Hello. I, the great and powerful, Rouge Maverick have finally revised the begining chapters.
I hope more readers will keep reading from the start.
The Muses will be back in the next chapter.
Read on and enjoy the fic. Hehehe.
--------------------------The begining of a new life and fatherhood--------------------------
"Hello Mr. Son, and Congratulations. You, my friend, have a new little brother. The name Goten was given to him, and the boy has quite a set of lungs too.*Laughs Uneasily*," Docter Whatmenameis said in a happy tone. Still Gohan could see the look of grieving and foreboding in his pale, shaken eyes. Suddenly it clicked, he couldn't feel his mothers Ki when he tried. In panic he hurriedly asked,"Wha- what about my mom, Son Chichi." Whatmenameis face fell and with slight hesitation he explained,"I'm sorry Mr. Son, she couldn't make it. Her body was tired and needed nourishment among other things. Her last words after naming the boy were 'You, Gohan, have made me proud." The docter gave the baby, Son Goten, to his older brother before leaving. Gohan looked at his new brother and choked out, tears streaming down his face," I will raise you, and I swear by my soul, nothing bad will happen." He then took Goten home with him and adopted him, otherwise Goten would be taken away. He would not let that happen.
Bulma had built a gravity room for Gohan, who had decided to continue training. Gohan had realised that being the strongest on the planet he had a responsibility to stay strong and protect the planet. The Gravity room itself was five times bigger than Vegita's and able to become a capsule. It also had speacial technology to solid hologram nature-like or other various scenary. That way he could be prepared no matter where he fought, and he learned to use his surroundings to his advantage. It was completed with fences, trash cans, and even cars in the city solid hologram, while the forest one has trees and rocks, grass and dirt, heck it even had a small stream with real water.
In the calming forest S hologram he made an important decision. His life would be tough. He would become the protecter he wants and needs to be, but he will also live to his mothers wish of being smart. Above all other things he will put Gotens well-being and happiness. So he still studied, just not as intense; trained every day; all the while being the best role model and father posible for Goten. Just a year after Gohan reached his teenage years, at age 14, stage three of a super saiyen became accessible to him. Goten at the age of 3.5 reached level one statis of super saiyan . When Gohan went reached stage 3 of super saiyan his tail grew back and he grew small fangs. When Goten became age 4 he advanced to study along with his training. Gohan taught him about his Saiyan heritage,how to speak saiyan, and a bit of other alien teachings. Goten would train and study, as his adoptive father and his hero did. Gohan trained and studied with Goten. Both learned how to cook, mostly because it was hard to cook the large portioned meal for a saiyan.
One of the mornings, as Goan was finishing of his twentieth bowl of cerel, the telephone rang. The caller turned out to be the Bulma. She explained that a reuniun was aproaching and Gohan, as smart as he was, was tricked into coming. When the day came both Sons left, dressed normal with tails as belts and staying unsuper saiyan so they didn't destroy the house.
Gohan was now age seventeen and Goten was seven. When Goten was six and a half he learned how to go into stage 2, for Gohan was a very good teacher. Gohan was kind and gentle yet vigorius and hard working. He did it without hurting anyone and tried not to tire Goten out. He tried to make the training fun so that Goten would put 100% each time. The two arrive at the door, and Goten became nervous. Goten has never been in a place this big nor has he met these people before, so he clings to his hero for comfort. Gohan understands how he feels and quickly picks up Goten and sets him on his shoulder, giving a few reasuring words. 'He looks just like I did when I first met the group. I just hope I don't have a long lost, evil brother,' he thinks to himself. The door slowly opens revealing Bulma, who pulled him in not even noticing Goten clutching his brothers head for dear life.
"GOHAN, HOW COME YOU NEVER CAME TO VISIT. I HAD TO TRICK YOU WITH FOOD(explained it all) JUST FOR YOU TO COME DOWN HERE." Bulma screamed like a banshee, afterwards feeling much anger relieved. The prince's, father and son, come in wondering about the yelling. "Who is that dad,"Trunks said looking at Gohan and without waiting for an answer continued," Probably another weakling, 'cuase he sure looks like a weakling." " Hey dont talk about my dad like that," Goten intervined for the first time that night. Someway or another a fight broke out while the others just watched in antisipation.
Goten stayed in his normal form while Trunks powered up to super saiyan one, now called ss1, yet the two appeared evenly matched. This happened because Gohan had first trained Goten while Goten was at full power, but when he reached ss2 the boy trained as his normal form. Gohan and Goten both trained like this because training ss forms would not help any of the lower forms while training the lower forms helped the higher ones. Bulma came up with another brillent plan and trickes Gohan (Bulma: hehehe that kid is so guilible) into going to highschool. In reality, Gohan does this only because its what his mom would have wanted, but he let Bulma think it was because he was guilible or she was smart. Goten joined Trunks' school and class in second grade. Normally Goten would have joined first grade, but he was at genius level and hid his intelligence so he could go with Trunks.
"Attention students or you'll all get F's. Thank you. Today we have a new student who scored perfect on the entrance exam. Son Gohan, please interduse yourself," the teacher said. Gohan walked in and scowled saying, "My life is none of your da** buisness." He stayed in his normal form so they wouldn't recognize him from the cell games. He wore black, loose pants that hid his intense muscles. He wore a long sleeved, gray-green shirt that was really loose. All the girls thought he was cute, despite his attitude and clothes. The boys thought he was a nerd, dork, or dweeb. He then sat next to Erasa, because it was only seat left. Lime, who sat in the seat behind him, was staring in shock at the boy who sat in front of her. 'Is he, is he the same boy...... that I met before the cell games,' she thought to herself. Erasa and Lime tried to make conversation, but Gohan told them off and went into meditation.
During the day Videl recieved a call from the cops. As she left Gohan requested permission to go to the restroom. Once he entered he took off his shirt and pants. Underneath he had on a black saiyan undersuit. He put on the gloves and changed his shoes. He then used the split form technique to split in two. One changed back to his normal clothes and attended class. The other one took of after Videl, after changing to super saiyan three. He didn't act like a moran, he just went in stopped the crime and came back. Once back Gohan once agian went to the bathroom and reunited with his other half.
Later that day in gym class.........
In gym class that day, Gohan found out that Yamcha was the subsitute. Though Gohan didn't notice, the only reason Yamcha was the subsitute was because Dende thought Gohan would need a familier face that day. Yamcha decided, against the rules and Dende, not to take class role." Ok guys today we are doing martial arts raise your hand if you have any experience, "Yamcha said. Gohan raised his hand. Yamcha went around asking sensie's and how long when he got to gohan, who said," All you need to know is that I am good, very good, the rest isn't your buisness." "Ok mister smart spar with me to show others how to do," Yamcha said with a smirk, thinking the guy was all talk. They got to the rink and a huge battle commensed of equal fighters. Yeah right. what really happened was Gohan pretended to have a hard time then Yamcha said," I knew it! Your all bark and no bite. I bet your dad was a weakling lier like you. "Which of course set him off. He basically hit yamcha and almost killed him. Nobody thought that he was a wimp anymore.
--------------------------------3 weeks later--------------------------------
Gohan had been at school for three weeks and had no friends. He wanted it that way, so he always scowls makes mean remarks so every body thought he was a jerk. In reality though it was the exact opposite. ' I'm protecting them every one that I get close to dies and I'm sure they don't want to die.' 'What about Goten(another voice in his head), your close to him' 'He is different. I watch his ki every second, I would never EVER let any one get him,EVER.'
Just then, he felt two familer ki's nearby and he smiled the famous son grin. Everyone somehow saw this, and they all stared in shock. Everyone at school knew that Gohan never smiled. Sure sometimes he talked to himself in a strange languge and he smirked evily from time to time, but he never smiled a smile as pure as that. Just then some teacher came in with a bunch of second graders and
said," Ok class, go sit with any big kid you want." Before the teacher even finishe the sentence Gohan was snagged by second grade kid that looked alot like Gohan and was smaller than the others. There was also a boy a bit bigger with purple(trunks : Hey this hair is lavander stop with the purple already) hair and a smart yet fighty lookto him. They were both sitting on his shoulders, talking franticly as Gohan laughed at the two chibi's. Everyone stared in shock.
I hope more readers will keep reading from the start.
The Muses will be back in the next chapter.
Read on and enjoy the fic. Hehehe.
--------------------------The begining of a new life and fatherhood--------------------------
"Hello Mr. Son, and Congratulations. You, my friend, have a new little brother. The name Goten was given to him, and the boy has quite a set of lungs too.*Laughs Uneasily*," Docter Whatmenameis said in a happy tone. Still Gohan could see the look of grieving and foreboding in his pale, shaken eyes. Suddenly it clicked, he couldn't feel his mothers Ki when he tried. In panic he hurriedly asked,"Wha- what about my mom, Son Chichi." Whatmenameis face fell and with slight hesitation he explained,"I'm sorry Mr. Son, she couldn't make it. Her body was tired and needed nourishment among other things. Her last words after naming the boy were 'You, Gohan, have made me proud." The docter gave the baby, Son Goten, to his older brother before leaving. Gohan looked at his new brother and choked out, tears streaming down his face," I will raise you, and I swear by my soul, nothing bad will happen." He then took Goten home with him and adopted him, otherwise Goten would be taken away. He would not let that happen.
Bulma had built a gravity room for Gohan, who had decided to continue training. Gohan had realised that being the strongest on the planet he had a responsibility to stay strong and protect the planet. The Gravity room itself was five times bigger than Vegita's and able to become a capsule. It also had speacial technology to solid hologram nature-like or other various scenary. That way he could be prepared no matter where he fought, and he learned to use his surroundings to his advantage. It was completed with fences, trash cans, and even cars in the city solid hologram, while the forest one has trees and rocks, grass and dirt, heck it even had a small stream with real water.
In the calming forest S hologram he made an important decision. His life would be tough. He would become the protecter he wants and needs to be, but he will also live to his mothers wish of being smart. Above all other things he will put Gotens well-being and happiness. So he still studied, just not as intense; trained every day; all the while being the best role model and father posible for Goten. Just a year after Gohan reached his teenage years, at age 14, stage three of a super saiyen became accessible to him. Goten at the age of 3.5 reached level one statis of super saiyan . When Gohan went reached stage 3 of super saiyan his tail grew back and he grew small fangs. When Goten became age 4 he advanced to study along with his training. Gohan taught him about his Saiyan heritage,how to speak saiyan, and a bit of other alien teachings. Goten would train and study, as his adoptive father and his hero did. Gohan trained and studied with Goten. Both learned how to cook, mostly because it was hard to cook the large portioned meal for a saiyan.
One of the mornings, as Goan was finishing of his twentieth bowl of cerel, the telephone rang. The caller turned out to be the Bulma. She explained that a reuniun was aproaching and Gohan, as smart as he was, was tricked into coming. When the day came both Sons left, dressed normal with tails as belts and staying unsuper saiyan so they didn't destroy the house.
Gohan was now age seventeen and Goten was seven. When Goten was six and a half he learned how to go into stage 2, for Gohan was a very good teacher. Gohan was kind and gentle yet vigorius and hard working. He did it without hurting anyone and tried not to tire Goten out. He tried to make the training fun so that Goten would put 100% each time. The two arrive at the door, and Goten became nervous. Goten has never been in a place this big nor has he met these people before, so he clings to his hero for comfort. Gohan understands how he feels and quickly picks up Goten and sets him on his shoulder, giving a few reasuring words. 'He looks just like I did when I first met the group. I just hope I don't have a long lost, evil brother,' he thinks to himself. The door slowly opens revealing Bulma, who pulled him in not even noticing Goten clutching his brothers head for dear life.
"GOHAN, HOW COME YOU NEVER CAME TO VISIT. I HAD TO TRICK YOU WITH FOOD(explained it all) JUST FOR YOU TO COME DOWN HERE." Bulma screamed like a banshee, afterwards feeling much anger relieved. The prince's, father and son, come in wondering about the yelling. "Who is that dad,"Trunks said looking at Gohan and without waiting for an answer continued," Probably another weakling, 'cuase he sure looks like a weakling." " Hey dont talk about my dad like that," Goten intervined for the first time that night. Someway or another a fight broke out while the others just watched in antisipation.
Goten stayed in his normal form while Trunks powered up to super saiyan one, now called ss1, yet the two appeared evenly matched. This happened because Gohan had first trained Goten while Goten was at full power, but when he reached ss2 the boy trained as his normal form. Gohan and Goten both trained like this because training ss forms would not help any of the lower forms while training the lower forms helped the higher ones. Bulma came up with another brillent plan and trickes Gohan (Bulma: hehehe that kid is so guilible) into going to highschool. In reality, Gohan does this only because its what his mom would have wanted, but he let Bulma think it was because he was guilible or she was smart. Goten joined Trunks' school and class in second grade. Normally Goten would have joined first grade, but he was at genius level and hid his intelligence so he could go with Trunks.
"Attention students or you'll all get F's. Thank you. Today we have a new student who scored perfect on the entrance exam. Son Gohan, please interduse yourself," the teacher said. Gohan walked in and scowled saying, "My life is none of your da** buisness." He stayed in his normal form so they wouldn't recognize him from the cell games. He wore black, loose pants that hid his intense muscles. He wore a long sleeved, gray-green shirt that was really loose. All the girls thought he was cute, despite his attitude and clothes. The boys thought he was a nerd, dork, or dweeb. He then sat next to Erasa, because it was only seat left. Lime, who sat in the seat behind him, was staring in shock at the boy who sat in front of her. 'Is he, is he the same boy...... that I met before the cell games,' she thought to herself. Erasa and Lime tried to make conversation, but Gohan told them off and went into meditation.
During the day Videl recieved a call from the cops. As she left Gohan requested permission to go to the restroom. Once he entered he took off his shirt and pants. Underneath he had on a black saiyan undersuit. He put on the gloves and changed his shoes. He then used the split form technique to split in two. One changed back to his normal clothes and attended class. The other one took of after Videl, after changing to super saiyan three. He didn't act like a moran, he just went in stopped the crime and came back. Once back Gohan once agian went to the bathroom and reunited with his other half.
Later that day in gym class.........
In gym class that day, Gohan found out that Yamcha was the subsitute. Though Gohan didn't notice, the only reason Yamcha was the subsitute was because Dende thought Gohan would need a familier face that day. Yamcha decided, against the rules and Dende, not to take class role." Ok guys today we are doing martial arts raise your hand if you have any experience, "Yamcha said. Gohan raised his hand. Yamcha went around asking sensie's and how long when he got to gohan, who said," All you need to know is that I am good, very good, the rest isn't your buisness." "Ok mister smart spar with me to show others how to do," Yamcha said with a smirk, thinking the guy was all talk. They got to the rink and a huge battle commensed of equal fighters. Yeah right. what really happened was Gohan pretended to have a hard time then Yamcha said," I knew it! Your all bark and no bite. I bet your dad was a weakling lier like you. "Which of course set him off. He basically hit yamcha and almost killed him. Nobody thought that he was a wimp anymore.
--------------------------------3 weeks later--------------------------------
Gohan had been at school for three weeks and had no friends. He wanted it that way, so he always scowls makes mean remarks so every body thought he was a jerk. In reality though it was the exact opposite. ' I'm protecting them every one that I get close to dies and I'm sure they don't want to die.' 'What about Goten(another voice in his head), your close to him' 'He is different. I watch his ki every second, I would never EVER let any one get him,EVER.'
Just then, he felt two familer ki's nearby and he smiled the famous son grin. Everyone somehow saw this, and they all stared in shock. Everyone at school knew that Gohan never smiled. Sure sometimes he talked to himself in a strange languge and he smirked evily from time to time, but he never smiled a smile as pure as that. Just then some teacher came in with a bunch of second graders and
said," Ok class, go sit with any big kid you want." Before the teacher even finishe the sentence Gohan was snagged by second grade kid that looked alot like Gohan and was smaller than the others. There was also a boy a bit bigger with purple(trunks : Hey this hair is lavander stop with the purple already) hair and a smart yet fighty lookto him. They were both sitting on his shoulders, talking franticly as Gohan laughed at the two chibi's. Everyone stared in shock.