Okay…I tried to make this one better but if the spellcheck didn't catch the mistakes I can't help if their there! And I used a thesaurus to make this sound better! And in my other poem, I said Jesus was just a man! I was trying to say that people should love him because he was not only G-d, he was man!! He is G-d too!! And extra thanks to the person who formatted this!!
Jesus Christ Is My Hero Jesus is my hero,
Idiosyncratic, you can say,
But who else but Jesus,
Would love me in this way?
He watches me in the morning,
At night, and noon, dusk, and dawn,
He's watching me even now,
Or while the telly's on.
He knows what I am doing,
Who I see and what I think,
In fact there's no reason
For my spirits to ever sink!
Because Jesus loves me,
I am always in His care,
While he and G-d watch out for me
With they're grace and tender care.
****FINISH!!**
Okay that was all! I hope you liked it I tried really really hard! Thanks in advance for the review!
Jesus Christ Is My Hero Jesus is my hero,
Idiosyncratic, you can say,
But who else but Jesus,
Would love me in this way?
He watches me in the morning,
At night, and noon, dusk, and dawn,
He's watching me even now,
Or while the telly's on.
He knows what I am doing,
Who I see and what I think,
In fact there's no reason
For my spirits to ever sink!
Because Jesus loves me,
I am always in His care,
While he and G-d watch out for me
With they're grace and tender care.
****FINISH!!**
Okay that was all! I hope you liked it I tried really really hard! Thanks in advance for the review!
