Ok chapter four. I don't know how long it is going to take me to write
chapter five so I am just telling u in advance it might take some time.
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Now to chapter four. Ok Ok I changed my mine I will write with one.
Chapter 4
The Ball
Once Hitomi had her dress on she went out of the bathroom and sow Merle and three maids. When they sow her they were like in shock at how beautiful Hitomi looked. "You look great Hitomi!!" Merle said but she was really thinking Wow Van's jaw is going to drop when he sees Hitomi.
"Thanks Merle. But how much longer until the ball starts?" Hitomi asked.
Merle said, "It starts in about an hour. So you better get ready, and I have to get ready too. The maid will help you get ready and then one of them will show you where the main hall is. Van will show you around the castle and Fenalia tomorrow. So I will see you at the ball." Then she left before Hitomi could even say anything.
But once she was gone Hitomi said, "Is it just me or dose it fell like she is up to something?" The maids just raised their shoulders and said, "I don't know."
One of the maids said "Well lets not worry about that we better get you looking great for the ball. So we better get started. Sit down."
Hitomi sat down and the maid started making her look beautiful. Two of the maids did her and the other one did her makeup. They did it like five times each until they finally decided what looked the best. So an hour later they done and Hitomi was ready for the ball. The maids decided to put her hair up. It was up all curly and it had sparkles in it to mach the dress. Her makeup was sparkly too. It was light pink sparkly lipstick, some sparkly blush and some silver also sparkly eyeshadow. She put on her shoes, which Merle brought to her forty-five min ago. They were the most beautiful shoes Hitomi had ever had to wear. They were glass sparkly shoes. Then she looked her self in the mirror.
Hitomi was thinking Wow I look like Cinderella. And I feel like her too. She checked herself over in the mirror to make sure everything was perfect. Then one of the maids said, "You better get going the dinner part of the ball is about to start any min now. I will show you where the main hall is so come along." Then they left for the main hall and the ball.
***************************In The Dinner Hall*****************************
Everybody was in the dinner hall. They were talking and waiting for Van to announce that dinner could begin. But Van wanted to wait till Hitomi got there till they started. He kept looking at the doors hoping she would some soon. Allan noticed that and said, "Van, don't worry about Hitomi. She will probable be here any minute."
After Allan said that, the doors opened and the announcer said, "Introducing Lady Hitomi Kanzuki (that is proubly wrong) from the mystic moon. A hero of the Great War."
Once the announcer finished saying that everybody looked at Hitomi. Hitomi, who was just standing there was thinking O My God why is everybody looking at me. I wonder where I sit.
Van, who was sitting there starring at Hitomi, like everybody else also, noticed that she probably didn't know where to sit. So he got up and walked to Hitomi and when he got there he put out his arm and asked, "May I show you to your spot milady?" with a big smile on his face.
Hitomi smiled back and took his arm willingly Everybody was still looking at Hitomi and Van could notice that something was wrong so he asked her, "What's Wrong?"
"Nothing." Hitomi started "It's just . Everybody is looking at me."
"Well no du! Look at you. You look gorgeous." Van said and once he did Hitomi blushed. She tried to hide it but Van saw it.
Then they got to their seats. Van pulled out Hitomi's chair and Hitomi sat down. The Van went to his seat and said, Dinner may begin."
With that everybody stopped looking at Hitomi and started eating.
Hitomi was sitting on Van's left. Then it was Allan and then it was Allan's sister Celena and then other people Hitomi really didn't know. On Van's right and right across from her were Merle, then Millerna and then Drydon.
'So Hitomi what has been happened to you in the last five years?" asked Allan
"Nothing much. I graduated from school went to University and that is about it that has changed for me." Said Hitomi.
"Well one thing that has changed is you. Look all the guys are going to want to dance with you." Dryden said.
"Oh Thanks Dryden. So what has been happening with you guys?" Hitomi asked.
They told her how Millerna and Dryden got remarried three years ago and they have a two and a half-year-old son named Brady. They talked a lot about him (he is sitting next to Drydon). They also talked about how Fenelia was finished three years ago and how Allan is now a knight for Fenelia and he lives there with his sister Celena. They also talked about a lot of other stuff too. Then everybody was done and the dancing began
I will write this if u review and if you can help me think of some other stuff to do in this story cause I am a little bit out of ideas so help me Please!!
Chapter 4
The Ball
Once Hitomi had her dress on she went out of the bathroom and sow Merle and three maids. When they sow her they were like in shock at how beautiful Hitomi looked. "You look great Hitomi!!" Merle said but she was really thinking Wow Van's jaw is going to drop when he sees Hitomi.
"Thanks Merle. But how much longer until the ball starts?" Hitomi asked.
Merle said, "It starts in about an hour. So you better get ready, and I have to get ready too. The maid will help you get ready and then one of them will show you where the main hall is. Van will show you around the castle and Fenalia tomorrow. So I will see you at the ball." Then she left before Hitomi could even say anything.
But once she was gone Hitomi said, "Is it just me or dose it fell like she is up to something?" The maids just raised their shoulders and said, "I don't know."
One of the maids said "Well lets not worry about that we better get you looking great for the ball. So we better get started. Sit down."
Hitomi sat down and the maid started making her look beautiful. Two of the maids did her and the other one did her makeup. They did it like five times each until they finally decided what looked the best. So an hour later they done and Hitomi was ready for the ball. The maids decided to put her hair up. It was up all curly and it had sparkles in it to mach the dress. Her makeup was sparkly too. It was light pink sparkly lipstick, some sparkly blush and some silver also sparkly eyeshadow. She put on her shoes, which Merle brought to her forty-five min ago. They were the most beautiful shoes Hitomi had ever had to wear. They were glass sparkly shoes. Then she looked her self in the mirror.
Hitomi was thinking Wow I look like Cinderella. And I feel like her too. She checked herself over in the mirror to make sure everything was perfect. Then one of the maids said, "You better get going the dinner part of the ball is about to start any min now. I will show you where the main hall is so come along." Then they left for the main hall and the ball.
***************************In The Dinner Hall*****************************
Everybody was in the dinner hall. They were talking and waiting for Van to announce that dinner could begin. But Van wanted to wait till Hitomi got there till they started. He kept looking at the doors hoping she would some soon. Allan noticed that and said, "Van, don't worry about Hitomi. She will probable be here any minute."
After Allan said that, the doors opened and the announcer said, "Introducing Lady Hitomi Kanzuki (that is proubly wrong) from the mystic moon. A hero of the Great War."
Once the announcer finished saying that everybody looked at Hitomi. Hitomi, who was just standing there was thinking O My God why is everybody looking at me. I wonder where I sit.
Van, who was sitting there starring at Hitomi, like everybody else also, noticed that she probably didn't know where to sit. So he got up and walked to Hitomi and when he got there he put out his arm and asked, "May I show you to your spot milady?" with a big smile on his face.
Hitomi smiled back and took his arm willingly Everybody was still looking at Hitomi and Van could notice that something was wrong so he asked her, "What's Wrong?"
"Nothing." Hitomi started "It's just . Everybody is looking at me."
"Well no du! Look at you. You look gorgeous." Van said and once he did Hitomi blushed. She tried to hide it but Van saw it.
Then they got to their seats. Van pulled out Hitomi's chair and Hitomi sat down. The Van went to his seat and said, Dinner may begin."
With that everybody stopped looking at Hitomi and started eating.
Hitomi was sitting on Van's left. Then it was Allan and then it was Allan's sister Celena and then other people Hitomi really didn't know. On Van's right and right across from her were Merle, then Millerna and then Drydon.
'So Hitomi what has been happened to you in the last five years?" asked Allan
"Nothing much. I graduated from school went to University and that is about it that has changed for me." Said Hitomi.
"Well one thing that has changed is you. Look all the guys are going to want to dance with you." Dryden said.
"Oh Thanks Dryden. So what has been happening with you guys?" Hitomi asked.
They told her how Millerna and Dryden got remarried three years ago and they have a two and a half-year-old son named Brady. They talked a lot about him (he is sitting next to Drydon). They also talked about how Fenelia was finished three years ago and how Allan is now a knight for Fenelia and he lives there with his sister Celena. They also talked about a lot of other stuff too. Then everybody was done and the dancing began
I will write this if u review and if you can help me think of some other stuff to do in this story cause I am a little bit out of ideas so help me Please!!