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"Mumbarghak sa khapui. Ush nag draag ehg?" Asked the guard of the seventh chamber, as Aurora stood before him. He did not like her looks, and did not believe when she said she had business with the Chief Goopur.
"Asheku raskar gobudosh, uekali." she retorted, obviously bothered by the delay. She had business, and urgent. The message she brought was of great importance, but more urgent yet were the messages for the twin towers in the Ehkar Durhlin, where Sauron was summoning an army.
It had been three months since Aurora had followed Sauron into the Morannon, wandering where she would finish: probably some pit in Gorgoroth, she thought, mining and whining.
Yet Sauron thought that would be a waste of an agile messenger, so she was made a carrier for the Tower. She hadn't seen him since, and the messages she carried were no from him, but from the Lords of the Tower. She thought the whole thing an unexpected bother. She was much happier a simple footsoldier: no responsibility, no cares, could wander about at will since the company was family, and they did not bother, and in the case of a mess, the orcs looked out for their "Gobba" - orcling
. Now she had to dress up in black, ride at all speed up and down Mordor, run like mad, get barred, yelled at and constantly stressed. The Tower was not all that either. There was hardly any time to stop and look about, and although she had seen some odd nooks she thought were excellent for exploring, and she thought he had seen (she swore it) a door that opened and closed by itself, there was all too much to do, and she had no time.
Mostly she was running errands, like this one: messages to Chiefs, to Company leaders, to distant towers, to assembling armies. If she proved good, she might (oh, wow!) get to carry a message or two to the East or to the South, where the realms of Sauron outstretched. he, on the other hand proved a mystery. She didn't see him, hear from him, or have any hint of anything about him. It actually bothered her. She thought they had had a connection, of a sort, or liked to think that.
Well, she thought, maybe because she now knew who he was, and this romantic notion of an attachment had developed. She really liked the idea. However, she reminded herself, she had not liked him too much before she knew of his identity. And besides, it would probably turn into a nightmare, anyhow. He seemed a bit jumpy, and vindictive. Now Gashaakur was the proudest orc in Mordor because of her. Imagine, one of his company, no other than the girl he decided to save, was made errand-rider of the Tower! He kept bragging about it, until he got into a fight with a captain of another company for it, and a Eastern lord had to interfere to stop the slaughter.
"Mumbarghak sa khapui. Ush nag draag ehg?" Asked the guard of the seventh chamber, as Aurora stood before him. He did not like her looks, and did not believe when she said she had business with the Chief Goopur.
"Asheku raskar gobudosh, uekali." she retorted, obviously bothered by the delay. She had business, and urgent. The message she brought was of great importance, but more urgent yet were the messages for the twin towers in the Ehkar Durhlin, where Sauron was summoning an army.
It had been three months since Aurora had followed Sauron into the Morannon, wandering where she would finish: probably some pit in Gorgoroth, she thought, mining and whining.
Yet Sauron thought that would be a waste of an agile messenger, so she was made a carrier for the Tower. She hadn't seen him since, and the messages she carried were no from him, but from the Lords of the Tower. She thought the whole thing an unexpected bother. She was much happier a simple footsoldier: no responsibility, no cares, could wander about at will since the company was family, and they did not bother, and in the case of a mess, the orcs looked out for their "Gobba" - orcling
. Now she had to dress up in black, ride at all speed up and down Mordor, run like mad, get barred, yelled at and constantly stressed. The Tower was not all that either. There was hardly any time to stop and look about, and although she had seen some odd nooks she thought were excellent for exploring, and she thought he had seen (she swore it) a door that opened and closed by itself, there was all too much to do, and she had no time.
Mostly she was running errands, like this one: messages to Chiefs, to Company leaders, to distant towers, to assembling armies. If she proved good, she might (oh, wow!) get to carry a message or two to the East or to the South, where the realms of Sauron outstretched. he, on the other hand proved a mystery. She didn't see him, hear from him, or have any hint of anything about him. It actually bothered her. She thought they had had a connection, of a sort, or liked to think that.
Well, she thought, maybe because she now knew who he was, and this romantic notion of an attachment had developed. She really liked the idea. However, she reminded herself, she had not liked him too much before she knew of his identity. And besides, it would probably turn into a nightmare, anyhow. He seemed a bit jumpy, and vindictive. Now Gashaakur was the proudest orc in Mordor because of her. Imagine, one of his company, no other than the girl he decided to save, was made errand-rider of the Tower! He kept bragging about it, until he got into a fight with a captain of another company for it, and a Eastern lord had to interfere to stop the slaughter.