Stranger chapter 2
(Thanks to all the people who reviewed! I really appreciate your opinions on how my story is going [bad in my opinion!] and thanks again to everyone who helped me!! I really didn't like the opening 'cos it was way too short so now I'm gonna write from a narrative pov to give you a better idea! Who is the mysterious girl? All will be revealed!!! One more chapter to go [it's really short] then I'll write more!! Go me lol) Now our feature presentation.
"Where are you?" asked the town's mayor searching through the desolate building. It was once a cabin in a clearing in the forest now it was abandoned and rotting. The perfect place to hide. In Faith's opinion anyway, Faith was a medium sized blonde with deep brown eyes, her clothes were ripped and torn and her hair was dirty she had enough, she was sick and tired of running for no reason and she just wanted to die, like the many before her she had been wrongly accused of doing evil, muttering a quick prayer she ran to her doom.
"You are hereby accused of." someone was reading, Faith didn't care what she was accused off, all that mattered was she was sitting on her knees, her head was over a table and a large burly man was holding what appeared to be an axe. 'Ah' she though 'I'm not dead yet'
"And you are now sentenced to death by decapitation!" he finished, the crowds cheered and jeered and their fallen neighbour, the girl who betrayed them. Faith didn't care; she knew they would all suffer for what they had done and they would be feeling the burn when it was their turn. With a swipe of the axe, she thought no more.
In the crowd hiding was another young girl by the name of Cassandra Keaston; Cassie was 15, with inquisitive blue eyes and auburn hair. Cassie wasn't cheering when her friend was axed. Cassie and Faith shared the same beliefs and in the town they lived in no-one was safe.
Cassie ran home after the execution, tears filling her blue eyes and began to pray
"I need your help more than ever. They will soon be here to kill me, I love you but I have no desire to join you at this point in time. Please show me something! Tell me it will be ok; show me how much you love me!"
A lone butterfly flew past the window. Cassie turned her head and smiled, the tears freely rolling down her nose. She knew now she was blessed and smiled upon. It was her time to go, against all of her common sense she knew. She had to write in her diary first, and that's what she did.
I hope you enjoyed. Chapter 1 was what she wrote in her diary btw
(Thanks to all the people who reviewed! I really appreciate your opinions on how my story is going [bad in my opinion!] and thanks again to everyone who helped me!! I really didn't like the opening 'cos it was way too short so now I'm gonna write from a narrative pov to give you a better idea! Who is the mysterious girl? All will be revealed!!! One more chapter to go [it's really short] then I'll write more!! Go me lol) Now our feature presentation.
"Where are you?" asked the town's mayor searching through the desolate building. It was once a cabin in a clearing in the forest now it was abandoned and rotting. The perfect place to hide. In Faith's opinion anyway, Faith was a medium sized blonde with deep brown eyes, her clothes were ripped and torn and her hair was dirty she had enough, she was sick and tired of running for no reason and she just wanted to die, like the many before her she had been wrongly accused of doing evil, muttering a quick prayer she ran to her doom.
"You are hereby accused of." someone was reading, Faith didn't care what she was accused off, all that mattered was she was sitting on her knees, her head was over a table and a large burly man was holding what appeared to be an axe. 'Ah' she though 'I'm not dead yet'
"And you are now sentenced to death by decapitation!" he finished, the crowds cheered and jeered and their fallen neighbour, the girl who betrayed them. Faith didn't care; she knew they would all suffer for what they had done and they would be feeling the burn when it was their turn. With a swipe of the axe, she thought no more.
In the crowd hiding was another young girl by the name of Cassandra Keaston; Cassie was 15, with inquisitive blue eyes and auburn hair. Cassie wasn't cheering when her friend was axed. Cassie and Faith shared the same beliefs and in the town they lived in no-one was safe.
Cassie ran home after the execution, tears filling her blue eyes and began to pray
"I need your help more than ever. They will soon be here to kill me, I love you but I have no desire to join you at this point in time. Please show me something! Tell me it will be ok; show me how much you love me!"
A lone butterfly flew past the window. Cassie turned her head and smiled, the tears freely rolling down her nose. She knew now she was blessed and smiled upon. It was her time to go, against all of her common sense she knew. She had to write in her diary first, and that's what she did.
I hope you enjoyed. Chapter 1 was what she wrote in her diary btw