
Finally waking up, Kagome peeped her eyes opened. Seeing herself in tattered, ripped up bed, the walls were full of dinginess.
"what da? Where am I?!" she thought frantically.
Remembering what had happened, she jumped out of bed and ran though the house calling out names and screaming for help.
Sensing a person watching her, she turned around and screamed.
A hideous man stood before her, dressed in a black cloak with the hood covering his head (I kno he wears that baboon thing!)
"w-w-what d-do you want from m-me?!" Kagome's voice trembled.
The man didn't say a word, just motioned her to sit down.
Trembling, she obeyed and sat down quietly.
"What do you want?" she repeated, this time more firmly.
"Kill" His voice was raspy and in a whisper.
The way he said it was creepy for kagome
"KILL INUYASHA!!" he screamed suddenly, lifting his head in such a force, he knocked the hood down and his face was red with anger, but this wasn't what scared kagome, it was his eyes, the way it glowed red for a moment, staring at her, bulging out, and finally back to it's normal color.
Catching his breath, he began again.
"He is my worst rival, his father killed mine and left me, parentless, without anybody to take care of me, leaving me to starve. I was even nearly killed I barely escaped.
~Flashback~
Seeing his parents being ripped up and eaten by dogs (belonging to Inu's father) lil Naraku ran into a cave before it got clawed open by dogs. running as fast as he could, he climbed up a tree, Naraku waited until the watchdogs finally gave up and left. Shivering in the cold, he slid down the tree and walked for days until he finally collapsed and lay there, crumpled up. Luckily, an old man found him, and took care of him, till the day he was too old and passed away, again leaving Naraku shelter less because of the man's offspring, who never liked him, shoved him out into the cold, disobeying the man's words and took all the money.
~end of flashback~
"and now! This is what have become of me!" again the man raged and his eyes turned red.
"I WILL GET MY REVENGE!!" he screamed with an insane look in his eyes.
Staring right at Kagome, who was scared to death, he slowly advanced her. Every step he took forwards, every step she took backwards.
Ramming her against the wall, and holding her by the neck, Naraku took out a knife, "You will kill Inuyasha for me..or else."
AHHHH!!!!!! I finished!! Now!! Don't complain about my spelling!!! And REVIEW!!