AUTHOR: Neniae
CONTACT: aslyinn@yahoo.com
CURRENTLY: Listening to "The Three Sisters," an album of traditional Irish music by flute player Barry Kerr.
DISCLAIMER: For God's sake, do I look like the Almighty Flanneled One or Philip K. Dick to you? No? Then don't sue.
Hey! Well, as some of you may have noticed, I was working on about ten stories at once and I couldn't keep up with them all, so I asked people to let me know which ones I should continue. It looks like I'll mainly be working on this, Through My Eyes, and Tears for Innocence from now on. I'm really busy for the next two weeks because of midterm exams at school, but I'll try to update at least once a week. After midterms are over, my updates will be more frequent, because I'll be able to go back to my old habit of working on my writing for half an hour each night.
Heidi M ~ Heh... yes, it will be. And I'm not even sure exactly where this will go yet.
Remnants ~ I'll try to keep updating for you ^_^
Crystal ~ Thanks!
Midnight Corruption ~ I like the new name! I may soon have to change mine as well, for the same reason. Anyway, glad that you like it!
Jedilittlebee ~ Yeah, I will! Glad you like it.
Wow... I think that this is the most reviews I've ever gotten for a first chapter O_o thanks again to all of you.
Qui-Gon Jinn was quite relieved when the co-pilot of their small Tougarian craft came back to the passenger area to warn them that they would soon be landing. The venerable Jedi master sat down but did not buckle the safety harness, expecting the smooth and flawless landing normally associated with landing pads. However, he was abruptly hurled backwards through the air to land on top of his sleeping Padawan. As he desperately attempted to pull himself out from the tangle of robes, he sent a few choice curse words in the co-pilot's direction that, if they had been uttered within a mile of the Temple, would have caused Master Yoda to flog him heartily with his cane.
"I'm s-s-sorry, sir," stammered the man in question, "B-but... this moon h-has no techno-nology... we had to la-land in the fields and..." Qui-Gon finally managed to stand up and glared at the target of his anger, causing the man to cower. "You want to dissapate my anger towards you? If so, bring me a pitcher of ice water. Now."
"I...ice water, sir?"
"Yes. To dump over this apprentice of mine. He's out cold."
An hour later, "Sleeping Beauty" had finally been awakened, courtesy of several gallons of frigid water. Obi-Wan now stood by his master's side in the middle of the field, his robes soaked through and hanging limply on him.
"So, where to, Master?" The young boy looked towards Qui-Gon questioningly. He had only been a Padawan for two years, and though he acted quite calm and composed when politics demanded it of him, he was still just a rather goofy teen when only his Master or friends were around. "To the meeting hall, Obi-Wan. I hear that it is in the middle of all of the towns so that no one society may claim it."
"You said before that there used to be a mental ward here, and that all of the population is from there. So is each town the property of the people with one particular disorder?"
"Yes, and each town is named after a famous person in the history of Terra who had that disorder. Each town will send one representative to the meeting. Now come, Obi-Wan. We must be at the meeting hall before three more standard hours have passed."
They trudged off across the field in the direction that the pilot had indicated earlier. They would pass through Ghanditown, home of the Heebs, and then reach the hall in time for the gatering of the council of Alpha III M2.
Author's notes: Hey, sorry that this chapter was so short, but I'll be putting up another chapter tonight or tomorrow morning to make up for that. You see, I'm afraid that I may have to break the council meeting up into several chapters as it is, because it's really long... anyway, as always, review and let me know what you think! Praise, comments, and constructive criticism welcomed!
What are Heebs? What are the other citizens like? What will happen at the council meeting? Find out soon!
CONTACT: aslyinn@yahoo.com
CURRENTLY: Listening to "The Three Sisters," an album of traditional Irish music by flute player Barry Kerr.
DISCLAIMER: For God's sake, do I look like the Almighty Flanneled One or Philip K. Dick to you? No? Then don't sue.
Hey! Well, as some of you may have noticed, I was working on about ten stories at once and I couldn't keep up with them all, so I asked people to let me know which ones I should continue. It looks like I'll mainly be working on this, Through My Eyes, and Tears for Innocence from now on. I'm really busy for the next two weeks because of midterm exams at school, but I'll try to update at least once a week. After midterms are over, my updates will be more frequent, because I'll be able to go back to my old habit of working on my writing for half an hour each night.
Heidi M ~ Heh... yes, it will be. And I'm not even sure exactly where this will go yet.
Remnants ~ I'll try to keep updating for you ^_^
Crystal ~ Thanks!
Midnight Corruption ~ I like the new name! I may soon have to change mine as well, for the same reason. Anyway, glad that you like it!
Jedilittlebee ~ Yeah, I will! Glad you like it.
Wow... I think that this is the most reviews I've ever gotten for a first chapter O_o thanks again to all of you.
Qui-Gon Jinn was quite relieved when the co-pilot of their small Tougarian craft came back to the passenger area to warn them that they would soon be landing. The venerable Jedi master sat down but did not buckle the safety harness, expecting the smooth and flawless landing normally associated with landing pads. However, he was abruptly hurled backwards through the air to land on top of his sleeping Padawan. As he desperately attempted to pull himself out from the tangle of robes, he sent a few choice curse words in the co-pilot's direction that, if they had been uttered within a mile of the Temple, would have caused Master Yoda to flog him heartily with his cane.
"I'm s-s-sorry, sir," stammered the man in question, "B-but... this moon h-has no techno-nology... we had to la-land in the fields and..." Qui-Gon finally managed to stand up and glared at the target of his anger, causing the man to cower. "You want to dissapate my anger towards you? If so, bring me a pitcher of ice water. Now."
"I...ice water, sir?"
"Yes. To dump over this apprentice of mine. He's out cold."
An hour later, "Sleeping Beauty" had finally been awakened, courtesy of several gallons of frigid water. Obi-Wan now stood by his master's side in the middle of the field, his robes soaked through and hanging limply on him.
"So, where to, Master?" The young boy looked towards Qui-Gon questioningly. He had only been a Padawan for two years, and though he acted quite calm and composed when politics demanded it of him, he was still just a rather goofy teen when only his Master or friends were around. "To the meeting hall, Obi-Wan. I hear that it is in the middle of all of the towns so that no one society may claim it."
"You said before that there used to be a mental ward here, and that all of the population is from there. So is each town the property of the people with one particular disorder?"
"Yes, and each town is named after a famous person in the history of Terra who had that disorder. Each town will send one representative to the meeting. Now come, Obi-Wan. We must be at the meeting hall before three more standard hours have passed."
They trudged off across the field in the direction that the pilot had indicated earlier. They would pass through Ghanditown, home of the Heebs, and then reach the hall in time for the gatering of the council of Alpha III M2.
Author's notes: Hey, sorry that this chapter was so short, but I'll be putting up another chapter tonight or tomorrow morning to make up for that. You see, I'm afraid that I may have to break the council meeting up into several chapters as it is, because it's really long... anyway, as always, review and let me know what you think! Praise, comments, and constructive criticism welcomed!
What are Heebs? What are the other citizens like? What will happen at the council meeting? Find out soon!