Hey, I'm back! Thanks for the reviews!
OH! I made a BIG mistake: Gohan isn't supposed to know the KameHameHa wave yet, so from here on he won't know it.
Response to Significant Reviews:
For your Enjoyment:
Battle so far!
Good Fighters/Stats:
Chaozu- 1,000--fresh
Gohan- 6,000--Fresh
Kuririn- 2,400--mildly spent
Piccolo- 7,000--fresh
Radditzu- 8,000--fresh
Roland- 5,000--Fresh
Tenshinhan- 3,000--fresh
Vegeta- 11,000--fresh
Yamucha-SLAIN
Bad Fighters/stats
Kiwi- 18,000
Dodoria- ????
Zarbon- ????
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Space Fighters
An AU
Chapter 4:
Incredible Soldier Kiwi
~~Serpent Path~~
Goku continued his run "Hang on guys…I'm coming!"
Thoughts of his friends and of the entire Earth echoed in his heart. He knew that a great battle was already brewing, but he couldn't sense what went on. The only other thing he did know was that he needed to get to Enma Daiou's Check In Station sa fast as he could.
~~The Battlefield~~
However, there was one person who did see what went on; him and millions of people in their homes. A TV cameraman remained hidden amid the rocks with his bionic-ear microphone pointed to the fighters. But that is not a very relevant point. The tall and purple alien, Kiwi, approached the group with an evil grin on his face.
"Who challenges me?"
Vegeta whispered to the others "Listen…Kiwi is much stronger than any of us alone…myself and one other are going to Double-team him."
"I volunteer" Whispered Tenshinhan
"All right" whispered Vegeta "When I count to three, we attack. One…two...THREE!"
The Earthling and Saiya-jin charged at Kiwi and began taking on a foot and a hand each. After a swift and intense match, they took their battle to the air where it became much more increased in intensity and in speed. At length, Vegeta attacked with his Garriku Hou (1) and Tenshinhan with his Do Don Pa (2). Both blasts hit head on, but Kiwi was only mildly scarred. All but the three evil ones were shocked. More fighting ensued. Tenshinhan and Vegeta both received heavy hits to the stomachs, followed by the groins. Another Garriku Hou was released, but Kiwi absorbed it and reflected it at its releaser with half power; Vegeta's left shoulder pad was blown off and the skin scarred. Kiwi grappled Tenshinhan from behind, but the Triclops turned his head and shot an eye beam straight into Kiwi's own eyes. (3)
"Grr…! You Bastard! That actually hurt!" Kiwi grumbled "Now you are in for it!"
Kiwi used a Yubisaki kara Renzokou Kikou Ha, (4) that is, a whole bunch of tiny Ki blasts from his fingertips, and sent Tenshinhan flying to the ground with ripped clothing. Tenshinhan staggered up and attacked again. Kiwi attacked with a mild slap to the face. Then he kneed Tenshinhan in the groin and did an uppercut to his chest.
Vegeta growled "Damn…he could easily have defeated the Triclops, but instead he is playing with both he and myself! That is what I hate about Furiza's men! They make you suffer before killing you!" Vegeta made his hand like a megaphone "Triclops! Back down! He's toying with you like a cat with a mouse!"
"It ain't my style to give up!" Tenshinhan chuckled "I'd think YOU would appreciate that!"
"Enough games!" said Kiwi; he grabbed Tenshinhan by the neck and floated to the ground. "I will finish you--ACK!"
Kiwi dropped Tenshinhan who scrambled away. He was frozen solid by some kind of pain it seemed. On the back of Kiwi's head was Chaozu, pulling hard squeezing tight the two head appendages on the alien and supporting himself by standing on his shoulders. A beam of energy went from Chaozu to Kiwi; he was holding him with Telekinesis, and holding those lobes besides.
Chaozu beckoned his friends "hey! Attack him! I can't hold him for very long!"
"Chaozu! Using that much Psychic energy isn't good!" cried Tenshinhan
"Just…attack…Ten-san!" pleaded Chaozu
"but--!"
"Please…"
With a heavy heart, Tenshinhan prepared to fire a Kikouhou (5) "hey! if anyone has a super powerful attack they'd like to try, now would be an ample time to do it!"
Radditzu, Gohan and Roland prepared to use an attack each. Tenshinhan released Kikouhou, Radditzu released Saikou Waza from his mouth, and Gohan fired his Masenkou. Roland fired a double handed electric shock attack called "Omega Thunder". All blasts began to converge onto Kiwi. They were about to hit, when a small Ki ball hit Chaozu, causing him to go flying into a rock and break his concentration…and his body. Kiwi blocked, but not well enough. All the attacks damaged him severely, leaving him also with almost no armor whatsoever. Chaozu could barely move; many of his ribs were broken.
"No!" cried Gohan "We almost had him!"
Roland tensed "We were fortunate even to get that much damage done to him."
"We're lucky that thing had earlobes!" said Kuririn
"Those were not earlobes" said Vegeta
Gohan and Kuririn blinked "Huh?"
"Not everyone keeps their genitals between their legs" said Vegeta. ;_
Kuririn and Gohan nearly vomited from hearing that. Tenshinhan watched in horror as Kiwi approached Chaozu. The little emperor was groaning from his pain.
"Nice little trick, brat!" Kiwi growled "grabbing my endowment and holding me with Psychic power took gumption. But now I'm just gonna have to kill you!"
Kiwi raised his hand to prepare a finishing Ki blast, but Tenshinhan caught the arm and struggled in his weakened condition. Smirking, Kiwi gripped Tenshinhan's arm tightly and tore flesh. Then he dug deeper and twisted, breaking the bone and tearing Tenshinhan's arm off below the elbow. Blood gushed everywhere and Tenshinhan screamed in burning agony. Tendons and muscles twitched with every splurt of the crimson fluid. Next he went up higher and ripped off the arm that included the elbow, and half of the area between the elbow and the shoulder. (6) The ground became red with his blood. Such pain he had not known since Tao Pai-Pai stabbed him with a knife all those years ago; the scar of which he still bore on his chest. Kiwi then punched Tenshinhan in the gut and threw him a hundred yards. He landed and skinned his head and back. But Kiwi failed to notice Chaozu, who again grabbed the lobes on his head. This time he refused to let go, and he kept himself faced away from Dodoria and Zarbon, using Kiwi's head as a living shield. The psychic wave froze Kiwi once more, and Piccolo held his fingers to his brow.
"All right!" said Piccolo "Time to use this on a live target!"
Zarbon's Scouter beeped "Huh? That Namek is raising his power level! It's at 15,000 and it's all on his fingertips!"
Dodoria scanned Kiwi "Kiwi's damage has lowered his power to 14,000! There is no way he can dodge!"
"we'd better stop them!" said Zarbon "You kill the Namek, I'll kill the clown!"
Before they could do anything, Kuririn jumped up in front of them and performed a Taiyouken, blinding both of them. Piccolo released his mighty Makkankosappo, the spiraling ray of death he meant for Goku, instead impaled Kiwi straight through the chest. His blood mixed with Tenshinhan's upon the ground and his ribcage was now spread eagled on the exit wound; resembling two racks of lamb. The mighty Kiwi fell to the ground and passed away. Chaozu staggered away from the corpse. But though one evil one was killed, the battle had only just begun….
~~Serpent Path, 1 PM~~
Goku suddenly stopped as a familiar Ki neared him
"hey! Nappa!" he shouted
"Goku?"
"You bet it's me! But you can still call me Kakkarot!"
Nappa shook Goku's hand "Then, Kakkarot, this means you have been revived?"
"Um, yeah. But when the heck did you die?"
"The same day you contacted us the first time. Natural causes. Enma Daiou sent me to Kaiou-sama's place to work for him. So, how much stronger are you?"
Goku smirked "Wait and see. Here--" Goku infused Nappa with some Ki "--this will help you get to Kaiou Sama's planet faster so you can watch the action!"
"Good luck!"
"Thanks! I have to hurry…I'm still three hours away, and they've already arrived!"
"Then I wont keep you any longer! Ja ne!"
"Oh, and watch out for Princess Snake!"
Both Saiya-jin dashed off in opposite directions
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NEXT TIME: 1 PM…The Hour of Death. Dodoria versus the Z Senshi.
Notes:
1) Translates literally as Garlic Gun. Executed the same way as KameHameHa, but it is thinner and purple
2) AKA Dodon Ray. A thin blast from the finger. Tenshinhan, Chaozu, Tao Pai-Pai and Tsurusennin can use it.
3) Tenshinhan is listed as being able to do this move
4) I think it is supposed to be weaker than one from the hands, but I aint sure
5) Kikouhou is Tenshinhan's strongest signature move. It is also known as Tri Beam Ha in English version.
6) Eee…I know…gruesome, aint it?