Oh hey look! My first story, and what on? My own character! Hey guys, I
promise who ever read this will like it. I'm going to make it as Dbz-ish as
possible. My Character will be the only new one, and this won't be stupid I
promise! All I ask you to do is review! PLEASE review! This is totally my
first story, and I need the push from you all! The first chapters a bit
short but it's just a sample, number two will be longer!
Also I'll update as much and as soon as I can! I just need the readers, so I can update. I need the reviews so I'll be updating to make you guys happy. Thanks you!
Disclaimer: I own nothing except my original character. Who's name I won't give away yet! ^__^
Ages: Goten: 11 Trunks: 12 Gohan: 22 Videl: 22
~Now Enjoy~
Chapter one: Whats going on?! Gokou has a daughter?!
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The sun was up early that morning at Son household. A small child had just been born a few minutes ago. Seems sometime around three in the morning the mother of two children already, was giving birth to another. This time a bouncing baby girl. Since they couldn't get to the hospital quick enough the older mother had the baby in her own house. After two nurses and a doctor arrived. What a happy time it was for this now family of four once again.
The oldest son had moved out, only a year ago with his new wife. Now himself left the youngest son, with a new sister. He couldn't have been happier that morning. His older brother, Gohan had a younger brother, now Goten, was going to have a little sister. Someone to annoy you, and most of all someone to look up to you. Yet, sometimes there would me arguments, but that comes with the big brother package.
The doctor, and nurses left two hours later, telling the new mother Chichi, she needs to stay in bed a couple more days. Rest is always needed. Sleep won't be easy for the first few years as expected. So now we find the mother holding her child in her arms as everyone stood around. The baby was looking around with curiosity. Her hair was spiked to one side, cut short in the back. Totally natural.
Her emerald green eyes still scanning her new family happily, a smile on her face. Chichi could not have been any more prouder. Speaking of being proud, the father sat on the bed next to his wife, his black orbs beaming. He now had a little girl, and what a pretty little girl that was. He could remember a year ago when Bulma had Bura. How happy she was to have a girl. Of course Vegeta was upset, she the girl grew on him.
Now, one year later, they can hardly be separated.
Gokou went back to looking at his own child. He reached out and gently touched her on the head. The baby smiled even more and grabbed onto his wristband. She blinked sweetly looking up at him.
"So what are you gonna name her Hun?" Gokou asked still watching the new little girl play with his wristband. Chichi looked at the baby for a moment then smiled.
"I think I'll name her, Son Erin. Yes that sounds just perfect." She answered. Goten gave a slight laugh and threw his hand behind his head.
"And here I thought you'd name her something like 'Gochi.'"
Chichi shot him a death glare.
Now it was time to ask another important question. This time coming from Gokou. He nervously placed his hand behind him head and looked down at his wife. This could go one of two ways. She could say yes, which was HIGHLY unlikely. Or she could become the 'Demon' woman; As Vegeta calls her, and start yelling. Now it was time to find out.
"Um, Chichi? Can I ask you something?" Gokou said slowly, and cautiously. Goten looked up at his father backing away. He knew what was coming.
"Yes what is it?" she said.
"Well, you know how both Goten and Gohan know how to --- err---- fight? Could I -- ?"
The tone in the house suddenly went from happily, to very tense. Chichis eyes narrowed quickly as she shut them. Her lose hand, balled into a fist.
"ONLY, if when she's older, she wants to. No presser, got it mister?" She answered in a deadly calm tone. Gokou nodded giving a silent answer, but smiled.
The rest of the morning was just wonderful. Somehow Gokou and Goten managed to make breakfast for Chichi without setting the house on fire, or making a mess. Bulma was the first of their friends to come over and see the new baby. Then eighteen and Krillin joined them. The question that came from everyone's mouth was--
"Why does she have green eyes?"
No one knew, and no one really thought about it that day. Except for a certain Saiyan Prince who only saw the baby once. The first thought that entered his mind was impossible. No child that young could possibly already be a- Super Saiyan? Impossible. That whole idea made him laugh. Although she did have a high energy level, but so did Trunks when he was born.
It was normal --- Right?
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Five years later
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"Goten! come on give that back!" Erin yelled chasing Goiten around the kitchen table. He was holding up her brand new crayon box Chichi had given her for her birthday. She could easily keep up with her brother, if only her white dangling belt wasn't so darn long! She was wearing the brand new Gi Chichi made for her to train in.
It was was identical to Gokous except the colors were lighter. Instead of Blue being underneath, it was on top, an orange shirt was under it, with matching baby blue wristbands, and blue boots.
"Goten! Thatss mine!" she said again.
"Whats your E-chan?" He asked still holding the crayon box high.
"That." She pointed to the box.
"What?"
"THAT"! she yelled the Chichi part coming out of her. Chichi peeked out of the kitchen placing her dishtowel oon the counter. She placed her hands on her hips and frowned at Goten. Goten smiled nervously and give his sister back her crayons. Chichi smiled.
"Erin sweetie, Bulmas going to bring Bura over later when she comes to bring my bowl back. Alright?" Chichi said reaching back to her dishtowel now wiping her hands with it. Erin put the crayon box on the table and smiled brightly.
"Okay!" she said. "But first mom, can I have something to eat? I'm hungry."
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Also I'll update as much and as soon as I can! I just need the readers, so I can update. I need the reviews so I'll be updating to make you guys happy. Thanks you!
Disclaimer: I own nothing except my original character. Who's name I won't give away yet! ^__^
Ages: Goten: 11 Trunks: 12 Gohan: 22 Videl: 22
~Now Enjoy~
Chapter one: Whats going on?! Gokou has a daughter?!
~*~
The sun was up early that morning at Son household. A small child had just been born a few minutes ago. Seems sometime around three in the morning the mother of two children already, was giving birth to another. This time a bouncing baby girl. Since they couldn't get to the hospital quick enough the older mother had the baby in her own house. After two nurses and a doctor arrived. What a happy time it was for this now family of four once again.
The oldest son had moved out, only a year ago with his new wife. Now himself left the youngest son, with a new sister. He couldn't have been happier that morning. His older brother, Gohan had a younger brother, now Goten, was going to have a little sister. Someone to annoy you, and most of all someone to look up to you. Yet, sometimes there would me arguments, but that comes with the big brother package.
The doctor, and nurses left two hours later, telling the new mother Chichi, she needs to stay in bed a couple more days. Rest is always needed. Sleep won't be easy for the first few years as expected. So now we find the mother holding her child in her arms as everyone stood around. The baby was looking around with curiosity. Her hair was spiked to one side, cut short in the back. Totally natural.
Her emerald green eyes still scanning her new family happily, a smile on her face. Chichi could not have been any more prouder. Speaking of being proud, the father sat on the bed next to his wife, his black orbs beaming. He now had a little girl, and what a pretty little girl that was. He could remember a year ago when Bulma had Bura. How happy she was to have a girl. Of course Vegeta was upset, she the girl grew on him.
Now, one year later, they can hardly be separated.
Gokou went back to looking at his own child. He reached out and gently touched her on the head. The baby smiled even more and grabbed onto his wristband. She blinked sweetly looking up at him.
"So what are you gonna name her Hun?" Gokou asked still watching the new little girl play with his wristband. Chichi looked at the baby for a moment then smiled.
"I think I'll name her, Son Erin. Yes that sounds just perfect." She answered. Goten gave a slight laugh and threw his hand behind his head.
"And here I thought you'd name her something like 'Gochi.'"
Chichi shot him a death glare.
Now it was time to ask another important question. This time coming from Gokou. He nervously placed his hand behind him head and looked down at his wife. This could go one of two ways. She could say yes, which was HIGHLY unlikely. Or she could become the 'Demon' woman; As Vegeta calls her, and start yelling. Now it was time to find out.
"Um, Chichi? Can I ask you something?" Gokou said slowly, and cautiously. Goten looked up at his father backing away. He knew what was coming.
"Yes what is it?" she said.
"Well, you know how both Goten and Gohan know how to --- err---- fight? Could I -- ?"
The tone in the house suddenly went from happily, to very tense. Chichis eyes narrowed quickly as she shut them. Her lose hand, balled into a fist.
"ONLY, if when she's older, she wants to. No presser, got it mister?" She answered in a deadly calm tone. Gokou nodded giving a silent answer, but smiled.
The rest of the morning was just wonderful. Somehow Gokou and Goten managed to make breakfast for Chichi without setting the house on fire, or making a mess. Bulma was the first of their friends to come over and see the new baby. Then eighteen and Krillin joined them. The question that came from everyone's mouth was--
"Why does she have green eyes?"
No one knew, and no one really thought about it that day. Except for a certain Saiyan Prince who only saw the baby once. The first thought that entered his mind was impossible. No child that young could possibly already be a- Super Saiyan? Impossible. That whole idea made him laugh. Although she did have a high energy level, but so did Trunks when he was born.
It was normal --- Right?
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Five years later
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"Goten! come on give that back!" Erin yelled chasing Goiten around the kitchen table. He was holding up her brand new crayon box Chichi had given her for her birthday. She could easily keep up with her brother, if only her white dangling belt wasn't so darn long! She was wearing the brand new Gi Chichi made for her to train in.
It was was identical to Gokous except the colors were lighter. Instead of Blue being underneath, it was on top, an orange shirt was under it, with matching baby blue wristbands, and blue boots.
"Goten! Thatss mine!" she said again.
"Whats your E-chan?" He asked still holding the crayon box high.
"That." She pointed to the box.
"What?"
"THAT"! she yelled the Chichi part coming out of her. Chichi peeked out of the kitchen placing her dishtowel oon the counter. She placed her hands on her hips and frowned at Goten. Goten smiled nervously and give his sister back her crayons. Chichi smiled.
"Erin sweetie, Bulmas going to bring Bura over later when she comes to bring my bowl back. Alright?" Chichi said reaching back to her dishtowel now wiping her hands with it. Erin put the crayon box on the table and smiled brightly.
"Okay!" she said. "But first mom, can I have something to eat? I'm hungry."
~*~
So what did you think of the first chapter? Now just take five minutes out of your time and click the lavender box to the left of the screen. Think how much that one click could boost the authors writing abilities. Don't you want to help out? Its only five minutes. 5 minutes to help out a new author on Fanfiction.net. You don't even have to sign in. Just REVIEW.
Thank you?
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