WARNING: IF YOU LIKE JON, DO NOT CONTINUE TO READ THIS CHAPTER!!
Disclaimer: I own plot. TP own's other stuff....
Author's Crap: K, well, this chatper's dedicated to all my friends @ school......u know who u are.................................Also, I just wanted to say that I need a beta.......or at least I think I need one......tell me what you think.......I guess I've done ok so far........what happened to all those lovely reviews.......I don't care if they're flames you know.......ah well, I guess I'm to blame.......I stopped writing.........and I've been kinda mean to some author's........cos of their spelling......hehehe (they're HP authors......)
On with the story.........
A/N: Crap........now I've got the "dot problem......oh well, now I'll type 6 dots......oh, and I'm ditching the skateboard idea........I finally got lady knight.....stupid book people didn't release until too late......(I live in Australia.....)
Chapter 11: En Route to Camp.......
Everything was packed, ready to go........this would be the best day ever for her (Alanna)......or so she thought. They were now put in to riding groups - Jon, Francis, Alex and the Shang guy in one, and Alanna, Raoul, Gary and Ralon in the other.......poor Alanna.......or should I say poor Ralon. Alanna had already decided she was going to kick some serious Malven butt!
Alanna mounted Moonlight, as the first Riding Group rode off. Each group was taking different routes to the camp site.
"Hey Malven.........having trouble mounting your horse!"
In fact, he was. Ralon was the only one left. You see, just before dawn, Alanna had uh.....well, let's just say, shortened the length of the leather attaching the stirrups to the saddle (I'm not a horse expert, so sue me....).
One Point to Alanna, She thought, chuckling silently to herself.........
"Is poor widdle Ralon stuck in the ground" Gary cooed......
This was just too much humiliation for Ralon.
"Watch it Naxen. Just because your father sucks up to the King, doesn't mean that I'm not stronger than you." Growled the utterly despicable Ralon (I'm know calling him UDR.....it's shorter, and now you guys know what it stands 4....).
"Well, I wonder what your father would say if you got yourself expelled from "knighthood" (well, I don't know how to put that *looks really pissed cos silverthorn doesn't like it when she doesn't know stuff*)
Score for Alanna....that made 2 in 5 minutes......she was on a role......
(sorry......I just had a biggest scare in my life.......my brother started freaking out.......there was a pop up on his screen and well, it didn't exactly pop up.........it said pornholio.com or something.......and he clicked on it cos he didn't know what porno was........and he said what's this *I didn't know what he was talking about at the time*.........stupid brother......now I'm freaked out.....)
Jon had been staring ahead at the long dirt road in front of them..........stupid Shang guy........why'd he have to put him in the same group as Francis (I just don't like him.....plus my name's Alex, so how could I possibly insult Alexander of Tirragen......why'd he have to be the evil one......why couldn't it have been Francis or someone stupid).........
"Hey Master Shang (I can't remember what I called the Shang guy before, so yeah), how much longer?"
They had been riding for 2 hours straight.......hopefully they were going to stop at an inn, and soon. But sadly for his "highness", that just wasn't possible.
"We have only one more hour of riding, and then we will be camping on the edge of the Drell River. "
Jon (I can't remember how to spell his real name....ah well, I know, this chapter sux.....well whoopdy doo, my brother's calling me a loser.....) couldn't believe his ears when he heard that. How did they get there so fast? Honestly, they had never had camp that far away from Naxen for a long, long time!
A/C (author's crap): Now, wonder why they're camping there? If you do, review, if you don't, review.............if you do review.........I will be extra happy and write longish chapters and improve story......this choice is yours.......I probably will keep writing.....but, I am saying this cos it would be nice to have reviews, once in a while, you know, and not have a ratio of 2 reviews to 1 chapter..........
Disclaimer: I own plot. TP own's other stuff....
Author's Crap: K, well, this chatper's dedicated to all my friends @ school......u know who u are.................................Also, I just wanted to say that I need a beta.......or at least I think I need one......tell me what you think.......I guess I've done ok so far........what happened to all those lovely reviews.......I don't care if they're flames you know.......ah well, I guess I'm to blame.......I stopped writing.........and I've been kinda mean to some author's........cos of their spelling......hehehe (they're HP authors......)
On with the story.........
A/N: Crap........now I've got the "dot problem......oh well, now I'll type 6 dots......oh, and I'm ditching the skateboard idea........I finally got lady knight.....stupid book people didn't release until too late......(I live in Australia.....)
Chapter 11: En Route to Camp.......
Everything was packed, ready to go........this would be the best day ever for her (Alanna)......or so she thought. They were now put in to riding groups - Jon, Francis, Alex and the Shang guy in one, and Alanna, Raoul, Gary and Ralon in the other.......poor Alanna.......or should I say poor Ralon. Alanna had already decided she was going to kick some serious Malven butt!
Alanna mounted Moonlight, as the first Riding Group rode off. Each group was taking different routes to the camp site.
"Hey Malven.........having trouble mounting your horse!"
In fact, he was. Ralon was the only one left. You see, just before dawn, Alanna had uh.....well, let's just say, shortened the length of the leather attaching the stirrups to the saddle (I'm not a horse expert, so sue me....).
One Point to Alanna, She thought, chuckling silently to herself.........
"Is poor widdle Ralon stuck in the ground" Gary cooed......
This was just too much humiliation for Ralon.
"Watch it Naxen. Just because your father sucks up to the King, doesn't mean that I'm not stronger than you." Growled the utterly despicable Ralon (I'm know calling him UDR.....it's shorter, and now you guys know what it stands 4....).
"Well, I wonder what your father would say if you got yourself expelled from "knighthood" (well, I don't know how to put that *looks really pissed cos silverthorn doesn't like it when she doesn't know stuff*)
Score for Alanna....that made 2 in 5 minutes......she was on a role......
(sorry......I just had a biggest scare in my life.......my brother started freaking out.......there was a pop up on his screen and well, it didn't exactly pop up.........it said pornholio.com or something.......and he clicked on it cos he didn't know what porno was........and he said what's this *I didn't know what he was talking about at the time*.........stupid brother......now I'm freaked out.....)
Jon had been staring ahead at the long dirt road in front of them..........stupid Shang guy........why'd he have to put him in the same group as Francis (I just don't like him.....plus my name's Alex, so how could I possibly insult Alexander of Tirragen......why'd he have to be the evil one......why couldn't it have been Francis or someone stupid).........
"Hey Master Shang (I can't remember what I called the Shang guy before, so yeah), how much longer?"
They had been riding for 2 hours straight.......hopefully they were going to stop at an inn, and soon. But sadly for his "highness", that just wasn't possible.
"We have only one more hour of riding, and then we will be camping on the edge of the Drell River. "
Jon (I can't remember how to spell his real name....ah well, I know, this chapter sux.....well whoopdy doo, my brother's calling me a loser.....) couldn't believe his ears when he heard that. How did they get there so fast? Honestly, they had never had camp that far away from Naxen for a long, long time!
A/C (author's crap): Now, wonder why they're camping there? If you do, review, if you don't, review.............if you do review.........I will be extra happy and write longish chapters and improve story......this choice is yours.......I probably will keep writing.....but, I am saying this cos it would be nice to have reviews, once in a while, you know, and not have a ratio of 2 reviews to 1 chapter..........