Hello. I read this story over and realised that it's so retardedly sad- Sorry for all the mistakes...I read it over again and there were soooooo many grammar mistakes I could list 'em all right now but ahh!! 1 example

"Well, excuse me? But being a girl is the best thing a person can ever have, thank you!"

Instead of "have" it should be "be". And...in the past chapters there are also spellin mistakes, and grammar mistakes for over-ly using the word 'in' even though I'm suppose to use some other word, and 'could' instead of 'would'. So I apologize cuz I'm so stupid.

Thank you for your time

L8r