Here is my DBZ Fic, I own my characters and no one elses.
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This could not be happening, it wasn't possible. Even Father said
it was unnatural. Not since I read Revelations have I been so scared.
"This is what I trained you for Shori!" He yelled over the falling
'Stars'
"You knew about this!" I tore my eyes away from the explosions and
glared at my father. "How could you have known about this?!" He
turned away from me as another falling 'Star' hit the ground with
an intense shock wave.
"Your mother told me before...before she died." he whispered, his
words almost drowned out by the impacts.
"What!"
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"Gather all the good merchindice, destroy the rest. Clear the planet.
Master Freezer wants it emptied in 16 hours. Go!" They slightly bowed
at their superior, then took off. The man looked around, fully discusted
with the pethitic planet.
"There is nothing good here, why would Lord Freezer want these." The
bald man got a hard punch in the face.
"You should never question Lord Freezer, Napoa. If you didnt want to
come then why did you?"
"Because HE ordered me to."
"Does HE think that I couldn't handle it?" Nappa didn't say a word. "Does
HE think I am not strong enough for this weak planet?" The bald man shrugged
"That might be the point."
"What!" He was lossing his pacitente, and time.
"You might destroy the good merchendice." He studdered, hoping that the
man would not kill him. Flaming eyes glared at the weak one, his energy
level was slowly rising. A loud beeping was the only thing that saved the
coward Nappa.
"What!" He hissed into his comunicator.
"Sir, we're having a slight problem in sector 4a."
"What do you mean 'Slight'?" Why couldn't things go his way, he didnt
even want to come to this pathetic planet.
"There is a resistance, one is dead. We are ba-" The voice cut out.
"Damn." quickly he looked at Nappa. "I thought this planet was scanned for
power levels?"
"It was, the highest was 56."
"Then tell me Nappa. What is going on!"
If you review it, Fine
If you flame it, Fine
If you dont give a damn, I dont care suck it up.
This could not be happening, it wasn't possible. Even Father said
it was unnatural. Not since I read Revelations have I been so scared.
"This is what I trained you for Shori!" He yelled over the falling
'Stars'
"You knew about this!" I tore my eyes away from the explosions and
glared at my father. "How could you have known about this?!" He
turned away from me as another falling 'Star' hit the ground with
an intense shock wave.
"Your mother told me before...before she died." he whispered, his
words almost drowned out by the impacts.
"What!"
~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`~`
"Gather all the good merchindice, destroy the rest. Clear the planet.
Master Freezer wants it emptied in 16 hours. Go!" They slightly bowed
at their superior, then took off. The man looked around, fully discusted
with the pethitic planet.
"There is nothing good here, why would Lord Freezer want these." The
bald man got a hard punch in the face.
"You should never question Lord Freezer, Napoa. If you didnt want to
come then why did you?"
"Because HE ordered me to."
"Does HE think that I couldn't handle it?" Nappa didn't say a word. "Does
HE think I am not strong enough for this weak planet?" The bald man shrugged
"That might be the point."
"What!" He was lossing his pacitente, and time.
"You might destroy the good merchendice." He studdered, hoping that the
man would not kill him. Flaming eyes glared at the weak one, his energy
level was slowly rising. A loud beeping was the only thing that saved the
coward Nappa.
"What!" He hissed into his comunicator.
"Sir, we're having a slight problem in sector 4a."
"What do you mean 'Slight'?" Why couldn't things go his way, he didnt
even want to come to this pathetic planet.
"There is a resistance, one is dead. We are ba-" The voice cut out.
"Damn." quickly he looked at Nappa. "I thought this planet was scanned for
power levels?"
"It was, the highest was 56."
"Then tell me Nappa. What is going on!"