Whoa, its been so long since I've even looked at this story! It was
actually kind of made as a tester, but I've decided to continue, so at long
last, here is chapter two of Venus.
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VENUS
It was one of those hot days At salamandstron, were everyone was basking in the sun and just having a good time! All except a the females of course.
An older Haremaid limped out into the hot sun, carrying a tray of cold water. The tray was shaking somewhat. It was obvious the old Haremaid was sick.
No one runs to help her. In fact, they urge her to hurry, as they are thirsty. She stumbles. Everyone sighs, because they realise they're drinks are ruined.
The old Haremaid, slowly attempt to get up, when a Tanned paw is thrust in front of her. She looks up into the kind eyes or a young female hare by the name of Venus.
"T-thank you" she stutters. Venus smiles winningly at her and helps her up, allowing her to lean on her for support.
"No need to thank me, wot"
Slowly they make their way back up to salamandstron. A middle aged Hare meets them at the entrance.
"Come on Lucy dear, up you go old girl," she says as she helps her into the mountain. "Venus dear, run along and go fetch more drinks."
But, to everyone's surprise she didn't, "Mother, tell me, why do we have to do things for the males? Why don't they do anything for us? Or for each other?"
Whispering broke out between the hares. Venus's mother, Cali, leaned down quick, "Child, we must never question what he have been sent here to do!"
"B-but"
"No buts, if you must have a reason then it is simply because that is what we are here for."
Well that was a silly reason, Venus decided. It was hard for her to believe that the only reason she was here at salamandstron was to serve males. She snorted, yes, it was very silly. Whoever accepted this was ridicules to!
"Now then child, go get those drinks, and hop to it, wot"
Venus nodded and went and got the drinks. She walked passed the nursery, were the children looked up at her with expectant eyes.
"Hello Female"
Venus turned around and quickly dropped to a curtsy, "Your majesty" she muttered.
He was a dark brown hare with brown eyes. In fact, he was the king of salamandstron. She shuddered as she felt his eyes rake over her body. She hated him. In her opinion he was the most self-centered, egotistical male she had ever met. Female. That was how he addressed every female. In fact a lot of the males did too, but there was a chosen few who didn't.
He took a step towards her and she was tempted to step back. No, it was odd but she felt an urge to smack him.
"Your to meet me tonight, in my chambers" He didn't bother for an answer. He didn't need one.
She glared at his retreating back, and if looks could kill.
"Do you realise you could be dunked for glaring at a male?"
Venus turned around and came face to face with none other than the general of the kings guards, Chamis.
He was probably one of the nicest of the males around salamandstron. He was about her age, but was had a black coloured fur and green eyes.
"You would too, had you have been in my position!"
He raised an eyebrow at her, "Oh how so?"
"Arg! He's forcing me too.er..visit him tonight"
Venus couldn't be sure, but she would have sworn a look of jealousy passed over his face, but it was gone just as fast. But there was a tinge of anger in his voice.
"I see, and what are you going to do?"
"I-I must do as he commands of course"
He frowned, "would this not be your first time?"
"Er.yes."
He seemed to be fighting a war inside his head, "Y-you know, many would be happy to be with the king on her first time," he said at last, though it looked like it killed him to say so.
"Well I'm not!" She glared furiously and pushed past him. She was vaguely aware of her being called but she kept on walking. Finally she got to the Females quarters, were everyone was preparing for bed.
"Venus? I heard about what happened, I'm so proud of you"
Venus looked at her mother in disbelief, but said nothing. He mother scurried up to her and began combing her fur and informing her the mating rituals.
Venus didn't care. In fact she was angrier than anything else. Finally he mother stopped.
"It's time"
She said simply, but that was all that was needed. Venus stood. She could see everyone staring at her, either enviously or pitingly. Her walk to the kings chambers was slow and horrible. When she finally got there. The guards gave eachother knowing smiles and opened the door.
The king smiled at her and motion for er to lay down. Venus bit her lip. The king smiled again.
"You're nervous? Good. I have decided that after this you shall become my queen, it's a very high honour you know. I need someone beautiful to sit by my side. All the other kings will be very jealous."
Venus felt her self go rigid with anger. A trophy, that was all he wanted her for. He walked towards her and placed a paw on her arm and leaned in.
What she did next she could explain.
She pushed him.
He stumbled backwards, with a look of surprise on him face. She knew what would happen next, she did the only thing that made sense at the time. She ran.
The guards tried to stop her but they were ladled down with armour. She easily ran passed them and threw the exit. She ran into the forest and didn't stop running until she couldn't hear angry yells anymore. She crawled underneath a bush and cried herself to sleep
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Well???? Hmmsa. Lol okay, that was chapter two!
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VENUS
It was one of those hot days At salamandstron, were everyone was basking in the sun and just having a good time! All except a the females of course.
An older Haremaid limped out into the hot sun, carrying a tray of cold water. The tray was shaking somewhat. It was obvious the old Haremaid was sick.
No one runs to help her. In fact, they urge her to hurry, as they are thirsty. She stumbles. Everyone sighs, because they realise they're drinks are ruined.
The old Haremaid, slowly attempt to get up, when a Tanned paw is thrust in front of her. She looks up into the kind eyes or a young female hare by the name of Venus.
"T-thank you" she stutters. Venus smiles winningly at her and helps her up, allowing her to lean on her for support.
"No need to thank me, wot"
Slowly they make their way back up to salamandstron. A middle aged Hare meets them at the entrance.
"Come on Lucy dear, up you go old girl," she says as she helps her into the mountain. "Venus dear, run along and go fetch more drinks."
But, to everyone's surprise she didn't, "Mother, tell me, why do we have to do things for the males? Why don't they do anything for us? Or for each other?"
Whispering broke out between the hares. Venus's mother, Cali, leaned down quick, "Child, we must never question what he have been sent here to do!"
"B-but"
"No buts, if you must have a reason then it is simply because that is what we are here for."
Well that was a silly reason, Venus decided. It was hard for her to believe that the only reason she was here at salamandstron was to serve males. She snorted, yes, it was very silly. Whoever accepted this was ridicules to!
"Now then child, go get those drinks, and hop to it, wot"
Venus nodded and went and got the drinks. She walked passed the nursery, were the children looked up at her with expectant eyes.
"Hello Female"
Venus turned around and quickly dropped to a curtsy, "Your majesty" she muttered.
He was a dark brown hare with brown eyes. In fact, he was the king of salamandstron. She shuddered as she felt his eyes rake over her body. She hated him. In her opinion he was the most self-centered, egotistical male she had ever met. Female. That was how he addressed every female. In fact a lot of the males did too, but there was a chosen few who didn't.
He took a step towards her and she was tempted to step back. No, it was odd but she felt an urge to smack him.
"Your to meet me tonight, in my chambers" He didn't bother for an answer. He didn't need one.
She glared at his retreating back, and if looks could kill.
"Do you realise you could be dunked for glaring at a male?"
Venus turned around and came face to face with none other than the general of the kings guards, Chamis.
He was probably one of the nicest of the males around salamandstron. He was about her age, but was had a black coloured fur and green eyes.
"You would too, had you have been in my position!"
He raised an eyebrow at her, "Oh how so?"
"Arg! He's forcing me too.er..visit him tonight"
Venus couldn't be sure, but she would have sworn a look of jealousy passed over his face, but it was gone just as fast. But there was a tinge of anger in his voice.
"I see, and what are you going to do?"
"I-I must do as he commands of course"
He frowned, "would this not be your first time?"
"Er.yes."
He seemed to be fighting a war inside his head, "Y-you know, many would be happy to be with the king on her first time," he said at last, though it looked like it killed him to say so.
"Well I'm not!" She glared furiously and pushed past him. She was vaguely aware of her being called but she kept on walking. Finally she got to the Females quarters, were everyone was preparing for bed.
"Venus? I heard about what happened, I'm so proud of you"
Venus looked at her mother in disbelief, but said nothing. He mother scurried up to her and began combing her fur and informing her the mating rituals.
Venus didn't care. In fact she was angrier than anything else. Finally he mother stopped.
"It's time"
She said simply, but that was all that was needed. Venus stood. She could see everyone staring at her, either enviously or pitingly. Her walk to the kings chambers was slow and horrible. When she finally got there. The guards gave eachother knowing smiles and opened the door.
The king smiled at her and motion for er to lay down. Venus bit her lip. The king smiled again.
"You're nervous? Good. I have decided that after this you shall become my queen, it's a very high honour you know. I need someone beautiful to sit by my side. All the other kings will be very jealous."
Venus felt her self go rigid with anger. A trophy, that was all he wanted her for. He walked towards her and placed a paw on her arm and leaned in.
What she did next she could explain.
She pushed him.
He stumbled backwards, with a look of surprise on him face. She knew what would happen next, she did the only thing that made sense at the time. She ran.
The guards tried to stop her but they were ladled down with armour. She easily ran passed them and threw the exit. She ran into the forest and didn't stop running until she couldn't hear angry yells anymore. She crawled underneath a bush and cried herself to sleep
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Well???? Hmmsa. Lol okay, that was chapter two!