Hi all of you out there i really want to thank you for the reviews. I would
like to thank you for helping me make my story better. I read all the reviews I get and
like I said before i have noticed that i am only getting signed reviews so for people that
can answer me do you know how to turn the only signed review thing off.
By the way I do not own Dbz and if I did Gohan would get a better role.
Even if you did sue me it would not matter because my life savings is less than
you probably make in a week. By the way I have been spelling Marai wrong
he should be spelled like I just spelled him.
If She Died And They Were Alone
They reached the home they would be living for thhe next couple of weeks.
It was ok, it had all the necessities. The fridge should be bigger but you can not
really help that now can you. His new neighbors were Marai and Lime and their
kids Marron and Takeru, or Tk. His other neighbors were Erasa and Sharpener
who Gohan really disliked. Gohan and Goten had flown thier with Trunks early.
They decided not to use any powers in front of anybody.
As they waited for Videl, who Trunks and Goten had named demon lady,
they decided to wrestle. They had been wrestling for an hour and were to busy
to notice the sound of a helicopter zooming in. Gohan had them pinned when he
got smacked on the head. He faced Videl and his scowl came on then he saw what
she was holding." Ahhhhhhhhh evil frying pan eeeeeeeevvvvvvvvviiiiiiiillllllllll doooom
dooooooooom," Gohan said while running away. The two younger boys also saw this
and ran off screaming.
Gohan had used the frying pan on his brother but seeing someone
so much like his mother holding it scared him silly. Goten was afraid because
his brother hit very hard with frying pan and it made him scared of the
frightening cooking ware. Trunks was scared because his mother also had one
and even Vegita was afraid of it. Then agian all saiyans where afraid because it
was truly there weak point. It distracted by the thought of food then hit them
hard. Very hard.
Videl was a bit scared. In school Gohan always wore that scowl and
was never afraid of anything but as soon as he saw the cooking utensil\he ran
like it was the worst thing in the world.' Interesting' she thought to herself 'Gohan
is afraid of frying pans'. Then agian so did those other two. Videl also wondered
how he was even able to come along. His and Gotens permission forms
deffinitly were filled out wrong.
______________________flash back_______________________
"Ok all my wonderful obedient students," the teacher said to the
uncontrollable mob also known as his class," Please hand in the permission
form so that you can go on this once in a lifetime chance and I would also like
to thank you for the gifts you sent me in the hospital, A special thanks to
you Gohan those strange beans let me out in half the time."
The teacher almost passed out from the whole breath thing also
the reason he went to the hospital. When he was done recovering the class
came in to give there permission forms. She briefly saw Gotens and his since
the second grade class was staying with them till the project. It said that
Gohan was there legal gaurdian. Trunk's said that his parents were the briefs
and that his god parent was Gohan. She new it must be wrong.
_______________________end flash back_____________
Just then Lime and Marai showed up. Marron and Tk went to find Gohan.
Another strange thing. No matter how mean he is to adults kids seem to love
him like a father. She had o admit that when around Goten and other kids
he did seem fatherly.
Gohan back realizing that the pan of doom was gone. Kids followed
behind him like the way a gooses chicks followed there mom. Marai had
forgotten to ask his mom about gohan so he wanted to find out now. He would
start with a little bit of small chat ,he decided, to lighten the mood.
He knew Goku was dead so he decided to ask about something Gohan would be less
touchy about. " So Gohan how is your mom.........."
To be continued
I decided to try to take your advise and work on spelling, grammer, ect. Please
tell me what you think. I am sorry it's short but please enjoy.
like to thank you for helping me make my story better. I read all the reviews I get and
like I said before i have noticed that i am only getting signed reviews so for people that
can answer me do you know how to turn the only signed review thing off.
By the way I do not own Dbz and if I did Gohan would get a better role.
Even if you did sue me it would not matter because my life savings is less than
you probably make in a week. By the way I have been spelling Marai wrong
he should be spelled like I just spelled him.
If She Died And They Were Alone
They reached the home they would be living for thhe next couple of weeks.
It was ok, it had all the necessities. The fridge should be bigger but you can not
really help that now can you. His new neighbors were Marai and Lime and their
kids Marron and Takeru, or Tk. His other neighbors were Erasa and Sharpener
who Gohan really disliked. Gohan and Goten had flown thier with Trunks early.
They decided not to use any powers in front of anybody.
As they waited for Videl, who Trunks and Goten had named demon lady,
they decided to wrestle. They had been wrestling for an hour and were to busy
to notice the sound of a helicopter zooming in. Gohan had them pinned when he
got smacked on the head. He faced Videl and his scowl came on then he saw what
she was holding." Ahhhhhhhhh evil frying pan eeeeeeeevvvvvvvvviiiiiiiillllllllll doooom
dooooooooom," Gohan said while running away. The two younger boys also saw this
and ran off screaming.
Gohan had used the frying pan on his brother but seeing someone
so much like his mother holding it scared him silly. Goten was afraid because
his brother hit very hard with frying pan and it made him scared of the
frightening cooking ware. Trunks was scared because his mother also had one
and even Vegita was afraid of it. Then agian all saiyans where afraid because it
was truly there weak point. It distracted by the thought of food then hit them
hard. Very hard.
Videl was a bit scared. In school Gohan always wore that scowl and
was never afraid of anything but as soon as he saw the cooking utensil\he ran
like it was the worst thing in the world.' Interesting' she thought to herself 'Gohan
is afraid of frying pans'. Then agian so did those other two. Videl also wondered
how he was even able to come along. His and Gotens permission forms
deffinitly were filled out wrong.
______________________flash back_______________________
"Ok all my wonderful obedient students," the teacher said to the
uncontrollable mob also known as his class," Please hand in the permission
form so that you can go on this once in a lifetime chance and I would also like
to thank you for the gifts you sent me in the hospital, A special thanks to
you Gohan those strange beans let me out in half the time."
The teacher almost passed out from the whole breath thing also
the reason he went to the hospital. When he was done recovering the class
came in to give there permission forms. She briefly saw Gotens and his since
the second grade class was staying with them till the project. It said that
Gohan was there legal gaurdian. Trunk's said that his parents were the briefs
and that his god parent was Gohan. She new it must be wrong.
_______________________end flash back_____________
Just then Lime and Marai showed up. Marron and Tk went to find Gohan.
Another strange thing. No matter how mean he is to adults kids seem to love
him like a father. She had o admit that when around Goten and other kids
he did seem fatherly.
Gohan back realizing that the pan of doom was gone. Kids followed
behind him like the way a gooses chicks followed there mom. Marai had
forgotten to ask his mom about gohan so he wanted to find out now. He would
start with a little bit of small chat ,he decided, to lighten the mood.
He knew Goku was dead so he decided to ask about something Gohan would be less
touchy about. " So Gohan how is your mom.........."
To be continued
I decided to try to take your advise and work on spelling, grammer, ect. Please
tell me what you think. I am sorry it's short but please enjoy.