^_^ HI, im glad everyone has such nice reviews, another chapter YAY, weell
while your reading this i thought i would take the question to you, im
gonna need a name for one female kitsuine, i am HORRIBLE with names.
as a side note, im gonna try to explain everything, and for the child
sceens, i will be putting a few more in throughout the story,
i re-wrote this chapter in an effort to slow it down a bit, it did seem a bit rushed
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Inuyasha was running, not that that wasn't unusual for him, it was just that he was doing it over rooftops at night. He was in a hurry, it had take a longer time that he had anticipated to get his present ready and he wanted to get it to Kagome right away. He probably would have not realized if Lost Star hadn't reminded him of the time. As it was he had sped off and had left Lost Star behind.
That was probably why he didn't notice right off that Kagome wasn't at home. He had just jumped into the center of the yard.
"OI, KAGOME!" He yelled.
"Inuyasha!" he was slightly startled at Souta's voice. He had been expecting Kagome not her brother.
"Hey, where is Kagome?" Inuyasha asked a slighly histerical Souta.
"I dunno some monster dragged her into the well, you gotta save her big brother!" Souta said between sniffles.
"WHAT!?" Inuyasha didn't wait, running straight to the well and jumping down it, following her scent. Souta followed as well, but he was stuck at the other side, hoping that Kagome would be saved by Inuyasha. That didn't prevent him from breaking down and crying, hoping that he would see his sister, and the half-youkai he loved as a brother back.
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At the other side of the well a frantic half demon searched the ground. He found Kagome's scent and that of another youkai, a horrible rotting stench that was not very pleasant to deal with. He briefly debated tracking that youkai down, but realized that ther would be a scent of fear if it had attacked her. He found two of the creatures arms at the bottom of the well. He jumped out, she wasn't there and he could guess that she would get out when this happened.
Inuyasha followed her scent, getting several half formed memories as he tracked her, that of being chased to here by another youkai, surviving in the forest, he shook these off. He had no real clue where the hell he was, but he had no real interest in figuring it out until he found Kagome. Ok, what did she do after she got here? She had gotten out of the well, and went wondering into the forest, he went foward a bit following the trail and got to a tree.
Inuyasha snorted, it was the exact same tree at the shrine, he could tell they were someplace else, but Kagome would have thought they were at home and would have tried to get back to the shrine. He sniffed and located her scent going the way he thought it would be, and followed it a bit. Then he noticed several arrows embeded into the tree, this got him scared, Kagome had gotten into trouble again. Se had the worst luck he had ever seen, he sped up, and got even more frantic at the smell of fear.
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Souta was at the other side of the well on the ground, crying and bawling when Lost Star found him. Not knowing what had happened he picked up Souta and brought him into the house, trying to coax what had happened out of him. Ji-chan came out wondering what had happened as well.
"Souta told me they went down the well." Lost Star explained to Ji-chan as he tried to calm down Souta, he wasn't doing a very good job, so he gave Souta to Mrs Higurashi.
"Hmm the same well Inuyasha came out of, it certainly has been active this past decade." Ji-chan said looking very wise. "The trick is to get both the children back safe and unharmed."
Lost Star seemed amused at Ji-chan's antics, Souta had calmed down. Mrs Higurashi could work miracles with children. With him quieted down the atmosphere calmed as well. "I don't think you need to worry. Those two will come back safe and on thier own."
"How are you sure?" Souta asked.
Lost Star simply smiled, "I just know, and I trust that."
The family was left to wonder as he left the house and took up a post at the well house. "I will watch it until they come back, when they do I'll let you know."
Lacking anything to do the all tried to get some sleep.
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Inuyasha had ran after the scent, racing through the forest, and getting to a fortified town. The town was fortified, but he just jumped over the walls, having no time to waste. He was frantic, the smell of fear had been on the entire trail, he raced through the town. He wasn't spotted, but he noticed that the youkai that had been at the well was coming, he had to get her out fast. Finding the house that had her scent he smashed into it disdaining the door.
"Kagome!"
He spotted her quickly, wearing some miko robes and with a bow, grabing her he was going to say something, the Youkai that had taken her was coming. Wanting to get her out of danger before he did anything else he picked her up and began to run with her in her arms. He ignored her surprised sounds.
The girl was stunned when the Hanyou had picked her up and even more so when he began to run with her in her arms, her initial sounds of protest had died out in favor of thinking about what to do. Thinking quickly however she reached into her robe for something, watching the youkai from the well, a gigantic centipede, grab something in the house and begin to chase her.
Inuyasha had cleared the town, glad that that danger at least had passed, and was about to set Kagome down when he felt her slip something around his neck, surprised he looked at her, and droped her.
She fell down, and angerly said something.
"SIT!!"
He was flattened saying something that he had reserved for special occations since his talk with Kagome's mom.
"BITCH!!! I don't know HOW i thought you were Kagome!"
And watched stunned as she shot an arrow at the Youkai, destroying it.
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i dont think that is much better, but that helped :)
HEHEHEH IM EVIL, i found that funny, care to guess where they are? :P everyone have fun waiting for the next chapter oh and thank you for the reviews, especially the ones that comment on the things in the story, input improves writing ^^
i re-wrote this chapter in an effort to slow it down a bit, it did seem a bit rushed
__________________________________________
Inuyasha was running, not that that wasn't unusual for him, it was just that he was doing it over rooftops at night. He was in a hurry, it had take a longer time that he had anticipated to get his present ready and he wanted to get it to Kagome right away. He probably would have not realized if Lost Star hadn't reminded him of the time. As it was he had sped off and had left Lost Star behind.
That was probably why he didn't notice right off that Kagome wasn't at home. He had just jumped into the center of the yard.
"OI, KAGOME!" He yelled.
"Inuyasha!" he was slightly startled at Souta's voice. He had been expecting Kagome not her brother.
"Hey, where is Kagome?" Inuyasha asked a slighly histerical Souta.
"I dunno some monster dragged her into the well, you gotta save her big brother!" Souta said between sniffles.
"WHAT!?" Inuyasha didn't wait, running straight to the well and jumping down it, following her scent. Souta followed as well, but he was stuck at the other side, hoping that Kagome would be saved by Inuyasha. That didn't prevent him from breaking down and crying, hoping that he would see his sister, and the half-youkai he loved as a brother back.
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At the other side of the well a frantic half demon searched the ground. He found Kagome's scent and that of another youkai, a horrible rotting stench that was not very pleasant to deal with. He briefly debated tracking that youkai down, but realized that ther would be a scent of fear if it had attacked her. He found two of the creatures arms at the bottom of the well. He jumped out, she wasn't there and he could guess that she would get out when this happened.
Inuyasha followed her scent, getting several half formed memories as he tracked her, that of being chased to here by another youkai, surviving in the forest, he shook these off. He had no real clue where the hell he was, but he had no real interest in figuring it out until he found Kagome. Ok, what did she do after she got here? She had gotten out of the well, and went wondering into the forest, he went foward a bit following the trail and got to a tree.
Inuyasha snorted, it was the exact same tree at the shrine, he could tell they were someplace else, but Kagome would have thought they were at home and would have tried to get back to the shrine. He sniffed and located her scent going the way he thought it would be, and followed it a bit. Then he noticed several arrows embeded into the tree, this got him scared, Kagome had gotten into trouble again. Se had the worst luck he had ever seen, he sped up, and got even more frantic at the smell of fear.
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Souta was at the other side of the well on the ground, crying and bawling when Lost Star found him. Not knowing what had happened he picked up Souta and brought him into the house, trying to coax what had happened out of him. Ji-chan came out wondering what had happened as well.
"Souta told me they went down the well." Lost Star explained to Ji-chan as he tried to calm down Souta, he wasn't doing a very good job, so he gave Souta to Mrs Higurashi.
"Hmm the same well Inuyasha came out of, it certainly has been active this past decade." Ji-chan said looking very wise. "The trick is to get both the children back safe and unharmed."
Lost Star seemed amused at Ji-chan's antics, Souta had calmed down. Mrs Higurashi could work miracles with children. With him quieted down the atmosphere calmed as well. "I don't think you need to worry. Those two will come back safe and on thier own."
"How are you sure?" Souta asked.
Lost Star simply smiled, "I just know, and I trust that."
The family was left to wonder as he left the house and took up a post at the well house. "I will watch it until they come back, when they do I'll let you know."
Lacking anything to do the all tried to get some sleep.
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Inuyasha had ran after the scent, racing through the forest, and getting to a fortified town. The town was fortified, but he just jumped over the walls, having no time to waste. He was frantic, the smell of fear had been on the entire trail, he raced through the town. He wasn't spotted, but he noticed that the youkai that had been at the well was coming, he had to get her out fast. Finding the house that had her scent he smashed into it disdaining the door.
"Kagome!"
He spotted her quickly, wearing some miko robes and with a bow, grabing her he was going to say something, the Youkai that had taken her was coming. Wanting to get her out of danger before he did anything else he picked her up and began to run with her in her arms. He ignored her surprised sounds.
The girl was stunned when the Hanyou had picked her up and even more so when he began to run with her in her arms, her initial sounds of protest had died out in favor of thinking about what to do. Thinking quickly however she reached into her robe for something, watching the youkai from the well, a gigantic centipede, grab something in the house and begin to chase her.
Inuyasha had cleared the town, glad that that danger at least had passed, and was about to set Kagome down when he felt her slip something around his neck, surprised he looked at her, and droped her.
She fell down, and angerly said something.
"SIT!!"
He was flattened saying something that he had reserved for special occations since his talk with Kagome's mom.
"BITCH!!! I don't know HOW i thought you were Kagome!"
And watched stunned as she shot an arrow at the Youkai, destroying it.
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i dont think that is much better, but that helped :)
HEHEHEH IM EVIL, i found that funny, care to guess where they are? :P everyone have fun waiting for the next chapter oh and thank you for the reviews, especially the ones that comment on the things in the story, input improves writing ^^