Hi.
This is gonna be my second fic.(3rd if you include LoV)It is a Gohan/Videl get together, with a twist, so be careful. However, it will have NO LEMONS. I`m not legaly old enough to read that stuff,(I still do though) let alone write 1. It`s a non-dark story in the begginning, but it is gonna get worse.
Okay. I want reviews for this. My e-mail is finally fixed, and am really wanting to see the mail come through.
Here`s chapter 1 of Dark Triumph.
P.S. Thanks to Lady_Adestine(AKA Nadia Rose.) For help with the plotline, Title, Pretty much everything. She also betaed chapter 16 of VLOTH for me. Oh, and thanks to Darkheart81 for being on my friends list, same for Nadia Rose. Don`t forget all my reviewers of VLOTH.
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Gohan loved te feeling of the wind in his hair. That`s why he was taking it slow to go to his first day of highschool. He saw a girl, who seemed to be waiting for something, on the outskirts of the city. He quickly landed, and did a Zanzoken to behind her, and super-sped the rest of the way to school. He was nearly there when he felt the same girl`s ki fluctuate. He raced back, and saw her taking on 5 armed bank robbers, all with semi-automate AK- 47s. 1 was pumping round after round at her, but either the bullet`s weren`t effecting her, or she was dodging them.'Pretty good for a mere human. But, just in-case, I better inter-vene.' He powered up to Super- Saiyan, quickly didpensed the AK-47 with a flick of his wrist. The deadly gun flew out of the crook`s hands, and hit another in the face, knocking him out. The girl quickly beat her criminal with a slight punch, and kicked the last one in the face, like a jab, with her foot. She then quickly ran over to Gohan. She punched him in the face, hard. She drew some blood from his nose, and kicked him where the sun don`t shine. Gohan fell to the floor, holding his groin.
"Don`t try to play superhero. I`m the hero of this town, and some blonde haired punk isn`t going to interrupt me." She then walked away, and stuck her nose in the air. She threw a capsule to the ground, and a yellow jet- coptor appeared, and she got in, flying off in the direction tha Gohan wanted to go.
"Ow." Gohan wiped his nose, dropped out of Super Saiyan, and flew to school. When he got there, he started looking for the main office. Realizing he was late, Gohan just waited by the door, for any other student that might be able to help him. To his dismay, a girl was the person that came. And not just any girl, it was kick-in-the-groin girl. Now that he got a good look at her, he noticed that she was actually quite attractive. She had black hair, which was tied back in 2 stern braids. Her eyes were bright blue, and sparkly, almost unnaturally sparkly. She probably had alot of cleavage aswell, but she was hiding it behind a baggy white t-shirt, that was at least 4 sizes to big for her. She was also wearing spandex 3-quarters, and had a scowl on her face.
"E.Excuse me, but could you please tell me where the main office is?" Gohan nervously asked.
The girl looked scornful for a minute, before pointing down the hall, where a sign said 'Main Office.'"Over there."
"Thank you. What`s your name?"
Videl looked slightly suprised at this, but it quickly died down."Videl Satan."
Gohan smiled, and said, "I`m Son Gohan, it`s nice to meet you." Gohan held out his hand, and Videl,suprisingly, shook hands with Gohan. Gohan then ran down the hall, to the main office. Videl just shook her head, and walked in the opposite direction. When Gohan got to his destination, he saw a blonde woman there, with the standard secretary(sp?) uniform on. She was chewing gum, and blew bubbles from time-to-time.
"Excuse me miss, but I`m new here, and I need my timetable. Please can I have it?"
The secratary looked up, and smiled."`Course sweatie." She then leaned to her left and grabbed a form, and a piece of paper with writing on it."Here`s your timetable." She said, as she gave him the paper."And you have to sign this, to signify that you showed up."She then gave him the form, and a pen, also. Gohan happilysigned the form, and started to walk away, when the secratary stopped him. "You`ll need your map aswell." She gave him a map, that was in a rack at the side of her desk, along with other maps.
"Thank you." Gohan excused himself, and looked at his timetable.'Hmmm. B11.' He then looked at his map, and found that he was a couple of feet away from the door. He walked in, and met a noisy class, that hushed as he walked in.
"Ahhh. Son Gohan, I suppose." The teacher said.
"Y.Yes sir. Sorry for being late, but I got lost."
"Well, that`s understandable. Come here Gohan, introduce yourself to the class." Gohan nodded, and walked to the teacher.
"Well, my name is Son Gohan, and i live in 439 Mountain Area." The class all tok a sharp intake of breath when he said this, and they went into an uncomftorble silence.
"Eeerr. Right. Gohan, please sit up there next to Erasa."He pointed to a blonde girl that was waving at Gohan. Gohan walkled up to the seat next to her, and looked to next to her, to see Videl.
"Hi. I`m Erasa, and this is Videl."She pointed to her right.
"We`ve met."Videl said. Erasa looked suprised, but continued on.
"And this," She pointed to a blonde Jock behind her."Is Sharpner." Shapner looked at Gohan and said.
"Don`t talk to me, nerd-boy." Sharpner said, without opening his closed eyes. Gohan`s Saiyan pride perked up for a second, but he quickly fought it down. From his experiences with Vegeta, he learned how to do that. He looked at Erasa again, to see that she was just staring at him, and Videl was glaring at him. Sharpner was dozing off,a as so was the rest of the class.
'I hope that the rest of the day wont go as bad as this formroom is.'Gohan thought, as he looked at the teacher, and started listening to the announcments.
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A person, who looked like it had a disease, was watching this in a crystal ball, as it smirked. It looked like it didn`t have a gender, so I can`t say he or she.
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That`s the first chapter of my fic, Dark Triumph. If anyone has comments, sendthem to me in a review, e-mail me at Blackpoolboy@mail.com, or chat with me on Yahoo Messenger. Name. Ussj1000000blackpoolboy.
REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bye
This is gonna be my second fic.(3rd if you include LoV)It is a Gohan/Videl get together, with a twist, so be careful. However, it will have NO LEMONS. I`m not legaly old enough to read that stuff,(I still do though) let alone write 1. It`s a non-dark story in the begginning, but it is gonna get worse.
Okay. I want reviews for this. My e-mail is finally fixed, and am really wanting to see the mail come through.
Here`s chapter 1 of Dark Triumph.
P.S. Thanks to Lady_Adestine(AKA Nadia Rose.) For help with the plotline, Title, Pretty much everything. She also betaed chapter 16 of VLOTH for me. Oh, and thanks to Darkheart81 for being on my friends list, same for Nadia Rose. Don`t forget all my reviewers of VLOTH.
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Gohan loved te feeling of the wind in his hair. That`s why he was taking it slow to go to his first day of highschool. He saw a girl, who seemed to be waiting for something, on the outskirts of the city. He quickly landed, and did a Zanzoken to behind her, and super-sped the rest of the way to school. He was nearly there when he felt the same girl`s ki fluctuate. He raced back, and saw her taking on 5 armed bank robbers, all with semi-automate AK- 47s. 1 was pumping round after round at her, but either the bullet`s weren`t effecting her, or she was dodging them.'Pretty good for a mere human. But, just in-case, I better inter-vene.' He powered up to Super- Saiyan, quickly didpensed the AK-47 with a flick of his wrist. The deadly gun flew out of the crook`s hands, and hit another in the face, knocking him out. The girl quickly beat her criminal with a slight punch, and kicked the last one in the face, like a jab, with her foot. She then quickly ran over to Gohan. She punched him in the face, hard. She drew some blood from his nose, and kicked him where the sun don`t shine. Gohan fell to the floor, holding his groin.
"Don`t try to play superhero. I`m the hero of this town, and some blonde haired punk isn`t going to interrupt me." She then walked away, and stuck her nose in the air. She threw a capsule to the ground, and a yellow jet- coptor appeared, and she got in, flying off in the direction tha Gohan wanted to go.
"Ow." Gohan wiped his nose, dropped out of Super Saiyan, and flew to school. When he got there, he started looking for the main office. Realizing he was late, Gohan just waited by the door, for any other student that might be able to help him. To his dismay, a girl was the person that came. And not just any girl, it was kick-in-the-groin girl. Now that he got a good look at her, he noticed that she was actually quite attractive. She had black hair, which was tied back in 2 stern braids. Her eyes were bright blue, and sparkly, almost unnaturally sparkly. She probably had alot of cleavage aswell, but she was hiding it behind a baggy white t-shirt, that was at least 4 sizes to big for her. She was also wearing spandex 3-quarters, and had a scowl on her face.
"E.Excuse me, but could you please tell me where the main office is?" Gohan nervously asked.
The girl looked scornful for a minute, before pointing down the hall, where a sign said 'Main Office.'"Over there."
"Thank you. What`s your name?"
Videl looked slightly suprised at this, but it quickly died down."Videl Satan."
Gohan smiled, and said, "I`m Son Gohan, it`s nice to meet you." Gohan held out his hand, and Videl,suprisingly, shook hands with Gohan. Gohan then ran down the hall, to the main office. Videl just shook her head, and walked in the opposite direction. When Gohan got to his destination, he saw a blonde woman there, with the standard secretary(sp?) uniform on. She was chewing gum, and blew bubbles from time-to-time.
"Excuse me miss, but I`m new here, and I need my timetable. Please can I have it?"
The secratary looked up, and smiled."`Course sweatie." She then leaned to her left and grabbed a form, and a piece of paper with writing on it."Here`s your timetable." She said, as she gave him the paper."And you have to sign this, to signify that you showed up."She then gave him the form, and a pen, also. Gohan happilysigned the form, and started to walk away, when the secratary stopped him. "You`ll need your map aswell." She gave him a map, that was in a rack at the side of her desk, along with other maps.
"Thank you." Gohan excused himself, and looked at his timetable.'Hmmm. B11.' He then looked at his map, and found that he was a couple of feet away from the door. He walked in, and met a noisy class, that hushed as he walked in.
"Ahhh. Son Gohan, I suppose." The teacher said.
"Y.Yes sir. Sorry for being late, but I got lost."
"Well, that`s understandable. Come here Gohan, introduce yourself to the class." Gohan nodded, and walked to the teacher.
"Well, my name is Son Gohan, and i live in 439 Mountain Area." The class all tok a sharp intake of breath when he said this, and they went into an uncomftorble silence.
"Eeerr. Right. Gohan, please sit up there next to Erasa."He pointed to a blonde girl that was waving at Gohan. Gohan walkled up to the seat next to her, and looked to next to her, to see Videl.
"Hi. I`m Erasa, and this is Videl."She pointed to her right.
"We`ve met."Videl said. Erasa looked suprised, but continued on.
"And this," She pointed to a blonde Jock behind her."Is Sharpner." Shapner looked at Gohan and said.
"Don`t talk to me, nerd-boy." Sharpner said, without opening his closed eyes. Gohan`s Saiyan pride perked up for a second, but he quickly fought it down. From his experiences with Vegeta, he learned how to do that. He looked at Erasa again, to see that she was just staring at him, and Videl was glaring at him. Sharpner was dozing off,a as so was the rest of the class.
'I hope that the rest of the day wont go as bad as this formroom is.'Gohan thought, as he looked at the teacher, and started listening to the announcments.
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A person, who looked like it had a disease, was watching this in a crystal ball, as it smirked. It looked like it didn`t have a gender, so I can`t say he or she.
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That`s the first chapter of my fic, Dark Triumph. If anyone has comments, sendthem to me in a review, e-mail me at Blackpoolboy@mail.com, or chat with me on Yahoo Messenger. Name. Ussj1000000blackpoolboy.
REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bye